Comments received on poems by HeartfullyFallen

dusk arising said:

I like this. Happiness sings and dances out of it and reminds old gits like me what a wonderful wonderful thing young love is.

April 30th, 2019 20:10

FineB said:

Thank you HeartfullyFallen.

A great write.

We all need a little luck at times.

Keep writing Fine B.

March 4th, 2019 12:52

A Decade in a Minute
Nicholas Browning said:

Recently, I have discovered that I am in love with a man. This man is a friend of mine, and I told him how I felt. He has a girlfriend, but he didn\'t completely reject me. We talked about it for a while, and now things are the same as they were before, except I\'m forced to live with the pain of thinking of myself as a burden. Living is tiring, especially when one does not know love. It took a long time to recover from that realization from a young age, and that I might not feel emotions again. So I understand well what this poem is about. The writing could indeed be touched up, but the message is clear. All I can say is keep moving forward. You don\'t know what your future holds, but if you let your life be dictated by the fear of pain, then you\'ll never truly know what the future holds for you. Best regards, and best of luck.

December 13th, 2018 15:24

Baby Steps
Christina8 said:

Sounds like you\'re afraid of falling in love again but I could totally be wrong. \"I\'m sorry I keep dragging you to a flight that goes no where\". I have felt that way. This is a really great write no matter how you look at it!

March 1st, 2018 13:26

dusk arising said:

Oh but you must keep trying. Many of us have been brought up to undervalue ourselves. Yes \'us\' i left home at 15 to get away from criticism, bullying and beatings. I fought because inside me i was angry to be treated so unjustly. I hear your cry of injustice here and i say FIGHT!

February 19th, 2018 08:22

Lorna said:

Who are these horrible people telling you those things - in the end you have to learn to love yourself.

February 19th, 2018 06:37

Christina8 said:

Such a sad write but I appreciate your honesty. Well written. Thanks for sharing such a personal write!

December 30th, 2017 00:26

Not so Happily Ever After
AlinaVanderson said:

absolutely beautiful writing

December 2nd, 2017 22:09

Like happiness
Accidental Poet said:

I think that \"thing\" you have for him is \"love\". And that\'s a great thing, just like this poem. Now I\'m gonna go click on that star thing in the top right of this page to make it a favorite thing.

November 6th, 2017 19:27

Because he asked
Accidental Poet said:

It can be tough to re-learn how to love after a chain of bad loves. Many have been there, and some do re-surface on the sea of love to sail away in love when it\'s the last thing they ever expected. Great write Fallen.

November 5th, 2017 09:00

Christina8 said:

Well, I\'m listening and I hear you. Depression and anxiety and all these things are monumental to get through. Keep asking for help! And keep writing. We are listening. Thanks for sharing!

September 24th, 2017 18:23

ron parrish aka wordman said:

depression is a tough pill to swallow

September 24th, 2017 16:17

What I Call Home
FredPeyer said:

I do like your writing HF. Like the metaphor of the house, the undercurrent of loneliness and cry for help that weaves through your lines.
Very good poem!

August 29th, 2017 14:21

Christina8 said:

Your write is so sad, but you seem so courageous. I hope you keep on writing. There are other people on this site with similar struggles. Thanks for sharing!

August 27th, 2017 23:43

But She Loves Him
Jooles said:

Poems are therapeutic so I hope this helped. Very touching poem

July 25th, 2017 10:52

Love is in the Air
ShannonXx said:

Beautiful poem

June 5th, 2017 09:26

For Your Eyes Only
Augustus said:

\"Play fighting and ending up doing the waltz\" I liked a lot.The surprise that it would be unrequited love was gotcha .Keep,writing.

June 2nd, 2017 23:58

For Your Eyes Only
swingline said:

You write good , and have good instincts . Especially for being only fifteen . Good job .

June 2nd, 2017 21:15

For Your Eyes Only
The Invisible said:

Oh my.. I love the poem it literally says my whole love life right now. Or lack of.. Thank you for sharing that

June 2nd, 2017 20:53

Keeping Track
mocuisle said:

i absolutely love this poem. theres something about it that i can relate to. it was great to read and for one of your first poems it was class.

May 26th, 2017 11:46