Comments received on poems by Renzi
Story of my life
Louis Gibbs said:
Strong poem, slightly detracted from by a couple of glitches. Do you use the spell-check feature, or self-edit? I admire your writing and your courage, Renzi. Keep going!
June 9th, 2017 13:17
Louis Gibbs said:
Strong poem, slightly detracted from by a couple of glitches. Do you use the spell-check feature, or self-edit? I admire your writing and your courage, Renzi. Keep going!
June 9th, 2017 13:17
Story of my life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. Your troubles have obviously made you the person you are and you are now a strong person with most of your life in front of you.
June 9th, 2017 08:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. Your troubles have obviously made you the person you are and you are now a strong person with most of your life in front of you.
June 9th, 2017 08:08
Story of my life
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow! You have really been through it hun...and, although it was extremely disturbing and sad, you know how to express your emotions quite well. I would love to read something about all the GOOD the 9 years since has brought to you or otherwise. Great write! Keep your head held high and know that everything will happen in the right and perfect way..and, it may sound cheesy but when in doubt, pray to God.. Give him up anything that you cannot bear...He will NOT DENY YOU once you know HIM...take care!
June 9th, 2017 07:13
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow! You have really been through it hun...and, although it was extremely disturbing and sad, you know how to express your emotions quite well. I would love to read something about all the GOOD the 9 years since has brought to you or otherwise. Great write! Keep your head held high and know that everything will happen in the right and perfect way..and, it may sound cheesy but when in doubt, pray to God.. Give him up anything that you cannot bear...He will NOT DENY YOU once you know HIM...take care!
June 9th, 2017 07:13
The future
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and positive write. Kindness is there only some do not share it as you obviously do. May kindness catch on like a disease and perhaps this world will find peace.
June 6th, 2017 05:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and positive write. Kindness is there only some do not share it as you obviously do. May kindness catch on like a disease and perhaps this world will find peace.
June 6th, 2017 05:45
Friendship
Goldfinch60 said:
Friendship is a special thing, come over to Wales and see her.
June 4th, 2017 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Friendship is a special thing, come over to Wales and see her.
June 4th, 2017 02:10
Friendship
Ethan said:
If I heard you correctly, you said \"we\'ve rose\". I believe the correct version of that is \"we\'ve risen\". Other than that, it\'s really sweet.
June 4th, 2017 01:41
Ethan said:
If I heard you correctly, you said \"we\'ve rose\". I believe the correct version of that is \"we\'ve risen\". Other than that, it\'s really sweet.
June 4th, 2017 01:41
My anorexia
Goldfinch60 said:
This is such an emotive write but it is very good. I know that all I can do is pray for you and hope that you can overcome \'your other self\'\'. Writing will help in this I find that if I put my feelings and troubles into words some comfort can be found, even for a little while.
Stay strong for us Renzi and welcome to MPS.
June 4th, 2017 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
This is such an emotive write but it is very good. I know that all I can do is pray for you and hope that you can overcome \'your other self\'\'. Writing will help in this I find that if I put my feelings and troubles into words some comfort can be found, even for a little while.
Stay strong for us Renzi and welcome to MPS.
June 4th, 2017 01:17
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