Comments received on poems by Renzi
Broke my promise
Mugsdaddy said:
If you can\'t step outside yourself once in awhile you\'re not really living so you kept the most important promise of all.. To Live.
Loved it,
Mugsdaddy
September 6th, 2017 19:46
Mugsdaddy said:
If you can\'t step outside yourself once in awhile you\'re not really living so you kept the most important promise of all.. To Live.
Loved it,
Mugsdaddy
September 6th, 2017 19:46
Hope
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful write it felt very personal and true. Thanks for the glimpse of hope.
September 6th, 2017 19:41
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful write it felt very personal and true. Thanks for the glimpse of hope.
September 6th, 2017 19:41
Hope
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. Just keep your head up and remember you always have hope. Thanks for sharing this piece. Hugs!
August 2nd, 2017 19:36
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. Just keep your head up and remember you always have hope. Thanks for sharing this piece. Hugs!
August 2nd, 2017 19:36
Hope
FredPeyer said:
Hope is like the sun, which, as we journey toward it, casts the shadow of our burden behind us.
Samuel Smiles
Yes, Renzi, there is always hope, but hope is not enough, it needs to be followed by positive thinking and action!
I JUST KNOW that better feelings, happiness and health are just around the corner. All you have to do is trust, believe, and go there!
August 2nd, 2017 10:52
FredPeyer said:
Hope is like the sun, which, as we journey toward it, casts the shadow of our burden behind us.
Samuel Smiles
Yes, Renzi, there is always hope, but hope is not enough, it needs to be followed by positive thinking and action!
I JUST KNOW that better feelings, happiness and health are just around the corner. All you have to do is trust, believe, and go there!
August 2nd, 2017 10:52
Hope
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, hope is always there for you, for me for us all.
August 2nd, 2017 08:14
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, hope is always there for you, for me for us all.
August 2nd, 2017 08:14
Hope
UniquelyMel48 said:
I tell myself this everyday . For without hope why is left. Keep hoping . Lovely poem
August 2nd, 2017 07:32
UniquelyMel48 said:
I tell myself this everyday . For without hope why is left. Keep hoping . Lovely poem
August 2nd, 2017 07:32
Hope
Louis Gibbs said:
Your strength shines through in this fine offering, Renzi. Keep your mind focused on that timely wall of hope as you heal.
August 2nd, 2017 07:09
Louis Gibbs said:
Your strength shines through in this fine offering, Renzi. Keep your mind focused on that timely wall of hope as you heal.
August 2nd, 2017 07:09
Great weather
malubotelho said:
Renzi, I\'m happy to see you happy 😊 here was so much rain that our yard almost turned to be a big pond. The good thing is that one can sleep listening to the melody of the frogs. They sing really cute.
July 24th, 2017 22:34
malubotelho said:
Renzi, I\'m happy to see you happy 😊 here was so much rain that our yard almost turned to be a big pond. The good thing is that one can sleep listening to the melody of the frogs. They sing really cute.
July 24th, 2017 22:34
Great weather
Christina8 said:
Great to see you having a relaxed time. I am finally having nice weather too! Glad to see you are happy today.
July 24th, 2017 15:40
Christina8 said:
Great to see you having a relaxed time. I am finally having nice weather too! Glad to see you are happy today.
July 24th, 2017 15:40
Great weather
Renzi said:
No way, theres no sun ? Wellllllll!!!! Thankyou for sending it across the pond haha! Shaved ice, ice cubes? Surely they should be crushed and added to a cocktail? :p Awh this makes me happy :)
July 24th, 2017 13:47
Renzi said:
No way, theres no sun ? Wellllllll!!!! Thankyou for sending it across the pond haha! Shaved ice, ice cubes? Surely they should be crushed and added to a cocktail? :p Awh this makes me happy :)
July 24th, 2017 13:47
Great weather
FredPeyer said:
Envy you, here in sunshine land it is raining today. And we don\'t eat lollies, we eat shave ice. Always looking forward to your contributions. It\'s become kind of my daily fix!
July 24th, 2017 12:21
FredPeyer said:
Envy you, here in sunshine land it is raining today. And we don\'t eat lollies, we eat shave ice. Always looking forward to your contributions. It\'s become kind of my daily fix!
July 24th, 2017 12:21
Great weather
charlesbarrett said:
Wonderfully expressed. Enjoy your beautiful weather. Thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2017 11:19
charlesbarrett said:
Wonderfully expressed. Enjoy your beautiful weather. Thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2017 11:19
Great weather
burning-embers said:
Jeez what a life! Few days ago it was street parties and booze, then it was MORE booze,and oh yeah then there was ooppss i got drunk again (hic) and now its ice lollies and great weather! No wonder she writes mind boggling stuff, she\'s off her tree. (But it\'s all in the best paaassible taste!).
July 24th, 2017 10:25
burning-embers said:
Jeez what a life! Few days ago it was street parties and booze, then it was MORE booze,and oh yeah then there was ooppss i got drunk again (hic) and now its ice lollies and great weather! No wonder she writes mind boggling stuff, she\'s off her tree. (But it\'s all in the best paaassible taste!).
July 24th, 2017 10:25
Great weather
Louis Gibbs said:
What better way to spend a day? A cute contribution to my day. Thanks, Renzi.
July 24th, 2017 09:39
Louis Gibbs said:
What better way to spend a day? A cute contribution to my day. Thanks, Renzi.
July 24th, 2017 09:39
Broke my promise
FredPeyer said:
Renzi, the picture looks like an Irish bagpipe. Heard they make great music!
Ah well, since you are NOT my daughter you will NOT get spanked, but I would kind of expect better behavior in the future. Glad you feel better (I would too), but get your hug from your boyfriend.
Like your poem, like you, like this crazy world.
July 24th, 2017 02:35
FredPeyer said:
Renzi, the picture looks like an Irish bagpipe. Heard they make great music!
Ah well, since you are NOT my daughter you will NOT get spanked, but I would kind of expect better behavior in the future. Glad you feel better (I would too), but get your hug from your boyfriend.
Like your poem, like you, like this crazy world.
July 24th, 2017 02:35
Broke my promise
Michael Edwards said:
Always a pleasure to read your postings - written with great abandon and so engaging - keep \'em coming Renzi.
July 24th, 2017 00:01
Michael Edwards said:
Always a pleasure to read your postings - written with great abandon and so engaging - keep \'em coming Renzi.
July 24th, 2017 00:01
Broke my promise
burning-embers said:
All the best nutters break a promise now and again, it\'s in the rule book.
July 23rd, 2017 23:56
burning-embers said:
All the best nutters break a promise now and again, it\'s in the rule book.
July 23rd, 2017 23:56
Affliction
Goldfinch60 said:
You have taken the first step and that is always the hardest to take.
I do hope that you can take the next step and start walking in your life.
Remember you are going on holiday soon, that must be something to look forward to.
July 23rd, 2017 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
You have taken the first step and that is always the hardest to take.
I do hope that you can take the next step and start walking in your life.
Remember you are going on holiday soon, that must be something to look forward to.
July 23rd, 2017 00:34
Affliction
Heather T said:
Sending my love to you. You are so brave and inspiring to share your deep heart with us.
July 22nd, 2017 21:45
Heather T said:
Sending my love to you. You are so brave and inspiring to share your deep heart with us.
July 22nd, 2017 21:45
Affliction
Hopey_xx said:
You\'ve got so much strength Renzi. On your bad days have a read of some of your recent poems and remind yourself of that. Hang in there, and remember that we\'re here for you!
July 22nd, 2017 15:32
Hopey_xx said:
You\'ve got so much strength Renzi. On your bad days have a read of some of your recent poems and remind yourself of that. Hang in there, and remember that we\'re here for you!
July 22nd, 2017 15:32
Affliction
malubotelho said:
What a fortunate event it should be if we could stop suffering.
They say; the poet pretend so much, pretend so completely, that even pretend being pain, the pain that he truly is feeling. I know it is not your case. This is more my case when sometimes I think I feel kind of good suffering.
July 22nd, 2017 13:00
malubotelho said:
What a fortunate event it should be if we could stop suffering.
They say; the poet pretend so much, pretend so completely, that even pretend being pain, the pain that he truly is feeling. I know it is not your case. This is more my case when sometimes I think I feel kind of good suffering.
July 22nd, 2017 13:00
Affliction
burning-embers said:
A living poet bares their pain
frustration in words read again
exposing the soul remaining sane
another day in life\'s funny old game
good one Renzi
July 22nd, 2017 12:53
burning-embers said:
A living poet bares their pain
frustration in words read again
exposing the soul remaining sane
another day in life\'s funny old game
good one Renzi
July 22nd, 2017 12:53
Affliction
onepauly said:
you have many years ahead of you. some people don\'t have that.
July 22nd, 2017 12:12
onepauly said:
you have many years ahead of you. some people don\'t have that.
July 22nd, 2017 12:12
Affliction
FredPeyer said:
Renzi, you are such a good writer. That last line in the first stanza says it all. In one line you were able to say what addiction is all about. And the whole poem is one cry for help.
All your friends here are rooting for you. Louis said it so well in his comment: You are a role model and when we read about your daily struggle, we are right there beside you to give you strength.
For me, there is also a selfish thought involved: Hang in there, keep on writing, your poems have become my morning fix!
July 22nd, 2017 11:25
FredPeyer said:
Renzi, you are such a good writer. That last line in the first stanza says it all. In one line you were able to say what addiction is all about. And the whole poem is one cry for help.
All your friends here are rooting for you. Louis said it so well in his comment: You are a role model and when we read about your daily struggle, we are right there beside you to give you strength.
For me, there is also a selfish thought involved: Hang in there, keep on writing, your poems have become my morning fix!
July 22nd, 2017 11:25
Affliction
Louis Gibbs said:
Your affliction is one to which I cannot relate, only observe and sympathize with, and this I do, dear Renzi. You are strong and inspiring to all with an affliction ... a role model to all who know you, and what you go through. Hang in there for all of us, as well as yourself!
July 22nd, 2017 09:16
Louis Gibbs said:
Your affliction is one to which I cannot relate, only observe and sympathize with, and this I do, dear Renzi. You are strong and inspiring to all with an affliction ... a role model to all who know you, and what you go through. Hang in there for all of us, as well as yourself!
July 22nd, 2017 09:16
Control
FredPeyer said:
Magic writing Renzi. Your \'me\' is controlled by your \'self\'. So now which one do you want to change? If you change the \'self\', the \'me\' is not controlled anymore and if you change the \'me\', your \'self\' has nothing to control. :-)
July 20th, 2017 13:52
FredPeyer said:
Magic writing Renzi. Your \'me\' is controlled by your \'self\'. So now which one do you want to change? If you change the \'self\', the \'me\' is not controlled anymore and if you change the \'me\', your \'self\' has nothing to control. :-)
July 20th, 2017 13:52
Control
malubotelho said:
Hey Renzi, this is awesome. You can control you cause you can control words. If you can not control you just let it be.
July 20th, 2017 12:48
malubotelho said:
Hey Renzi, this is awesome. You can control you cause you can control words. If you can not control you just let it be.
July 20th, 2017 12:48
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