Comments received on poems by Renzi
Control
Goldfinch60 said:
You have started with word control so just spread it to the rest of you. Good write.
July 20th, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
You have started with word control so just spread it to the rest of you. Good write.
July 20th, 2017 08:03
Control
Louis Gibbs said:
Your mind is so creative it\'s scary. It is interesting to me that creativity is often accompanied by a personal challenge of one kind or another, like your eating disorder and my Asperger\'s syndrome. Einstein had his own demons, as did many other creative geniuses. At any rate, I\'m very glad to be a recipient of your gift of expression, Renzi.
July 20th, 2017 07:59
Louis Gibbs said:
Your mind is so creative it\'s scary. It is interesting to me that creativity is often accompanied by a personal challenge of one kind or another, like your eating disorder and my Asperger\'s syndrome. Einstein had his own demons, as did many other creative geniuses. At any rate, I\'m very glad to be a recipient of your gift of expression, Renzi.
July 20th, 2017 07:59
Wednesday\'s child
malubotelho said:
I will need to research. Not sure. I don\'t remember. Cute one Renzi.
July 19th, 2017 23:22
malubotelho said:
I will need to research. Not sure. I don\'t remember. Cute one Renzi.
July 19th, 2017 23:22
Wednesday\'s child
FredPeyer said:
Saturday! And proud of it (don\'t know why though)
Love your poem Renzi!
July 19th, 2017 12:14
FredPeyer said:
Saturday! And proud of it (don\'t know why though)
Love your poem Renzi!
July 19th, 2017 12:14
Wednesday\'s child
Christina8 said:
Love your spunky attitude and the picture you posted with the poem. Really great write!!
July 19th, 2017 10:36
Christina8 said:
Love your spunky attitude and the picture you posted with the poem. Really great write!!
July 19th, 2017 10:36
Wednesday\'s child
Goldfinch60 said:
WOW indeed. I too was born on a Wednesday back in the dark ages. Good write, we can all change for the better.
July 19th, 2017 08:26
Goldfinch60 said:
WOW indeed. I too was born on a Wednesday back in the dark ages. Good write, we can all change for the better.
July 19th, 2017 08:26
Wednesday\'s child
Michael Edwards said:
I was a Friday chick - cracked out of my shell at 5pm UK time - Love your little ditty Renzi.
July 19th, 2017 08:22
Michael Edwards said:
I was a Friday chick - cracked out of my shell at 5pm UK time - Love your little ditty Renzi.
July 19th, 2017 08:22
Wednesday\'s child
burning-embers said:
Great positivity. I too chucked away negative rubbish apart from....oh yeah then theres.... and .... ooppss .. Yes good thinking.
July 19th, 2017 07:14
burning-embers said:
Great positivity. I too chucked away negative rubbish apart from....oh yeah then theres.... and .... ooppss .. Yes good thinking.
July 19th, 2017 07:14
Wednesday\'s child
Louis Gibbs said:
Glad you are having a fun day. Mom said Sunday was the day I came in this time.
July 19th, 2017 07:14
Louis Gibbs said:
Glad you are having a fun day. Mom said Sunday was the day I came in this time.
July 19th, 2017 07:14
That time of the week
Heather T said:
I always anticipate Renzi\'s slice of life scribes! Wouldn\'t it be better if they at least rewarded you with a little sweet?
July 18th, 2017 18:59
Heather T said:
I always anticipate Renzi\'s slice of life scribes! Wouldn\'t it be better if they at least rewarded you with a little sweet?
July 18th, 2017 18:59
That time of the week
malubotelho said:
Renzi, I did laugh too cause I saw you as a little girl afraid of the needle. So cute the way you white. Just love it.
July 18th, 2017 11:31
malubotelho said:
Renzi, I did laugh too cause I saw you as a little girl afraid of the needle. So cute the way you white. Just love it.
July 18th, 2017 11:31
That time of the week
FredPeyer said:
Can\'t speak, racing heart, contemplating running, taking deep breaths.....this sounds like a major, life-threatening operation. What a build-up!
Then a little nip...what let-down!
Wasn\'t it Shakespeare who said \'Much ado about nothing\'?
Just teasing Renzi, I like it!!!
July 18th, 2017 09:56
FredPeyer said:
Can\'t speak, racing heart, contemplating running, taking deep breaths.....this sounds like a major, life-threatening operation. What a build-up!
Then a little nip...what let-down!
Wasn\'t it Shakespeare who said \'Much ado about nothing\'?
Just teasing Renzi, I like it!!!
July 18th, 2017 09:56
That time of the week
Louis Gibbs said:
I can\'t watch as they draw my blood for fear of getting light headed. Squeamish when it comes to seeing the parts of us that exist inside, probably a past life thing. Thanks for this relatable poem, Renzi!
July 18th, 2017 08:36
Louis Gibbs said:
I can\'t watch as they draw my blood for fear of getting light headed. Squeamish when it comes to seeing the parts of us that exist inside, probably a past life thing. Thanks for this relatable poem, Renzi!
July 18th, 2017 08:36
That time of the week
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Some years ago I had a problem where my blood kept on having to be tested and I swear that an alert was put out to all the doctors surgeries to look out for me, drag me off the street and take some more blood. All is well now.
July 18th, 2017 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Some years ago I had a problem where my blood kept on having to be tested and I swear that an alert was put out to all the doctors surgeries to look out for me, drag me off the street and take some more blood. All is well now.
July 18th, 2017 07:57
That time of the week
onepauly said:
recently I lost two quarts of blood. so don\'t threat a little pin prick.
good poem.
July 18th, 2017 07:37
onepauly said:
recently I lost two quarts of blood. so don\'t threat a little pin prick.
good poem.
July 18th, 2017 07:37
That time of the week
burning-embers said:
Just a little scratch they say as they stab you - missing the vein. Laughed out loud at the (running). \'Patiently wait\' (can\'t visualise that one). Once again from \'a day in the life of Renzi\' you pluck a nugget and place it before us with such style. Love it!
July 18th, 2017 05:23
burning-embers said:
Just a little scratch they say as they stab you - missing the vein. Laughed out loud at the (running). \'Patiently wait\' (can\'t visualise that one). Once again from \'a day in the life of Renzi\' you pluck a nugget and place it before us with such style. Love it!
July 18th, 2017 05:23
Body dysmorphic me
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. I agree with FredPeyer that there is a switch inside you that needs to be switched off about these thoughts. Beauty flows out of your eyes and out of from your words, we can all see it in you. Stay strong. Throw away the medical notes.
July 17th, 2017 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. I agree with FredPeyer that there is a switch inside you that needs to be switched off about these thoughts. Beauty flows out of your eyes and out of from your words, we can all see it in you. Stay strong. Throw away the medical notes.
July 17th, 2017 00:41
Body dysmorphic me
malubotelho said:
You wrote about ugly but in such a beautiful way. I laughed when you say giraffe neck because my neck is long and because of that I suffer from a neck pain doing my job that requires me to be looking down for many hours. When I look at the mirror I do see some imperfection but when I begun to age and my ex begun to criticize me trying to put me down I told him that I could not get better and if he was not happy he could go find someone younger. I did not change a thing on myself but I did change husbands. I believe we all have the right to be happy exactly the way we are. Exercise the compassion my dear. Compassion begin with ourselves. Thanks for your poem and believe me, you are better than you think.
July 16th, 2017 21:12
malubotelho said:
You wrote about ugly but in such a beautiful way. I laughed when you say giraffe neck because my neck is long and because of that I suffer from a neck pain doing my job that requires me to be looking down for many hours. When I look at the mirror I do see some imperfection but when I begun to age and my ex begun to criticize me trying to put me down I told him that I could not get better and if he was not happy he could go find someone younger. I did not change a thing on myself but I did change husbands. I believe we all have the right to be happy exactly the way we are. Exercise the compassion my dear. Compassion begin with ourselves. Thanks for your poem and believe me, you are better than you think.
July 16th, 2017 21:12
Body dysmorphic me
burning-embers said:
Hey, ya wanna see funny shaped body? i\'ll send u a pic. (please wear sunglasses cos i don\'t tan easy). That line of yours Obsessive thinking - hmmm obsessive drinking. I\'m effin stinking. maybe not?
July 16th, 2017 16:09
burning-embers said:
Hey, ya wanna see funny shaped body? i\'ll send u a pic. (please wear sunglasses cos i don\'t tan easy). That line of yours Obsessive thinking - hmmm obsessive drinking. I\'m effin stinking. maybe not?
July 16th, 2017 16:09
Body dysmorphic me
FredPeyer said:
Renzi, you are really letting it all hang out here. I love the writing, but hate to tell you that it\'s all wrong, wrong, wrong!
I also know that you know, but somewhere inside that lovely head is a little switch that needs to be turned off. The trick is to find it and actually turn it off. And when you find it you will finally get off this crazy merry-go-round and realize yourself what beautiful person you are.
July 16th, 2017 16:05
FredPeyer said:
Renzi, you are really letting it all hang out here. I love the writing, but hate to tell you that it\'s all wrong, wrong, wrong!
I also know that you know, but somewhere inside that lovely head is a little switch that needs to be turned off. The trick is to find it and actually turn it off. And when you find it you will finally get off this crazy merry-go-round and realize yourself what beautiful person you are.
July 16th, 2017 16:05
Body dysmorphic me
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent poem, and thank you for sharing, by the way. I agree with Kat, nothing wrong with some curves! When I see your picture I just see a pretty girl. Hoping for the best for you!
July 16th, 2017 11:32
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent poem, and thank you for sharing, by the way. I agree with Kat, nothing wrong with some curves! When I see your picture I just see a pretty girl. Hoping for the best for you!
July 16th, 2017 11:32
Body dysmorphic me
Lost in Murphy said:
Fuck your medical records look inside there\'s the beauty
July 16th, 2017 08:34
Lost in Murphy said:
Fuck your medical records look inside there\'s the beauty
July 16th, 2017 08:34
Slap my wrist
Goldfinch60 said:
Cheers Renzi have (or hope you had) a great time.
July 16th, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Cheers Renzi have (or hope you had) a great time.
July 16th, 2017 01:30
Slap my wrist
FredPeyer said:
No wrist slapping from me Renzi, don\'t wanna spill your drink!
But watch out, my tomorrow poem (which by the way I decided to publish long before I read yours) will be right down your alley.
July 15th, 2017 12:28
FredPeyer said:
No wrist slapping from me Renzi, don\'t wanna spill your drink!
But watch out, my tomorrow poem (which by the way I decided to publish long before I read yours) will be right down your alley.
July 15th, 2017 12:28
Slap my wrist
Heather T said:
Take lots of vitamins, lol. My head aches just looking at the picture!
July 15th, 2017 12:02
Heather T said:
Take lots of vitamins, lol. My head aches just looking at the picture!
July 15th, 2017 12:02
Slap my wrist
Christina8 said:
It\'s good to have fun every once in a while! Hope you and your friend had fun. Great poem!
July 15th, 2017 10:53
Christina8 said:
It\'s good to have fun every once in a while! Hope you and your friend had fun. Great poem!
July 15th, 2017 10:53
Slap my wrist
burning-embers said:
\'Didn\'t we have a lov-er-ly time the day we went to Bangor\'
WA-hey, holidays - who needs \'em - i do! Way to go Renzy!
July 15th, 2017 09:46
burning-embers said:
\'Didn\'t we have a lov-er-ly time the day we went to Bangor\'
WA-hey, holidays - who needs \'em - i do! Way to go Renzy!
July 15th, 2017 09:46
Slap my wrist
malubotelho said:
Cute poem Renzi. Vacay time is like that. Have a good one. Happy birthday to your friend.
July 15th, 2017 09:28
malubotelho said:
Cute poem Renzi. Vacay time is like that. Have a good one. Happy birthday to your friend.
July 15th, 2017 09:28
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