Comments received on poems by emotional girl



CIGARETTE SMOKE
orchidee said:

I know. it\'s horrible. Glad it\'s banned on buses and in many places now (in UK anyway). I rather forget about smoking these days until I see people gathered outside offices, shops, etc for fag breaks.

March 22nd, 2019 02:55

CIGARETTE SMOKE
Mil57Man said:

Beautiful. Not the smoke, for years it made me choke, quitting was absolutely no joke. Thank you emotional girl.

March 21st, 2019 17:47

CIGARETTE SMOKE
Poetic Dan said:

Wow glad and gutted to read this all at the and time. Brilliant!

March 21st, 2019 17:18

CIGARETTE SMOKE
Canticle said:

Wow! This hit my heart.

March 21st, 2019 15:45

Broken Heart...Broken soul
misskay said:

Outstanding write and so relatable!
I’m grateful for your poem and it’s very touching and heartfelt!
I hope you find peace and healing and the shattered pieces build to you being whole again x

September 4th, 2018 03:28

Broken Heart...Broken soul
Crystal Hope said:

Whoa. So very moving. :D

September 3rd, 2018 22:43

\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"HE LOVES ME, HE LOVES ME NOT.\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"
EliDagger said:

Love the repetition of \"he loves me, he loves me not\", makes it flow so well!

July 26th, 2018 17:51

Act Of Perfection
Candlewitch said:

hello,

be strong and you will win through. I wish you the best of everything!

*hugs, Cat

July 1st, 2018 12:15

Broken but happy
EmoQueen said:

beautiful. let your voice guide you
~DarkPoetGirl

September 1st, 2017 22:33

Tired of being played
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for another CLASSICAL POEM Sweetheart - Elegant in Structure - but sad and warning in its message. I can say (hand on heart) that I never play a GIRL like an old violin - to be dicarded when my tune is satiated - you are much to unique and preciuous for that - BUT I do like to PLEASURE My Ladies and always give them what THEY WANT (mutiples) and I always leave the happy & satisfied. When i \"make love\" . the focus is always on the Lady. I have been PLAYED by LADIES and i did not like it ! Playing with a Lady\'s affection not only breaks their (G)strings it breaks their hearts as well and that is unforgivable ! You are worth much better | thanks for sharing & caring - Thinking of you and Praying for you | Love & Hugs - BRIAN

July 3rd, 2017 06:20

Tired of being played
Lost Girl said:

This is so beautiful not because of what it says directly but what it makes you feel when you read it. I appreciate writers who make you feel and think after hearing their work

July 3rd, 2017 04:02

I WILL NOT GIVE IN
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

I struggle with depression really bad.. It a fight every day just to get out of bed. Even if you think you\'re not, you\'re very strong. You keep fighting even when you want to give up. You don\'t give in, you don\'t let the world win. To me that\'s the biggest strength you can have.

July 2nd, 2017 17:56

I WILL NOT GIVE IN
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

I struggle with depression really bad.. It a fight every day just to get out of bed. Even if you think you\'re not, you\'re very strong. You keep fighting even when you want to give up. You don\'t give in, you don\'t let the world win. To me that\'s the biggest strength you can have.

July 2nd, 2017 17:53

I WILL NOT GIVE IN
Candlewitch said:

heavy duty poem which I strongly relate to. thanks for posting it! I, too suffer from depression. which was brought on by childhood abuse and sexual abuse in my early teens. you express yourself well!!!

*hugs, Cat

July 2nd, 2017 11:24

I WILL NOT GIVE IN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Love the video SISTER - for me it tells it just how it is. Each verse in your elegant (but sad ) Poem takes us \"inside depression\"\" BUT there is a RESOLVE - AMEN ! In your comment you say that your resolve (to beat Depression) come from a closer Walk with God -|AMEN ! I my experience that is the ONLY answer I\'m praying for you 24/7 and you can pray for me ! I work in a Vocational College | but I only have a Year by Year Contract | not a Tenure ! I want to get married and start a Family but I need a secure JOB ! Some job are advertised for September 2017 and i have applied ! Please pray i will be successful -| AMEN Thanks HUGS BRIAN

July 2nd, 2017 10:23

I WILL NOT GIVE IN
onepauly said:

lots of meaning

July 2nd, 2017 02:35

i just wanted to be daddy\'s little girl
malubotelho said:

Beautiful writing. Thanks for open the window of your heart and let others know in a beautiful way how sorrow it can bring to have unfit parents. My dad was alcoholic too and I did suffer because of that. Mostly because the way he treated my mother. My heart and thoughts are with you.

July 1st, 2017 18:34

i just wanted to be daddy\'s little girl
Candlewitch said:

hello,
I hope that in writing this piece, you have vented much of your anguish. this is an astonishing write!!! thank you so very much for this!

*hugs, Cat

July 1st, 2017 16:10

i just wanted to be daddy\'s little girl
Heather T said:

Your wrenching poem is far too familiar for too many families. Thank you for sharing your pain.

July 1st, 2017 15:15

i just wanted to be daddy\'s little girl
+_Juice_+ said:

My Father went to jail for selling drugs. He\'s missed out on most of my life. He said he\'s going to change, but I don\'t know what to believe. I don\'t know If I should be happy, or sad. I have no real connection to him. Hell, I don\'t even know what\'s it like to even have a father!

July 1st, 2017 11:33

i just wanted to be daddy\'s little girl
Louis Gibbs said:

Well penned, sad poem. He may not be strong, but you have been made stronger. Thank you for this very personal poem!

July 1st, 2017 08:18

i just wanted to be daddy\'s little girl
kevin browne said:

our hearts are with you for sharing this so sad a fatherless poem. we love you girl x

July 1st, 2017 05:35

i just wanted to be daddy\'s little girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for your very SAD & very PERSONAL poem ~ Sweetheart. I haven\'t got a Daughter (yet) but when I do have one I promise you I will treat her like a PRINCESS ~ as you should have been ! My Sister is 35 but still DADDY\'S GIRL and that is how it should be ! Nothing can make up for your sad past ~ Thinking of You and Praying for You ~ HUGS ~ Your FRIEND BRIAN (UK)

July 1st, 2017 04:40

i just wanted to be daddy\'s little girl
Christina8 said:

Very good poem, sorry the message is so sad. No one should have to go through this. I hope you found this poem a way to heal. Thanks for sharing!

July 1st, 2017 00:44

You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME TO MPS FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem. Elegantly penned but a very tragic Subject from one so young and beautiful ! It happens ~ and it has happened to me ~ I have never done it to a lady because I am a Gentleman ! The line \"You broke me ~ and I will never be the same\" really scared me ! In my experience these things pass ~ especially if you meet someone who is worthy of you and really appreciates and loves you ! Thinkin\' of you an\' Prayin\' for you ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK).

June 30th, 2017 08:10

You
FredPeyer said:

Wonderful expression of heartache. I do like your writing. As for the content, broken things can get fixed and will be. Time will tell!

June 30th, 2017 03:43