Comments received on poems by annonymouswonder
Swirls and Straights
Bella Shepard said:
I feel the emotion of your poem, and understand that first step taken. It\'s a little like stepping into a lukewarm pool, gradually easing yourself down, until you\'re submerged and your body has adapted to the temperature. It\'s easy to say trust yourself, but life experience is great teacher, be patient. In my 73rd year I can tell you that it\'s incredible, when you look back and realize how many things you did right. A very good write!
November 12th, 2022 12:05
Bella Shepard said:
I feel the emotion of your poem, and understand that first step taken. It\'s a little like stepping into a lukewarm pool, gradually easing yourself down, until you\'re submerged and your body has adapted to the temperature. It\'s easy to say trust yourself, but life experience is great teacher, be patient. In my 73rd year I can tell you that it\'s incredible, when you look back and realize how many things you did right. A very good write!
November 12th, 2022 12:05
Swirls and Straights
L. B. Mek said:
do your own \'adult\'
follow your own path!
the key, is as early as possible
to start trusting yourself
empower your choices by believing
and realising
what is right, is anchored
in those choices where your heart is calm
but your mind is panicking
never the other way around
oh and laugh
be it on your own or in a group of judgemental eyes
laugh, deep from your belly button
and allow your breath to taste sweet
even for a flittingly glimpse second
then look around you and realise
you\'re not an adult or a child
you, are just: You!
and that\'s beautiful in and of itself!
\'I wish you the very best of life\'s
mistakes, tears, smiles
broken hearts and victories with their somber happily-ever-after\'s\'
(Have Fun and Enjoy the ride
in but a blink, our blank canvas future\'s
become our life-stained yesterday\'s)
November 11th, 2022 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
do your own \'adult\'
follow your own path!
the key, is as early as possible
to start trusting yourself
empower your choices by believing
and realising
what is right, is anchored
in those choices where your heart is calm
but your mind is panicking
never the other way around
oh and laugh
be it on your own or in a group of judgemental eyes
laugh, deep from your belly button
and allow your breath to taste sweet
even for a flittingly glimpse second
then look around you and realise
you\'re not an adult or a child
you, are just: You!
and that\'s beautiful in and of itself!
\'I wish you the very best of life\'s
mistakes, tears, smiles
broken hearts and victories with their somber happily-ever-after\'s\'
(Have Fun and Enjoy the ride
in but a blink, our blank canvas future\'s
become our life-stained yesterday\'s)
November 11th, 2022 06:52
God Gives Me Focus, God Gives Me Peace
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely poem superbly expressed in faith and appreciation of divine support.
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem.
June 22nd, 2022 13:51
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely poem superbly expressed in faith and appreciation of divine support.
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem.
June 22nd, 2022 13:51
Still Waiting on Your Call
L. B. Mek said:
(simply beautiful,
thank you for intrusting us with such private words)
I hope next year, will be that little bit easier
but that in 7 years time
your feelings wont have forgotten the warmth imbued in these letters,
see
I feel, when people share
a little bit of themselves with us
its to help us, survive
the gruelling trials of life
and even if what they share, begins
with us going through such a hard time
what\'s important
is how, that shard of them which lingers within us
marinates and evolves, over time
from being a painful weakness
to that furnace, that helped forge
our own iron will of belief;
and doing so, with them firmly
by our side
so they may share, in our
delights and despair of existence,
so later on
in that unknown eternal, I like to think
of our eventual home
we can all share a smile, catching-up
on all the bruises we\'ve accumulated, side by side
December 7th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
(simply beautiful,
thank you for intrusting us with such private words)
I hope next year, will be that little bit easier
but that in 7 years time
your feelings wont have forgotten the warmth imbued in these letters,
see
I feel, when people share
a little bit of themselves with us
its to help us, survive
the gruelling trials of life
and even if what they share, begins
with us going through such a hard time
what\'s important
is how, that shard of them which lingers within us
marinates and evolves, over time
from being a painful weakness
to that furnace, that helped forge
our own iron will of belief;
and doing so, with them firmly
by our side
so they may share, in our
delights and despair of existence,
so later on
in that unknown eternal, I like to think
of our eventual home
we can all share a smile, catching-up
on all the bruises we\'ve accumulated, side by side
December 7th, 2021 05:37
Still Waiting on Your Call
Draven said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss, heartbreaking, but thank you so much for sharing this with us. xx
December 6th, 2021 18:58
Draven said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss, heartbreaking, but thank you so much for sharing this with us. xx
December 6th, 2021 18:58
Still Waiting on Your Call
Eugene S. said:
No words or comments can convey more that what you\'ve posted here today. The paths we\'ve followed and the people we\'ve known are everything...
December 6th, 2021 18:05
Eugene S. said:
No words or comments can convey more that what you\'ve posted here today. The paths we\'ve followed and the people we\'ve known are everything...
December 6th, 2021 18:05
Primrose
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow i liked the terms and word choice in this beautiful poem wow. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 13th, 2021 00:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow i liked the terms and word choice in this beautiful poem wow. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 13th, 2021 00:05
Staring out Glass
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing 🙂 I like your words
October 4th, 2021 15:57
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing 🙂 I like your words
October 4th, 2021 15:57
Just a Person
dusk arising said:
Makes me uncomfortable when people apologise for their right to be whatever they want to be (within the bounds of the law of course) because, just as you state, you are human with every right to be all the things u mention.
Being all those things is being an honest person too isn\'t it?
April 20th, 2021 12:50
dusk arising said:
Makes me uncomfortable when people apologise for their right to be whatever they want to be (within the bounds of the law of course) because, just as you state, you are human with every right to be all the things u mention.
Being all those things is being an honest person too isn\'t it?
April 20th, 2021 12:50
There are days
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully uplifting words of positivity and acceptance
March 26th, 2021 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully uplifting words of positivity and acceptance
March 26th, 2021 04:03
There are days
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, the good things in life far outweigh the bad.
Andy
March 26th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, the good things in life far outweigh the bad.
Andy
March 26th, 2021 01:55
Just a little lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Now you have moved into a different place in yourself it can be confusing but that confusion will go away in time and your life will be wonderful.
Andy
February 28th, 2021 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Now you have moved into a different place in yourself it can be confusing but that confusion will go away in time and your life will be wonderful.
Andy
February 28th, 2021 02:42
Just a little lost
BLACKGOLDKING said:
I can relate, I suppose at times we who face adversity don\'t always feel like the person we look at in the mirror. State of mind changes our thoughts of ourselves and how we and others look at ourselves. Deep down we\'re all the same walking through our lives wondering if people see the real you or me. Beautiful write
February 27th, 2021 21:45
BLACKGOLDKING said:
I can relate, I suppose at times we who face adversity don\'t always feel like the person we look at in the mirror. State of mind changes our thoughts of ourselves and how we and others look at ourselves. Deep down we\'re all the same walking through our lives wondering if people see the real you or me. Beautiful write
February 27th, 2021 21:45
Holding Tightly
Saxon Crow said:
Wonderful prayer, so full of hope. Thank you for sharing
February 13th, 2020 04:11
Saxon Crow said:
Wonderful prayer, so full of hope. Thank you for sharing
February 13th, 2020 04:11
A different kind of thought
FredPeyer said:
Well written and interesting poem. Made me think. It is also very timely if we look at how little people interact on a one-on-one basis instead of through texting, facebook, twitter, etc.
Well done!
February 2nd, 2018 23:40
FredPeyer said:
Well written and interesting poem. Made me think. It is also very timely if we look at how little people interact on a one-on-one basis instead of through texting, facebook, twitter, etc.
Well done!
February 2nd, 2018 23:40
Loving Patience
malubotelho said:
Very nice written. I enjoyed from the start to the end. Thanks for sharing.
July 8th, 2017 23:24
malubotelho said:
Very nice written. I enjoyed from the start to the end. Thanks for sharing.
July 8th, 2017 23:24
Loving Patience
Heather T said:
We might not be able to give all because we are flesh and bone, but we can always point to the love that can. Warm welcome!
July 8th, 2017 22:16
Heather T said:
We might not be able to give all because we are flesh and bone, but we can always point to the love that can. Warm welcome!
July 8th, 2017 22:16
