Comments received on poems by Moonflower15
The Piper
M. J. Smith said:
Makes me think of a whip-poor-will whistling in the woods on a summer night. She is a soloist giving a concert while an orchestra of crickets provides back up.
March 25th, 2022 16:18
M. J. Smith said:
Makes me think of a whip-poor-will whistling in the woods on a summer night. She is a soloist giving a concert while an orchestra of crickets provides back up.
March 25th, 2022 16:18
Unraveled
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality will strengthen in time, there will be somebody else who comes into you life and be with you forever.
June 15th, 2019 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality will strengthen in time, there will be somebody else who comes into you life and be with you forever.
June 15th, 2019 00:00
Unraveled
DeviLove said:
Girl, i know this feelings WAY too well. BTW: love the descriptive words. :)
June 14th, 2019 20:56
DeviLove said:
Girl, i know this feelings WAY too well. BTW: love the descriptive words. :)
June 14th, 2019 20:56
Throes of Depression
Anasyil said:
Amazing...
I can\'t tell you for how long I felt this way. Depression is a psychological murderer. Very well written poem.
June 25th, 2018 10:10
Anasyil said:
Amazing...
I can\'t tell you for how long I felt this way. Depression is a psychological murderer. Very well written poem.
June 25th, 2018 10:10
Throes of Depression
sylviasearcher said:
You capture it well, a numb, empty feeling that evades capture at the time of its consumption.
A companion that does not leave but fades from time to time.
June 25th, 2018 01:49
sylviasearcher said:
You capture it well, a numb, empty feeling that evades capture at the time of its consumption.
A companion that does not leave but fades from time to time.
June 25th, 2018 01:49
My Prison
TN96 said:
I swear you have just become transcendent and jumped into my brain! Brilliant writing, could never have explained it so well.
August 31st, 2017 12:30
TN96 said:
I swear you have just become transcendent and jumped into my brain! Brilliant writing, could never have explained it so well.
August 31st, 2017 12:30
Twisted Webs
Heather T said:
I think for some, they detest most what they see reflected of themselves in others. Powerful write with plenty of visceral images. Great job!
August 7th, 2017 19:00
Heather T said:
I think for some, they detest most what they see reflected of themselves in others. Powerful write with plenty of visceral images. Great job!
August 7th, 2017 19:00
Twisted Webs
jonnyc1 said:
Wow, so much to grab hold of here. Great word choices and language use, I felt every word. \"Ripping the facade that clothed me\"...so good and so relatable.
August 7th, 2017 10:08
jonnyc1 said:
Wow, so much to grab hold of here. Great word choices and language use, I felt every word. \"Ripping the facade that clothed me\"...so good and so relatable.
August 7th, 2017 10:08
The Warmth of Your Gaze
Lucky said:
Amazing! There is nothing like having someone in your life that you can be transparent with...it\'s awesome that you found that person ☺
July 27th, 2017 20:28
Lucky said:
Amazing! There is nothing like having someone in your life that you can be transparent with...it\'s awesome that you found that person ☺
July 27th, 2017 20:28
Love lost?
charlesbarrett said:
Beautiful piece. I love how it was so mysterious. Were the memories just romanticized? Was it real love? Very real and raw piece. I can definitely relate to this. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 11:59
charlesbarrett said:
Beautiful piece. I love how it was so mysterious. Were the memories just romanticized? Was it real love? Very real and raw piece. I can definitely relate to this. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 11:59
My Prison
ajithraj said:
One who is searching may find ways out. Your words dance and bring life to a character who may sound helpless but in full knowledge of one\'s salvation. Yes, if one knows that oneself is creating a prison, one will break out of it sooner or later. It is a great piece of work.
July 24th, 2017 15:15
ajithraj said:
One who is searching may find ways out. Your words dance and bring life to a character who may sound helpless but in full knowledge of one\'s salvation. Yes, if one knows that oneself is creating a prison, one will break out of it sooner or later. It is a great piece of work.
July 24th, 2017 15:15
My Prison
charlesbarrett said:
Wonderful piece. It’s amazing that such beauty can come from such a dark prison. Proof that beauty is also found within your mind. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 11:22
charlesbarrett said:
Wonderful piece. It’s amazing that such beauty can come from such a dark prison. Proof that beauty is also found within your mind. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 11:22
My Prison
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MOONFLOWER (evocative pen-name) Thanks for sharing with us the negativity we all experience (from time to time) of being trapped \"Inside our own Minds\" there is no escape Day or Night ! We do indeed become LOST in the morass of our own DECEPTION ! I love the reality of the angst in your poems ~ they strike a chord ~ Love you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 24th, 2017 09:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MOONFLOWER (evocative pen-name) Thanks for sharing with us the negativity we all experience (from time to time) of being trapped \"Inside our own Minds\" there is no escape Day or Night ! We do indeed become LOST in the morass of our own DECEPTION ! I love the reality of the angst in your poems ~ they strike a chord ~ Love you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 24th, 2017 09:25
Leech
kevin browne said:
release yourself away from this horror you write so passionately about. full of the desire to be free from the toxic waste which filled your life up and nobody should have to go through this like you have. a concentrated write Moonflower15. sad to read but learnt from it. thank you for sharing you personal thoughts.
July 23rd, 2017 15:37
kevin browne said:
release yourself away from this horror you write so passionately about. full of the desire to be free from the toxic waste which filled your life up and nobody should have to go through this like you have. a concentrated write Moonflower15. sad to read but learnt from it. thank you for sharing you personal thoughts.
July 23rd, 2017 15:37
Leech
charlesbarrett said:
Great poem. I can really feel the pain, the joy of freedom, the guilt, the anger at the situation. So many emotions went into this one, and they come across beautifully. Nice piece. Thank you for sharing it with us.
July 23rd, 2017 14:30
charlesbarrett said:
Great poem. I can really feel the pain, the joy of freedom, the guilt, the anger at the situation. So many emotions went into this one, and they come across beautifully. Nice piece. Thank you for sharing it with us.
July 23rd, 2017 14:30
The Regal Storm
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely love this, felt brand new just by reading it ;)
July 12th, 2017 09:09
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely love this, felt brand new just by reading it ;)
July 12th, 2017 09:09
Unconditionally
Nicholas Browning said:
Love, ugh. It\'s beautiful, sure, but man can it seriously wreck a person. Well written, and very true. I felt it. Good job.
July 11th, 2017 17:32
Nicholas Browning said:
Love, ugh. It\'s beautiful, sure, but man can it seriously wreck a person. Well written, and very true. I felt it. Good job.
July 11th, 2017 17:32
Unconditionally
burning-embers said:
Lovely, beautiful expression of pure love. Rare that we see this subject covered and you are brave to do so. More often we read of the bitterness when the wolf has departed. But every one of us nice guys here know you ladies are more attracted to the rogues. Here youve shown the tenderness within you for that attraction. +fav\'s
July 11th, 2017 11:58
burning-embers said:
Lovely, beautiful expression of pure love. Rare that we see this subject covered and you are brave to do so. More often we read of the bitterness when the wolf has departed. But every one of us nice guys here know you ladies are more attracted to the rogues. Here youve shown the tenderness within you for that attraction. +fav\'s
July 11th, 2017 11:58
Unconditionally
rosetintedview said:
This is so beautiful. I have a soft spot for rhyme aswell and this illustrates it so wonderfully.
July 11th, 2017 05:06
rosetintedview said:
This is so beautiful. I have a soft spot for rhyme aswell and this illustrates it so wonderfully.
July 11th, 2017 05:06
Unconditionally
kevin browne said:
\"Even if my dear, you do not feel the same for me\". you capture the image of submitting yourself in front of your man regardless of what is happening. your dedication towards that is beautiful as indeed your writing skills. like to see more of this please.
July 11th, 2017 03:19
kevin browne said:
\"Even if my dear, you do not feel the same for me\". you capture the image of submitting yourself in front of your man regardless of what is happening. your dedication towards that is beautiful as indeed your writing skills. like to see more of this please.
July 11th, 2017 03:19
Unconditionally
FredPeyer said:
Very emotional with vivid pictures. You do write well Moonflower!
July 11th, 2017 03:06
FredPeyer said:
Very emotional with vivid pictures. You do write well Moonflower!
July 11th, 2017 03:06
The Demon That Haunts Me
Louis Gibbs said:
A stark and powerful commentary on the brutal crime of child abuse, Moonflower! Thank you for sharing it.
July 10th, 2017 14:29
Louis Gibbs said:
A stark and powerful commentary on the brutal crime of child abuse, Moonflower! Thank you for sharing it.
July 10th, 2017 14:29
The Demon That Haunts Me
Nicholas Browning said:
Good line to end on. A demon\'s goal is to put you in that cage. They want to show you what it feels like, I suppose.
July 10th, 2017 05:58
Nicholas Browning said:
Good line to end on. A demon\'s goal is to put you in that cage. They want to show you what it feels like, I suppose.
July 10th, 2017 05:58
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