Comments received on poems by S.louise
Broken past
WL Schuett said:
A very heartfelt personal poem hope it helps to write about your pain
October 1st, 2017 11:02
WL Schuett said:
A very heartfelt personal poem hope it helps to write about your pain
October 1st, 2017 11:02
Man I never knew
Alf W said:
I could feel your heart as I read your beautiful and caring poem. Your feeling are well expressed. I also could feel your sadness and was sad for you. Thank you for sharing your feelings in such a beautiful poem.
August 14th, 2017 11:25
Alf W said:
I could feel your heart as I read your beautiful and caring poem. Your feeling are well expressed. I also could feel your sadness and was sad for you. Thank you for sharing your feelings in such a beautiful poem.
August 14th, 2017 11:25
Five more minutes
Alf W said:
I love your poem! It is full of emotion and strength. Often we spend more time with folks who would not spent a minute with us, and if they do, you know need to go. Treasuring each other is vital isn\'t it.
August 4th, 2017 09:34
Alf W said:
I love your poem! It is full of emotion and strength. Often we spend more time with folks who would not spent a minute with us, and if they do, you know need to go. Treasuring each other is vital isn\'t it.
August 4th, 2017 09:34
Stand alone tree
Alf W said:
I love this poem.
I had to go to Google Translate to read it and love how you share the concept you have here. I love trees also (hugged a few :) ) and this is a beautiful poem. Thank you.
August 3rd, 2017 06:09
Alf W said:
I love this poem.
I had to go to Google Translate to read it and love how you share the concept you have here. I love trees also (hugged a few :) ) and this is a beautiful poem. Thank you.
August 3rd, 2017 06:09
Man I never knew
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing S. It is so sad if a kid cannot get to know his/her dad, whatever the reason. But it is equally sad if a dad cannot get to know his kid.
August 1st, 2017 20:33
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing S. It is so sad if a kid cannot get to know his/her dad, whatever the reason. But it is equally sad if a dad cannot get to know his kid.
August 1st, 2017 20:33
Dear me, from me
Overtheedge said:
Beautiful poetry to every girl that has allowed a guy to get the better of them. Thanks for the reminder, what matters most is how you look from the inside and I can tell from this poem that you are pure and mesmerising. Anyone that doesn\'t appreciate that is the fool.
Stay strong x
July 26th, 2017 19:28
Overtheedge said:
Beautiful poetry to every girl that has allowed a guy to get the better of them. Thanks for the reminder, what matters most is how you look from the inside and I can tell from this poem that you are pure and mesmerising. Anyone that doesn\'t appreciate that is the fool.
Stay strong x
July 26th, 2017 19:28
Dear me, from me
Overtheedge said:
Beautiful poetry to every girl that has allowed a guy to get the better of them. Thanks for the reminder, what matters most is how you look from the inside and I can tell from this poem that you are pure and mesmerising. Anyone that doesn\'t appreciate that is the fool.
Stay strong x
July 26th, 2017 19:21
Overtheedge said:
Beautiful poetry to every girl that has allowed a guy to get the better of them. Thanks for the reminder, what matters most is how you look from the inside and I can tell from this poem that you are pure and mesmerising. Anyone that doesn\'t appreciate that is the fool.
Stay strong x
July 26th, 2017 19:21
Dear me, from me
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s raw power there, never let that fire go out. You\'ve given me a glimpse of what my mum\'s life has been like for over twenty years and continues. I hope some how this could reach her but at least it did me, thank you with all my heart.
Stay strong and brave
July 26th, 2017 18:04
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s raw power there, never let that fire go out. You\'ve given me a glimpse of what my mum\'s life has been like for over twenty years and continues. I hope some how this could reach her but at least it did me, thank you with all my heart.
Stay strong and brave
July 26th, 2017 18:04
Dear me, from me
charlesbarrett said:
The best works of art tend to come from the most personal situations. I enjoyed this one. I know many women that either have struggled or are currently struggling with this. I’d say this was a timely piece and a job well done. Thanks for sharing
July 26th, 2017 17:45
charlesbarrett said:
The best works of art tend to come from the most personal situations. I enjoyed this one. I know many women that either have struggled or are currently struggling with this. I’d say this was a timely piece and a job well done. Thanks for sharing
July 26th, 2017 17:45
Five more minutes
Its Raskolnikov said:
I love this, treasure every moment \'til you die, every minute with those you love and every conversation with those you care about. You can cause some serious pain if not
July 18th, 2017 16:37
Its Raskolnikov said:
I love this, treasure every moment \'til you die, every minute with those you love and every conversation with those you care about. You can cause some serious pain if not
July 18th, 2017 16:37
Paranoia
Nicholas Browning said:
Paranoia in moderation keeps you on your toes. Too much of it, and you lose your sense of self. Indeed. Good write, thanks.
July 11th, 2017 17:07
Nicholas Browning said:
Paranoia in moderation keeps you on your toes. Too much of it, and you lose your sense of self. Indeed. Good write, thanks.
July 11th, 2017 17:07
Paranoia
FredPeyer said:
A very fine poem about a debilitating sickness. So well written, I started to feel as if I had it in my head too.
You are a good writer.
July 11th, 2017 11:27
FredPeyer said:
A very fine poem about a debilitating sickness. So well written, I started to feel as if I had it in my head too.
You are a good writer.
July 11th, 2017 11:27
Hello doctor
FredPeyer said:
S.louise, thank you for this well written poem. You have really captured the ups and downs after finding out about the illness, and the will to fight. One of my sister-in-laws just went through the same, chemo and shots, and is now recovering. I pray your mom will pull through as well.
July 11th, 2017 11:24
FredPeyer said:
S.louise, thank you for this well written poem. You have really captured the ups and downs after finding out about the illness, and the will to fight. One of my sister-in-laws just went through the same, chemo and shots, and is now recovering. I pray your mom will pull through as well.
July 11th, 2017 11:24
Hello doctor
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for sharing this, as you say cancer is a bi*ch. I heard last night that my ex son in law, father to one of my granddaughters has been diagnosed with lung cancer.
July 11th, 2017 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for sharing this, as you say cancer is a bi*ch. I heard last night that my ex son in law, father to one of my granddaughters has been diagnosed with lung cancer.
July 11th, 2017 00:08
Hello doctor
onepauly said:
my father died of lung cancer. if I ever had that id look for the highest building I could find. not you though you are stronger.
July 10th, 2017 21:48
onepauly said:
my father died of lung cancer. if I ever had that id look for the highest building I could find. not you though you are stronger.
July 10th, 2017 21:48
Hello doctor
R.A.Brown said:
This is truly touching, i felt the pain and emotion with this poem,its a subject area full of hurt, sadness and dispair, keep up the great work and i look forward to more :)
July 10th, 2017 14:12
R.A.Brown said:
This is truly touching, i felt the pain and emotion with this poem,its a subject area full of hurt, sadness and dispair, keep up the great work and i look forward to more :)
July 10th, 2017 14:12
Hello doctor
Nicholas Browning said:
The position one must find themselves in amidst that situation is dreadful to think about. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing, don\'t give up.
July 10th, 2017 10:23
Nicholas Browning said:
The position one must find themselves in amidst that situation is dreadful to think about. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing, don\'t give up.
July 10th, 2017 10:23
Drowning
Jessie said:
Great job! Almost anyone can get rhyme and rhythm but you have such great voice in your writing. I hope things are looking up for you.
July 9th, 2017 17:23
Jessie said:
Great job! Almost anyone can get rhyme and rhythm but you have such great voice in your writing. I hope things are looking up for you.
July 9th, 2017 17:23
Drowning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOUISE ~ Thanks for your first poem. . Well crafted and replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! The subject PAIN is SAD but FAMILIAR because it is something we can all relate to. My experience (of pain) thankfully is excruiating but short ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK)
July 9th, 2017 17:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LOUISE ~ Thanks for your first poem. . Well crafted and replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! The subject PAIN is SAD but FAMILIAR because it is something we can all relate to. My experience (of pain) thankfully is excruiating but short ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK)
July 9th, 2017 17:14
Drowning
burning-embers said:
Writing gives me such release. I hope it is so for you too. You will always find a \'ready ear\' on this site and some very interesting, thought provoking writings.
July 9th, 2017 17:06
burning-embers said:
Writing gives me such release. I hope it is so for you too. You will always find a \'ready ear\' on this site and some very interesting, thought provoking writings.
July 9th, 2017 17:06
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