Comments received on poems by Adri
BANA
whisperingquill said:
Remarkable, really well written and a unique flow. Thank you for this. 😌
August 8th, 2017 21:14
whisperingquill said:
Remarkable, really well written and a unique flow. Thank you for this. 😌
August 8th, 2017 21:14
My Web
Night Owl said:
Beautifully honest- I feel your strength and vulnerability in these words~ just lovely-- Shine on Adri...
August 5th, 2017 07:43
Night Owl said:
Beautifully honest- I feel your strength and vulnerability in these words~ just lovely-- Shine on Adri...
August 5th, 2017 07:43
BANA
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may her freedom come to her and the community come together in unity and peace.
August 5th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may her freedom come to her and the community come together in unity and peace.
August 5th, 2017 00:49
BANA
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Adri for a very moving, very true, and very well written poem!
August 4th, 2017 16:18
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Adri for a very moving, very true, and very well written poem!
August 4th, 2017 16:18
The Profound Man
FredPeyer said:
Adri, you love his heart and you love his soul..........I LOVE YOUR POEM!
August 3rd, 2017 14:09
FredPeyer said:
Adri, you love his heart and you love his soul..........I LOVE YOUR POEM!
August 3rd, 2017 14:09
The Profound Man
Louis Gibbs said:
Your beautiful love poem describes a worthy companion to be sure. Enjoyed reading it, Adri.
August 3rd, 2017 09:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Your beautiful love poem describes a worthy companion to be sure. Enjoyed reading it, Adri.
August 3rd, 2017 09:11
My Web
Poetic Dan said:
This was brilliant, even gave me a shiver while reading. I\'ve been told that spiders can whisper great secrets!
August 3rd, 2017 03:09
Poetic Dan said:
This was brilliant, even gave me a shiver while reading. I\'ve been told that spiders can whisper great secrets!
August 3rd, 2017 03:09
Worldly Muse
Adri said:
Thank you Antonio!!! Yes, don\'t live your life in the past, live life now!!! Take care!🦋
July 17th, 2017 08:37
Adri said:
Thank you Antonio!!! Yes, don\'t live your life in the past, live life now!!! Take care!🦋
July 17th, 2017 08:37
Worldly Muse
burning-embers said:
I\'ll tell you what inspires me. The utter and complete boredom of not doing it! And so you get on and do it. Do that often enough and u will have found yourself. All to often those trying to find themselves have nothing to find because they never do anything - other than smoking a herb that is.
July 16th, 2017 18:38
burning-embers said:
I\'ll tell you what inspires me. The utter and complete boredom of not doing it! And so you get on and do it. Do that often enough and u will have found yourself. All to often those trying to find themselves have nothing to find because they never do anything - other than smoking a herb that is.
July 16th, 2017 18:38
Boundaries
FredPeyer said:
A very intriguing poem Adri, with a great message. Well written too!
It is so easy to see a boundary if it consists of a fence, but people\'s boundaries are invisible. How can you blame somebody for crossing something they did not see? OK, I guess it does depend on the kind of boundary and the kind of trespassing. Some boundaries are dictated by society, norm, common sense. But others are very personal. You forgive for the first kind, but no forgiveness is needed for the second kind since it was unintentional.
I think I got carried away a bit here. Sorry for the ramble.
Short and sweet: I do like your poem!
July 14th, 2017 20:55
FredPeyer said:
A very intriguing poem Adri, with a great message. Well written too!
It is so easy to see a boundary if it consists of a fence, but people\'s boundaries are invisible. How can you blame somebody for crossing something they did not see? OK, I guess it does depend on the kind of boundary and the kind of trespassing. Some boundaries are dictated by society, norm, common sense. But others are very personal. You forgive for the first kind, but no forgiveness is needed for the second kind since it was unintentional.
I think I got carried away a bit here. Sorry for the ramble.
Short and sweet: I do like your poem!
July 14th, 2017 20:55
Hard Rain
FredPeyer said:
Adri, this is a great poem! Love it! I always like the rain. Not so much the freezing rain when I was living in Montreal. But for the last 30 years living in Hawaii, I have been enjoying it again. Tropical downpours though are something else.
July 14th, 2017 20:47
FredPeyer said:
Adri, this is a great poem! Love it! I always like the rain. Not so much the freezing rain when I was living in Montreal. But for the last 30 years living in Hawaii, I have been enjoying it again. Tropical downpours though are something else.
July 14th, 2017 20:47
Shooting Star
FredPeyer said:
Well written with a great message. Love that last line \"be bare\", these two words say so much but are so hard to live up to. It takes a lot of courage to let others see you as you are. But are we not doing that on this site by sharing our poems?
July 14th, 2017 20:42
FredPeyer said:
Well written with a great message. Love that last line \"be bare\", these two words say so much but are so hard to live up to. It takes a lot of courage to let others see you as you are. But are we not doing that on this site by sharing our poems?
July 14th, 2017 20:42
Boundaries
burning-embers said:
Yes forgiving is closure too. After that worries and/or guilt will fade. We learn from our mistakes and wisdom ensues.
July 14th, 2017 20:12
burning-embers said:
Yes forgiving is closure too. After that worries and/or guilt will fade. We learn from our mistakes and wisdom ensues.
July 14th, 2017 20:12
Shooting Star
Poetic Dan said:
So many great lines, beautifully said from the heart.
Live the life you love
Love the life you live
July 14th, 2017 18:28
Poetic Dan said:
So many great lines, beautifully said from the heart.
Live the life you love
Love the life you live
July 14th, 2017 18:28
Boundaries
Poetic Dan said:
Live, learn and figure it out.
Lovely write, forgiveness is the key. To others but mostly ourselves.
Definitely letting it go too!
July 14th, 2017 17:46
Poetic Dan said:
Live, learn and figure it out.
Lovely write, forgiveness is the key. To others but mostly ourselves.
Definitely letting it go too!
July 14th, 2017 17:46
Hard Rain
Adri said:
Yes I grew up to Dylan songs and I do know the song you are speaking about. He was a master with words. My poem is a completely different topic than Dylans final measage. I just began this journey so, all I can do is learn. I will read all your poems and let you know which is my favorite. Thank you!!!💖
July 13th, 2017 17:00
Adri said:
Yes I grew up to Dylan songs and I do know the song you are speaking about. He was a master with words. My poem is a completely different topic than Dylans final measage. I just began this journey so, all I can do is learn. I will read all your poems and let you know which is my favorite. Thank you!!!💖
July 13th, 2017 17:00
Shooting Star
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ADRI ~ Thanks you for your first poem ~ which throbs with positivity ! \"Play the music ~ ride the wave\" \"Prove yourself to the World\" \"Take a chance ~ Don\'t be scared ~ Don\'t be blind ~ Be bare !\" This is positive advice for People of all ages ! I also love the structure of the poem ~ it pulsates with rhyme & rhythm ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Love MIAMI a great City to live in ~ B.
July 12th, 2017 15:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ADRI ~ Thanks you for your first poem ~ which throbs with positivity ! \"Play the music ~ ride the wave\" \"Prove yourself to the World\" \"Take a chance ~ Don\'t be scared ~ Don\'t be blind ~ Be bare !\" This is positive advice for People of all ages ! I also love the structure of the poem ~ it pulsates with rhyme & rhythm ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Love MIAMI a great City to live in ~ B.
July 12th, 2017 15:57
Shooting Star
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine first contribution to MPS! welcome to our family of poets, Adri.
July 12th, 2017 13:58
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine first contribution to MPS! welcome to our family of poets, Adri.
July 12th, 2017 13:58
