Comments received on poems by Q



The Starr I eclipsed.
charlesbarrett said:

Well written. Beautiful sentiments. Forgiving someone who has wronged you is so hard, and I can feel the emotion in the piece. Thanks for sharing.

July 25th, 2017 10:16

Pleased to meet myself
charlesbarrett said:

Nice piece. I enjoyed this one. It’s easy to lose sight of ourselves when looking in the rear view mirror. Thank you for sharing.

July 24th, 2017 11:14

Grasping for dreams...
Seek said:

Well expressed sentiments and excellent rhyming. All that seeking forgiveness should be very redeeming surely. For the soul.

July 23rd, 2017 20:18

To face one\'s demons
Hopey_xx said:

I love this. Lovely imagery and a wonderful reminder of our strength

July 22nd, 2017 15:34

To face one\'s demons
onepauly said:

I feel the terror in my mind is demons. but I cannot ask them to please go away. will I have to live with them always?

July 22nd, 2017 11:52

To face one\'s demons
Louis Gibbs said:

Bring on the rains! This one hits home at this particular moment in my life ... so well captured and expressed! Kudos, Q.

July 22nd, 2017 11:33

To face one\'s demons
charlesbarrett said:

Being soothed by the rain. What great imagery. This piece really spoke to me. Thanks for sharing

July 22nd, 2017 08:15

Dangers of repressing pain...
onepauly said:

just take it in stride. believe
everything will be o.k.
nobody said it was easy.

July 22nd, 2017 02:08

Dangers of repressing pain...
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, may your life become free again.

July 22nd, 2017 01:06

Was life fair
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Life isn\'t necessarily fair but if you can learn from it it makes life better.

July 20th, 2017 01:20

Was life fair
whisperingquill said:

Nicely stated poet, I too need to practice this mantra more
Or maybe I just ran out of wind.
Again good write. 🍻

July 20th, 2017 01:07

Beautiful
Louis Gibbs said:

I love this one, Q! So well written, and so lovely a way to tell her how you see her and feel about her. Kudos!!

July 19th, 2017 15:36

Beautiful
burning-embers said:

And your words are beautiful for Amy too.

July 19th, 2017 15:07

Beautiful
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

July 19th, 2017 08:16

Happiness
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, happiness is always within us, sometimes it needs a prod.

July 19th, 2017 00:35

Happiness
FredPeyer said:

Hope you don\'t mind Q, printed it out and it is hanging on my wall of great poems. You are so right, happiness never comes from outside, it is already present inside, all we have to do is let it shine.
Thank you for a great poem, and thank you for serving!

July 18th, 2017 15:27

Happiness
onepauly said:

I am happy also. I found it.

July 18th, 2017 08:08

Happiness
burning-embers said:

Good words indeed. Many on here are living this way. Hopefully expression thru writing helps others along their path to happiness, i know its helped me. Short and sweet a good write with a good message.

July 18th, 2017 06:25

Hearts
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Nice rhythm and rhymes and the existential essence no one will ever tire of seeking....

July 17th, 2017 22:53

Hearts
Frank Prem said:

A lovely short. Bravo.

July 17th, 2017 20:09

Hearts
Christina8 said:

First of all, welcome to MPS! This is a great poem! Open and honest. Refreshing!

July 17th, 2017 18:29

Hearts
Carmine Branco said:

Very well constructed. Excellent. Very visual.

July 17th, 2017 17:27