Comments received on poems by Primrose



Indescribable
orchidee said:

Good write P.

October 10th, 2021 02:04

My person
L. B. Mek said:

\'Through poems I express these words
The ones I fail to say\'
\'They’re presented here today
In a completely Emma way\'
\'The smile that you get
Whenever I’m around
Is the bestest thing ever
So please don’t ever frown\'
\'\'That This crazy girl is perfect
Just by being me\'..
a wonderful dedication
and imbued with such intimately quirky characterisation
highlighting a love\'s unique quality of innate whimsicality..
thanks for sharing

May 24th, 2021 06:05

My person
orchidee said:

Good write Primrose.
I stood by the edge of a ravine. I called to a friend \'Don\'t stand too close to the eeeeedddddgggggeeeee\'!
Hear me falling off the edge there? Good acting innit? heehee.

May 24th, 2021 02:05

My person
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words for a very strong love that you have with each other.

Andy

May 24th, 2021 00:15

Being a girl
Goldfinch60 said:

With age comes experience and sometime experience can lead to being scared of things you did in the past. Move on into the future and things will get better.

Andy

October 25th, 2020 01:38

Falling for him
scarlet poet said:

I understand how fast you can really fall for someone. Very well written, thanks for sharing!

July 2nd, 2020 12:24

Falling for him
FredPeyer said:

I fell for her over forty years ago. Am still falling...
Love your poem, Primrose

April 13th, 2020 18:51

Falling for him
dusk arising said:

That\'s the way iy happens. Such a magical time is falling in love and declaring it. No other feeling will compare.
Ahead lies a new world of sharing and becoming \'one\' together. Stay safe, stay well..... the world needs you to.

April 13th, 2020 06:15

Falling for him
Goldfinch60 said:

That future will be locked in harmony.

April 13th, 2020 04:15

Falling for him
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Well captured...
If you don\'t put your hand in the fire
You\'ll never know how hot it is
Bravo!

April 13th, 2020 03:41

Envious
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a very emotive write, may peace within your mind be with you one day.

April 12th, 2020 03:39

Envious
scarlet poet said:

I love this poem! Very well written :)

April 12th, 2020 01:29

Out of time
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad words, such a shame about not playing the piano, perhaps all it needs is for you to sit at it and play that first note, from the first note in any music the wonder of it can be found.
Go on, play that first note.

August 23rd, 2019 00:33

A dance
Goldfinch60 said:

That first dance together can be so special.

June 4th, 2019 00:37

Oh look once again a poem about some guy
Its Raskolnikov said:

I was pleasantly surprised by this one, good write

September 5th, 2018 13:32

I just can’t
El_Pretzadente said:

Nice work

January 11th, 2018 09:42

Why can\'t I stay?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME PRIMROSE (LOVELY NAME ) Thanks for you first poem ~ very elegantly penned but a very sad lament for one so young ! 13 moves and you\'re only 15 ~ that is TWELVE too many ! It\'s easeir for Adults because they make Friends at work etc but its a lot harder for Teens (I know !) Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ BLESSINGS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

July 21st, 2017 05:01

Why can\'t I stay?
Hopey_xx said:

It must be so hard for you to move away from what you know so often. A powerful write, keep writing it out. And welcome to Mps!

July 21st, 2017 04:25