Comments received on poems by Jodie

Dear family
SLR said:

This feels like a suicide note. If that is the case, please tell someone. Preferably a professional but if you can\'t do that, than anyone you trust to have your best interests at heart. Believe it or not, it does get better.

May 20th, 2018 16:13

I\'m lost in the moment
lea cobain . said:

very deep. love

February 6th, 2018 15:19

The edge
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

The demons will never go away sadly I’ve been battling them for 11 years. But it’s the way you over come them. How you show no fear to them. As they try to make you low, you brush them off and keep your head held high.

January 13th, 2018 02:28

AlinaVanderson said:

I wish I could express myself the way you do, your writing is beautiful and fits like gruesome music to a cult classic. Perfect

December 2nd, 2017 21:54

How long?
Noah said:

Ah, happiness. The grandest illusion. Where there is darkness, light will always be corrupted. Where there is doubt, so will certainty.

September 24th, 2017 05:16

The monster\'s
Egyptianqt79 said:

Every writer has some monsters in their head. Lol are they really monsters or demons ? Or are they really good ? Helping us see

September 1st, 2017 19:18

The monster\'s
myself and me said:

I am having a monster in my mind right now, do not know when it going to leave.
Nice writing.

September 1st, 2017 18:42

Hopey_xx said:

I know the feeling... Keep writing it all out. I\'m here if you ever want to talk to me, just send me a dm x

August 3rd, 2017 02:40

My Depression
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a strong write, depression is debilitating.
Welcome to MPS and I hope to read some more of your work.

July 29th, 2017 01:07

My Depression
myself and me said:

You are not alone. My last wave just over last week. My depression is on and off case. Keep writing, get your feeling out. Keep yourself busy, force yourself focus on something. Take a long walk outside. Fight, fight harder, even though you are exhausted. A heart touching poem.

July 28th, 2017 22:01

My Depression

It\'s all good, Hood made a couple of mistakes in his comment too. I suffer from a severe mental illness and this was an excellent, expressive poem. Welcome to this compassionate site.

July 28th, 2017 18:19

My Depression
Poetic Dan said:

There is no good or bad here, just expressions of our truths deep within. That\'s what this is for me anyway, and many good souls have I met doing the same, now you\'re a new one on my stage.

Your words are pure, I felt my own pain and some more. I could say what I did to get down from my cliff but the best thing I know after 22 years of suffering, is to let you know you are not alone and you\'ve just inspired me to keep on.

Thank you again for the heart felt words!

July 28th, 2017 17:11