Comments received on poems by Jodie
Call Me Crazy
L. B. Mek said:
our idea\'s of happiness is somewhat toxic: let that be your final goal, instead dear sister
begin with incremental steps, to that dream \'of anything better\'
break down existence to induvial fractions
of breathe, of seconds, of actions: entirely your choice
now try, ever so gently without forcing yourself
by thinking of toxic expectation, instead causally: simply try
to concentrate on that one individual fragment \'you\'ve decided upon\'
your life, divided in individual breathes or seconds or actions
again, there is no failure, your may stop and start as much as you like
but somehow, gradually
try linking a few fragments together
and you\'ll find yourself moving further that you thought
its ok if you falter and restart again and again
what existence asks of you is that you simply: try, my dear
without projecting toxic results or grand goals and aspirations
they can all wait, right now
its just you and those fragments, you\'re linking one by one
knowing: if you need to
plenty of free help is around to help
and willing to listen: not just hear and forget..
good luck dear poet! thanks for choosing to bravely share and survive
April 6th, 2021 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
our idea\'s of happiness is somewhat toxic: let that be your final goal, instead dear sister
begin with incremental steps, to that dream \'of anything better\'
break down existence to induvial fractions
of breathe, of seconds, of actions: entirely your choice
now try, ever so gently without forcing yourself
by thinking of toxic expectation, instead causally: simply try
to concentrate on that one individual fragment \'you\'ve decided upon\'
your life, divided in individual breathes or seconds or actions
again, there is no failure, your may stop and start as much as you like
but somehow, gradually
try linking a few fragments together
and you\'ll find yourself moving further that you thought
its ok if you falter and restart again and again
what existence asks of you is that you simply: try, my dear
without projecting toxic results or grand goals and aspirations
they can all wait, right now
its just you and those fragments, you\'re linking one by one
knowing: if you need to
plenty of free help is around to help
and willing to listen: not just hear and forget..
good luck dear poet! thanks for choosing to bravely share and survive
April 6th, 2021 05:31
Call Me Crazy
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that happy young girl is still within you Jodie and one day soon I am sure that it will reappear outside your mind.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that happy young girl is still within you Jodie and one day soon I am sure that it will reappear outside your mind.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:50
Dear family
SLR said:
This feels like a suicide note. If that is the case, please tell someone. Preferably a professional but if you can\'t do that, than anyone you trust to have your best interests at heart. Believe it or not, it does get better.
May 20th, 2018 16:13
SLR said:
This feels like a suicide note. If that is the case, please tell someone. Preferably a professional but if you can\'t do that, than anyone you trust to have your best interests at heart. Believe it or not, it does get better.
May 20th, 2018 16:13
The edge
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
The demons will never go away sadly I’ve been battling them for 11 years. But it’s the way you over come them. How you show no fear to them. As they try to make you low, you brush them off and keep your head held high.
January 13th, 2018 02:28
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
The demons will never go away sadly I’ve been battling them for 11 years. But it’s the way you over come them. How you show no fear to them. As they try to make you low, you brush them off and keep your head held high.
January 13th, 2018 02:28
Scared
AlinaVanderson said:
I wish I could express myself the way you do, your writing is beautiful and fits like gruesome music to a cult classic. Perfect
December 2nd, 2017 21:54
AlinaVanderson said:
I wish I could express myself the way you do, your writing is beautiful and fits like gruesome music to a cult classic. Perfect
December 2nd, 2017 21:54
How long?
Noah said:
Ah, happiness. The grandest illusion. Where there is darkness, light will always be corrupted. Where there is doubt, so will certainty.
September 24th, 2017 05:16
Noah said:
Ah, happiness. The grandest illusion. Where there is darkness, light will always be corrupted. Where there is doubt, so will certainty.
September 24th, 2017 05:16
The monster\'s
Egyptianqt79 said:
Every writer has some monsters in their head. Lol are they really monsters or demons ? Or are they really good ? Helping us see
September 1st, 2017 19:18
Egyptianqt79 said:
Every writer has some monsters in their head. Lol are they really monsters or demons ? Or are they really good ? Helping us see
September 1st, 2017 19:18
The monster\'s
myself and me said:
I am having a monster in my mind right now, do not know when it going to leave.
Nice writing.
September 1st, 2017 18:42
myself and me said:
I am having a monster in my mind right now, do not know when it going to leave.
Nice writing.
September 1st, 2017 18:42
Me
Hopey_xx said:
I know the feeling... Keep writing it all out. I\'m here if you ever want to talk to me, just send me a dm x
August 3rd, 2017 02:40
Hopey_xx said:
I know the feeling... Keep writing it all out. I\'m here if you ever want to talk to me, just send me a dm x
August 3rd, 2017 02:40
My Depression
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write, depression is debilitating.
Welcome to MPS and I hope to read some more of your work.
July 29th, 2017 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write, depression is debilitating.
Welcome to MPS and I hope to read some more of your work.
July 29th, 2017 01:07
My Depression
myself and me said:
You are not alone. My last wave just over last week. My depression is on and off case. Keep writing, get your feeling out. Keep yourself busy, force yourself focus on something. Take a long walk outside. Fight, fight harder, even though you are exhausted. A heart touching poem.
July 28th, 2017 22:01
myself and me said:
You are not alone. My last wave just over last week. My depression is on and off case. Keep writing, get your feeling out. Keep yourself busy, force yourself focus on something. Take a long walk outside. Fight, fight harder, even though you are exhausted. A heart touching poem.
July 28th, 2017 22:01
My Depression
Poetic Dan said:
There is no good or bad here, just expressions of our truths deep within. That\'s what this is for me anyway, and many good souls have I met doing the same, now you\'re a new one on my stage.
Your words are pure, I felt my own pain and some more. I could say what I did to get down from my cliff but the best thing I know after 22 years of suffering, is to let you know you are not alone and you\'ve just inspired me to keep on.
Thank you again for the heart felt words!
July 28th, 2017 17:11
Poetic Dan said:
There is no good or bad here, just expressions of our truths deep within. That\'s what this is for me anyway, and many good souls have I met doing the same, now you\'re a new one on my stage.
Your words are pure, I felt my own pain and some more. I could say what I did to get down from my cliff but the best thing I know after 22 years of suffering, is to let you know you are not alone and you\'ve just inspired me to keep on.
Thank you again for the heart felt words!
July 28th, 2017 17:11
