Comments received on poems by jenny.g
Map of Pain
darknessandlight said:
This is very moving and very powerful. It speaks of your strength and will. You are a survivor
September 11th, 2022 09:21
darknessandlight said:
This is very moving and very powerful. It speaks of your strength and will. You are a survivor
September 11th, 2022 09:21
The Cold Light of Day
darknessandlight said:
I am touched by this and so relate to it
September 10th, 2022 21:08
darknessandlight said:
I am touched by this and so relate to it
September 10th, 2022 21:08
The Cold Light of Day
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Like your poem and your comment! :)
September 10th, 2022 10:06
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Like your poem and your comment! :)
September 10th, 2022 10:06
Whore
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t see any guys apologising for going out whoring. Sex is for enjoyment and the more, the merrier.
Mothers, who would have them.
August 20th, 2022 04:20
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t see any guys apologising for going out whoring. Sex is for enjoyment and the more, the merrier.
Mothers, who would have them.
August 20th, 2022 04:20
Map of Pain
Paul Bell said:
Tough one, and a tough message for anyone starting a relationship. Get them checked out and save yourself the future pain and misery.
August 18th, 2022 04:34
Paul Bell said:
Tough one, and a tough message for anyone starting a relationship. Get them checked out and save yourself the future pain and misery.
August 18th, 2022 04:34
Three little ladies
Paul Bell said:
Why don\'t people actually think of the children? You need to stick at it, you\'ve done the hard work bringing up the kids.
April 20th, 2022 05:06
Paul Bell said:
Why don\'t people actually think of the children? You need to stick at it, you\'ve done the hard work bringing up the kids.
April 20th, 2022 05:06
Seeing the Light
Doggerel Dave said:
The change a parent should undergo as their offspring grows and develops is well mapped here.
\"should\' but sometimes does not...... To the detriment of the son or daughter.
Further, given today\'s social and financial arrangements it becomes increasingly difficult for young adults to leave the nest and individuate.
A write with heart in it Thanks.
March 11th, 2022 00:22
Doggerel Dave said:
The change a parent should undergo as their offspring grows and develops is well mapped here.
\"should\' but sometimes does not...... To the detriment of the son or daughter.
Further, given today\'s social and financial arrangements it becomes increasingly difficult for young adults to leave the nest and individuate.
A write with heart in it Thanks.
March 11th, 2022 00:22
Seeing the Light
Bella Shepard said:
Your words are so powerful. Having a son and daughter who are now early 50\"s I realize that that the path each took was the path they made for themselves. My mother felt the need to guide my life in so many ways that I retreated from that playbook and supported what my kids did. It\'s never easy to let go. What a wonderful and brave poem of self reflection.
March 10th, 2022 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
Your words are so powerful. Having a son and daughter who are now early 50\"s I realize that that the path each took was the path they made for themselves. My mother felt the need to guide my life in so many ways that I retreated from that playbook and supported what my kids did. It\'s never easy to let go. What a wonderful and brave poem of self reflection.
March 10th, 2022 13:04
I am my own warrior
Poetic Dan said:
Plaster that on my inner wall! your spirit is amazing, those lessons built you tall.
Fantastic flow too
Thanks for sharing
March 9th, 2022 10:04
Poetic Dan said:
Plaster that on my inner wall! your spirit is amazing, those lessons built you tall.
Fantastic flow too
Thanks for sharing
March 9th, 2022 10:04
Rage
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write Jenny, as d a says rage away, your writing in rage shows others how you really feel as I did when my wife died recently, that broken heart will not be fixed.
Writing does help as your rage and frustration can be put in words on the page.
Andy
April 14th, 2020 03:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write Jenny, as d a says rage away, your writing in rage shows others how you really feel as I did when my wife died recently, that broken heart will not be fixed.
Writing does help as your rage and frustration can be put in words on the page.
Andy
April 14th, 2020 03:34
Rage
dusk arising said:
I think i might understand your rage. I found rage when prayer became futile.
So rage, rage away and when you find yourself. Make it useful.
You\'ll never write rage away.... but you should continue to write.
April 13th, 2020 18:11
dusk arising said:
I think i might understand your rage. I found rage when prayer became futile.
So rage, rage away and when you find yourself. Make it useful.
You\'ll never write rage away.... but you should continue to write.
April 13th, 2020 18:11
You\'re lost little boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, it is a shame that some young ones become, or are forced to become like this. I wish you well in your work. Welcome to MPS.
July 31st, 2017 04:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, it is a shame that some young ones become, or are forced to become like this. I wish you well in your work. Welcome to MPS.
July 31st, 2017 04:17
You\'re lost little boy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JENNY ~ Thanks for your first ~ very Powerful and very Poignant Poem. I can empathise I have worked with a FOYER (16 - 25) and in an FE College (16 -30). It is very sad when one sees Teens wasting their lives ~ The last five words are alas of often true ~ but very chilling ! More Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
July 31st, 2017 04:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JENNY ~ Thanks for your first ~ very Powerful and very Poignant Poem. I can empathise I have worked with a FOYER (16 - 25) and in an FE College (16 -30). It is very sad when one sees Teens wasting their lives ~ The last five words are alas of often true ~ but very chilling ! More Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
July 31st, 2017 04:10
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