Comments received on poems by jenny.g
Spite
Bobby O said:
As my poetic friend who creates art that I really appreciate you entirely get the benefit of the doubt leaving me sure that the act or acts or circumstances that prompted this piece were deserving of the harshest rebuke much unlike the decidedly neutral and measured words you offered. It’s like DAT!
September 24th, 2023 04:47
Bobby O said:
As my poetic friend who creates art that I really appreciate you entirely get the benefit of the doubt leaving me sure that the act or acts or circumstances that prompted this piece were deserving of the harshest rebuke much unlike the decidedly neutral and measured words you offered. It’s like DAT!
September 24th, 2023 04:47
Tiptoe Lightly
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your way with words in this .. a good and interesting poem nicely expressed 🙂 sometimes things and life walk all over us that we can end up feeling almost ‘ trodden on
July 26th, 2023 04:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your way with words in this .. a good and interesting poem nicely expressed 🙂 sometimes things and life walk all over us that we can end up feeling almost ‘ trodden on
July 26th, 2023 04:40
The Willow Tree
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is beautiful )) I think trees can be very grounding
Lovely words
July 26th, 2023 04:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is beautiful )) I think trees can be very grounding
Lovely words
July 26th, 2023 04:37
Endorphins
Bobby O said:
Remedying pain , indeed. But you remind us not to live in a state of denial , truth will surface.
April 19th, 2023 06:06
Bobby O said:
Remedying pain , indeed. But you remind us not to live in a state of denial , truth will surface.
April 19th, 2023 06:06
Soul Mate
Bobby O said:
A very short piece I Try to convey this sentiment
COLLECTION
Triangles that I see
Prism view is my reality
It unravels past complexity
The people I have
next to me
Are all the reason
I need to be
Bobby O
April 18th, 2023 21:26
Bobby O said:
A very short piece I Try to convey this sentiment
COLLECTION
Triangles that I see
Prism view is my reality
It unravels past complexity
The people I have
next to me
Are all the reason
I need to be
Bobby O
April 18th, 2023 21:26
Bollocky Bastard
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - I do find some of David\'s interventions somewhat unnecessary; however, in this instance I share a little of his trepidation over \'cunt\' as a term of abuse, and have only tried to use it when in close contact with the organ it represents. Take it from me I am otherwise pretty much potty-mouthed.
Good grotty write though.
April 18th, 2023 07:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - I do find some of David\'s interventions somewhat unnecessary; however, in this instance I share a little of his trepidation over \'cunt\' as a term of abuse, and have only tried to use it when in close contact with the organ it represents. Take it from me I am otherwise pretty much potty-mouthed.
Good grotty write though.
April 18th, 2023 07:32
Bollocky Bastard
David Wakeling said:
I started to read this and stopped at the \"c\" word.Sorry that\'s not my idea of a tribute.Just sayin
April 17th, 2023 16:46
David Wakeling said:
I started to read this and stopped at the \"c\" word.Sorry that\'s not my idea of a tribute.Just sayin
April 17th, 2023 16:46
Destruction
Parisab said:
If I may, as women, we feel more regret in expressing our rage. “Until I notice my reflection, in every tiny shiny piece” I liked the tone and energy of this piece.
April 15th, 2023 21:51
Parisab said:
If I may, as women, we feel more regret in expressing our rage. “Until I notice my reflection, in every tiny shiny piece” I liked the tone and energy of this piece.
April 15th, 2023 21:51
Destruction
Bobby O said:
And if felt good. That metaphor is so descriptively perfect as our need for immediate satisfaction wins and then later we wish it hadn’t. Creatures prone to seek immediate gratification momentarily try to hide and deny the immaturity that is all of us.
April 15th, 2023 19:16
Bobby O said:
And if felt good. That metaphor is so descriptively perfect as our need for immediate satisfaction wins and then later we wish it hadn’t. Creatures prone to seek immediate gratification momentarily try to hide and deny the immaturity that is all of us.
April 15th, 2023 19:16
Tiptoe Lightly
L. B. Mek said:
loved your wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(strange, everyone demands
we treat people like we want to be treated
and all will be fine, only
although we invested in oven gloves, wisely
not many others, have
and so, we\'re left suffering
as they dig away at our heart\'s furnace
with their scalpels and shovels...
not very fair, I think)
April 14th, 2023 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
loved your wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(strange, everyone demands
we treat people like we want to be treated
and all will be fine, only
although we invested in oven gloves, wisely
not many others, have
and so, we\'re left suffering
as they dig away at our heart\'s furnace
with their scalpels and shovels...
not very fair, I think)
April 14th, 2023 03:36
World Weary
Myth said:
(I lIke it ..)
When words mirror a moment of transparency ..
March 20th, 2023 10:25
Myth said:
(I lIke it ..)
When words mirror a moment of transparency ..
March 20th, 2023 10:25
Beautiful Atheism
Doggerel Dave said:
For what it\'s worth, I think you should operate on the basis of your first proposition.
The second? Don\'t struggle. Ignore it. Rubbish propositions everywhere. Too much energy and time lost when you give them consideration.
December 20th, 2022 06:01
Doggerel Dave said:
For what it\'s worth, I think you should operate on the basis of your first proposition.
The second? Don\'t struggle. Ignore it. Rubbish propositions everywhere. Too much energy and time lost when you give them consideration.
December 20th, 2022 06:01
Beautiful Atheism
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to know you are a good person.
I\'m not sure that your atheism made you that way.
Not all atheists are good people - take me (or rather don\'t!) for example....🙂
December 19th, 2022 23:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to know you are a good person.
I\'m not sure that your atheism made you that way.
Not all atheists are good people - take me (or rather don\'t!) for example....🙂
December 19th, 2022 23:37
Soul Mate
Neil Higgins said:
\"Like tin cans on a string\" 👏
A beautiful poem Jenny
November 11th, 2022 17:36
Neil Higgins said:
\"Like tin cans on a string\" 👏
A beautiful poem Jenny
November 11th, 2022 17:36
Almost
L. B. Mek said:
lol
indeed, beware those enamouring camouflages
we have to remember, for those with warped minds
all the tricks they need are now but a google search
at their fingertips...
so \'catching each other\'s eyes\'
is now merely just a tool of their callous, trade
(wonderfully witty, a good read
thanks for sharing)
November 11th, 2022 06:30
L. B. Mek said:
lol
indeed, beware those enamouring camouflages
we have to remember, for those with warped minds
all the tricks they need are now but a google search
at their fingertips...
so \'catching each other\'s eyes\'
is now merely just a tool of their callous, trade
(wonderfully witty, a good read
thanks for sharing)
November 11th, 2022 06:30
Almost
Crystal Hope said:
this is very powerful especially the ending. Beautiful writing!
November 10th, 2022 13:19
Crystal Hope said:
this is very powerful especially the ending. Beautiful writing!
November 10th, 2022 13:19
If You Love A Dog You’ll Understand
Neville said:
Brulee Bru Bruiser Parsley Parsnip P is without doubt a dog in a million .. and yes, I do understand ...... Nevile
October 4th, 2022 13:45
Neville said:
Brulee Bru Bruiser Parsley Parsnip P is without doubt a dog in a million .. and yes, I do understand ...... Nevile
October 4th, 2022 13:45
Whore
Neville said:
You just made my night and we have only just met ............ Superb ink, well spilt ............................ Neville :)
October 4th, 2022 13:42
Neville said:
You just made my night and we have only just met ............ Superb ink, well spilt ............................ Neville :)
October 4th, 2022 13:42
Endorphins
Paul Bell said:
Stimulates do what they say on the bottle, street stimulates will get you high, low, and at some point you just won\'t know.
October 4th, 2022 09:16
Paul Bell said:
Stimulates do what they say on the bottle, street stimulates will get you high, low, and at some point you just won\'t know.
October 4th, 2022 09:16
If You Love A Dog You’ll Understand
darknessandlight said:
I completely relate and this was done so beautifully. I miss dog.
September 13th, 2022 22:15
darknessandlight said:
I completely relate and this was done so beautifully. I miss dog.
September 13th, 2022 22:15
The Cold Light of Day
sorenbarrett said:
I took this to apply to more than relationships or people and seems more true than most would like to believe.
September 13th, 2022 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
I took this to apply to more than relationships or people and seems more true than most would like to believe.
September 13th, 2022 12:58
Not him
darknessandlight said:
I love this and am in the same boat. She doesn\'t know and I will never tell her because it doesn\'t matter and she already took most of me and left. Keep up with your writing, you have a very skillful and eloquent way of expressing your feelings.
September 11th, 2022 09:37
darknessandlight said:
I love this and am in the same boat. She doesn\'t know and I will never tell her because it doesn\'t matter and she already took most of me and left. Keep up with your writing, you have a very skillful and eloquent way of expressing your feelings.
September 11th, 2022 09:37
I am my own warrior
darknessandlight said:
This is awesome, I don\'t think I have ever written anything so eloquent about my walls. This is simply amazing and beautiful.
September 11th, 2022 09:35
darknessandlight said:
This is awesome, I don\'t think I have ever written anything so eloquent about my walls. This is simply amazing and beautiful.
September 11th, 2022 09:35
Three little ladies
darknessandlight said:
Keep fighting, you\'ve got this. Bonds with children are precious and help to mold them. If their dad won\'t show spine and back bone for them, then someone has to and they are lucky to have you.
September 11th, 2022 09:33
darknessandlight said:
Keep fighting, you\'ve got this. Bonds with children are precious and help to mold them. If their dad won\'t show spine and back bone for them, then someone has to and they are lucky to have you.
September 11th, 2022 09:33
You\'re lost little boy
darknessandlight said:
I used to work in the Psych field with both children and adults. There are always days that you will feel like you are bashing your head against the wall, but no matter what, you are making a difference. Most broken people just need someone who cares. You have a good heart, never doubt your ability to help make a change in someone\'s life no matter how small.
September 11th, 2022 09:30
darknessandlight said:
I used to work in the Psych field with both children and adults. There are always days that you will feel like you are bashing your head against the wall, but no matter what, you are making a difference. Most broken people just need someone who cares. You have a good heart, never doubt your ability to help make a change in someone\'s life no matter how small.
September 11th, 2022 09:30
Rage
darknessandlight said:
I understand this so well, I held onto my rage for a very long time. Finally, within the last three years, I was able to let it go. I hope there comes a day when you find the next best thing that keeps you pushing on. From your poetry, it is easy to tell you have a good soul no matter what you have been through.
September 11th, 2022 09:26
darknessandlight said:
I understand this so well, I held onto my rage for a very long time. Finally, within the last three years, I was able to let it go. I hope there comes a day when you find the next best thing that keeps you pushing on. From your poetry, it is easy to tell you have a good soul no matter what you have been through.
September 11th, 2022 09:26
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