Comments received on poems by jenny.g



Rage
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write Jenny, as d a says rage away, your writing in rage shows others how you really feel as I did when my wife died recently, that broken heart will not be fixed.
Writing does help as your rage and frustration can be put in words on the page.

Andy

April 14th, 2020 03:34

Rage
dusk arising said:

I think i might understand your rage. I found rage when prayer became futile.
So rage, rage away and when you find yourself. Make it useful.
You\'ll never write rage away.... but you should continue to write.


April 13th, 2020 18:11

You\'re lost little boy
Goldfinch60 said:

Good strong write, it is a shame that some young ones become, or are forced to become like this. I wish you well in your work. Welcome to MPS.

July 31st, 2017 04:17

You\'re lost little boy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JENNY ~ Thanks for your first ~ very Powerful and very Poignant Poem. I can empathise I have worked with a FOYER (16 - 25) and in an FE College (16 -30). It is very sad when one sees Teens wasting their lives ~ The last five words are alas of often true ~ but very chilling ! More Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

July 31st, 2017 04:10

You\'re lost little boy
Jinx said:

Good stuff.

July 31st, 2017 03:45