Comments received on poems by Alf W
Blue To Grey
J.M. Shine said:
I admire the whole nature of the poem, how it made its way outside your window and cast out into a fully painted picture through just the right amount of detailed words! Good to meet you, by the way. I hope you could give me some feedback on some of my work sometime. All of you make this community great!
November 28th, 2017 20:02
J.M. Shine said:
I admire the whole nature of the poem, how it made its way outside your window and cast out into a fully painted picture through just the right amount of detailed words! Good to meet you, by the way. I hope you could give me some feedback on some of my work sometime. All of you make this community great!
November 28th, 2017 20:02
Blue To Grey
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I enjoyed your reading, it was very blissful and I like how your took a natural setting to create so a creative view from your own eyes. I like it someone can look at something and see beauty from it and create such an enchanting vibe from there scope of there own eyes. Love your work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
November 28th, 2017 11:45
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I enjoyed your reading, it was very blissful and I like how your took a natural setting to create so a creative view from your own eyes. I like it someone can look at something and see beauty from it and create such an enchanting vibe from there scope of there own eyes. Love your work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
November 28th, 2017 11:45
Follow Your Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and thought provoking.
Another aspect is we follow dreams because it leads us in the way of progression through our life, if we catch them what do we then do?
August 17th, 2017 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and thought provoking.
Another aspect is we follow dreams because it leads us in the way of progression through our life, if we catch them what do we then do?
August 17th, 2017 00:22
Follow Your Dreams
Michael Edwards said:
A poem that makes you think and question. Good work.
August 16th, 2017 11:05
Michael Edwards said:
A poem that makes you think and question. Good work.
August 16th, 2017 11:05
Follow Your Dreams
FredPeyer said:
Alf, you are not only a great poet, you are a great philosopher as well. Interesting take on \"following\" dreams. But can we not \"follow\" a dream from the side, instead of behind? Like an observer, looking into a window, seeing the action as it unfolds, so being there without being there.
August 16th, 2017 10:49
FredPeyer said:
Alf, you are not only a great poet, you are a great philosopher as well. Interesting take on \"following\" dreams. But can we not \"follow\" a dream from the side, instead of behind? Like an observer, looking into a window, seeing the action as it unfolds, so being there without being there.
August 16th, 2017 10:49
The Hidden Harbour
Michael Edwards said:
As I read it I was there - so descriptive and it tells a great story as a good poem should - enjoyed the read.
August 14th, 2017 00:22
Michael Edwards said:
As I read it I was there - so descriptive and it tells a great story as a good poem should - enjoyed the read.
August 14th, 2017 00:22
The Hidden Harbour
myself and me said:
Your poem paint such a beautiful picture of a young lady at the harbor. A lovely story well told.
August 13th, 2017 19:43
myself and me said:
Your poem paint such a beautiful picture of a young lady at the harbor. A lovely story well told.
August 13th, 2017 19:43
So Full Of Dreams
Michael Edwards said:
A picture painted with words - thanks for posting Alf.
August 12th, 2017 12:15
Michael Edwards said:
A picture painted with words - thanks for posting Alf.
August 12th, 2017 12:15
So Full Of Dreams
Louis Gibbs said:
You paint a vivid picture here ... one which is a pleasure to share. Thanks for this offering, Alf!
August 12th, 2017 11:49
Louis Gibbs said:
You paint a vivid picture here ... one which is a pleasure to share. Thanks for this offering, Alf!
August 12th, 2017 11:49
The Graveyard Of Your Heart
jaybob said:
wow... i can relate... that\'s awesome!
August 12th, 2017 10:06
jaybob said:
wow... i can relate... that\'s awesome!
August 12th, 2017 10:06
O Heart of Love and Peace
Heather T said:
The sweetest peace that surpasses all understanding! Beautiful worship words, Alf.
August 7th, 2017 11:07
Heather T said:
The sweetest peace that surpasses all understanding! Beautiful worship words, Alf.
August 7th, 2017 11:07
The Graveyard Of Your Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful. When friends die a part of us dies as well.
August 5th, 2017 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful. When friends die a part of us dies as well.
August 5th, 2017 00:20
Summer Came
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, Alf. I miss the seasons (at least sometimes), but do like to live in this warm place.
August 4th, 2017 20:55
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, Alf. I miss the seasons (at least sometimes), but do like to live in this warm place.
August 4th, 2017 20:55
A Lady Standing By A Gate
FredPeyer said:
A very well written and intriguing poem, Alf. It is amazing how many things, moments, events in life, etc. can trigger the idea for a poem. Inspiration and imagination at its best.
August 4th, 2017 20:52
FredPeyer said:
A very well written and intriguing poem, Alf. It is amazing how many things, moments, events in life, etc. can trigger the idea for a poem. Inspiration and imagination at its best.
August 4th, 2017 20:52
The Graveyard Of Your Heart
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written poem. I like how you treat the subject matter by looking into the other person\'s heart rather than yours.
August 4th, 2017 20:40
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written poem. I like how you treat the subject matter by looking into the other person\'s heart rather than yours.
August 4th, 2017 20:40
The Graveyard Of Your Heart
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed, Losing a friend rather by death or just a break up in friendship is always a hard thing to handle
August 4th, 2017 10:31
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed, Losing a friend rather by death or just a break up in friendship is always a hard thing to handle
August 4th, 2017 10:31
The Graveyard Of Your Heart
Louis Gibbs said:
A stunningly beautiful poem, Alf! Thank you for sharing it.
August 4th, 2017 07:12
Louis Gibbs said:
A stunningly beautiful poem, Alf! Thank you for sharing it.
August 4th, 2017 07:12
A Lady Standing By A Gate
Goldfinch60 said:
Good intriguing write. That girl will always be there for you within your mind.
August 3rd, 2017 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good intriguing write. That girl will always be there for you within your mind.
August 3rd, 2017 08:07
A Lady Standing By A Gate
Louis Gibbs said:
Your fine poem paints an intriguing picture, Alf. Thanks for sharing it!
August 3rd, 2017 06:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Your fine poem paints an intriguing picture, Alf. Thanks for sharing it!
August 3rd, 2017 06:45
A Lady Standing By A Gate
Michael Edwards said:
I can\'t think which painting it could have been but as a member of the Tate Gallery I am minded of the one in this link which although very outdated these days I still find beautiful - great poem Alf.
http://www.tate.org.uk/art/artworks/clausen-the-girl-at-the-gate-n01612
August 3rd, 2017 06:39
Michael Edwards said:
I can\'t think which painting it could have been but as a member of the Tate Gallery I am minded of the one in this link which although very outdated these days I still find beautiful - great poem Alf.
http://www.tate.org.uk/art/artworks/clausen-the-girl-at-the-gate-n01612
August 3rd, 2017 06:39
Summer Came
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you might live in Seattle, or on one of the islands off the coast? Wherever it is, I\'m glad your discomfort didn\'t last too long, Alf. Fine introductory poem! Welcome to MPS!
August 2nd, 2017 13:58
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you might live in Seattle, or on one of the islands off the coast? Wherever it is, I\'m glad your discomfort didn\'t last too long, Alf. Fine introductory poem! Welcome to MPS!
August 2nd, 2017 13:58
