Comments received on poems by jonnyc1
Mysterious Pain
jay-money said:
Very intriguing and very interesting
Defiantly has its own meaning
It defiantly is something that reaches the heart thank u for sharing such an amazing piece
November 17th, 2017 15:17
jay-money said:
Very intriguing and very interesting
Defiantly has its own meaning
It defiantly is something that reaches the heart thank u for sharing such an amazing piece
November 17th, 2017 15:17
Covered Past
jay-money said:
This is very amazing very insightful and very clear on what you are trying to express it this is something i can really relate to especially the lines
\"Strangled with regret,
Shamed by the light that brings a new day, begging the darkness to never go away
Frozen with panic, drowning in fear\"
You are a very amazing writer and very talented
November 17th, 2017 15:14
jay-money said:
This is very amazing very insightful and very clear on what you are trying to express it this is something i can really relate to especially the lines
\"Strangled with regret,
Shamed by the light that brings a new day, begging the darkness to never go away
Frozen with panic, drowning in fear\"
You are a very amazing writer and very talented
November 17th, 2017 15:14
Dark to Light
jay-money said:
Oh my gosh this makes a lot of sence it is so serene and full of feeling and i just think it is amazing u are very talented
keep on writing
November 17th, 2017 15:03
jay-money said:
Oh my gosh this makes a lot of sence it is so serene and full of feeling and i just think it is amazing u are very talented
keep on writing
November 17th, 2017 15:03
Clarity
SunSearcher said:
Beautifully written. Prayers for hope and strength.
~SS
November 16th, 2017 06:50
SunSearcher said:
Beautifully written. Prayers for hope and strength.
~SS
November 16th, 2017 06:50
The End
Louis Gibbs said:
A worthy presentation of the end of a life, this poem. Well done, jonny! Very well done.
August 10th, 2017 15:54
Louis Gibbs said:
A worthy presentation of the end of a life, this poem. Well done, jonny! Very well done.
August 10th, 2017 15:54
The End
myself and me said:
It is the moment far beyond sadness. How could we erase that. This moment shall lead you to all the precious moments you had shared. Very touching poem.
August 10th, 2017 12:02
myself and me said:
It is the moment far beyond sadness. How could we erase that. This moment shall lead you to all the precious moments you had shared. Very touching poem.
August 10th, 2017 12:02
Beyond the Loss
Accidental Poet said:
There\'s no easy way to get past the loss of loved ones. Good days and bad days. But in time you\'ll feel their presence still with you. Very nice write.
August 9th, 2017 17:29
Accidental Poet said:
There\'s no easy way to get past the loss of loved ones. Good days and bad days. But in time you\'ll feel their presence still with you. Very nice write.
August 9th, 2017 17:29
Seven Letter Word
Accidental Poet said:
Excellent write, only no need to say goodbye. For you both will be together again.
August 9th, 2017 17:23
Accidental Poet said:
Excellent write, only no need to say goodbye. For you both will be together again.
August 9th, 2017 17:23
Seven Letter Word
Heather T said:
A very difficult word to say, and you\'ve done this with such sorrowful and beautiful expression.
August 9th, 2017 16:55
Heather T said:
A very difficult word to say, and you\'ve done this with such sorrowful and beautiful expression.
August 9th, 2017 16:55
Beyond the Loss
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a positive end. Move on and breathe once more.
August 9th, 2017 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a positive end. Move on and breathe once more.
August 9th, 2017 00:22
Beyond the Loss
myself and me said:
Brush the soot from the path,
wipe the view, clear the wrath.
Start again, begin to breathe,
say goodbye and learn to leave.
Sounds very brave. New start, it is.
August 8th, 2017 15:01
myself and me said:
Brush the soot from the path,
wipe the view, clear the wrath.
Start again, begin to breathe,
say goodbye and learn to leave.
Sounds very brave. New start, it is.
August 8th, 2017 15:01
Lost in the Dark
myself and me said:
You are moving on, it is just too painful to feel it. It takes time and strength to overcome it. Dark as now will diminish eventually. Feel the pain you are feeling now. A nice poem full of strong feelings.
August 6th, 2017 14:46
myself and me said:
You are moving on, it is just too painful to feel it. It takes time and strength to overcome it. Dark as now will diminish eventually. Feel the pain you are feeling now. A nice poem full of strong feelings.
August 6th, 2017 14:46
Lost in the Dark
Louis Gibbs said:
A painful heartfelt poem as your first contribution to MPS. Welcome, thanks for sharing and I look forward to more!
August 6th, 2017 14:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A painful heartfelt poem as your first contribution to MPS. Welcome, thanks for sharing and I look forward to more!
August 6th, 2017 14:28
