Comments received on poems by DeviLove
Transformation
Tom C Dylan said:
Nice repetition of the first and last line. A nice piece.
November 28th, 2023 08:17
Tom C Dylan said:
Nice repetition of the first and last line. A nice piece.
November 28th, 2023 08:17
Transformation
M.T.G. said:
I love the repetition of the first and last line it makes the poem feel very round and whole.
November 28th, 2023 08:09
M.T.G. said:
I love the repetition of the first and last line it makes the poem feel very round and whole.
November 28th, 2023 08:09
Flying
Lorenz said:
I love your way of flying !
Something very mercurial ...
November 22nd, 2023 06:12
Lorenz said:
I love your way of flying !
Something very mercurial ...
November 22nd, 2023 06:12
Prince Charming
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good poem .. I like it ) we all need that person that helps us , and makes us feel good .
April 6th, 2022 06:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good poem .. I like it ) we all need that person that helps us , and makes us feel good .
April 6th, 2022 06:49
Cat Cuddles (Impromptu Poem #1)
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Great read Devi. As a cat lover/animal lover in general,i love their attitude towards their territory. As far as my cats concerned,SHE lets ME stay here HER apartment😂 This is the way a cat truly thinks. Because cats,.. well,my cat is in the apartment 24/7. She never leaves. HER apartment!😼😾😱🤕😂🌞Cheers🍷🍷🌹🕊
February 21st, 2022 23:31
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Great read Devi. As a cat lover/animal lover in general,i love their attitude towards their territory. As far as my cats concerned,SHE lets ME stay here HER apartment😂 This is the way a cat truly thinks. Because cats,.. well,my cat is in the apartment 24/7. She never leaves. HER apartment!😼😾😱🤕😂🌞Cheers🍷🍷🌹🕊
February 21st, 2022 23:31
Cat Cuddles (Impromptu Poem #1)
dusk arising said:
Love of your cat shines thru. You lucky person having that love and familiarity with a cat. So many people resort to hating these wonderful creatures just because they are such wonderfully snobby little characters i think.
March 18th, 2020 22:36
dusk arising said:
Love of your cat shines thru. You lucky person having that love and familiarity with a cat. So many people resort to hating these wonderful creatures just because they are such wonderfully snobby little characters i think.
March 18th, 2020 22:36
Ode To Music
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is always there for me and always has been through my long life.
Andy
February 12th, 2020 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is always there for me and always has been through my long life.
Andy
February 12th, 2020 02:03
Measure Up
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of the Janis Ian song \'at 17\'. Well she may get all the looks and whistles etc but thats cos plenty of \'Dur-brain\' males only see women as pieces of meat. Judging by your output/writing it occurs to me you wouldn\'t really want to be treated in that way. There\'s more to a woman than flesh and bones after all.
February 9th, 2020 19:13
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of the Janis Ian song \'at 17\'. Well she may get all the looks and whistles etc but thats cos plenty of \'Dur-brain\' males only see women as pieces of meat. Judging by your output/writing it occurs to me you wouldn\'t really want to be treated in that way. There\'s more to a woman than flesh and bones after all.
February 9th, 2020 19:13
The Girl
smallest_stars said:
I love this poem. The tension of it is palpable and quite relatable too. Reminds me \"Mirror\" by Sylvia Plath.
February 7th, 2020 09:54
smallest_stars said:
I love this poem. The tension of it is palpable and quite relatable too. Reminds me \"Mirror\" by Sylvia Plath.
February 7th, 2020 09:54
The Girl
Goldfinch60 said:
That reflection in the mirror is not you, it shows the opposite of who and what you are, so be the wonderful person that you really are.
February 6th, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That reflection in the mirror is not you, it shows the opposite of who and what you are, so be the wonderful person that you really are.
February 6th, 2020 01:41
These Chains
Goldfinch60 said:
That smile will return Devorah and all will be well as you throw your feelings on the page as you have with these words.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That smile will return Devorah and all will be well as you throw your feelings on the page as you have with these words.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 01:50
Used And Useless
Suresh said:
What you once had, can be regained again, if you chart a course that will take you there.
A very poetic expression
July 2nd, 2019 05:01
Suresh said:
What you once had, can be regained again, if you chart a course that will take you there.
A very poetic expression
July 2nd, 2019 05:01
Blank Page
Shadowbox15 said:
😂
You literally wrote a poem on how you couldn’t write a poem.
January 6th, 2018 21:16
Shadowbox15 said:
😂
You literally wrote a poem on how you couldn’t write a poem.
January 6th, 2018 21:16
Trust
Accidental Poet said:
And a worthy goal to have and give. Excellent write Devorah.
November 3rd, 2017 13:17
Accidental Poet said:
And a worthy goal to have and give. Excellent write Devorah.
November 3rd, 2017 13:17
Black Hole
Accidental Poet said:
Just believe in yourself and it will dissolve around you, leaving you free as a bird. Excellent write.
October 28th, 2017 19:56
Accidental Poet said:
Just believe in yourself and it will dissolve around you, leaving you free as a bird. Excellent write.
October 28th, 2017 19:56
Book Life
FredPeyer said:
What a novel way to talk about our innermost feelings, Devi! I love it. Maybe my love of books has something to do with it as well. And you are right, to know and understand another person takes effort and time. And even then, we may never get to the center!
Well written, thought provoking poem!
October 9th, 2017 20:42
FredPeyer said:
What a novel way to talk about our innermost feelings, Devi! I love it. Maybe my love of books has something to do with it as well. And you are right, to know and understand another person takes effort and time. And even then, we may never get to the center!
Well written, thought provoking poem!
October 9th, 2017 20:42
In The Garden
germanamericanchurch said:
Yes, natures beauty is always profound even in low moments,
How did the colors of life turn out so beautiful?
October 4th, 2017 21:13
germanamericanchurch said:
Yes, natures beauty is always profound even in low moments,
How did the colors of life turn out so beautiful?
October 4th, 2017 21:13
Decisions, Decisions Everywhere
chinaaliciarivera said:
Interesting write. Yeah sometimes making decisions can be tough. Just make decisions based on what you feel good about. Always do what is best for you and those you love. 💗 💕 ❤ 😊
October 4th, 2017 16:17
chinaaliciarivera said:
Interesting write. Yeah sometimes making decisions can be tough. Just make decisions based on what you feel good about. Always do what is best for you and those you love. 💗 💕 ❤ 😊
October 4th, 2017 16:17
In The Garden
chinaaliciarivera said:
Practice meditation and clear your mind. It is good to clear your mind sometimes, and not mentally dwell on everything wrong in your life. Just enjoy being. Life isn\'t perfect and no one is perfect. Sometimes just be in the moment. Gardens are so beautiful. That should be a time of serenity and peace for you. 💗 💕❤ 😊
October 4th, 2017 16:15
chinaaliciarivera said:
Practice meditation and clear your mind. It is good to clear your mind sometimes, and not mentally dwell on everything wrong in your life. Just enjoy being. Life isn\'t perfect and no one is perfect. Sometimes just be in the moment. Gardens are so beautiful. That should be a time of serenity and peace for you. 💗 💕❤ 😊
October 4th, 2017 16:15
In The Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the beauty of your garden is shown the words written, the beauty of your life is shown in the words not written, your life is there for you to live enjoy it all both around you and within you. Welcome to MPS.
October 2nd, 2017 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the beauty of your garden is shown the words written, the beauty of your life is shown in the words not written, your life is there for you to live enjoy it all both around you and within you. Welcome to MPS.
October 2nd, 2017 01:12
In The Garden
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEV ~ Thanks for your first Poem. It is very elegantly written and spaced and it flows like a Mountain Stream ! Alas despite a pleasing structure ~ Your personal message is sad. Everything in the Garden is LOVELY and I love your descriptions in stanza three ! However Nature\'s Beauty only exacerbates your own INNER ANGST ~ everything in your personal life is NOT LOVELY ! That is so so sad ! Thinking of You ~ every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
October 1st, 2017 15:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEV ~ Thanks for your first Poem. It is very elegantly written and spaced and it flows like a Mountain Stream ! Alas despite a pleasing structure ~ Your personal message is sad. Everything in the Garden is LOVELY and I love your descriptions in stanza three ! However Nature\'s Beauty only exacerbates your own INNER ANGST ~ everything in your personal life is NOT LOVELY ! That is so so sad ! Thinking of You ~ every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
October 1st, 2017 15:46
