Comments received on poems by Birddie Jane
The Break UP
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write,i guess we all have been there
January 13th, 2018 11:43
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write,i guess we all have been there
January 13th, 2018 11:43
Shattered
Resa71 said:
In just a couple lines, you captured all the pain of grief. Well done!
January 13th, 2018 10:43
Resa71 said:
In just a couple lines, you captured all the pain of grief. Well done!
January 13th, 2018 10:43
I prefer the grey
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I loved how you put everything together, you did a great job!
November 27th, 2017 15:05
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I loved how you put everything together, you did a great job!
November 27th, 2017 15:05
I prefer the grey
FineB said:
Hi JessieJane.
What a great poem.
Thanks.
Keep writing
FineB
November 27th, 2017 10:28
FineB said:
Hi JessieJane.
What a great poem.
Thanks.
Keep writing
FineB
November 27th, 2017 10:28
No
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JESSIE I can empathise \"Some loves never end ~ some hearts never mend\" Things can improve but it takes time ~ but I only feel release when GOD sends me another Angel to Love ! Thinkin\' of You ~ Prayin\' for You ~ Heavenly Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 24th, 2017 10:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JESSIE I can empathise \"Some loves never end ~ some hearts never mend\" Things can improve but it takes time ~ but I only feel release when GOD sends me another Angel to Love ! Thinkin\' of You ~ Prayin\' for You ~ Heavenly Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 24th, 2017 10:18
Help me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JESSE ~ what you say is true in the main people don\'t understand DEPRESSION and ignore the symptoms and tell you to \"Get outside it\". But you know you can\'t because your problem is internal and not external. I know when my students are depressed ~ so I give them lots of TLC ~ Time and Understanding ~ it WORKS ! Heavenly Hugs ~ Yours BRIAN
November 24th, 2017 10:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JESSE ~ what you say is true in the main people don\'t understand DEPRESSION and ignore the symptoms and tell you to \"Get outside it\". But you know you can\'t because your problem is internal and not external. I know when my students are depressed ~ so I give them lots of TLC ~ Time and Understanding ~ it WORKS ! Heavenly Hugs ~ Yours BRIAN
November 24th, 2017 10:08
What is wrong with me?
Birddie Jane said:
This poem is no longer relevant to me. I now know that it was not me and rather he who is messed up with a capitol F.
November 24th, 2017 04:27
Birddie Jane said:
This poem is no longer relevant to me. I now know that it was not me and rather he who is messed up with a capitol F.
November 24th, 2017 04:27
What is wrong with me?
Shadowbox15 said:
That was a beautifully written poem. I enjoy the self-reflection within, shows that you recognize your weaknesses. That’s the first step to become better.
November 16th, 2017 20:06
Shadowbox15 said:
That was a beautifully written poem. I enjoy the self-reflection within, shows that you recognize your weaknesses. That’s the first step to become better.
November 16th, 2017 20:06
What is wrong with me?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JESSIE for sharing you Heart & Mind with us ! Being uncertain about oneself and having negative feelings is all part of growing up. We are all \"A work in progress\" and we all have uncertainties especially about LOVE & RELATIONSHIPS ~ if you didn\'t you would not be NORMAL. All our lives consist of UPS & DOWNS ~ We have to enjoy the UPS and benefit and learn from them ~ and also to learn that the DOWNS are all transient and will pass. Thinking of you and I\'m here for you ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
November 16th, 2017 19:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JESSIE for sharing you Heart & Mind with us ! Being uncertain about oneself and having negative feelings is all part of growing up. We are all \"A work in progress\" and we all have uncertainties especially about LOVE & RELATIONSHIPS ~ if you didn\'t you would not be NORMAL. All our lives consist of UPS & DOWNS ~ We have to enjoy the UPS and benefit and learn from them ~ and also to learn that the DOWNS are all transient and will pass. Thinking of you and I\'m here for you ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
November 16th, 2017 19:24
What is wrong with me?
jonnyc1 said:
This is a thought process for a lot of us, well at least me. Very well though out and written, thanks for sharing.
November 16th, 2017 19:20
jonnyc1 said:
This is a thought process for a lot of us, well at least me. Very well though out and written, thanks for sharing.
November 16th, 2017 19:20
The Break UP
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JESSIE ~ This is a very poignant poem and I love the style. In Modern Poetry there are NO rules ~ it is ANY words in ANY order. All poetry is cathartic ~ it enable you to bring the \"good times\" and the \"bad times\" into the OPEN ~ On MPS you can also get feed back ~ HUGS BRIAN
November 16th, 2017 03:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JESSIE ~ This is a very poignant poem and I love the style. In Modern Poetry there are NO rules ~ it is ANY words in ANY order. All poetry is cathartic ~ it enable you to bring the \"good times\" and the \"bad times\" into the OPEN ~ On MPS you can also get feed back ~ HUGS BRIAN
November 16th, 2017 03:09
Vultures and Doubt
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI JESSE ~ Love the pathos and angst in your Poem ~ it is a real dilemma. It is something I have experienced ~ the Pain when you Lover departs for a while and the \"Vultures\" sow doubts in your mind ! I\'ve never bee engaged or married so I am talking GIRL FRIENDS I have had who have had to go away for a period. I most cases \"Absence made our Hearts grow fonder\" but in one case She never came back ! I have friends who are BIRACIAL couples and the \"Vultures\" can be more snidey about them ! Thinking of you ~ Every Blessing for the future ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
November 12th, 2017 19:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI JESSE ~ Love the pathos and angst in your Poem ~ it is a real dilemma. It is something I have experienced ~ the Pain when you Lover departs for a while and the \"Vultures\" sow doubts in your mind ! I\'ve never bee engaged or married so I am talking GIRL FRIENDS I have had who have had to go away for a period. I most cases \"Absence made our Hearts grow fonder\" but in one case She never came back ! I have friends who are BIRACIAL couples and the \"Vultures\" can be more snidey about them ! Thinking of you ~ Every Blessing for the future ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
November 12th, 2017 19:28
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