Comments received on poems by Birddie Jane
Anymore
sorenbarrett said:
Powerfully written. Anyone that has had a relationship can find small bits of this that apply. A moving write that sounds too familiar to want to pay attention to yet is so gripping that one can not put it down. Nicely written
August 3rd, 2024 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
Powerfully written. Anyone that has had a relationship can find small bits of this that apply. A moving write that sounds too familiar to want to pay attention to yet is so gripping that one can not put it down. Nicely written
August 3rd, 2024 05:53
I blame you
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped is a good word. Each decision we make in this life traps us into a new set of decisions. Emotionally engaging this poem..
August 2nd, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped is a good word. Each decision we make in this life traps us into a new set of decisions. Emotionally engaging this poem..
August 2nd, 2024 05:21
untitled
peto said:
Birddie
It\'s unbearably difficult to fight someone else\'s addictions
Although sad I I thoroughly enjoyed reading
Maybe that is why you\'re writing
Glad to discover your writing
Will be reading more
June 25th, 2024 13:02
peto said:
Birddie
It\'s unbearably difficult to fight someone else\'s addictions
Although sad I I thoroughly enjoyed reading
Maybe that is why you\'re writing
Glad to discover your writing
Will be reading more
June 25th, 2024 13:02
Stay
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This is so beautiful yet painful. I liked the way you broke down each phase and expressed yourself so well
November 8th, 2023 05:00
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This is so beautiful yet painful. I liked the way you broke down each phase and expressed yourself so well
November 8th, 2023 05:00
\"Speak\"
Doggerel Dave said:
Know that feeling (captured nicely) A long time ago now though.....
Give it one more try, if no change, walk away.
March 2nd, 2021 06:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Know that feeling (captured nicely) A long time ago now though.....
Give it one more try, if no change, walk away.
March 2nd, 2021 06:49
\"Speak\"
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I can her you and would be happy to speak to you.
Emotive words BJ.
Andy
March 2nd, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I can her you and would be happy to speak to you.
Emotive words BJ.
Andy
March 2nd, 2021 01:44
Meant to be here
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, Birddie! So often we think that giving advise is a good thing. But sometimes it is not! I just recently published the poem \"Bad Advise\", you might want to have a look at it.
March 1st, 2021 15:54
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, Birddie! So often we think that giving advise is a good thing. But sometimes it is not! I just recently published the poem \"Bad Advise\", you might want to have a look at it.
March 1st, 2021 15:54
fantasy
dusk arising said:
Have faith in your inner strength young lady. Your circumstances force you into the discomfort of awkward and hurtful questioning of your \'destiny\'.
Woman was not meant to be forced into situations which are uncomfortable for them. What kind of a home and life would that result in?
There are many potential partners walking this planet and life is no race (or we would be born with a number on our back LOL).
Take your time, you know what you want, Accept no less or you and yours will suffer for it. Know yourself (as I\'m sure you do) and be true to yourself.
There should be many smiles each day in our lifes.
February 17th, 2021 03:42
dusk arising said:
Have faith in your inner strength young lady. Your circumstances force you into the discomfort of awkward and hurtful questioning of your \'destiny\'.
Woman was not meant to be forced into situations which are uncomfortable for them. What kind of a home and life would that result in?
There are many potential partners walking this planet and life is no race (or we would be born with a number on our back LOL).
Take your time, you know what you want, Accept no less or you and yours will suffer for it. Know yourself (as I\'m sure you do) and be true to yourself.
There should be many smiles each day in our lifes.
February 17th, 2021 03:42
fantasy
L. B. Mek said:
without fantasy, we would devalue possibility: immediately...
your questions, helps curate your dreams,
your dreams help visualise an actualisation path to what you want from life,
keep asking and doubting: for that is living...
remember, we are but flesh and when pricked we too - easily bleed, so don\'t be too harsh with that miracle reflection in the mirror,
cherish each nuanced breath - free of context and let us all learn to simply accept, those twists of fate that await...
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
I was drawn to the seemingly transparent honesty in your words, an enticingly accessible glimpse - depicting, those moments of doubt in our lives,
thanks for sharing
February 4th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
without fantasy, we would devalue possibility: immediately...
your questions, helps curate your dreams,
your dreams help visualise an actualisation path to what you want from life,
keep asking and doubting: for that is living...
remember, we are but flesh and when pricked we too - easily bleed, so don\'t be too harsh with that miracle reflection in the mirror,
cherish each nuanced breath - free of context and let us all learn to simply accept, those twists of fate that await...
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
I was drawn to the seemingly transparent honesty in your words, an enticingly accessible glimpse - depicting, those moments of doubt in our lives,
thanks for sharing
February 4th, 2021 04:30
fantasy
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem very much. It is well written and there is much to be read between the lines. One could take your poem to mean much more, like how do we choose between comfort and risk, between the known and the unknown, etc. Well done Birddie!
February 3rd, 2021 13:08
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem very much. It is well written and there is much to be read between the lines. One could take your poem to mean much more, like how do we choose between comfort and risk, between the known and the unknown, etc. Well done Birddie!
February 3rd, 2021 13:08
fantasy
Opal Tears said:
This is written in a very human, very relatable way. We all have our struggles. You are facing one and I hope that the answer is shown to you quickly. Thank you for sharing.
February 3rd, 2021 01:58
Opal Tears said:
This is written in a very human, very relatable way. We all have our struggles. You are facing one and I hope that the answer is shown to you quickly. Thank you for sharing.
February 3rd, 2021 01:58
What I want
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is so important in relationships, I do hope that you will find that trust.
Andy
December 18th, 2020 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is so important in relationships, I do hope that you will find that trust.
Andy
December 18th, 2020 02:05
Doubts
dusk arising said:
Terrible theme to be living under. If this was really happening you\'d have to say \'where\'s your self respect? Is living like that all you think you\'re worth?\'
Thank goodness it\'s only a poem.
A very thought provoking post from you.
December 4th, 2020 18:30
dusk arising said:
Terrible theme to be living under. If this was really happening you\'d have to say \'where\'s your self respect? Is living like that all you think you\'re worth?\'
Thank goodness it\'s only a poem.
A very thought provoking post from you.
December 4th, 2020 18:30
Dust
L. B. Mek said:
all puzzles come boxed - in shattered pieces, until that fateful day when worthy eyes - innately, touch and weave once loose pieces: whole, beautifully framed as nature intended,
sadly - yet again, they may be forced to separate from each other but every owner places the puzzle back in its box a little more complete, till finally the destined day of realisation is fulfilled and the puzzle sheds its own box, flaunts its pieces - arranged in the way it feels best: for itself and struts down the road, to offer a helping hand for the next box of broken pieces it recognises: as untapped potential... 🤝
thank for sharing and inspiring my scribble,
December 3rd, 2020 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
all puzzles come boxed - in shattered pieces, until that fateful day when worthy eyes - innately, touch and weave once loose pieces: whole, beautifully framed as nature intended,
sadly - yet again, they may be forced to separate from each other but every owner places the puzzle back in its box a little more complete, till finally the destined day of realisation is fulfilled and the puzzle sheds its own box, flaunts its pieces - arranged in the way it feels best: for itself and struts down the road, to offer a helping hand for the next box of broken pieces it recognises: as untapped potential... 🤝
thank for sharing and inspiring my scribble,
December 3rd, 2020 05:35
More than the dogs
Goldfinch60 said:
True love can ask so many questions but sometimes the answers are not there.
Andy
March 21st, 2020 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
True love can ask so many questions but sometimes the answers are not there.
Andy
March 21st, 2020 01:56
More than the dogs
dusk arising said:
Ah but therein lies the dilemma. Would you love him more if there were no need for these questions?
Treat \'em mean and keep \'em keen. Is the only game in town.
March 20th, 2020 15:54
dusk arising said:
Ah but therein lies the dilemma. Would you love him more if there were no need for these questions?
Treat \'em mean and keep \'em keen. Is the only game in town.
March 20th, 2020 15:54
Let it Go
dusk arising said:
Did you look into yourself and find this experience moved you on? I hope so, each disappointment life brings is such a great opportunity to reach within for self knowledge, strength and healing.
September 25th, 2019 00:47
dusk arising said:
Did you look into yourself and find this experience moved you on? I hope so, each disappointment life brings is such a great opportunity to reach within for self knowledge, strength and healing.
September 25th, 2019 00:47
my heaven
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely read bluejay - so colourfully penned - the pink in the verse could do with being a little bit clearer but charmingly lined nevertheless. Thank you for sharing.
April 1st, 2019 06:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely read bluejay - so colourfully penned - the pink in the verse could do with being a little bit clearer but charmingly lined nevertheless. Thank you for sharing.
April 1st, 2019 06:28
I fucking hate you
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW BLUE JAY (one of my Fave American Birds !) Your poem is a bit strong but I can empathise ! We Ladies do give everything to our \"MEN\" but in my experience MEN so often TAKE but don\'t GIVE themselves totally in a relationship ! Im 30 and a bit wiser ! I share this site with my Fiancee Brian : and we plan to be married @ Easter 2020. So far our relationship is very solid but Iam on Work exchange (15 months) in New Zealand which is 11,500 miles from London UK : absence really does make the Heart grow Fonder ! Every Blessing for the future : sorry you have been let down !
Yours ANGELA 🧡
Please check our SITE : Thanks !
March 25th, 2019 04:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW BLUE JAY (one of my Fave American Birds !) Your poem is a bit strong but I can empathise ! We Ladies do give everything to our \"MEN\" but in my experience MEN so often TAKE but don\'t GIVE themselves totally in a relationship ! Im 30 and a bit wiser ! I share this site with my Fiancee Brian : and we plan to be married @ Easter 2020. So far our relationship is very solid but Iam on Work exchange (15 months) in New Zealand which is 11,500 miles from London UK : absence really does make the Heart grow Fonder ! Every Blessing for the future : sorry you have been let down !
Yours ANGELA 🧡
Please check our SITE : Thanks !
March 25th, 2019 04:17
Forever or never
Birddie Jane said:
Turns out he had been on a dating app the whole time they were together he is now blocked
March 25th, 2019 03:32
Birddie Jane said:
Turns out he had been on a dating app the whole time they were together he is now blocked
March 25th, 2019 03:32
Forever or never
Nicholas Browning said:
Hmm. Sounds to me like these two people need to have a serious chat!
March 24th, 2019 19:52
Nicholas Browning said:
Hmm. Sounds to me like these two people need to have a serious chat!
March 24th, 2019 19:52
My dance with death
dusk arising said:
Who\'s gonna write like this for us if he comes to stay eh?
Do you like teddy bears?
February 3rd, 2019 20:46
dusk arising said:
Who\'s gonna write like this for us if he comes to stay eh?
Do you like teddy bears?
February 3rd, 2019 20:46
bubbly butterflies
Goldfinch60 said:
May those butterflies and bubbles go on forever.
November 8th, 2018 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May those butterflies and bubbles go on forever.
November 8th, 2018 01:57
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