Comments received on poems by Birddie Jane
Blue
Rainbow said:
very well expressed poem with some lovely imagery . but very sad, you have expressed your emotions and sadness very well here.
July 20th, 2018 08:48
Rainbow said:
very well expressed poem with some lovely imagery . but very sad, you have expressed your emotions and sadness very well here.
July 20th, 2018 08:48
Everytime my heart beats
doesntmatter said:
Tell them you love them before it’s too late. I hope you figure out whatever you’re going through. Stay strong
June 26th, 2018 21:08
doesntmatter said:
Tell them you love them before it’s too late. I hope you figure out whatever you’re going through. Stay strong
June 26th, 2018 21:08
But even still
Pintu Mahakul said:
The best night noted in life amazingly and expressed the views. An interesting poem is shared here.
June 17th, 2018 09:26
Pintu Mahakul said:
The best night noted in life amazingly and expressed the views. An interesting poem is shared here.
June 17th, 2018 09:26
Find me
dusk arising said:
oooh youre so mixed up here! where is your self worth poet?
May 7th, 2018 13:17
dusk arising said:
oooh youre so mixed up here! where is your self worth poet?
May 7th, 2018 13:17
Love doesn\'t care
BrokenPen said:
Wow, that was incredible the words you put out are so strong and moving. I\'m honestly speechless.
May 6th, 2018 18:12
BrokenPen said:
Wow, that was incredible the words you put out are so strong and moving. I\'m honestly speechless.
May 6th, 2018 18:12
The urge to sink below the water
Birddie Jane said:
The part about 17 years references my younger brother and the part about 21 years references my twin sister
May 4th, 2018 05:58
Birddie Jane said:
The part about 17 years references my younger brother and the part about 21 years references my twin sister
May 4th, 2018 05:58
A Whisper From Heaven
Daveyboyz said:
Great poem, my parents are in good health but I am sure this relates to a good many.
April 8th, 2018 04:50
Daveyboyz said:
Great poem, my parents are in good health but I am sure this relates to a good many.
April 8th, 2018 04:50
A Whisper From Heaven
Resa71 said:
I really like this poem!
Thank you for sharing!
Resa. :)
April 8th, 2018 04:06
Resa71 said:
I really like this poem!
Thank you for sharing!
Resa. :)
April 8th, 2018 04:06
that day can\'t come fast enough
Jamie said:
Real life emotion, \"I don\'t want them to hear,\" and a great expression of sadness!
March 17th, 2018 03:17
Jamie said:
Real life emotion, \"I don\'t want them to hear,\" and a great expression of sadness!
March 17th, 2018 03:17
I don\'t think you love me
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
one sided love can feel hard... good piece of writing with a nice flow...:-)
February 22nd, 2018 02:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
one sided love can feel hard... good piece of writing with a nice flow...:-)
February 22nd, 2018 02:53
A warning to all
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh JESSIE ~ You are angry with the attitude of a SELFISH WORLD to a LOVELY CARING LADY like you ! It is true in the Present ME ME ME Society People who care do die and are forgotten like the rest ! I teach ADULTS (17+) on Vocational Courses and I get a lot of satisfaction in their development in College and in their chosen Occupation ~ Catering ~ Hairdressing ~ Garage- mechanics ~ etc. Not much pay and a lot of blood ~ sweat & tears. I also encourage all the Poets on MPS especially New Members ! I have my Critics but GOD loves me and all my Family and Friends ~ so I let criticisms flow like water off a ducks back ~ QUACK ! Every Blessing ~ Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN XOX
February 7th, 2018 11:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh JESSIE ~ You are angry with the attitude of a SELFISH WORLD to a LOVELY CARING LADY like you ! It is true in the Present ME ME ME Society People who care do die and are forgotten like the rest ! I teach ADULTS (17+) on Vocational Courses and I get a lot of satisfaction in their development in College and in their chosen Occupation ~ Catering ~ Hairdressing ~ Garage- mechanics ~ etc. Not much pay and a lot of blood ~ sweat & tears. I also encourage all the Poets on MPS especially New Members ! I have my Critics but GOD loves me and all my Family and Friends ~ so I let criticisms flow like water off a ducks back ~ QUACK ! Every Blessing ~ Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN XOX
February 7th, 2018 11:37
Don\'t show love, do it
Edthepoet said:
Love, love is a verb
Love is a doing word..
Nice write x
February 6th, 2018 13:48
Edthepoet said:
Love, love is a verb
Love is a doing word..
Nice write x
February 6th, 2018 13:48
How do I say I love you again and again
Moom said:
I know this feeling so well. Sometimes it\'s hard to find a way that expresses what you feel.
January 27th, 2018 05:23
Moom said:
I know this feeling so well. Sometimes it\'s hard to find a way that expresses what you feel.
January 27th, 2018 05:23
How do I say I love you again and again
Nyoko_beautiful moon said:
I have the same question all the time
I really like it
January 26th, 2018 18:57
Nyoko_beautiful moon said:
I have the same question all the time
I really like it
January 26th, 2018 18:57
How do I say I love you again and again
lasergraph said:
I like it, perched and ready to type that first expression.
January 26th, 2018 16:00
lasergraph said:
I like it, perched and ready to type that first expression.
January 26th, 2018 16:00
You do not own me
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Life is full of ups and downs. We have to continue on and teach others to be more respectful and honest.
January 23rd, 2018 15:40
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Life is full of ups and downs. We have to continue on and teach others to be more respectful and honest.
January 23rd, 2018 15:40
I Am Free
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Accomplishing Goals is like a Amazing Dream at Night.
January 23rd, 2018 15:37
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Accomplishing Goals is like a Amazing Dream at Night.
January 23rd, 2018 15:37
I Am Free
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
\'\' i took that chip off my shoulder and i smashed it \'\' some powerful line, this is ! nice work! i am glad for you
January 23rd, 2018 13:51
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
\'\' i took that chip off my shoulder and i smashed it \'\' some powerful line, this is ! nice work! i am glad for you
January 23rd, 2018 13:51
You do not own me
Birddie Jane said:
Thank you so very much Holly Jane for the favorite
January 22nd, 2018 20:36
Birddie Jane said:
Thank you so very much Holly Jane for the favorite
January 22nd, 2018 20:36
You do not own me
Birddie Jane said:
OUTBACK, thank you so very much for not only commenting on my poem but for saving it as a favorite. It really means the world for me.
January 22nd, 2018 19:43
Birddie Jane said:
OUTBACK, thank you so very much for not only commenting on my poem but for saving it as a favorite. It really means the world for me.
January 22nd, 2018 19:43
I prefer the grey
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
you are so right in what you say .. grey can change colour, the grey clouds can turn to nearly black and back again to white ...
January 20th, 2018 08:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
you are so right in what you say .. grey can change colour, the grey clouds can turn to nearly black and back again to white ...
January 20th, 2018 08:15
I prefer the grey
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hi jessie :-) wow , i love this :-) i like you thought about what is behind the grey , not just the grey colour itself , but the rain hiding within the clouds and the opposite ideas related to rain , causing pain and on the opposite hand .. being gentle and calming and lovely ..
\'\' I wish to live my life
Like I am water
Strong and determined
Not fretting obstacles in my path
and yet gentle and loving \'\'
such beautiful lines! a lovely and smart piece of writing with a lovely flow to this piece .. really nice .. enjoyed very much
January 20th, 2018 08:13
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hi jessie :-) wow , i love this :-) i like you thought about what is behind the grey , not just the grey colour itself , but the rain hiding within the clouds and the opposite ideas related to rain , causing pain and on the opposite hand .. being gentle and calming and lovely ..
\'\' I wish to live my life
Like I am water
Strong and determined
Not fretting obstacles in my path
and yet gentle and loving \'\'
such beautiful lines! a lovely and smart piece of writing with a lovely flow to this piece .. really nice .. enjoyed very much
January 20th, 2018 08:13
Shattered
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the flip side of love,the pain it can bring
January 13th, 2018 15:41
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the flip side of love,the pain it can bring
January 13th, 2018 15:41
The Break UP
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write,i guess we all have been there
January 13th, 2018 11:43
ron parrish aka wordman said:
touching write,i guess we all have been there
January 13th, 2018 11:43
Shattered
Resa71 said:
In just a couple lines, you captured all the pain of grief. Well done!
January 13th, 2018 10:43
Resa71 said:
In just a couple lines, you captured all the pain of grief. Well done!
January 13th, 2018 10:43
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