Comments received on poems by Fran
Heart Mind Me
Emi said:
I love it! It's a very interesting poem and idea. Good job. :)
July 1st, 2011 12:04
Emi said:
I love it! It's a very interesting poem and idea. Good job. :)
July 1st, 2011 12:04
When an End Is a Beginning
Cheeky Missy said:
Very sweet...short 'n' sweet! This is very nice. I like the similes you used in describing it all. Your rhyming is pleasant. I quite like this!
December 15th, 2010 22:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Very sweet...short 'n' sweet! This is very nice. I like the similes you used in describing it all. Your rhyming is pleasant. I quite like this!
December 15th, 2010 22:50
So This Is How It Will Go Down
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting....I don't quite understand it.
December 5th, 2010 11:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting....I don't quite understand it.
December 5th, 2010 11:58
Vulnerability
Cheeky Missy said:
I like it.
Only problem is that presently real life mocks it, for all our trees so vibrantly yellow and etc. are now bare of the leaves....it is as if to say, No, it cannot be.
But the comparison of people to leaves is excellent, for it is just like what the Lord says, ..."we all do fade as a leaf, and our iniquities, like the wind have carried us away...." and the Lord calls Himself to the true tree......
Just some thoughts.
November 20th, 2010 13:47
Cheeky Missy said:
I like it.
Only problem is that presently real life mocks it, for all our trees so vibrantly yellow and etc. are now bare of the leaves....it is as if to say, No, it cannot be.
But the comparison of people to leaves is excellent, for it is just like what the Lord says, ..."we all do fade as a leaf, and our iniquities, like the wind have carried us away...." and the Lord calls Himself to the true tree......
Just some thoughts.
November 20th, 2010 13:47
Do What You Do
jvl narasimha rao said:
I think as human being all of us do all these things in our lives.A good poem with economy of words.I have rated this poem with an 8.Well keep it up!
October 4th, 2010 09:55
jvl narasimha rao said:
I think as human being all of us do all these things in our lives.A good poem with economy of words.I have rated this poem with an 8.Well keep it up!
October 4th, 2010 09:55
Breath In And Breath Out
nair36 said:
this is a really good poem. someone's really lucky.
September 22nd, 2010 16:03
nair36 said:
this is a really good poem. someone's really lucky.
September 22nd, 2010 16:03
Implausibility
bernard franklin said:
Nice one Fran! I think we all have a conviction deficiency when it comes to love, It's an in-built safety device that stops us falling to hard or to soon for someone else, but the truth is our hearts ignore it and we 'fall' anyway!! Great poem.
September 20th, 2010 08:50
bernard franklin said:
Nice one Fran! I think we all have a conviction deficiency when it comes to love, It's an in-built safety device that stops us falling to hard or to soon for someone else, but the truth is our hearts ignore it and we 'fall' anyway!! Great poem.
September 20th, 2010 08:50
Giving It Your Best
bernard franklin said:
Nice one Fran! I think if we all gave our best the world would be a better place for it. I enjoy your poetry. BF
September 10th, 2010 11:45
bernard franklin said:
Nice one Fran! I think if we all gave our best the world would be a better place for it. I enjoy your poetry. BF
September 10th, 2010 11:45
Accept Or Reject
bernard franklin said:
I choose to accept you just the way you are Fran ! LOL. nice poetry and well written. BF
September 9th, 2010 12:05
bernard franklin said:
I choose to accept you just the way you are Fran ! LOL. nice poetry and well written. BF
September 9th, 2010 12:05
Blizzard Of Emotions
bernard franklin said:
Quite lovely, short and sweet. A charming poem almost melodic in its nature. Nice one Fran!
August 30th, 2010 12:44
bernard franklin said:
Quite lovely, short and sweet. A charming poem almost melodic in its nature. Nice one Fran!
August 30th, 2010 12:44
Happiness, The Mystery
bernard franklin said:
A deeply poignant poem Fran, The mystery of happiness indeed, Is something we all aspire to but can't always find, it can be a deeply elusive state of mind and a great subject for a poem. Great work my friend.
August 28th, 2010 05:42
bernard franklin said:
A deeply poignant poem Fran, The mystery of happiness indeed, Is something we all aspire to but can't always find, it can be a deeply elusive state of mind and a great subject for a poem. Great work my friend.
August 28th, 2010 05:42
Releasing While Writing
bernard franklin said:
I give you 10/10 for this one Fran, " Words flow out, catching fire on their way" what a marvellous line ! You have an exceptional way with words and how to show feelings for one so young. Excellent. BF
August 27th, 2010 03:35
bernard franklin said:
I give you 10/10 for this one Fran, " Words flow out, catching fire on their way" what a marvellous line ! You have an exceptional way with words and how to show feelings for one so young. Excellent. BF
August 27th, 2010 03:35
Surrounded By Stupidity
bernard franklin said:
Nice work fran, I agree we are all surrounded by stupidity sometimes. You have a charming and witty way of conveying your message, this poem flows smoothly and is both emotive and poignant. Just one small point on the last line did you mean relief and not relieve??. Keep-em-coming!!!
August 25th, 2010 10:44
bernard franklin said:
Nice work fran, I agree we are all surrounded by stupidity sometimes. You have a charming and witty way of conveying your message, this poem flows smoothly and is both emotive and poignant. Just one small point on the last line did you mean relief and not relieve??. Keep-em-coming!!!
August 25th, 2010 10:44
Tears
bernard franklin said:
Nice work Fran, tears are a great subject, they come into all our lives at some point. Personally i like to remember the tears of joy more than the tears of pain, ( not always easy to do though is it! )
August 24th, 2010 04:38
bernard franklin said:
Nice work Fran, tears are a great subject, they come into all our lives at some point. Personally i like to remember the tears of joy more than the tears of pain, ( not always easy to do though is it! )
August 24th, 2010 04:38
Longing For a Way Out
bernard franklin said:
Hi Fran, I'm going to give you 10 out of 10 for this one, I love it!
Your poem is both intriguing and poignant, I liked the words " with a little bit of glitter dust, gone I am " Excellent work my friend.
August 22nd, 2010 07:53
bernard franklin said:
Hi Fran, I'm going to give you 10 out of 10 for this one, I love it!
Your poem is both intriguing and poignant, I liked the words " with a little bit of glitter dust, gone I am " Excellent work my friend.
August 22nd, 2010 07:53
The Discovery
bernard franklin said:
Hi Fran, I really enjoyed your poem, It flows well and has good rhyme and rhythm about it. It always surprises me when so few words ( well written like this ) can say so much. Nicely done
Bernard Franklin
August 20th, 2010 10:32
bernard franklin said:
Hi Fran, I really enjoyed your poem, It flows well and has good rhyme and rhythm about it. It always surprises me when so few words ( well written like this ) can say so much. Nicely done
Bernard Franklin
August 20th, 2010 10:32
