Comments received on poems by Merissa
\"Alphabet\"
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna cheat, heehee, and say an eXcellent outcome to this assignment! You got the pesky letters in: J, Q, Z, etc!
A descriptive write with many images on the theme of depression.
September 28th, 2018 11:31
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna cheat, heehee, and say an eXcellent outcome to this assignment! You got the pesky letters in: J, Q, Z, etc!
A descriptive write with many images on the theme of depression.
September 28th, 2018 11:31
\"Alphabet\"
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna cheat, heehee, and say an eXcellent outcome to this assignment! You got the pesky letters in: J, Q, Z, etc!
A descriptive write with many images on the theme of depression.
September 28th, 2018 11:31
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna cheat, heehee, and say an eXcellent outcome to this assignment! You got the pesky letters in: J, Q, Z, etc!
A descriptive write with many images on the theme of depression.
September 28th, 2018 11:31
\"Better Than Nothing\"
Merissa said:
Thanks guys. I really appreciate all your comments.
September 25th, 2018 10:30
Merissa said:
Thanks guys. I really appreciate all your comments.
September 25th, 2018 10:30
\"Better Than Nothing\"
MaggieF said:
Oh dear, good reflective poem, flows very well, hopefully its made you more aware of how you want your future to be. Good luck. Maggie
September 11th, 2018 11:56
MaggieF said:
Oh dear, good reflective poem, flows very well, hopefully its made you more aware of how you want your future to be. Good luck. Maggie
September 11th, 2018 11:56
\"Better Than Nothing\"
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
People are like that..They are USERS by nature...they don\'t know how to look out for anything other than number one, themselves...I have always thought that so many people have been like that to me to help me weed out the ones that are of no use in my life, thus when the right people do arrive, We know for SURE THAT THEY ARE THE ONES...NICE WORK
September 11th, 2018 11:44
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
People are like that..They are USERS by nature...they don\'t know how to look out for anything other than number one, themselves...I have always thought that so many people have been like that to me to help me weed out the ones that are of no use in my life, thus when the right people do arrive, We know for SURE THAT THEY ARE THE ONES...NICE WORK
September 11th, 2018 11:44
\"Choices\"
onepauly said:
be patient a little while longer
it takes time. you will answer your own questions. but you must listen.
April 30th, 2018 19:36
onepauly said:
be patient a little while longer
it takes time. you will answer your own questions. but you must listen.
April 30th, 2018 19:36
\"Choices\"
florence arla said:
I can really feel your frustration and also at the end, the lethargia that sets in because I get it, you\'re fighting to keep a piece of your identity in a world where it is met by hate. All I can say is that I understand your position. I didn\'\'t even know how to label myself but I realised that being gay is very fluid, and the fluidity of it is beautiful. If you\'re comfortable knowing that you\'re fully gay then that is absolutely incredible. But you don\'t need to hide yourself any longer. I know that \"it\'s easy for me to say\" but I\'m stuck in the same position as you and I understand that it\'s hard. I have two very close female friends, and I don\'t want to come out because it might change something in our relationship, but there are girls that have done it and have been hailed as the voluptuous gay goddesses they are. I know it\'s rambling on a bit, but I think that it\'s a huge part of your identity, and besides, how the hell do you plan on being with someone you love if you\'re hiding such a massive part of yourself from them? Pretty soon the walls of your mind start closing in if you don\'t let your feelings out, and there is no worse feeling than being trapped inside your own head. You are strong enough to take this jump and let the world jail you as the beautiful gay gal you are.
If you ever need anyone to sympathise with, or just to vent your feelings to, I\'m here. I\'m in the same position as you. Trust me. Thank you for your beautiful poem, it\'s so unbelievably encouraging to know someone understands the struggle.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:32
florence arla said:
I can really feel your frustration and also at the end, the lethargia that sets in because I get it, you\'re fighting to keep a piece of your identity in a world where it is met by hate. All I can say is that I understand your position. I didn\'\'t even know how to label myself but I realised that being gay is very fluid, and the fluidity of it is beautiful. If you\'re comfortable knowing that you\'re fully gay then that is absolutely incredible. But you don\'t need to hide yourself any longer. I know that \"it\'s easy for me to say\" but I\'m stuck in the same position as you and I understand that it\'s hard. I have two very close female friends, and I don\'t want to come out because it might change something in our relationship, but there are girls that have done it and have been hailed as the voluptuous gay goddesses they are. I know it\'s rambling on a bit, but I think that it\'s a huge part of your identity, and besides, how the hell do you plan on being with someone you love if you\'re hiding such a massive part of yourself from them? Pretty soon the walls of your mind start closing in if you don\'t let your feelings out, and there is no worse feeling than being trapped inside your own head. You are strong enough to take this jump and let the world jail you as the beautiful gay gal you are.
If you ever need anyone to sympathise with, or just to vent your feelings to, I\'m here. I\'m in the same position as you. Trust me. Thank you for your beautiful poem, it\'s so unbelievably encouraging to know someone understands the struggle.
-flo
April 30th, 2018 11:32
\"Cut it Off\"
Burning Crow said:
Awesome ink, great rhyming too, \"knowing is lost and \"broken heart melded with mesh calling it art\" are great lines.
Crow
February 8th, 2018 14:26
Burning Crow said:
Awesome ink, great rhyming too, \"knowing is lost and \"broken heart melded with mesh calling it art\" are great lines.
Crow
February 8th, 2018 14:26
\"Somebody as Nobody\"
Caring dove said:
i like this :-) its good to feel different and unique but nobody should ever feel alone or on the outside
January 20th, 2018 11:43
Caring dove said:
i like this :-) its good to feel different and unique but nobody should ever feel alone or on the outside
January 20th, 2018 11:43
\"Within Us All\"
Caring dove said:
interesting ! i very much like this .. however i am not sure what your defintion of madness is lol i never thought i was mad but maybe i somehow am lol :-) \'\' land upon hidden spikes \'\' i am loving your wording throughout this , very good !
January 20th, 2018 06:16
Caring dove said:
interesting ! i very much like this .. however i am not sure what your defintion of madness is lol i never thought i was mad but maybe i somehow am lol :-) \'\' land upon hidden spikes \'\' i am loving your wording throughout this , very good !
January 20th, 2018 06:16
\"Summer Sadness\"
Caring dove said:
you know , sometimes when we are not feeling so good , bored, depressed , in a bad mood etc we somehow sometimes hate the bright and sunny days , i guess it almost makes us ponder on our low mood and our unhappiness, kind of like oh look its sunny outside the sky is happy people are laughing but look at me i am feeling unhappy why can\'t i feel happy like the sun lol conflicting of feelings conflicting of colours which makes us sad ... great piece of writing!
January 20th, 2018 06:09
Caring dove said:
you know , sometimes when we are not feeling so good , bored, depressed , in a bad mood etc we somehow sometimes hate the bright and sunny days , i guess it almost makes us ponder on our low mood and our unhappiness, kind of like oh look its sunny outside the sky is happy people are laughing but look at me i am feeling unhappy why can\'t i feel happy like the sun lol conflicting of feelings conflicting of colours which makes us sad ... great piece of writing!
January 20th, 2018 06:09
\"Summer Sadness\"
Merissa said:
No just get extremely bored during the summer so it makes me depressed. I literally never have anything to do. Oh and thanks
January 10th, 2018 12:07
Merissa said:
No just get extremely bored during the summer so it makes me depressed. I literally never have anything to do. Oh and thanks
January 10th, 2018 12:07
\"Haunted Hope\"
Shadowbox15 said:
I love the stair-like format of the poem. \"Fearing karma\'s curse\" is also really good.
December 19th, 2017 11:46
Shadowbox15 said:
I love the stair-like format of the poem. \"Fearing karma\'s curse\" is also really good.
December 19th, 2017 11:46
\"Stuck\" And \"Here\"
drabbler said:
This is gorgeous, I got emotional reading it! A very open and passionate piece of writing.
Keep writing ~ F
December 11th, 2017 16:24
drabbler said:
This is gorgeous, I got emotional reading it! A very open and passionate piece of writing.
Keep writing ~ F
December 11th, 2017 16:24
\"You\"
whoweare said:
Poignant message well written. Welcome to the forums, can’t wait to see what you do next!
November 27th, 2017 22:15
whoweare said:
Poignant message well written. Welcome to the forums, can’t wait to see what you do next!
November 27th, 2017 22:15
\"You\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MERISSA ~ Thanks for your first PEOM ~ Mega and full of good advice ! Sixteen balanced quatrains with a consistent rhyming pattern xaxa abab etc ~ It gets a straight \"A\" from me ! A good poem should have the three R\'s Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Reason and yours has all three. You & I are important as are others and we should tell ourselves and the others around us. Your poem highlight positive characteristics which we should display and they exemplify the Fruits of the Spirit ~ Love ~ Joy ~ Peace ~ Patience ~ Kindness ~ Goodness~ Faithfulness ~ Gentleness and Moderation ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ More please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
November 27th, 2017 18:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MERISSA ~ Thanks for your first PEOM ~ Mega and full of good advice ! Sixteen balanced quatrains with a consistent rhyming pattern xaxa abab etc ~ It gets a straight \"A\" from me ! A good poem should have the three R\'s Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Reason and yours has all three. You & I are important as are others and we should tell ourselves and the others around us. Your poem highlight positive characteristics which we should display and they exemplify the Fruits of the Spirit ~ Love ~ Joy ~ Peace ~ Patience ~ Kindness ~ Goodness~ Faithfulness ~ Gentleness and Moderation ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ More please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
November 27th, 2017 18:48
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