Comments received on poems by Jeremy Leach
Battery life
Poetic Licence said:
How relevant and true is this write, personally I hate them but most people seem to have them grafted into their hands, entertaining read that makes a valid point, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 11:41
Poetic Licence said:
How relevant and true is this write, personally I hate them but most people seem to have them grafted into their hands, entertaining read that makes a valid point, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 11:41
Battery life
sorenbarrett said:
A true and fun read all wrapped into one. If deprived of their phone most people would not know what to do. Well written a fave
August 3rd, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
A true and fun read all wrapped into one. If deprived of their phone most people would not know what to do. Well written a fave
August 3rd, 2025 09:45
Pay attention
sorenbarrett said:
Most cleverly worded this poem in good rhyme tells of attention being bought and sold as a commodity. Very nicely done and a fave
July 27th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Most cleverly worded this poem in good rhyme tells of attention being bought and sold as a commodity. Very nicely done and a fave
July 27th, 2025 05:18
Are there flowers in heaven?
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely touching write a very loving sentiment, we supposedly originated from a garden, so it would be a bit wrong if you got to the end of your journey and there isn\'t a garden, enjoyed the read
July 26th, 2025 09:45
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely touching write a very loving sentiment, we supposedly originated from a garden, so it would be a bit wrong if you got to the end of your journey and there isn\'t a garden, enjoyed the read
July 26th, 2025 09:45
Are there flowers in heaven?
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the idea and wonderful message of this poem. Why not do we think that we are the only ones worthy of heaven. If dogs don\'t go neither will we. Why would animals and plants far more worthy than us not have a soul. Besides heaven would be rather drab without color or other forms. Even Eden was a garden. A lovely write not to say the wonderful thought of giving a present to loved ones no gone on.
July 26th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the idea and wonderful message of this poem. Why not do we think that we are the only ones worthy of heaven. If dogs don\'t go neither will we. Why would animals and plants far more worthy than us not have a soul. Besides heaven would be rather drab without color or other forms. Even Eden was a garden. A lovely write not to say the wonderful thought of giving a present to loved ones no gone on.
July 26th, 2025 08:19
Bird\'s eye view
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem and a metaphor as well. So often it is only the end of life that gives us that bird\'s eye view. Most lovely with good rhyme as well
July 25th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem and a metaphor as well. So often it is only the end of life that gives us that bird\'s eye view. Most lovely with good rhyme as well
July 25th, 2025 04:49
Polar opposites
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely thought out write, valid points made and explained, they say opposites attract, in this write they do, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 08:42
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely thought out write, valid points made and explained, they say opposites attract, in this write they do, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 08:42
Polar opposites
sorenbarrett said:
Most clever wording in this poem that talks of duality in personality. Set to good rhyme it entertains while it explains. Pairing these opposites it make its point. Well done
July 24th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Most clever wording in this poem that talks of duality in personality. Set to good rhyme it entertains while it explains. Pairing these opposites it make its point. Well done
July 24th, 2025 04:47
The good idea
Poetic Licence said:
You will never know if it was good or bad until you get out and do it, nicely written, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
You will never know if it was good or bad until you get out and do it, nicely written, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 12:14
The good idea
sorenbarrett said:
Results lie in action. A poem that says carpe diem and well said as well.
July 23rd, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Results lie in action. A poem that says carpe diem and well said as well.
July 23rd, 2025 04:24
Until it does
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diam I say. Nicely written with good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 22nd, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diam I say. Nicely written with good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 22nd, 2025 08:24
Until it does
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, make hay while the sunshine\'s, tomorrow could be so different, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 07:25
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, make hay while the sunshine\'s, tomorrow could be so different, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 07:25
Long gone miners
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder firstly of a job that real men used to do, one of the hardest on the planet and secondly that there are alot of people living their life\'s without ever being noticed and suffering in silence, nicely expressed and written
July 14th, 2025 22:00
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder firstly of a job that real men used to do, one of the hardest on the planet and secondly that there are alot of people living their life\'s without ever being noticed and suffering in silence, nicely expressed and written
July 14th, 2025 22:00
Long gone miners
sorenbarrett said:
Although the poem on the surface is sufficiently well constructed it breathes a deeper breath that is submerged below the surface. I see a metaphor as well of hidden lives that go unobserved and latter forgotten, lives full of suffering and danger never seen above ground. This one gets a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Although the poem on the surface is sufficiently well constructed it breathes a deeper breath that is submerged below the surface. I see a metaphor as well of hidden lives that go unobserved and latter forgotten, lives full of suffering and danger never seen above ground. This one gets a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:48
Processing loss
Poetic Licence said:
I like the analogy of looking at it as a bank of sand, loss takes alot of work and patiance and exceptance to get over and then as you indicate the sand might run out first, enjoyed the read
July 13th, 2025 07:16
Poetic Licence said:
I like the analogy of looking at it as a bank of sand, loss takes alot of work and patiance and exceptance to get over and then as you indicate the sand might run out first, enjoyed the read
July 13th, 2025 07:16
Processing loss
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid image and great metaphor in this poem that teaches its lesson in poetic form. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid image and great metaphor in this poem that teaches its lesson in poetic form. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:29
Consider this
Poetic Licence said:
That has a very haunting feel to it, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 06:14
Poetic Licence said:
That has a very haunting feel to it, nicely expressed and written
July 11th, 2025 06:14
Consider this
sorenbarrett said:
Spooky, haunting, unexplained and well written.
July 11th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Spooky, haunting, unexplained and well written.
July 11th, 2025 05:38
Heaven sent
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely composed write of the beauty of nature, some lovely images, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely composed write of the beauty of nature, some lovely images, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 06:27
Heaven sent
sorenbarrett said:
Image after image are presented of nature and her beauty. Very nicely done
July 10th, 2025 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
Image after image are presented of nature and her beauty. Very nicely done
July 10th, 2025 05:55
Reframe
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write giving a postive message, writing with a lovely flow, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 05:15
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write giving a postive message, writing with a lovely flow, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 05:15
Reframe
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the message of this poem and several metaphors that you used work very well. Nicely done a fave
July 7th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the message of this poem and several metaphors that you used work very well. Nicely done a fave
July 7th, 2025 04:33
Reframe
Hollow Enigma said:
i like this has a relaxed feeling rhythm wise yet I can still clearly see the skill in how you built the structure.
July 7th, 2025 01:34
Hollow Enigma said:
i like this has a relaxed feeling rhythm wise yet I can still clearly see the skill in how you built the structure.
July 7th, 2025 01:34
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