Comments received on poems by pots-and-pans



Plagiarized, But Not Really
orchidee said:

A fine write pots. Real plagiarizing (nicking others poet\'s stuff) causes poets to get in a frenzy of rage (ooh) A poet on another site did it, and incurred the wrath of poets. He blatantly posted pics of himself with the poems too. He was getting paid for other people\'s work you see. doh!

September 20th, 2018 01:49

Ten Years Till Tomorrow
Michael Edwards said:

Original and so well drafted like this a lot.

July 22nd, 2018 03:07

Ten Years Till Tomorrow
Heartwriter said:

Awesome write so well done.

July 21st, 2018 06:12

0.8%
Poetic Dan said:

The goosebumps I felt in this read is more than I could breathe. Keep letting it out in poetry, you\'ll soon see we all love, admire and appreciate the skin your are in.
Thank you for being exactly who ever you want to be, your a breath of fresh air reminding me to stay free.

July 21st, 2018 04:15

There Aren’t Enough
Poetic Dan said:

Another awesome read.
Thank you so much for sharing

July 21st, 2018 04:08

Ten Years Till Tomorrow
Poetic Dan said:

I\'m swept away miss Pots and pans
I can\'t believe I missed your clang
Now I\'ve heard your awesome words
I bid you a good day please ramble away!


July 21st, 2018 04:05

More
elizabethshadow said:

I love the simplicity of your poem, yet it convery a lovely and meaningful story. Great piece.

May 5th, 2018 18:02

A
elizabethshadow said:

Haha, what an irony you wrote here.

May 5th, 2018 18:00

A
Lorna said:

Great little haiku and a bigger great big smile for all of us for today - thank you!!

February 10th, 2018 06:01

A
orchidee said:

Ohh, and then you writes a good Haiku here! *staggers back in amazement at your witty write* heehee.

February 10th, 2018 02:42

A
Michael Edwards said:

I don\'t disagree
It depends on the subject
some are quite stupid.



February 10th, 2018 01:21

More
FredPeyer said:

p&p, I recently wrote a poem titled \'serendipity\' and I think your getting together with her falls under that same heading. So well written! I love it. That last line is just beautiful!

February 5th, 2018 18:53

Light
Michael Edwards said:

there is a great simplicity, almost an innocence, about this poem which is all the better for it - you are a born poetess - keep writing.

January 24th, 2018 02:49

Light
FredPeyer said:

And you have \'risen\' above yourself with this poem!

January 23rd, 2018 22:23

Light
kevin browne said:

ah, you write beautifully about light, the deep connection of all things related. light essentially is life and your transition to poetry is exquisite.

January 23rd, 2018 16:51

Tammy
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s natural to miss a lovely pet - no you\'re being quire normal - this is a beautifully written and sympathetic piece - you\'ve done your pet proud.

January 22nd, 2018 10:38

Tammy
orchidee said:

We had one. It had a skin tumour that they treated. It lived another 18 months before it got too poorly.

January 22nd, 2018 09:25

Tammy
orchidee said:

Ooh no, not selfish. We have 2 girl and 2 boy guineas - in separate cages! We have \'replaced\' some over the years when sadly they got poorly. you feel for each one.
A tip maybe - if you get more, maybe have two of the same sex. They don\'t like being alone.
Also, they can get poorly very suddenly, then often that\'s the end, sadly.


January 22nd, 2018 09:24

Tammy
Lorna said:

How very beautiful PotsnPans..... Well done.

January 22nd, 2018 08:44

Friendship
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 20th, 2018 10:09

Friendship
orchidee said:

Good write pots.

January 20th, 2018 07:12

Friendship
Lorna said:

Cute!

January 20th, 2018 04:38

Someone, Somewhere
yellowrose said:

the ending is very good :-) so true , this moment is ours and ours alone .. wow , you are only thirteen lol you write nicely ...

January 20th, 2018 04:29

Friendship
Wallace said:

That\'s what friends are for. Good write. Enjoy.

January 20th, 2018 04:13

Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with a dark ending.

January 17th, 2018 02:14

Eyes
orchidee said:

Good write Pots - spooky though!

January 16th, 2018 13:55

Someone, Somewhere
Goldfinch60 said:

Those moments are always there some are ours some are for others but each one of them is special. Good write P and P.

January 16th, 2018 01:39

Someone, Somewhere
Aislinn Wilson said:

This comes across very effectively

January 15th, 2018 21:30

Someone, Somewhere
orchidee said:

Good write Pots.

January 15th, 2018 10:52

Someone, Somewhere
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 15th, 2018 09:14

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