Comments received on poems by Lorna
Steering True
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of knowing the consequences they might face with a decision they made, enjoyed the read and a wonderful picture
August 11th, 2025 08:21
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of knowing the consequences they might face with a decision they made, enjoyed the read and a wonderful picture
August 11th, 2025 08:21
Steering True
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that remarks on choice and the consequences of a decision made. Very nicely worded
August 11th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that remarks on choice and the consequences of a decision made. Very nicely worded
August 11th, 2025 05:40
Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
Nature in its softness and harshness is our home and we have to choose what window we look out. A lovely write
August 8th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Nature in its softness and harshness is our home and we have to choose what window we look out. A lovely write
August 8th, 2025 07:05
Without You
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel this in the literal and the metaphorical it speaks of how thin the wall between where we are and the end of what we are. Deeply existential a fave
August 6th, 2025 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel this in the literal and the metaphorical it speaks of how thin the wall between where we are and the end of what we are. Deeply existential a fave
August 6th, 2025 06:42
This Morning
peto said:
I feared for the moth when that sparrow appeared
I like the way you write lorna
August 4th, 2025 12:35
peto said:
I feared for the moth when that sparrow appeared
I like the way you write lorna
August 4th, 2025 12:35
This Morning
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that applies to most in our hectic lives in the modern world, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:29
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that applies to most in our hectic lives in the modern world, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:29
This Morning
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming, downright charming. Oh, but it\'s so beautiful one could almost hug themselves in concluding. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a tender poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 08:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming, downright charming. Oh, but it\'s so beautiful one could almost hug themselves in concluding. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a tender poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 08:43
This Morning
Doggerel Dave said:
Where are you? you could be next door... the picture you paint feels familiar somehow...
A good \'un Lorna.
August 4th, 2025 08:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Where are you? you could be next door... the picture you paint feels familiar somehow...
A good \'un Lorna.
August 4th, 2025 08:19
This Morning
sorenbarrett said:
An observation turned metaphor that applies to all of us in our busy day amidst the busy workings of the world. Nicely said and written
August 4th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
An observation turned metaphor that applies to all of us in our busy day amidst the busy workings of the world. Nicely said and written
August 4th, 2025 06:24
Faun
peto said:
A brutal reality of life in the wild
Last 2 lines are brilliant
Superb
August 1st, 2025 18:48
peto said:
A brutal reality of life in the wild
Last 2 lines are brilliant
Superb
August 1st, 2025 18:48
Faun
Poetic Licence said:
The hunted and the hunter all forming the greater circle of life, nicely written, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 08:08
Poetic Licence said:
The hunted and the hunter all forming the greater circle of life, nicely written, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 08:08
Faun
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of life and death in the cycle of life that may be seen as a metaphor of the greater cycle. A lovely write and a fave
August 1st, 2025 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of life and death in the cycle of life that may be seen as a metaphor of the greater cycle. A lovely write and a fave
August 1st, 2025 06:58
Music
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Lorna,
\'Music is the breath of life\' and you have proved it here with your beautiful poetic portrayal. A mellow verse, as it should be.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 13:19
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Lorna,
\'Music is the breath of life\' and you have proved it here with your beautiful poetic portrayal. A mellow verse, as it should be.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 13:19
Music
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful this poem drifts through the mind like a fragrance in the air
July 31st, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful this poem drifts through the mind like a fragrance in the air
July 31st, 2025 06:03
Summer Clouds
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write creating a beautiful image, giving a sense we and nature are as one, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 10:36
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write creating a beautiful image, giving a sense we and nature are as one, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 10:36
Summer Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of nature well imaged and painted. It may well be something more as well a metaphor perhaps. Loved it
July 30th, 2025 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of nature well imaged and painted. It may well be something more as well a metaphor perhaps. Loved it
July 30th, 2025 10:33
Where But in a Garden
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Lorna,
This is such a treat to behold. It reads like a flourishing garden on a bed of bones, the bones of souls who planted it. A bequest from those who have returned to the earth for those who live with the fruits of it. A poem of life by a gifted poet - a Gardner of words. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 30th, 2025 10:12
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Lorna,
This is such a treat to behold. It reads like a flourishing garden on a bed of bones, the bones of souls who planted it. A bequest from those who have returned to the earth for those who live with the fruits of it. A poem of life by a gifted poet - a Gardner of words. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 30th, 2025 10:12
Where But in a Garden
RSM0812 said:
I really loved the last two lines in this. Nice job. Beautiful imagery.
July 30th, 2025 04:49
RSM0812 said:
I really loved the last two lines in this. Nice job. Beautiful imagery.
July 30th, 2025 04:49
Where But in a Garden
Poetic Licence said:
The journey of life from the garden of Eden all the way until we are returned back to the earth and nature, enjoyed the read, nicely crafted.
July 29th, 2025 08:15
Poetic Licence said:
The journey of life from the garden of Eden all the way until we are returned back to the earth and nature, enjoyed the read, nicely crafted.
July 29th, 2025 08:15
Where But in a Garden
sorenbarrett said:
And so the metaphor of the original garden of Eden and its trees of life and knowledge. A beautiful metaphor for all life where we are watched by that all seeing eye as we are born, struggle, display our beauty and wither returning ashes to ashes, dust to dust. A fave
July 29th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
And so the metaphor of the original garden of Eden and its trees of life and knowledge. A beautiful metaphor for all life where we are watched by that all seeing eye as we are born, struggle, display our beauty and wither returning ashes to ashes, dust to dust. A fave
July 29th, 2025 06:41
When
Neville said:
What a delightful gift and lovely thought you have left us with my friend .. excellent ink .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 10:32
Neville said:
What a delightful gift and lovely thought you have left us with my friend .. excellent ink .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 10:32
Irony
Neville said:
Now you just can\'t be any fairer, or clearer than that my lady .. write on Ma\'am .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 10:30
Neville said:
Now you just can\'t be any fairer, or clearer than that my lady .. write on Ma\'am .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 10:30
Irony
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m lucky - lack of legacy won\'t worry me... only what I have now.
Great to hear from you , Lorna.
July 28th, 2025 08:52
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m lucky - lack of legacy won\'t worry me... only what I have now.
Great to hear from you , Lorna.
July 28th, 2025 08:52
Irony
Poetic Licence said:
We regard ourselves as much bigger and more important than we really are in the grand scheme of things , nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
We regard ourselves as much bigger and more important than we really are in the grand scheme of things , nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 06:13
Irony
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of relativity in regard to knowledge and self view. We become quite small in the larger view of things. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of relativity in regard to knowledge and self view. We become quite small in the larger view of things. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 05:41
When
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Lorna,
What a beautiful way to end this lovely poem of yours but to face the sun. The warmth of the ending just\'s gladdens the heart. Excellent!
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 12:38
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Lorna,
What a beautiful way to end this lovely poem of yours but to face the sun. The warmth of the ending just\'s gladdens the heart. Excellent!
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
July 27th, 2025 12:38
When
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, striding forward knowing it has to get better, enjoyed the read
July 27th, 2025 08:55
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, striding forward knowing it has to get better, enjoyed the read
July 27th, 2025 08:55
When
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded this poem is one of knowing that things will get better. Lovely
July 27th, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded this poem is one of knowing that things will get better. Lovely
July 27th, 2025 08:34
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