Comments received on poems by Lorna
A Little Life
sorenbarrett said:
A peaceful and very lovely picture painted in these few lines of verse. Nicely done
September 1st, 2025 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
A peaceful and very lovely picture painted in these few lines of verse. Nicely done
September 1st, 2025 08:52
Too Long
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh come on \"regrets I\'ve had a few\" but there\'s no point in wallowing in them - be chipper and hope the end is quick....
August 29th, 2025 06:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh come on \"regrets I\'ve had a few\" but there\'s no point in wallowing in them - be chipper and hope the end is quick....
August 29th, 2025 06:48
Too Long
sorenbarrett said:
This one hits hard and has deep meaning for anyone that has regrets. Nicely done
August 29th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
This one hits hard and has deep meaning for anyone that has regrets. Nicely done
August 29th, 2025 05:15
Last Goodbyes
Poetic Dan said:
Wow. How strange to read this at this time in my life, let alone the very deep beautiful song you chose.
Thank you
Truly hope you\'re OK
See you on the other side....
Some day!
August 28th, 2025 19:31
Poetic Dan said:
Wow. How strange to read this at this time in my life, let alone the very deep beautiful song you chose.
Thank you
Truly hope you\'re OK
See you on the other side....
Some day!
August 28th, 2025 19:31
Last Goodbyes
Paul Bell said:
Death is a Monday morning, boarding the death train with all the other dead passengers.
Hopefully you\'ll be around for a long time.
August 27th, 2025 13:47
Paul Bell said:
Death is a Monday morning, boarding the death train with all the other dead passengers.
Hopefully you\'ll be around for a long time.
August 27th, 2025 13:47
Last Goodbyes
Classicmister said:
It\'s surely good that we will never know our final hour or whether or not it be swift and peaceful. Many years ago I was in a play with a memorable line that I still remember \"Age is an awesome thing - It is the one true mirror that reflects the vanity of youth\"
Be grateful for each day and enjoy it to the full despite the limitations of getting older.
I enjoyed your poem Lorna - lots of food for thought! Go well
August 27th, 2025 10:18
Classicmister said:
It\'s surely good that we will never know our final hour or whether or not it be swift and peaceful. Many years ago I was in a play with a memorable line that I still remember \"Age is an awesome thing - It is the one true mirror that reflects the vanity of youth\"
Be grateful for each day and enjoy it to the full despite the limitations of getting older.
I enjoyed your poem Lorna - lots of food for thought! Go well
August 27th, 2025 10:18
Last Goodbyes
Doggerel Dave said:
When it\'s over, it\'s over....in the meantime... absolutely no point in worrying...
I did enjoy the question though and the way it was.......
I only hope it is peaceful and not painful.
August 27th, 2025 07:11
Doggerel Dave said:
When it\'s over, it\'s over....in the meantime... absolutely no point in worrying...
I did enjoy the question though and the way it was.......
I only hope it is peaceful and not painful.
August 27th, 2025 07:11
Last Goodbyes
sorenbarrett said:
Death something that all have to face sooner of latter the difference is how we do it, with fear or calm or do we welcome it. A most interesting write.
August 27th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Death something that all have to face sooner of latter the difference is how we do it, with fear or calm or do we welcome it. A most interesting write.
August 27th, 2025 04:25
Blue Clogs
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting title and colorful as well. Nicely metaphoric
August 25th, 2025 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting title and colorful as well. Nicely metaphoric
August 25th, 2025 15:08
Gray Clouds on a Sunday
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t know you lived next door - been raining continuously for a week and I mean heavily. Only detail you are mistaken about is \'summer\'.
You have described my position with poetic precision - it\'s pissing down....
Seriously - defines my experience in great poetic form. Thanks Lorna.
August 21st, 2025 16:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t know you lived next door - been raining continuously for a week and I mean heavily. Only detail you are mistaken about is \'summer\'.
You have described my position with poetic precision - it\'s pissing down....
Seriously - defines my experience in great poetic form. Thanks Lorna.
August 21st, 2025 16:56
Gray Clouds on a Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for such inventife images that paint the picture
August 21st, 2025 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for such inventife images that paint the picture
August 21st, 2025 16:01
The Last Tomorrow
RSM0812 said:
I love the last line. \"Aquainting itself with our absence\". Nicey put.
August 20th, 2025 05:57
RSM0812 said:
I love the last line. \"Aquainting itself with our absence\". Nicey put.
August 20th, 2025 05:57
Woe
Paul Bell said:
Always liked that saying. The sun is just around the corner.
Sadly not today, tomorrow, next week.
August 18th, 2025 15:36
Paul Bell said:
Always liked that saying. The sun is just around the corner.
Sadly not today, tomorrow, next week.
August 18th, 2025 15:36
Woe
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and cloudy poem of rainy days. Well worded it casts its shadow on the reader. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and cloudy poem of rainy days. Well worded it casts its shadow on the reader. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 06:40
Again
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Lorna,
Your poetry is always beautiful, tender and free of frills and gloss, as is this one, natural in its beauty and true in its poetry expressed with an underlining joy of all things natural and the purity therein. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:47
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Lorna,
Your poetry is always beautiful, tender and free of frills and gloss, as is this one, natural in its beauty and true in its poetry expressed with an underlining joy of all things natural and the purity therein. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:47
Again
Poetic Dan said:
A new song to hear and your words to absorb! I definitely need to come back here more.
Thank you for the reminder and hope your as well as can be my friend.
Keep up the write
August 15th, 2025 07:24
Poetic Dan said:
A new song to hear and your words to absorb! I definitely need to come back here more.
Thank you for the reminder and hope your as well as can be my friend.
Keep up the write
August 15th, 2025 07:24
Again
Teddy.15 said:
Wow such glorious imagery woven in this is beautiful. 🌹
August 15th, 2025 07:15
Teddy.15 said:
Wow such glorious imagery woven in this is beautiful. 🌹
August 15th, 2025 07:15
The Shallows
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write, we all wear different masks, some for fun, some to hide the reality that lays beneath, reminds of where are the clowns, they are hiding amongst you, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 06:44
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write, we all wear different masks, some for fun, some to hide the reality that lays beneath, reminds of where are the clowns, they are hiding amongst you, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 06:44
Again
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words that unfold the seasons and life that it holds. The sheer beauty of this work deserves a fave
August 15th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words that unfold the seasons and life that it holds. The sheer beauty of this work deserves a fave
August 15th, 2025 06:19
The Shallows
Keeter C said:
Nice. Ignorance is bliss they say until that one day.
August 14th, 2025 14:34
Keeter C said:
Nice. Ignorance is bliss they say until that one day.
August 14th, 2025 14:34
The Shallows
Demar Desu said:
Just like how a person can’t be awake all the time I feel like it’s the same with wearing a mask all the time… there are still moments of authenticity
August 13th, 2025 08:34
Demar Desu said:
Just like how a person can’t be awake all the time I feel like it’s the same with wearing a mask all the time… there are still moments of authenticity
August 13th, 2025 08:34
The Shallows
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the deeper meaning in this poem of maskerade where a world party requires a mask. The glitter and colored paint hides the reality behind and only in dark may one remove their mask. Nicely portrayed
August 13th, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the deeper meaning in this poem of maskerade where a world party requires a mask. The glitter and colored paint hides the reality behind and only in dark may one remove their mask. Nicely portrayed
August 13th, 2025 06:51
Steering True
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of knowing the consequences they might face with a decision they made, enjoyed the read and a wonderful picture
August 11th, 2025 08:21
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of knowing the consequences they might face with a decision they made, enjoyed the read and a wonderful picture
August 11th, 2025 08:21
Steering True
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that remarks on choice and the consequences of a decision made. Very nicely worded
August 11th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that remarks on choice and the consequences of a decision made. Very nicely worded
August 11th, 2025 05:40
Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
Nature in its softness and harshness is our home and we have to choose what window we look out. A lovely write
August 8th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Nature in its softness and harshness is our home and we have to choose what window we look out. A lovely write
August 8th, 2025 07:05
Without You
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel this in the literal and the metaphorical it speaks of how thin the wall between where we are and the end of what we are. Deeply existential a fave
August 6th, 2025 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel this in the literal and the metaphorical it speaks of how thin the wall between where we are and the end of what we are. Deeply existential a fave
August 6th, 2025 06:42
This Morning
peto said:
I feared for the moth when that sparrow appeared
I like the way you write lorna
August 4th, 2025 12:35
peto said:
I feared for the moth when that sparrow appeared
I like the way you write lorna
August 4th, 2025 12:35
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