Comments received on poems by Lorna



Unattainable
hotidris said:

Great song and a great poem about someone who lacks healing.

September 18th, 2021 20:26

Unattainable
Doggerel Dave said:

That one thing that I lack is a full comprehension of the idiocy and foolishness which exists in the community like a virus - and for that I think I will howl the moon rather than cry....

September 2nd, 2021 04:24

Unattainable
L. B. Mek said:

let it all go
for as morning arrives, you\'ll soon realise
it\'ll all be dew stains, in no time..
Thanks for sharing, dear poet

September 2nd, 2021 04:15

Unattainable
dusk arising said:

The journey which brings each of us to where we will be is filled with the lessons of yesterday, perculiar to us in person but spreads behind us as in a tapestry of revelation telling us it is the same for all but the few.
Oh to be of those few.

September 2nd, 2021 01:36

Unattainable
orchidee said:

A fine write SC.

September 2nd, 2021 01:28

Unattainable
ron parrish aka wordman said:

good advice,we`re all different

September 2nd, 2021 00:47

Unattainable
Saxon Crow said:

Ooo like this one Lorna. A lot. Faved.

BTW love the rabbit picture I have something very similar stuck to my car!

September 2nd, 2021 00:47

Sugar Baby
Robert Haigh said:

This made me smile, Lorna. I\'m no big drinker either. I admit to getting p*issed on the odd occasion, although not very recently. As for chocolate - I\'m probably a chocoholic!

September 1st, 2021 15:25

Sugar Baby
hotidris said:

Neat poem about you wishing you could drink alcohol.

September 1st, 2021 11:06

Sugar Baby
Neville said:



Make mine a double in a dirty glass .. everything in moderation, except for some things .. maybe .... silly me :)

September 1st, 2021 10:58

Sugar Baby
Teddy.15 said:

LOL 🤣 what??? A Scottish that doesn\'t drink??? Well this is such fun. And yes sings like a song dear Lorna, I don\'t mind the odd tipple but you can\'t beat a nice cream cake 🍰 either. A really fun read my friend.

September 1st, 2021 06:55

Sugar Baby
Neil Higgins said:

Lorna.The times in the past I was Brahms and List in Scotland,due to the over generosity of the locals.And the odd distillery of course.
It must have been amazing times,as I have no recollection of any of it.

September 1st, 2021 05:16

Sugar Baby
Doggerel Dave said:

Great little tune there, Lorna
I\'ll vote for alcohol in very measured amounts any time. There\'s a very narrow window of opportunity there to feel warm and peaceful but not pissed. Sweets? Nah. Insulin dependent diabetes for almost forty years - all good, the discipline keeps me straight.
Fun write. Utilising a long ago but not forgotten episode or two in my youth, I know that word \'thrill\' is dripping with irony.........


September 1st, 2021 02:38

Too Soon October
Goldfinch60 said:

Autumn will soon be upon us and I shall revel in Nature’s beauty that it brings to me.

Andy

August 31st, 2021 14:49

Too Soon October
Fay Slimm. said:

A haunting number together with your shivery autumn lament makes a really captivating posting - thanking you Lorna.

August 31st, 2021 14:04

Too Soon October
Neil Higgins said:

I used to stand on a beach here in the UK.I won\'t name it.Ok then,Brean Down,Somerset.After the sun was just above the horizon I used to close my eyes,and hear all the hustle and joys of people being happy.I then used to look out to sea and say,out loud,yes really.Why am I alone,what have I done?
Well nothing apparently.As I eventually met my soul mate Janet,but had to go through that \" Where are the hands of comfort now\" And \"Momentary panic of alone\"
Being positive,as you are,by composing these words are a \"mind comfort\" in themselves.

August 31st, 2021 12:20

Too Soon October
orchidee said:

But you has not had September yet! heehee. Good write Lorna.
I\'m getting ahead a bit too - thinking of Harvest time here at end of August!

August 31st, 2021 09:27

Too Soon October
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Lorna, wow the desperation that I feel when I sleep alone has truly come back to haunt me here, added the last thought that light will eventually arrive and sooth the fear, I understand this so much. A magnificent and very elegant peice of poetry. 🌹

August 31st, 2021 06:42

Too Soon October
L. B. Mek said:

\'Looking to the rear instead of forward
Not escaping the clamp of past fears
The sweat on the brow
Where are the hands of comfort now\'..
escape, from oneself - rarely: works
best to stand firm, confront and what must be shed
before moving on when a path, is shown..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 31st, 2021 06:28

Too Soon October
Accidental Poet said:

Yes Lorna, the chills of Autumn will be upon us very soon. And the Summer just a memory. But each season has its own memories to savour. Great write Lorna.

August 31st, 2021 05:22

August Garden
Goldfinch60 said:

Natures wonder will always be with us Lorna as we know that those Autumn will be back with us in Spring.

Andy

August 31st, 2021 00:04

August Garden
Fay Slimm. said:

You have caught the essence of this time of year with such poetic mastery dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of short line cadence - - a first rate write and this little gem goes into my list of favourites.

August 30th, 2021 15:41

Wanderlust
Neville said:


even the word itself conjures up so many new and as yet to find people, places, sights, sounds, tastes n smells .. feels perfect to me my friend .. so can you imagine a whole page devoted to its namesake ....... feels like a mixture of freedom and heaven all rolled into one ..................... Neville

August 30th, 2021 08:30

August Garden
Neville said:



an August Garden indecently well captured .............................. super :)

August 30th, 2021 08:21

August Garden
dusk arising said:

Natures cycle on mother earth. So good to witness in these days of fear for what we are doing to our planet.

Lovely words.

August 30th, 2021 07:33

Wanderlust
L. B. Mek said:

what a comprehensive portrait
what a sobering dose of reality
what a relatable read of poetic, brevity..
thank you, for choosing to share

August 30th, 2021 04:25

Kites
yellowrose said:

Nice read ) Mary poppins is great

August 30th, 2021 02:40

Wanderlust
orchidee said:

Lust? Swoon! Ahh, wanderlust. I see! lol.

August 30th, 2021 01:45

Wanderlust
Doggerel Dave said:

Aren\'t you being just a little too understanding there, Lorna?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqlR5D0y23s&ab_channel=LeonardCohenVEVO

Sweet write though.

August 29th, 2021 20:29

Wanderlust
Floreann said:

One great write..well done..

August 29th, 2021 18:30

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