Comments received on poems by Lorna



Blue Eyes
Nicholas Browning said:

A thoughtful poem written with much care. Best regards Lorna ~

November 8th, 2021 06:47

Blue Eyes
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Pregnant with so much sentiment . The heart never forgets indeed. It\'s beautiful.

November 8th, 2021 06:41

Blue Eyes
dusk arising said:

The one who was \"the love of your life\" will stay in your heart, your soul forever.

November 8th, 2021 06:02

Blue Eyes
Accidental Poet said:

Very very beautiful Lorna. Those eyes watch over you with forever love. A smile will show your love in return. 😉

November 8th, 2021 05:56

Blue Eyes
Lorna said:

I\'m not exactly \"moving on\" am I Teddy. Don\'t want to.....

November 8th, 2021 05:45

Green
L. B. Mek said:

always enjoy it, when I read
about season\'s, the total opposite
of what we\'re currently experiencing
it\'s a wonderful way
to ascertain our hope\'s
that, the sunshine in our lives
is but a gentle breeze, away...
thanks for sharing
a wonderful read

November 8th, 2021 04:54

Green
spilleronsheet said:

Hats off
To the changing seasons
The golden brown surrounds
But your poetry kept me fresh
Maybe it’s the start of a new challenge though the season is in process of rotting

November 8th, 2021 04:22

Green
Goldfinch60 said:

May the green of Nature be forever in the background of Nature\'s Artwork Lorna.

Andy

November 8th, 2021 01:42

Green
Paul Bell said:

Life in a flash, and if one is not careful that\'s exactly how it goes. The in between and the journey moving forwards, and the part we hate talking about.


November 7th, 2021 13:33

Green
dusk arising said:

Lovely wordplay surrounding this metaphor of young love.

November 7th, 2021 11:24

Green
Rueda Saer said:

Lovely write :-)

November 7th, 2021 10:47

The Red Tree
dusk arising said:

When a thing of beauty fills us up and brings out of us the most joyous enlivened thing we can be.... then where is forgetfulness... no-where.

Let the fire blaze in memory and rejoice that it was in YOUR life, you know you lived... and then some!

All found in your wonderful poetry today.

November 7th, 2021 03:54

The Red Tree
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

November 7th, 2021 02:57

The Red Tree
Goldfinch60 said:

This could be written for me, my wife passed almost two years ago. Wonderful words Lorna - thank you

Andy

November 7th, 2021 02:28

The Red Tree
A.H. Browning said:

Wow.

November 6th, 2021 17:53

The Red Tree
spilleronsheet said:

The longings of the lost ones leaves a vaccum
Can’t be filled
Can’t let go
It’s a feeling that remains forever
So well captured dear poet
Thanks for sharing

November 6th, 2021 15:20

The Red Tree
Paul Bell said:

This is so in the moment, tangible.
We can bring people back, in our minds, we just can\'t bring them back

November 6th, 2021 11:16

Frost
Paul Bell said:

The sun rising, lifting our hearts.
We dream of this in Britain.
The only warmth this year, is Cop26, and even your President fell asleep at it. Got a feeling I was abducted from a hot country and brought to Britain to freeze.

November 6th, 2021 09:07

Frost
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely read Lorna , especially love the last few lines . Beautiful words

November 6th, 2021 03:54

Frost
Fay Slimm. said:

Such an poignant appeal in this shivery read - thank you too for the deeper meaning to those low in heart dear Lorna.

November 6th, 2021 03:48

Frost
orchidee said:

Yes, some here in UK too lately. Bit rainy in places now.
Dang it, trying to light this firework 20 times with wet matches! lol.

November 6th, 2021 03:05

Frost
Goldfinch60 said:

May that frost melt and lift your heart into wonderful times Lorna.

Andy

November 6th, 2021 01:50

Frost
spilleronsheet said:

So wonderful dear Lorna
And the lines -
“ As the sun lifts it gently back into the air

We humbly urge the sun to also

Lift it from our hearts

For it has settled there”
So beautiful are they
Such depth
Great going dear poet
Have a great day ahead

November 6th, 2021 01:38

Moccasins
Fay Slimm. said:

Intoxicating the quiet of that flute music and love your beautiful words dear Lorna.

November 2nd, 2021 17:30

Moccasins
Neville said:



this is just so cool ........................... N

November 2nd, 2021 17:21

Moccasins
dusk arising said:

That\'s what we are i suppose, each of us one drop of rainfall in a cloud, to be swept into the vastness of an ocean.
Very thoughtful, contemplative verse.

I bought a native american flute last year and enjoyed playing it with its rich tones. It\'s the same, more or less, as the one in your picture but i can assure you that size instrument is not the one on the recording, it simply will not blow such low notes. A larger flute is being played and through a lot of electronic sound effect. But the instruments sound superb with the natural echo of a cave or beneath a bridge.

November 2nd, 2021 06:10

Moccasins
L. B. Mek said:

as easy as that...
what a therapeutic read..
thank you, dear poet

November 2nd, 2021 05:19

Moccasins
spilleronsheet said:

Lovely and so serene the poetry that you laid dear Lorna. The words flowed so easily and so lucid…thanks for sharing dear poet and keep writing. Have a great day ahead.

November 2nd, 2021 02:00

Moccasins
Laura🌻 said:

My Dear Lorna,

A beautifully written poem. As I read it, lots of my thoughts become very clear. You’re probably thinking of J and I of C. It does sadden me to think of life such as it is. So we smile and proceed.

Laura🌻

November 2nd, 2021 02:00

Moccasins
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Lorna. We know that the last drop will return as it reaches the sea and rises into clouds to rain down once more.

Andy

November 2nd, 2021 01:56



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