Comments received on poems by Lorna
Smothered
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Lorna, humanity has a great deal for which to answer for to the world we are destroying.
Andy
December 8th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Lorna, humanity has a great deal for which to answer for to the world we are destroying.
Andy
December 8th, 2021 01:49
Smothered
Coyote said:
We are definitely hazardous to our planet and all the species therein. A \'sci fi phenomenon\' indeed. Excellent write.🙂
December 7th, 2021 14:05
Coyote said:
We are definitely hazardous to our planet and all the species therein. A \'sci fi phenomenon\' indeed. Excellent write.🙂
December 7th, 2021 14:05
Smothered
SureshG said:
When will human greed end, when only we are left, and then what???????
Your words bring this home
December 7th, 2021 13:12
SureshG said:
When will human greed end, when only we are left, and then what???????
Your words bring this home
December 7th, 2021 13:12
Smothered
Neville said:
... they say many a true word written in jest ... but you aint jesting tho are ya ... they also say the truth will out ...
December 7th, 2021 12:22
Neville said:
... they say many a true word written in jest ... but you aint jesting tho are ya ... they also say the truth will out ...
December 7th, 2021 12:22
Smothered
dusk arising said:
We preach planet saving oratory to little point. The planet will endure without the scurge of humanity.
Strange phenomenon isn\'t it.... good people with a hatred of their kind.
December 7th, 2021 11:40
dusk arising said:
We preach planet saving oratory to little point. The planet will endure without the scurge of humanity.
Strange phenomenon isn\'t it.... good people with a hatred of their kind.
December 7th, 2021 11:40
Smothered
orchidee said:
I am wanting old TV! I last saw proper comedy shows, oh, about 1975 I think.
When it says \'new comedy\' on TV now, I yell at them: \'Where?!\' lol.
December 7th, 2021 10:15
orchidee said:
I am wanting old TV! I last saw proper comedy shows, oh, about 1975 I think.
When it says \'new comedy\' on TV now, I yell at them: \'Where?!\' lol.
December 7th, 2021 10:15
Smothered
SureshG said:
When will human greed end, when only we are left, and then what???????
Your words bring this home
December 7th, 2021 09:29
SureshG said:
When will human greed end, when only we are left, and then what???????
Your words bring this home
December 7th, 2021 09:29
Smothered
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you nailed it - - a wonderful exposé of all things anti-earth I second each line and hope Mother does not get too angry for words and explode us with her fury before we learn.
December 7th, 2021 09:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you nailed it - - a wonderful exposé of all things anti-earth I second each line and hope Mother does not get too angry for words and explode us with her fury before we learn.
December 7th, 2021 09:04
Smothered
Paul Bell said:
When you see the amount of nuclear weapons around the world, you know it\'s just a matter of time.
December 7th, 2021 08:52
Paul Bell said:
When you see the amount of nuclear weapons around the world, you know it\'s just a matter of time.
December 7th, 2021 08:52
Smothered
Doggerel Dave said:
Love the irony, Lorna. So much said in so few lines....I feel that there might just be something in the Gaia H. The values embodied in humanity - thoughts, ideas, the arts, sciences and nature - yet the agony is that war and greed just don\'t disappear...
(Sorry - that is far to incoherent and scrambled; your poem does it better.)
December 7th, 2021 06:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Love the irony, Lorna. So much said in so few lines....I feel that there might just be something in the Gaia H. The values embodied in humanity - thoughts, ideas, the arts, sciences and nature - yet the agony is that war and greed just don\'t disappear...
(Sorry - that is far to incoherent and scrambled; your poem does it better.)
December 7th, 2021 06:48
Dark
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'master\' may be there at the moment but we know that it will soon be dispersed when the glory of Spring arrives as arrive it will.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'master\' may be there at the moment but we know that it will soon be dispersed when the glory of Spring arrives as arrive it will.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:40
Dark
SureshG said:
Winters death, so apropos, for nature itself has provided the shroud of white.
Beautifully penned
December 6th, 2021 15:27
SureshG said:
Winters death, so apropos, for nature itself has provided the shroud of white.
Beautifully penned
December 6th, 2021 15:27
Dark
orchidee said:
Oohh, only two weeks before it starts getting lighter again. Don\'t use up the extra minute or two of light all at once! lol.
We might welcome that, but not fancy \'Only two weeks of Summer left\'.
December 6th, 2021 11:04
orchidee said:
Oohh, only two weeks before it starts getting lighter again. Don\'t use up the extra minute or two of light all at once! lol.
We might welcome that, but not fancy \'Only two weeks of Summer left\'.
December 6th, 2021 11:04
Dark
Neville said:
they just dont get much starker than this .. and that\'s one hell of a bloomin compliment, I can tell ya ............... N
December 6th, 2021 09:32
Neville said:
they just dont get much starker than this .. and that\'s one hell of a bloomin compliment, I can tell ya ............... N
December 6th, 2021 09:32
Notes
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written poetic salute here Lorna, it doesn\'t matter how polished a homage is, just the fact that it\'s a tribute, is most definitely more than enough.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
December 6th, 2021 07:51
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautifully written poetic salute here Lorna, it doesn\'t matter how polished a homage is, just the fact that it\'s a tribute, is most definitely more than enough.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
December 6th, 2021 07:51
Dark
L. B. Mek said:
oh my dear
these words read frighteningly bleak, I think
I mean, call a spade a spade
rightfully:
winter is indeed, dark and bleak
I agree,
but why take away our Spring of hope
in your verse,
come now, allow us that
at least... lol
thanks for sharing, a fun read
(home you don\'t mind me indulging in a light hearted interpretation of your work)
December 6th, 2021 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
oh my dear
these words read frighteningly bleak, I think
I mean, call a spade a spade
rightfully:
winter is indeed, dark and bleak
I agree,
but why take away our Spring of hope
in your verse,
come now, allow us that
at least... lol
thanks for sharing, a fun read
(home you don\'t mind me indulging in a light hearted interpretation of your work)
December 6th, 2021 06:21
Ho Ho Oh No
Caring dove said:
I don’t understand Christmas , but that’s just me . People can give presents any time of the year , if they wish to . I’ve never liked Christmas that much , I kind of just get sad at the end of a year .
Nice writing , Lorna .
December 6th, 2021 05:49
Caring dove said:
I don’t understand Christmas , but that’s just me . People can give presents any time of the year , if they wish to . I’ve never liked Christmas that much , I kind of just get sad at the end of a year .
Nice writing , Lorna .
December 6th, 2021 05:49
Notes
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, I am sure that those notes will reach him with a beautiful sound that he will keep with him forever.
Andy
https://youtu.be/B_jlCMJ77-U
December 6th, 2021 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, I am sure that those notes will reach him with a beautiful sound that he will keep with him forever.
Andy
https://youtu.be/B_jlCMJ77-U
December 6th, 2021 01:50
Notes
Neville said:
simply splendid ..........................with or without those imagined rough edges ............. objectively, smooth as silk
.. N
December 5th, 2021 10:26
Neville said:
simply splendid ..........................with or without those imagined rough edges ............. objectively, smooth as silk
.. N
December 5th, 2021 10:26
Notes
SureshG said:
True love only hears the notes, especially when recalled as sung here
December 5th, 2021 09:08
SureshG said:
True love only hears the notes, especially when recalled as sung here
December 5th, 2021 09:08
Notes
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna.
So...... someone DID tolerate it when you sang! That\'s more than can be said when they hear MY singing! lol.
December 5th, 2021 05:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna.
So...... someone DID tolerate it when you sang! That\'s more than can be said when they hear MY singing! lol.
December 5th, 2021 05:34
Notes
Paul Bell said:
Well, I think your dodgy notes will bring him back quicker than you think, and that\'s a good thing. Plus, singing is good for you, the neighbours tell me all the time.
December 5th, 2021 05:25
Paul Bell said:
Well, I think your dodgy notes will bring him back quicker than you think, and that\'s a good thing. Plus, singing is good for you, the neighbours tell me all the time.
December 5th, 2021 05:25
Leaden Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Lorna, we all live behind different masks in different situations,
Andy
December 5th, 2021 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Lorna, we all live behind different masks in different situations,
Andy
December 5th, 2021 01:29
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