Comments received on poems by Lorna
Love
Fay Slimm. said:
A ride on your writing gave me such a feeling of magic being wrapped up in climbing upward toward love.... a fine piece of penning dear Lorna.
October 23rd, 2021 13:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A ride on your writing gave me such a feeling of magic being wrapped up in climbing upward toward love.... a fine piece of penning dear Lorna.
October 23rd, 2021 13:59
Love
dusk arising said:
Love, the learned value of life. The appreciation of all around us, the sounds of life, the vibrant music in our souls..... let it play, let it play, let it play.
October 23rd, 2021 12:13
dusk arising said:
Love, the learned value of life. The appreciation of all around us, the sounds of life, the vibrant music in our souls..... let it play, let it play, let it play.
October 23rd, 2021 12:13
Love
spilleronsheet said:
Music is medicine to me
In times of distress
Music is soul to me
When I feel hopeless
Music is tune
On which my feet’s move
To create a lyrical move
Music is the rhythm
Which keeps us alive
Listen to the heart beat
It dies
when the music ends
And then people say goodbye
Well penned poet
October 23rd, 2021 08:00
spilleronsheet said:
Music is medicine to me
In times of distress
Music is soul to me
When I feel hopeless
Music is tune
On which my feet’s move
To create a lyrical move
Music is the rhythm
Which keeps us alive
Listen to the heart beat
It dies
when the music ends
And then people say goodbye
Well penned poet
October 23rd, 2021 08:00
Love
Neville said:
I believe there is far more to these words than what might at first meet the eye .. Not only well crafted as poems go in my opinion, but with hidden depths and very clever indeed ... Respect ma\'am .. Neville :)
October 23rd, 2021 07:51
Neville said:
I believe there is far more to these words than what might at first meet the eye .. Not only well crafted as poems go in my opinion, but with hidden depths and very clever indeed ... Respect ma\'am .. Neville :)
October 23rd, 2021 07:51
Love
Paul Bell said:
Yes, I think when the music dies, we die with it. God, how important is music in your life. Definite mood changer.
October 23rd, 2021 05:38
Paul Bell said:
Yes, I think when the music dies, we die with it. God, how important is music in your life. Definite mood changer.
October 23rd, 2021 05:38
The Harbour
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine romantic words about a special place in your life Lorna.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine romantic words about a special place in your life Lorna.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:38
The Harbour
Paul Bell said:
Ships in the night never meet, but maybe, just maybe, they did.
October 22nd, 2021 11:28
Paul Bell said:
Ships in the night never meet, but maybe, just maybe, they did.
October 22nd, 2021 11:28
The Harbour
L. B. Mek said:
to toast, our whispered truth
of life\'s gifted hideouts
and those we\'re lucky enough
to find and share,
our quirky escapades with..
thanks for sharing,
I like the ambience, your poem was hinting at
October 22nd, 2021 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
to toast, our whispered truth
of life\'s gifted hideouts
and those we\'re lucky enough
to find and share,
our quirky escapades with..
thanks for sharing,
I like the ambience, your poem was hinting at
October 22nd, 2021 05:51
The Harbour
dusk arising said:
Oh to have and share such a place. With a somebody who knows me well and needs few spoken words to let me know they are \'with\' me.
I love it when a poet\'s words draw me deep into their atmosphere and release my personal longings. Needless to say, yours is great poetry.
October 22nd, 2021 05:33
dusk arising said:
Oh to have and share such a place. With a somebody who knows me well and needs few spoken words to let me know they are \'with\' me.
I love it when a poet\'s words draw me deep into their atmosphere and release my personal longings. Needless to say, yours is great poetry.
October 22nd, 2021 05:33
Beginning
aDarkerMind said:
a song i truely love.
and a most wonderful poem to share it with.
October 19th, 2021 08:30
aDarkerMind said:
a song i truely love.
and a most wonderful poem to share it with.
October 19th, 2021 08:30
Fire and Wood
L. B. Mek said:
your depiction of that ill-fated romance, displays a lot of insight..
thanks for sharing
October 18th, 2021 06:43
L. B. Mek said:
your depiction of that ill-fated romance, displays a lot of insight..
thanks for sharing
October 18th, 2021 06:43
Fire and Wood
spilleronsheet said:
So well penned dear poet…the flames that drew moths around
Like lovers in corner
The flame that hold story of many
The flames that carries the warmth
The love of the children around
Your flames bring a warmth inside
When it’s cold outside
Loved it dear poet
October 18th, 2021 05:04
spilleronsheet said:
So well penned dear poet…the flames that drew moths around
Like lovers in corner
The flame that hold story of many
The flames that carries the warmth
The love of the children around
Your flames bring a warmth inside
When it’s cold outside
Loved it dear poet
October 18th, 2021 05:04
Fire and Wood
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Lorna bringing wonderful images.
Andy
October 18th, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Lorna bringing wonderful images.
Andy
October 18th, 2021 01:54
When It\'s Time to Run
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, I know my lover is waiting for me and we will be together for eternity.
Andy
October 18th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, I know my lover is waiting for me and we will be together for eternity.
Andy
October 18th, 2021 00:34
When It\'s Time to Run
A.H. Browning said:
The category you selected for this poem was appropriately “love”. What a heart felt and moving write. I also enjoyed the song as well, especially the lyrics, “Yours is the heart I’ll always keep. I’m not gone even if I leave.”
Kindest regards,
A.H.
October 18th, 2021 00:33
A.H. Browning said:
The category you selected for this poem was appropriately “love”. What a heart felt and moving write. I also enjoyed the song as well, especially the lyrics, “Yours is the heart I’ll always keep. I’m not gone even if I leave.”
Kindest regards,
A.H.
October 18th, 2021 00:33
When It\'s Time to Run
Paul Bell said:
Sad yet such a great write.
Death the tragedy, yet you bring light to it. Got a feeling a horse will be saddled for you, but not for a long time yet.
October 17th, 2021 07:57
Paul Bell said:
Sad yet such a great write.
Death the tragedy, yet you bring light to it. Got a feeling a horse will be saddled for you, but not for a long time yet.
October 17th, 2021 07:57
Unattainable
Doggerel Dave said:
That one thing that I lack is a full comprehension of the idiocy and foolishness which exists in the community like a virus - and for that I think I will howl the moon rather than cry....
September 2nd, 2021 04:24
Doggerel Dave said:
That one thing that I lack is a full comprehension of the idiocy and foolishness which exists in the community like a virus - and for that I think I will howl the moon rather than cry....
September 2nd, 2021 04:24
Unattainable
L. B. Mek said:
let it all go
for as morning arrives, you\'ll soon realise
it\'ll all be dew stains, in no time..
Thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 2nd, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
let it all go
for as morning arrives, you\'ll soon realise
it\'ll all be dew stains, in no time..
Thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 2nd, 2021 04:15
Unattainable
dusk arising said:
The journey which brings each of us to where we will be is filled with the lessons of yesterday, perculiar to us in person but spreads behind us as in a tapestry of revelation telling us it is the same for all but the few.
Oh to be of those few.
September 2nd, 2021 01:36
dusk arising said:
The journey which brings each of us to where we will be is filled with the lessons of yesterday, perculiar to us in person but spreads behind us as in a tapestry of revelation telling us it is the same for all but the few.
Oh to be of those few.
September 2nd, 2021 01:36
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