Comments received on poems by Lorna



Speed
Bobby O said:

It surprisingly hit me w authentic truth. Surprisingly , because ABBA would’ve the soundtrack played by my enemies tp punish me. I run from their music yet I felt the importance of their inclusion in your piece. Gravitas shared

April 7th, 2023 02:38

Speed
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna. Where ya going? Or where were ya going?

April 7th, 2023 01:55

Speed
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

\"SPEED\" is a wonderful piece of poetry that captures the essence of the love of driving and the thrill of being behind the wheel of a powerful car.

April 7th, 2023 01:34

Plans
Accidental Poet said:

There\'s always a smile of hope in tomorrow Lorna. 🌹

April 6th, 2023 09:39

Plans
Rocky Lagou said:

Rich, and steadily hopeful. Yet, the pensive thought of the passing of time, creates that ominous tone. This is beautifully written.

April 6th, 2023 08:13

Plans
orchidee said:

Doh! I try to drift towards \'tomorrow\' but it never gets here. It\'s \'today\' by the time it arrives!
I can\'t work it out, with only me 3 brain cells. lol.

April 6th, 2023 07:32

Plans
Fay Slimm. said:

Thanks for this intriguing verse Lorna along with the well chosen and telling number A compelling reflection on how time can pass and leave us hopelessly drifting in unfinished plans. This must go into my list of favourite reads.

April 6th, 2023 03:54

Plans
Neville said:


I beg to differ with my learned friend .. this is better than good .. much better .. the ending of course is to die for ..

April 6th, 2023 03:51

Plans
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Good write👌

April 6th, 2023 03:44

Libra Distressed
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a loss can be hard to bear, I know that when my wife died but there will come a time, as it has for me, when love will rise once more Lorna.
Very good emotive words.

Andy

April 6th, 2023 00:29

Libra Distressed
MendedFences27 said:

Such a loss can be devastating, like the world will never be the same again, but time will rebuild the world as you know it
A heart-wrenching poem, well written and expressed. - Phil A.

April 5th, 2023 19:21

Libra Distressed
orchidee said:

A poignant write Lorna.

April 5th, 2023 07:55

Libra Distressed
Accidental Poet said:

I remember feeling this same way when my dad died 15 months ago. I hope as with me, your hurt heals with time. Well conveyed write Lorna. 🌹

April 5th, 2023 07:09

Resignation
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

The writer seems to be optimistic and determined to face whatever difficulties lie ahead, even if they are unsure of what they might be.🙏❤️

April 5th, 2023 04:14

Libra Distressed
Neville said:



this made me wince .. and truly

a loss so great is undeniably devastating ..
I can almost feel it for myself though these few words you have so adeptly pinned here ..

April 5th, 2023 04:09

Spring Ascending
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

\"Spring Ascending\" is a beautiful poem that captures the essence of spring through its evocative imagery and thoughtful use of language. It reminds us of the cyclical nature of life and the beauty of renewal that can be found in even the most familiar of experiences.

April 5th, 2023 03:53

Libra Distressed
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

It is a powerful and evocative poem that captures the emotional and physical impact of loss. The vivid imagery and striking language create a sense of chaos and upheaval that is both unsettling and poignant.

April 5th, 2023 03:49

Spring Ascending
Neville said:


with respect, this is splendid
and in every single respect ..

Donovan aint bad either .. 🥀🌼🌹:)

April 4th, 2023 04:18

Spring Ascending
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

April 4th, 2023 02:18

Spring Ascending
Goldfinch60 said:

Good to see you again Lorna, you have risen once more like the Spring that is shown in your words - wonderful.

Andy

April 4th, 2023 00:45

Last Dance
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

\"Last Dance\" is a beautiful and poignant poem that captures a fleeting moment in nature and highlights the beauty and importance of the natural world.

April 3rd, 2023 02:40

Last Dance
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Lorna as autumn encroaches our world.

Andy

October 4th, 2022 01:12

Last Dance
Eugene S. said:

So very atmospheric. It evokes fall in such a specific and distinct way. Love it!!

October 3rd, 2022 15:27

Last Dance
Doggerel Dave said:

You make me nostalgic for times quickly passing. Too sad, Lorna.

October 3rd, 2022 07:10

On My Way
Poetic Dan said:

Holly molly what a morning read... Good reminder just to be happy to breathe...
This was deep!
Thank you for sharing
Take care my friend

September 28th, 2022 02:11

On My Way
Goldfinch60 said:

May you reach that home soon Lorna.

Andy

September 27th, 2022 01:44

On My Way
Doggerel Dave said:

Hi Lorna - apologies in advance for this: I\'m quite literal minded and need things to be spelled out to me.
Since your \'picture\' and piece are usually related (not so for everyone), thanks for the intro to Vashti Bunyan. I\'m just a little unsure whether you are going away from the subject or towards them.
Either way the whole thing is quite haunting, and in the end a little mystery is no bad thing... Thanks.


September 26th, 2022 18:57

On My Way
orchidee said:

You home yet?! heehee.

September 26th, 2022 05:45

Awful Imperfections
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Lorna, so good to see you hear again.

Andy

September 26th, 2022 01:01

Resignation
SureshG said:

It appears, life is a drudgery interspersed with some happy moments, though one would hope for it to be the reverse. Share in your poetic words

March 11th, 2022 11:56

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