Comments received on poems by Lorna



Ho Ho Oh No
dusk arising said:

Refreshing to read. Today\'s apparent urgent need to be in christmas spirit is an urgency i don\'t share. Christmas does have a special atmosphere but to lengthen the period removes it\'s novelty making it more an everyday thing.

Well expressed angst.

November 30th, 2021 05:29

Was It You?
Accidental Poet said:

There\'s always a comforting hand from the other side for us to hold.
🤝😇

November 29th, 2021 18:39

Was It You?
Neville said:


... this is one of those rare little gems that gives the reader goose-bumps ... in a nice way of course ................... N

November 29th, 2021 13:25

Green
James Alexander said:

What a fantastic poem. I do so appreciate your ability to convey a message of life and love.

November 29th, 2021 12:53

Was It You?
James Alexander said:

What a wonderful emotional poem.

November 29th, 2021 12:45

Was It You?
L. B. Mek said:

(a great shorty!
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
\'I too, smile
on the rare - occasions
that I wake up, with hiccups
in the middle of the night
deluding myself
into musing, who could be
thinking of me
while I\'m busy, missing them
so desperately...\'


November 29th, 2021 07:18

Was It You?
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

November 29th, 2021 07:01

Was It You?
Nicholas Browning said:

This is kinda freaky in a good way.

November 29th, 2021 06:12

Was It You?
dusk arising said:

mmmm Lorna... this brought something to me for I have known who reached out into my dreams and held my hand one more time.....
......the letting go was just as painful as the parting of reality.

November 29th, 2021 06:03

Was It You?
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ll try as often as I can, Lorna - but, you know, it\'s a fair old journey.....

November 29th, 2021 05:33

Was It You?
Goldfinch60 said:

You know who that was and he is still with you as my wife is still with me Lorna.

Andy

November 29th, 2021 04:58

Holiday
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes do what you want to do when on holiday, so true Lorna.

Andy

November 29th, 2021 02:12

Holiday
Neville said:


I love this .. great wordswomanship & an altogether keen eye for ah\'hem well let\'s just say it as it is eh ..... N

November 28th, 2021 13:54

Holiday
SureshG said:

Do I have to, and then I do. I go through all the pretenses and do all the dances, while all the time wondering what were the chances…..

…..love my solitude

November 28th, 2021 11:10

Holiday
spilleronsheet said:

Well company of more the merrier meant usually
But hooked to career and internet now keeps often a soul aloof in amidst so many people
And often in their questions one finds escaping to alone for freedom
Well spoken dear poet
Quite an emotion felt nowadays

November 28th, 2021 09:39

Holiday
dusk arising said:

Get away from everybody and do what you want to do.... my kinda holiday.

November 28th, 2021 06:40

Holiday
Nicholas Browning said:

This is quite well said. Too much family can be, ugh, well you know

November 28th, 2021 06:02

Holiday
Paul Bell said:

I know, the idea of a good holiday is to send the family halfway around the world, wave them bye, bye, and then open the champagne and celebrate freedom. Though I do it reverse.

November 28th, 2021 05:54

On My Mind
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Lorna, it happens to me every day.

Andy

November 28th, 2021 01:50

On My Mind
spilleronsheet said:

Carefully chosen gems to praise the jewel ruling inside
What a beautiful poetry written

November 27th, 2021 23:36

On My Mind
Garth Rakumakoe said:

When two are one, timelessly. This is a stunner!

November 27th, 2021 15:55

On My Mind
Neville said:



yes indeed .. no two ways about it .. absolutely stunning ........ Neville

November 27th, 2021 13:21

On My Mind
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Beautifully penned words to remember your love… who’s always on your mind.

Laura❤️

November 27th, 2021 12:37

On My Mind
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

November 27th, 2021 11:32

On My Mind
dusk arising said:

The reassurance of a love, gone, still builds an inner strength of satisfaction that you have known and cherished what love is, whilst around you the world is perpetually winter.

November 27th, 2021 09:06

On My Mind
Fay Slimm. said:

A stunningly good write on never forgetting - - this one goes into my favourites Lorna to be read again.

November 27th, 2021 08:41

Blue Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Lorna, that hook will reel you in once again and you will be together once more for eternity.

Andy

November 9th, 2021 01:59

Blue Eyes
Paul Bell said:

That\'s a lovely, moving poem that\'s goes straight to the core.

November 8th, 2021 13:09

Blue Eyes
L. B. Mek said:

\'A gaze with a hook
That reeled me in
And a lasso round my heart
The hook remains\'..
(some \'hook\'s
are our blessings, in life
gift\'s, that surpass the hurt
they\'re tethered - to
designed, to anchor our heart\'s
to all the love
we\'ve been lucky enough
to experience;
however steep, their burden
on our lives...!)
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
a heart-wrenchingly, sincere and succinct
wording of majestic: Poetry!

November 8th, 2021 07:49

Blue Eyes
spilleronsheet said:

It’s sad and so touching
Your close one looks at you from above
While you cherish the memories
Look the sky is volutes by the lovely blue
Even today he/she gazes with blue eyes at you
Very touching dear poet

November 8th, 2021 07:12



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