Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Already Spoken
Charles Kick said:
Excellent word choice and analogies. Appreciated this very much. Thank you 🙏
September 16th, 2024 01:34
Charles Kick said:
Excellent word choice and analogies. Appreciated this very much. Thank you 🙏
September 16th, 2024 01:34
Matrimonial Misfire
sorenbarrett said:
I could see the battle rage before me enemy entrenched on high ground Sun Tzu would predict defeat. A suicide charge like Pickett at Gettysburg trying to hold out like Leonidas and the 300 Spartans at Thermopylae. I felt that I had been there.Well written
September 15th, 2024 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
I could see the battle rage before me enemy entrenched on high ground Sun Tzu would predict defeat. A suicide charge like Pickett at Gettysburg trying to hold out like Leonidas and the 300 Spartans at Thermopylae. I felt that I had been there.Well written
September 15th, 2024 05:56
Cleverer
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very deep well you have dug. You have approached this from a most unique path. I love this approach. You have put in poetic form not only Robert Frost\'s The road less taken but expanded upon it. Very nice now it is my turn to be jealous.
September 14th, 2024 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very deep well you have dug. You have approached this from a most unique path. I love this approach. You have put in poetic form not only Robert Frost\'s The road less taken but expanded upon it. Very nice now it is my turn to be jealous.
September 14th, 2024 03:17
Almost Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written a statement of how things are seen as right or wrong and by whom. Full of great metaphor it rings true.
September 13th, 2024 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written a statement of how things are seen as right or wrong and by whom. Full of great metaphor it rings true.
September 13th, 2024 05:34
Imaginary Hero
sorenbarrett said:
We allhave some of Walter Mitty in us. The awakening from these daydreams is the most difficult part.
September 12th, 2024 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
We allhave some of Walter Mitty in us. The awakening from these daydreams is the most difficult part.
September 12th, 2024 05:09
The Why Begins to Show
Teddy.15 said:
Walking round in circles my dear mum used to call it, beautiful reflection, I hope you find the start line and the finish line one day soon my friend. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:41
Teddy.15 said:
Walking round in circles my dear mum used to call it, beautiful reflection, I hope you find the start line and the finish line one day soon my friend. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:41
The Why Begins to Show
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a quiet small pond that is deceptively deep. Several metaphorical clues are left along the way as guide posts and as it unravels. Reincarnated, resurected call it what you may how does one differ from the other life and what is the purpose. Each belief has its own answer (one eye) no one is certain no on is sure. I\'m not sure my interpretation applies. Never the less very nicely done
September 11th, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a quiet small pond that is deceptively deep. Several metaphorical clues are left along the way as guide posts and as it unravels. Reincarnated, resurected call it what you may how does one differ from the other life and what is the purpose. Each belief has its own answer (one eye) no one is certain no on is sure. I\'m not sure my interpretation applies. Never the less very nicely done
September 11th, 2024 05:55
Reiterate the Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections is a good word as this poem takes the reader through the bouncing thoughts of the writer. \\nicely written
September 10th, 2024 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections is a good word as this poem takes the reader through the bouncing thoughts of the writer. \\nicely written
September 10th, 2024 05:32
Failure of Fields
Neilton said:
Such a great poem! The questions are surely very relatable since I this most people have them ! Meaningful and beautiful work
September 10th, 2024 00:31
Neilton said:
Such a great poem! The questions are surely very relatable since I this most people have them ! Meaningful and beautiful work
September 10th, 2024 00:31
Failure of Fields
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins dark with many shadows, but soon shows the break of day and ends with the dawning of the sun. Nicely said.
September 9th, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins dark with many shadows, but soon shows the break of day and ends with the dawning of the sun. Nicely said.
September 9th, 2024 06:28
Failure of Fields
2781 said:
Finally brethren, whatsoever things are true, whatsoever things are honest, whatsoever things are just, whatsoever things are pure, whatsoever things are lovely, whatsoever things are of good report; if there be any virtue, and if there be any praise, think of these things.
September 9th, 2024 03:06
2781 said:
Finally brethren, whatsoever things are true, whatsoever things are honest, whatsoever things are just, whatsoever things are pure, whatsoever things are lovely, whatsoever things are of good report; if there be any virtue, and if there be any praise, think of these things.
September 9th, 2024 03:06
How To Grow Old
sorenbarrett said:
When younger I thought of some day growing older. I blinked and now I am older and I reflect upon the end. But the end of one thing is the beginning of another and so life goes on, A very reflective write Dan.
September 8th, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
When younger I thought of some day growing older. I blinked and now I am older and I reflect upon the end. But the end of one thing is the beginning of another and so life goes on, A very reflective write Dan.
September 8th, 2024 05:55
How To Grow Old
Cassie58 said:
When sleep evades there is plenty of time to reflect on the passing of the years and the aging process. I am right with you there, being an insomniac myself. I rarely find answers though, just more questions and one thing I am sure of I am determined to make each day count. A thoughtful and reflective write Dan. Nicely conveyed. Have a happy Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 03:33
Cassie58 said:
When sleep evades there is plenty of time to reflect on the passing of the years and the aging process. I am right with you there, being an insomniac myself. I rarely find answers though, just more questions and one thing I am sure of I am determined to make each day count. A thoughtful and reflective write Dan. Nicely conveyed. Have a happy Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 03:33
Crescendo
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of wonderful lines and is said in a musing manner as if the author is drifting in thought. I loved its casual nature and unhurried pace. Lovely
September 7th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of wonderful lines and is said in a musing manner as if the author is drifting in thought. I loved its casual nature and unhurried pace. Lovely
September 7th, 2024 05:05
Out of Choices
sorenbarrett said:
As usual, there is a significant amount of philosophy and wisdom in this poem.“There is clarity in defeat missing from triumph “ This statement rings, true as does the next follow up line. “ Which often grows murky as it ages”. They are very nice images as well and overall the whole poem was quite poetic. A very enjoyable read.
September 6th, 2024 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
As usual, there is a significant amount of philosophy and wisdom in this poem.“There is clarity in defeat missing from triumph “ This statement rings, true as does the next follow up line. “ Which often grows murky as it ages”. They are very nice images as well and overall the whole poem was quite poetic. A very enjoyable read.
September 6th, 2024 04:26
The Mindshark
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too fun and clever! I declare! Your made me chuckle. My la, what a capable exposé. Awesome similes beautifully delineated. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2024 18:14
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too fun and clever! I declare! Your made me chuckle. My la, what a capable exposé. Awesome similes beautifully delineated. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2024 18:14
The Mindshark
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Dan it is an anthropomorphic metaphor of life itself. Cute and fun. They put a smile on my face. Unfortunately it is more true than Fabel. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Dan it is an anthropomorphic metaphor of life itself. Cute and fun. They put a smile on my face. Unfortunately it is more true than Fabel. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:21
Death Of a Monster
Thad Wilk said:
A scary good and
captivating write!! 😨
Great use of metaphor
and a treat to recite!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 4th, 2024 21:12
Thad Wilk said:
A scary good and
captivating write!! 😨
Great use of metaphor
and a treat to recite!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 4th, 2024 21:12
Like a Hangman
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Dearest Diary, I\'m burdened and know you will understand. Mayhap I\'ll clear this muck of a fog, for I think I see a glimmer in the distance....\"
Yes, you could tidy this up into a different, more acceptable form but the message is great. Thank you for sharing.
September 4th, 2024 18:00
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Dearest Diary, I\'m burdened and know you will understand. Mayhap I\'ll clear this muck of a fog, for I think I see a glimmer in the distance....\"
Yes, you could tidy this up into a different, more acceptable form but the message is great. Thank you for sharing.
September 4th, 2024 18:00
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