Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
To Pamela
sorenbarrett said:
A message that many would like to send but either don\'t have the courage or the words to send. Nicely said.
August 21st, 2024 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A message that many would like to send but either don\'t have the courage or the words to send. Nicely said.
August 21st, 2024 03:56
Slow Road Dance
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes we are our own worst enemy when we don\'t take our own advice and try things that may make us happy, hey get yourself one horse it\'s a magical experience even if it\'s frightening at first, as for your last lines well, you are already there. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 00:38
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes we are our own worst enemy when we don\'t take our own advice and try things that may make us happy, hey get yourself one horse it\'s a magical experience even if it\'s frightening at first, as for your last lines well, you are already there. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 00:38
Cry of The Hermit
NafisaSB said:
it is always the losses that teach us the best lessons - may everything improve from now on though
August 20th, 2024 23:34
NafisaSB said:
it is always the losses that teach us the best lessons - may everything improve from now on though
August 20th, 2024 23:34
Slow Road Dance
Bella Shepard said:
A beautifully crafted story, it catches and holds the imagination with the wonderful icharacters of the troubadour and the ballerina. Light and airy, it is full of smiles.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
A beautifully crafted story, it catches and holds the imagination with the wonderful icharacters of the troubadour and the ballerina. Light and airy, it is full of smiles.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
Slow Road Dance
Cassie58 said:
So he rode on …. what a pity I thought. Wonderfully penned tale, much enjoyed. Great images. Have a happy Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 05:25
Cassie58 said:
So he rode on …. what a pity I thought. Wonderfully penned tale, much enjoyed. Great images. Have a happy Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 05:25
Slow Road Dance
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing story with a good moral. Take the chance, live life on the edge and to the fullest you only go around once.
August 20th, 2024 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing story with a good moral. Take the chance, live life on the edge and to the fullest you only go around once.
August 20th, 2024 04:43
Yet Another What If
Teddy.15 said:
Always stick to being a Gentleman, then share your thoughts with us lol what if\'s we all have these. A truly enjoyable read. 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:11
Teddy.15 said:
Always stick to being a Gentleman, then share your thoughts with us lol what if\'s we all have these. A truly enjoyable read. 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:11
Yet Another What If
Bella Shepard said:
Cathartic I hope. Emotions turbulent, leaving no peace, it\'s all here. Quite a write!
August 19th, 2024 10:03
Bella Shepard said:
Cathartic I hope. Emotions turbulent, leaving no peace, it\'s all here. Quite a write!
August 19th, 2024 10:03
Yet Another What If
sorenbarrett said:
Questions of a lost? past relationship. Maybe not lost in that so much emotion still remains and the return is questioned as to motive. Full of emotion, regret, anger, pain and just plain hurt this piece contains several wonderful lines and rhyme
August 19th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Questions of a lost? past relationship. Maybe not lost in that so much emotion still remains and the return is questioned as to motive. Full of emotion, regret, anger, pain and just plain hurt this piece contains several wonderful lines and rhyme
August 19th, 2024 05:05
Yet Another What If
Michael Edwards said:
Wow - some lament written from the heart. Very dark but enjoyed nevertheless.
August 19th, 2024 01:12
Michael Edwards said:
Wow - some lament written from the heart. Very dark but enjoyed nevertheless.
August 19th, 2024 01:12
Would Be Wordsmith
Dan Williams said:
I will take that as high compliment, especially from you. Thanks again.
August 18th, 2024 22:34
Dan Williams said:
I will take that as high compliment, especially from you. Thanks again.
August 18th, 2024 22:34
Would Be Wordsmith
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written the thoughts of a poet who is writing to convey a message. As to the last line so nicely stated \"make it clever or just make it pretty?\" I say make it from the heart and that is enough. I have been inside that thought of this poem and know its color, smell and texture. A wonderful write poet to poet.
August 18th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written the thoughts of a poet who is writing to convey a message. As to the last line so nicely stated \"make it clever or just make it pretty?\" I say make it from the heart and that is enough. I have been inside that thought of this poem and know its color, smell and texture. A wonderful write poet to poet.
August 18th, 2024 04:59
At the Bottom, In the Pit
Dan Williams said:
I suspect any number things could spell the demise of humans; greed is he top of my list. It drives the rest and seems cannot be cured or even diminished. Any that could control it are the very ones profiting most from it. Makes me sad, colors most of my writing. Thanks for recognizing it.
August 17th, 2024 23:08
Dan Williams said:
I suspect any number things could spell the demise of humans; greed is he top of my list. It drives the rest and seems cannot be cured or even diminished. Any that could control it are the very ones profiting most from it. Makes me sad, colors most of my writing. Thanks for recognizing it.
August 17th, 2024 23:08
At the Bottom, In the Pit
sorenbarrett said:
Gluttony, greed a human quality no other animals kill more than they need to eat. A nicely rhymed poem that speaks of this. Nicely worded my friend.
August 17th, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
Gluttony, greed a human quality no other animals kill more than they need to eat. A nicely rhymed poem that speaks of this. Nicely worded my friend.
August 17th, 2024 07:08
Tigers Tearing
Dan Williams said:
I did ask, and thanks. I tend to slip into rant but am working on it.
August 16th, 2024 19:26
Dan Williams said:
I did ask, and thanks. I tend to slip into rant but am working on it.
August 16th, 2024 19:26
The Student?
Dan Williams said:
I write a lot about this because I genuinely fear what this country will be Luke for my daughter. Somehow maybe she won\'t have to say \"he told you so\" Thanks.
August 16th, 2024 19:14
Dan Williams said:
I write a lot about this because I genuinely fear what this country will be Luke for my daughter. Somehow maybe she won\'t have to say \"he told you so\" Thanks.
August 16th, 2024 19:14
Tigers Tearing
sorenbarrett said:
Dan this reads clearly and is full of vivid images. As you asked I will give one hint. Less is more see if you can condense the full meaning of each line into fewer words. Loved the message and only include the suggestion because you asked.
August 16th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Dan this reads clearly and is full of vivid images. As you asked I will give one hint. Less is more see if you can condense the full meaning of each line into fewer words. Loved the message and only include the suggestion because you asked.
August 16th, 2024 04:59
Tigers Tearing
Cassie58 said:
Tigers Tearing, what frightful dreams you have. Fortunately for me , my dreams are
far less troublesome Dan. I hope your dreams don’t linger with you all day. An interesting and descriptive write, very imaginative. Have a happy Friday.
August 16th, 2024 01:38
Cassie58 said:
Tigers Tearing, what frightful dreams you have. Fortunately for me , my dreams are
far less troublesome Dan. I hope your dreams don’t linger with you all day. An interesting and descriptive write, very imaginative. Have a happy Friday.
August 16th, 2024 01:38
The Student?
Doggerel Dave said:
\"illusion of liberty\" Does it for me, Dan. You really don\'t have to justify that, but since you have - good stuff.
August 16th, 2024 01:17
Doggerel Dave said:
\"illusion of liberty\" Does it for me, Dan. You really don\'t have to justify that, but since you have - good stuff.
August 16th, 2024 01:17
Tigers Tearing
Neville said:
You are absolutely write .. this must surely be the mother of all pessimistic dreams .. blame it on the world why don\'tcha .. I don\'t suppose the cheese has anything to do with it ..
August 16th, 2024 01:13
Neville said:
You are absolutely write .. this must surely be the mother of all pessimistic dreams .. blame it on the world why don\'tcha .. I don\'t suppose the cheese has anything to do with it ..
August 16th, 2024 01:13
Gargoyle of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
The sad story of the folly of youth and the jadedness of age. Time takes us all and few grow wisdom. Very nice.
August 15th, 2024 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
The sad story of the folly of youth and the jadedness of age. Time takes us all and few grow wisdom. Very nice.
August 15th, 2024 03:48
Complacency Dares
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant!! A masterpiece. The rhyme and meter in this pulls me on as time itself. The story itself majestically told in metaphor and splendid words and symbolism. Your word choice is excellent. Loved this write my friend
August 14th, 2024 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant!! A masterpiece. The rhyme and meter in this pulls me on as time itself. The story itself majestically told in metaphor and splendid words and symbolism. Your word choice is excellent. Loved this write my friend
August 14th, 2024 04:55
Complacency Dares
Neville said:
This is magic sir .. that\'s the category I think most fitting .. bravo poet .. N
August 14th, 2024 02:00
Neville said:
This is magic sir .. that\'s the category I think most fitting .. bravo poet .. N
August 14th, 2024 02:00
Choir of Angels
sorenbarrett said:
The blues are soulful and come straight from the heart. Love the blues more than something commercially shiny
August 13th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
The blues are soulful and come straight from the heart. Love the blues more than something commercially shiny
August 13th, 2024 05:27
Choir of Angels
2781 said:
My wife tells me I am depressing. Funny thing is, I feel like the happiest man alive.
Good to keep our eyes open.
August 13th, 2024 02:17
2781 said:
My wife tells me I am depressing. Funny thing is, I feel like the happiest man alive.
Good to keep our eyes open.
August 13th, 2024 02:17
Dawn Comes
Dan Williams said:
I count on folks being as perceptive as you when I am writing these things, often that is not the case. I wonder do you, as I do, throw away more than you keep? Thanks anyway.
August 12th, 2024 22:06
Dan Williams said:
I count on folks being as perceptive as you when I am writing these things, often that is not the case. I wonder do you, as I do, throw away more than you keep? Thanks anyway.
August 12th, 2024 22:06
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