Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Last of the First Amendment
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning and
thought provoking indeed! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and my pleasure to read! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 24th, 2024 10:08
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning and
thought provoking indeed! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and my pleasure to read! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 24th, 2024 10:08
Last of the First Amendment
Doggerel Dave said:
All groups of people have to be regulated - the questions are by how much and by who?
Wouldn\'t mindhearing more from you on that first amendment, Dan as I\'m too old and tired to go into it in any depth.
September 24th, 2024 09:46
Doggerel Dave said:
All groups of people have to be regulated - the questions are by how much and by who?
Wouldn\'t mindhearing more from you on that first amendment, Dan as I\'m too old and tired to go into it in any depth.
September 24th, 2024 09:46
Last of the First Amendment
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get me on a rant. Such words evoke strong emotions in anyone deluded enough to think they were brought up in a free country. Each percieved restriction is felt as a tightening ot the grasp around one\'s throat. Blood pressure raises.
September 24th, 2024 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get me on a rant. Such words evoke strong emotions in anyone deluded enough to think they were brought up in a free country. Each percieved restriction is felt as a tightening ot the grasp around one\'s throat. Blood pressure raises.
September 24th, 2024 04:47
Well, No Wonder Then
Thad Wilk said:
Great!! 👏
love this poem! 👍
Awesome rhyme scheme,
and captivating throughout!
Much enjoyed my friend!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 23rd, 2024 11:05
Thad Wilk said:
Great!! 👏
love this poem! 👍
Awesome rhyme scheme,
and captivating throughout!
Much enjoyed my friend!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 23rd, 2024 11:05
Well, No Wonder Then
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Dan the human race is a paradox arrogantly putting ourselves above every other life source thinking that we are wiser than nature itself and then killing ourselves off with war, pollution, devestation of the enviornment, overpopulation, lazieness and believing all the lies we tell ourselves.
September 23rd, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Dan the human race is a paradox arrogantly putting ourselves above every other life source thinking that we are wiser than nature itself and then killing ourselves off with war, pollution, devestation of the enviornment, overpopulation, lazieness and believing all the lies we tell ourselves.
September 23rd, 2024 04:41
Well, No Wonder Then
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, maybe one day somebody may listen to the world and not just themselves.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, maybe one day somebody may listen to the world and not just themselves.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:47
Same Old Way
Goldfinch60 said:
In my long life Dan I have come across some very skilled tradesmen and it has been a beautiful thing to see them work.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
In my long life Dan I have come across some very skilled tradesmen and it has been a beautiful thing to see them work.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:21
Hell Got Here First
aDarkerMind said:
another finely tuned write San.
my fave list grows ever longer.
That your small circle of friends is one pitiful crowd?
strong stuff!
September 22nd, 2024 08:00
aDarkerMind said:
another finely tuned write San.
my fave list grows ever longer.
That your small circle of friends is one pitiful crowd?
strong stuff!
September 22nd, 2024 08:00
Same Old Way
aDarkerMind said:
between sword or ruby, breath or sleep;
no amount of sameness improves this chance.
one to be faved for sure.
September 22nd, 2024 06:36
aDarkerMind said:
between sword or ruby, breath or sleep;
no amount of sameness improves this chance.
one to be faved for sure.
September 22nd, 2024 06:36
Same Old Way
sorenbarrett said:
\"even for we dust motesto titans\" Great line Dan. Many deep philisophical questions here. The last line ties it together. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2024 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
\"even for we dust motesto titans\" Great line Dan. Many deep philisophical questions here. The last line ties it together. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2024 04:04
Hell Got Here First
sorenbarrett said:
Loved it from the first stanza that opened with great poetic power and felt as if it were a classic novel. The last stanza ties it all together so nicely.
September 21st, 2024 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Loved it from the first stanza that opened with great poetic power and felt as if it were a classic novel. The last stanza ties it all together so nicely.
September 21st, 2024 04:47
Hell Got Here First
orchidee said:
I can\'t agree with some things here, but good write as a poem.
But God got here first. There was never a time when He (can include \'She\' elements too) was not here.
Jesus overcame Satan on the cross. Satan can\'t win ultimately now.
I hold to these things as part of my beliefs.
September 21st, 2024 01:49
orchidee said:
I can\'t agree with some things here, but good write as a poem.
But God got here first. There was never a time when He (can include \'She\' elements too) was not here.
Jesus overcame Satan on the cross. Satan can\'t win ultimately now.
I hold to these things as part of my beliefs.
September 21st, 2024 01:49
Love Vanishing
Goldfinch60 said:
May that resolution be with you Dan and take you into a world of wonder and love.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
May that resolution be with you Dan and take you into a world of wonder and love.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:25
Love Vanishing
sorenbarrett said:
The story leaves feelings of darkness, anger and estrangement. Very nicely written it engages the reader with great imagery and metaphor painting a picture of discontent.
September 20th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
The story leaves feelings of darkness, anger and estrangement. Very nicely written it engages the reader with great imagery and metaphor painting a picture of discontent.
September 20th, 2024 05:19
Hard Winter
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Great crafting of this poem.
September 19th, 2024 17:42
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Great crafting of this poem.
September 19th, 2024 17:42
Hard Winter
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works so well here Dan. Friendless, abandoned and cold. You convey the freeze very well here. I feel sure this write will be relatable to some. Never an easy situation to deal with. Thanks for sharing.
September 19th, 2024 09:14
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works so well here Dan. Friendless, abandoned and cold. You convey the freeze very well here. I feel sure this write will be relatable to some. Never an easy situation to deal with. Thanks for sharing.
September 19th, 2024 09:14
Nothing To Say?
Doggerel Dave said:
A smooth run, Dan. Too good not to let your intended target find it.
Forget the \'so what\', please.
September 19th, 2024 08:06
Doggerel Dave said:
A smooth run, Dan. Too good not to let your intended target find it.
Forget the \'so what\', please.
September 19th, 2024 08:06
Nothing To Say?
Tom Dylan said:
A perfect poem, Dan, beautiful and sad. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:26
Tom Dylan said:
A perfect poem, Dan, beautiful and sad. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:26
Hard Winter
sorenbarrett said:
This has all the makings of a song with its reoccuring refrain. The repetition of this not only emphasizes the statement but puts an emotional foreboding feeling to it as if a prophecy or curse. a bit haunting
September 19th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
This has all the makings of a song with its reoccuring refrain. The repetition of this not only emphasizes the statement but puts an emotional foreboding feeling to it as if a prophecy or curse. a bit haunting
September 19th, 2024 04:45
Hard Winter
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that in those cold and dark places a light will be found to lead you to warmth in your life Dan.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that in those cold and dark places a light will be found to lead you to warmth in your life Dan.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 02:08
Hard Winter
aDarkerMind said:
an outstanding write Dan,
and one I can truely relate to.
worthy of much applause.
September 19th, 2024 01:51
aDarkerMind said:
an outstanding write Dan,
and one I can truely relate to.
worthy of much applause.
September 19th, 2024 01:51
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