Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Keep Me from Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
Several great lines in this poem but my favorite are the last two lines. Deterministic in view it packs a punch
October 3rd, 2024 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Several great lines in this poem but my favorite are the last two lines. Deterministic in view it packs a punch
October 3rd, 2024 04:42
Keep Me from Sleep
Goldfinch60 said:
This is understandable Dan but we also have those wonderful dreams when sleep does come to us.
Andy
October 3rd, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
This is understandable Dan but we also have those wonderful dreams when sleep does come to us.
Andy
October 3rd, 2024 01:15
Fallen Giants Land
sorenbarrett said:
Most metaphoric Dan it took two reads but I think I got it.
October 2nd, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Most metaphoric Dan it took two reads but I think I got it.
October 2nd, 2024 04:48
Fierce Longing
Tom Dylan said:
You express yourself so well in these reflections. A fine write with some wonderful lines. Sometimes we have to process these things to get them out. Cheers, Tom.
September 30th, 2024 06:34
Tom Dylan said:
You express yourself so well in these reflections. A fine write with some wonderful lines. Sometimes we have to process these things to get them out. Cheers, Tom.
September 30th, 2024 06:34
Width of Sorrow
sorenbarrett said:
Clever tlhree dimensional thinking expressed in such good verse. Very well done
September 30th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Clever tlhree dimensional thinking expressed in such good verse. Very well done
September 30th, 2024 05:23
Width of Sorrow
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a very good emotive write Dan.
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a very good emotive write Dan.
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:25
Fierce Longing
sorenbarrett said:
Dan you have linked together a series of gem like stanzas that all relate to ageing. Being in the winter of life I feel the cold of this poem and the wisdom in it. Some of my favorite lines were: Life clung to past reasonable, becomes poor exercise, Why does time hold from us wisdom till its application little matters?, sadness always climbs on for the ride, you pay the fare. A wonderful and most thoughtful write
September 29th, 2024 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
Dan you have linked together a series of gem like stanzas that all relate to ageing. Being in the winter of life I feel the cold of this poem and the wisdom in it. Some of my favorite lines were: Life clung to past reasonable, becomes poor exercise, Why does time hold from us wisdom till its application little matters?, sadness always climbs on for the ride, you pay the fare. A wonderful and most thoughtful write
September 29th, 2024 06:36
Fierce Longing
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we have these problems sometimes Dan but we have dealt with them otherwise we would not be here now and from that experience we know how to move on into a better place .
Andy
September 29th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we have these problems sometimes Dan but we have dealt with them otherwise we would not be here now and from that experience we know how to move on into a better place .
Andy
September 29th, 2024 01:49
Fierce Longing
Doggerel Dave said:
Try to stay cool (this advice from someone who doesn\'t some of the time) because it is no good for your physical health.
Disciplined write though.
September 29th, 2024 01:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Try to stay cool (this advice from someone who doesn\'t some of the time) because it is no good for your physical health.
Disciplined write though.
September 29th, 2024 01:40
Berserker
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A captivating, deep,
dark and mesmerizing
Berserker interpretation!! ,,😱
Terror-ific read
deserves a standing ovation! 👏
Thank for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 28th, 2024 08:52
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A captivating, deep,
dark and mesmerizing
Berserker interpretation!! ,,😱
Terror-ific read
deserves a standing ovation! 👏
Thank for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 28th, 2024 08:52
Berserker
sorenbarrett said:
In depth into the mind of a berserker. Savage, determined, devoted, naked and sometimes drugged. Warrior of the north. Valhalla I say.
September 28th, 2024 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
In depth into the mind of a berserker. Savage, determined, devoted, naked and sometimes drugged. Warrior of the north. Valhalla I say.
September 28th, 2024 05:02
Inches From Madness
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully intriguing words Dan.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully intriguing words Dan.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:26
Inches From Madness
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a ride of ups and downs around and around. I think I ended up back where I began or maybe I got lost in that maze. Good write.
September 27th, 2024 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
This is quite a ride of ups and downs around and around. I think I ended up back where I began or maybe I got lost in that maze. Good write.
September 27th, 2024 19:03
Inches From Madness
Cheeky Missy said:
\"They\" claim that Percy Bysshe Shelley was \"mad,\" yet I most heartily disagree. I see where they find their points, and must still disagree. This rather intriguing invitation into the discussion is fascinating and rendered to effect with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. You\'re too clever. Thank you for sharing.
September 27th, 2024 16:19
Cheeky Missy said:
\"They\" claim that Percy Bysshe Shelley was \"mad,\" yet I most heartily disagree. I see where they find their points, and must still disagree. This rather intriguing invitation into the discussion is fascinating and rendered to effect with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. You\'re too clever. Thank you for sharing.
September 27th, 2024 16:19
Inches From Madness
Neville said:
a compelling journey from the beginning of one end to the end of the other .. thanks for allowing me to tag along .. Neville
September 27th, 2024 13:49
Neville said:
a compelling journey from the beginning of one end to the end of the other .. thanks for allowing me to tag along .. Neville
September 27th, 2024 13:49
Bianca
sorenbarrett said:
Love how this is set up as in the middle of something unknown. A mystery remains on both ends. Very nice.
September 26th, 2024 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Love how this is set up as in the middle of something unknown. A mystery remains on both ends. Very nice.
September 26th, 2024 04:24
Bianca
Cheeky Missy said:
My curiosity is killing me. Thankfully the puddy tat had nine lives! Fascinating and intriguing with an excellently haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 26th, 2024 01:22
Cheeky Missy said:
My curiosity is killing me. Thankfully the puddy tat had nine lives! Fascinating and intriguing with an excellently haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 26th, 2024 01:22
If You Could See the Wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, there are many things that we cannot see but wish we could.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, there are many things that we cannot see but wish we could.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:53
Last of the First Amendment
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning and
thought provoking indeed! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and my pleasure to read! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 24th, 2024 10:08
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning and
thought provoking indeed! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and my pleasure to read! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 24th, 2024 10:08
Last of the First Amendment
Doggerel Dave said:
All groups of people have to be regulated - the questions are by how much and by who?
Wouldn\'t mindhearing more from you on that first amendment, Dan as I\'m too old and tired to go into it in any depth.
September 24th, 2024 09:46
Doggerel Dave said:
All groups of people have to be regulated - the questions are by how much and by who?
Wouldn\'t mindhearing more from you on that first amendment, Dan as I\'m too old and tired to go into it in any depth.
September 24th, 2024 09:46
Last of the First Amendment
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get me on a rant. Such words evoke strong emotions in anyone deluded enough to think they were brought up in a free country. Each percieved restriction is felt as a tightening ot the grasp around one\'s throat. Blood pressure raises.
September 24th, 2024 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get me on a rant. Such words evoke strong emotions in anyone deluded enough to think they were brought up in a free country. Each percieved restriction is felt as a tightening ot the grasp around one\'s throat. Blood pressure raises.
September 24th, 2024 04:47
Well, No Wonder Then
Thad Wilk said:
Great!! 👏
love this poem! 👍
Awesome rhyme scheme,
and captivating throughout!
Much enjoyed my friend!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 23rd, 2024 11:05
Thad Wilk said:
Great!! 👏
love this poem! 👍
Awesome rhyme scheme,
and captivating throughout!
Much enjoyed my friend!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
September 23rd, 2024 11:05
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