Comments received on poems by Evergreen



Woe-man is me
shaa said:

Intriguing and lovely

September 24th, 2022 12:36

Woe-man is me
GON said:

cute

September 24th, 2022 04:17

18
GON said:

reminds me of a five for fighting song... there\'s still plenty of life to live eg.

June 15th, 2022 10:49

Don’t Lift A Finger
Rocky Lagou said:

Nonreciprocal love I see. It\'s a shame and but I hope you\'ve passed on though. You expressed it very well however, the imagery was great!

March 16th, 2022 09:46

Don’t Lift A Finger
AL17 said:

One-sided efforts in any kind of relationship is always draining and painful.. sad one evergreen.

March 16th, 2022 01:41

If I Were Dying
orchidee said:

Good write Evergreen.
You\'ll feel like you\'re dying if ya hear me sing, and that\'s a fact! That\'s all ya gotta worry about. heehee.

January 18th, 2021 02:58

If I Were Dying
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good loving words Evergreen.

Andy

January 18th, 2021 02:26

The Cabin Floor
dusk arising said:

Couldn\'t stop reading this. Longer pieces generally bore me but here you kept suspense till the end. And superb end it was too.
Wonderful creative writing.

September 14th, 2020 06:07

The Cabin Floor
scarlet poet said:

Wow, what a powerful message to share. The way you worded each line was so perfectly described to the point where I feel your pain. I like how you used concession stand in the corner of your mind that you want to visit time to time. It’s definitely a part of me that I have, but not the same as yours. The demon inside your mind will never leave, but the least you can do for yourself is forgive your mind and yourself. This speaks mind to me too, so thank you for sharing! Favorited!
Keep loving yourself through this pain, no matter how hard it may be, loving yourself can help keep you sane through anything!

September 13th, 2020 14:18

I Wish You Still Wrote
GON said:

hey! this is so nice.

April 24th, 2020 12:18

A Different Kind of Love
scarlet poet said:

Thank you for sharing this important perspective on real love. It really brings out the good in me

March 20th, 2020 21:11

A Different Kind of Love
germanamericanchurch said:

Really like the style of your romantic poetry it isn’t generic in anyway- the examples feel personal :)

February 13th, 2020 11:18

Thoughts
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening EVERGREEN ~ Angela & Brian Here !

Methinks it is better to OVERTHINK
Than to never THINK at all !
People who UNDERTHINK are introverts !
CHRISTMAS is the Time to OVERTHINK
OVEREAT and (in moderation) OVERDRINK
To OVERDO to Bill & Coo and in SNOOKER
even OVERCUE ! In 2020 there*ll be plenty
of TIME to put thngs right for *AULD LANG SYNE* AMEN !

Our MANTRA is *Never apologise for OVERTHINKING* - OK
Blessings & Peace & Joy @ Christmas
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡💚🧡

December 22nd, 2019 11:13

Thoughts
Nicholas Browning said:

This is the absolute truth. Glad I\'m not the only person that questions these things. Sometimes it feels like i shouldve just kept my mouth shut, but since life is so short I just say what I feel like saying. I enjoyed the read, and thanks for posting.

December 22nd, 2019 10:15

A Different Kind of Love
FineB said:

Hello Evergreen,

This is a beautiful poem on the kind of love we should all aspire to find.

Excellent write on the beauty of true love.

Keep writing FineB


November 30th, 2019 04:26

I only wanna read what you write
BoxMyHeart said:

Read what you love that feed your mind. No harm in having excellent taste and insight of opinion! :)

August 9th, 2019 14:49

I only wanna read what you write
dusk arising said:

When you read more, may your dreams be rewarded.

August 9th, 2019 09:12

I only wanna read what you write
Goldfinch60 said:

May your pages be filled with love.

August 9th, 2019 01:24

Holes
GON said:

hope you\'re fine

August 6th, 2019 17:41

Holes
Neville said:

much enjoyed by me.. and I am sure many more will follow and agree...

the only difference between a grave and a rut... is the depth.... Neville

August 6th, 2019 03:36

Holes
dusk arising said:

I like that. It\'s very clever and brought a broad smile to my face.

August 5th, 2019 23:12