Comments received on poems by Evergreen



The Cabin Floor
dusk arising said:

Couldn\'t stop reading this. Longer pieces generally bore me but here you kept suspense till the end. And superb end it was too.
Wonderful creative writing.

September 14th, 2020 06:07

The Cabin Floor
scarlet poet said:

Wow, what a powerful message to share. The way you worded each line was so perfectly described to the point where I feel your pain. I like how you used concession stand in the corner of your mind that you want to visit time to time. It’s definitely a part of me that I have, but not the same as yours. The demon inside your mind will never leave, but the least you can do for yourself is forgive your mind and yourself. This speaks mind to me too, so thank you for sharing! Favorited!
Keep loving yourself through this pain, no matter how hard it may be, loving yourself can help keep you sane through anything!

September 13th, 2020 14:18

Star-Crossed Lovers
FineB said:

Hi Evergreen,

Love 💘 is indeed never easy.

A wonderful write.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 2nd, 2020 17:06

Star-Crossed Lovers
ron parrish aka wordman said:

i guess we can`t fix everything

August 1st, 2020 11:55

Ruin my life
GON said:

love the imagery, hope you\'re taking it easy

July 15th, 2020 09:45

Ruin my life
scarlet poet said:

Thank you for sharing. I’m sure that is very hard for you, but I promise people are always gonna be there to help. Very well said, giving a deep and understandable meaning!

July 15th, 2020 00:47

Ode To My Best Friend
scarlet poet said:

Thank you so much for this. I am honored to be your best friend and I’m thankful we could make it here. I love you so much and you’ll never understand how much. Keep your head up and know I’m always here for you. Love ya

July 2nd, 2020 10:41

Ode To My Best Friend
dusk arising said:

What a wonderful insight into besties within the sisterhood. Superb writing.

July 2nd, 2020 05:46

Ode To My Best Friend
peto said:

An evergreen friendship
You succeeded in letting them know

July 2nd, 2020 04:50

Ode To My Best Friend
Goldfinch60 said:

There is nothing so special as that best friend who is always there for you no matter what is happening.
Very good tribute to your friend Evergreen.

Andy

July 2nd, 2020 03:29

I Wish You Still Wrote
GON said:

hey! this is so nice.

April 24th, 2020 12:18

A Different Kind of Love
scarlet poet said:

Thank you for sharing this important perspective on real love. It really brings out the good in me

March 20th, 2020 21:11

What If I Said I Love You?
Joe Dawson said:

After such a poem there can be only one reply, and I am tempted to proffer \'Yes\'. You touch the heart. Joe

March 19th, 2020 04:48

What If I Said I Love You?
dusk arising said:

Well i hope she reads this..... but there again she might ask \'who is this other woman you are writing about?\'


March 19th, 2020 03:50

A Different Kind of Love
germanamericanchurch said:

Really like the style of your romantic poetry it isn’t generic in anyway- the examples feel personal :)

February 13th, 2020 11:18

I Could Lose it all to You
germanamericanchurch said:

Very fluid and flowing - good poetry reading piece

February 13th, 2020 11:10

I Could Lose it all to You
XIdlepoetX said:

Dope rhyme: I know what I’m doing / Normally I’m not used to losing!!

January 15th, 2020 12:32

I Could Lose it all to You
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful erotic poem Evergreen.

January 15th, 2020 02:29

Thoughts
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening EVERGREEN ~ Angela & Brian Here !

Methinks it is better to OVERTHINK
Than to never THINK at all !
People who UNDERTHINK are introverts !
CHRISTMAS is the Time to OVERTHINK
OVEREAT and (in moderation) OVERDRINK
To OVERDO to Bill & Coo and in SNOOKER
even OVERCUE ! In 2020 there*ll be plenty
of TIME to put thngs right for *AULD LANG SYNE* AMEN !

Our MANTRA is *Never apologise for OVERTHINKING* - OK
Blessings & Peace & Joy @ Christmas
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💚🧡💚🧡

December 22nd, 2019 11:13

Thoughts
Nicholas Browning said:

This is the absolute truth. Glad I\'m not the only person that questions these things. Sometimes it feels like i shouldve just kept my mouth shut, but since life is so short I just say what I feel like saying. I enjoyed the read, and thanks for posting.

December 22nd, 2019 10:15

A Different Kind of Love
FineB said:

Hello Evergreen,

This is a beautiful poem on the kind of love we should all aspire to find.

Excellent write on the beauty of true love.

Keep writing FineB


November 30th, 2019 04:26

Sinking
Thoughts In Time said:

Sinking floating...wave after wave...sometimes we need to ride it without setting our hearts in the end...one of the hardest lessons in life...not easy to distance yourself when the attraction is so strong...🌹

October 11th, 2019 02:26

I only wanna read what you write
BoxMyHeart said:

Read what you love that feed your mind. No harm in having excellent taste and insight of opinion! :)

August 9th, 2019 14:49

I only wanna read what you write
dusk arising said:

When you read more, may your dreams be rewarded.

August 9th, 2019 09:12

I only wanna read what you write
Goldfinch60 said:

May your pages be filled with love.

August 9th, 2019 01:24

Holes
GON said:

hope you\'re fine

August 6th, 2019 17:41

Holes
Neville said:

much enjoyed by me.. and I am sure many more will follow and agree...

the only difference between a grave and a rut... is the depth.... Neville

August 6th, 2019 03:36

Holes
dusk arising said:

I like that. It\'s very clever and brought a broad smile to my face.

August 5th, 2019 23:12

If I could’ve warned myself...
GON said:

aw

June 1st, 2019 22:42

Mind over matter means nothing without a stable mind
MissTess78 said:

Love this poem...great insight to what it’s like to have anxiety..not very many people understand it

May 31st, 2019 07:50

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