Comments received on poems by Jim Yates
The Millennium Baby
Laura🌻 said:
Jim,
A truthful and superb write!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 13:57
Laura🌻 said:
Jim,
A truthful and superb write!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 13:57
A Good Friend and the Fair-Weather Kind
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a well written and very true poem.
September 2nd, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a well written and very true poem.
September 2nd, 2018 00:51
A Cold Kiss on Pont Neuf
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful reminiscence. I believe we\'ve all felt that \"cold kiss\" once in our lives. Mine was 50 some odd years ago in the halls of a tenement. No beauty there, except her. Devastated, for quite a while, but the rebound led to finding my wife, now of nearly fifty years. Your poem brought it all back as if it were yesterday. A great write. Thank you. - Phil A.
August 22nd, 2018 23:11
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful reminiscence. I believe we\'ve all felt that \"cold kiss\" once in our lives. Mine was 50 some odd years ago in the halls of a tenement. No beauty there, except her. Devastated, for quite a while, but the rebound led to finding my wife, now of nearly fifty years. Your poem brought it all back as if it were yesterday. A great write. Thank you. - Phil A.
August 22nd, 2018 23:11
Chocolate Delight on avenue de l’Opéra
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, \"What a fool not to\"
July 30th, 2018 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, \"What a fool not to\"
July 30th, 2018 00:53
Towards Pont des Arts
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I people watch and write about them, it is so intriguing wondering what they are thinking.
July 25th, 2018 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I people watch and write about them, it is so intriguing wondering what they are thinking.
July 25th, 2018 00:56
Towards Pont des Arts
Heartwriter said:
I agree it is very well done. Thanks for sharing!
July 24th, 2018 11:53
Heartwriter said:
I agree it is very well done. Thanks for sharing!
July 24th, 2018 11:53
A Lament from the City of Love
Heartwriter said:
It was sad. Although so beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
July 22nd, 2018 16:48
Heartwriter said:
It was sad. Although so beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
July 22nd, 2018 16:48
A Lament from the City of Love
Rainbow said:
Such a beautiful and lovely poem to read. But so full of sadness and full of emotion. Such gentleness in this poem and heartache. It flows very well aswell.
July 22nd, 2018 14:29
Rainbow said:
Such a beautiful and lovely poem to read. But so full of sadness and full of emotion. Such gentleness in this poem and heartache. It flows very well aswell.
July 22nd, 2018 14:29
Shades of Blue of a Young Synaesthesia Woman
Heartwriter said:
Absolutely beautiful and loved the many shades of blue through and through!
July 21st, 2018 06:10
Heartwriter said:
Absolutely beautiful and loved the many shades of blue through and through!
July 21st, 2018 06:10
She Touched His Art with Her Magical Wand
Heartwriter said:
Loved this sper write!
July 20th, 2018 11:49
Heartwriter said:
Loved this sper write!
July 20th, 2018 11:49
She Touched His Art with Her Magical Wand
Goldfinch60 said:
Those muses help us throughout our lives and we never forget them, I hit seventy years in October and still the muses influence me.
July 20th, 2018 08:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Those muses help us throughout our lives and we never forget them, I hit seventy years in October and still the muses influence me.
July 20th, 2018 08:09
She Touched His Art with Her Magical Wand
dusk arising said:
In my sixties i feel like you wrote this piece from peeping over my shoulder.
A delight to read.
On your profile page is revealed te fact that you don\'t read other peoples writings. The spirit of this site is to read other peoples work and comment upon it so they reciprocate. I\'d strongly encourage you to do this.
July 20th, 2018 06:10
dusk arising said:
In my sixties i feel like you wrote this piece from peeping over my shoulder.
A delight to read.
On your profile page is revealed te fact that you don\'t read other peoples writings. The spirit of this site is to read other peoples work and comment upon it so they reciprocate. I\'d strongly encourage you to do this.
July 20th, 2018 06:10
She Touched His Art with Her Magical Wand
Rainbow said:
I like this poem. The title suits it very well as well
July 20th, 2018 05:58
Rainbow said:
I like this poem. The title suits it very well as well
July 20th, 2018 05:58
The Muse
dusk arising said:
Beautiful. have found it necessary to write of my past muse(s) when the thoughts and memories are clear in my mind. Such writings have enabled me to relive moments and times of refreshingly bright periods of my life.
The inspiration of any one muse may fade but my writings have encapsulated them.
I enjoyed reading you.
July 20th, 2018 03:19
dusk arising said:
Beautiful. have found it necessary to write of my past muse(s) when the thoughts and memories are clear in my mind. Such writings have enabled me to relive moments and times of refreshingly bright periods of my life.
The inspiration of any one muse may fade but my writings have encapsulated them.
I enjoyed reading you.
July 20th, 2018 03:19
