Comments received on poems by EliDagger
Release Me
Nicholas Browning said:
YOU ARE RELEASED!
All jokes aside, pretty dark stuff we got here. Not sure what to say, other than feeling trapped in your surroundings is usually a bad sign. Best regards.
March 14th, 2019 16:57
Nicholas Browning said:
YOU ARE RELEASED!
All jokes aside, pretty dark stuff we got here. Not sure what to say, other than feeling trapped in your surroundings is usually a bad sign. Best regards.
March 14th, 2019 16:57
I am stronger.
Amherrera1190 said:
I was a cutter for 6years its hard to quit. Its like a sudden high and very hard come down when the quilt hits.
March 13th, 2019 00:55
Amherrera1190 said:
I was a cutter for 6years its hard to quit. Its like a sudden high and very hard come down when the quilt hits.
March 13th, 2019 00:55
Relationship Riddler
Angela1711 said:
I to have been in this sort of toxic relationship. Have strength and walk and keep walking never look back. As toxic people eat away at your soul you much too good for that. Nice write x
March 11th, 2019 18:01
Angela1711 said:
I to have been in this sort of toxic relationship. Have strength and walk and keep walking never look back. As toxic people eat away at your soul you much too good for that. Nice write x
March 11th, 2019 18:01
Relationship Riddler
Poetic Dan said:
I felt this deeply as mine had always gone the same, just keep turning those corners we don\'t all play the same way!
Thank you for letting this out today
I\'m sure more raw power is coming your way
March 11th, 2019 16:07
Poetic Dan said:
I felt this deeply as mine had always gone the same, just keep turning those corners we don\'t all play the same way!
Thank you for letting this out today
I\'m sure more raw power is coming your way
March 11th, 2019 16:07
Penny Lost, Machine Overloaded
JaydeVictoria said:
I feel a lot when reading your poetry Eli, and I really enjoyed this poem seeing it again and written on here, well done!
March 10th, 2019 04:38
JaydeVictoria said:
I feel a lot when reading your poetry Eli, and I really enjoyed this poem seeing it again and written on here, well done!
March 10th, 2019 04:38
Penny Lost, Machine Overloaded
Poetic Dan said:
Really enjoyed this and could feel so much of my past in your words! We are all lucky pennies wait to understand our worth, for once we remember that doesn\'t even matter if we are picked up!
March 10th, 2019 04:33
Poetic Dan said:
Really enjoyed this and could feel so much of my past in your words! We are all lucky pennies wait to understand our worth, for once we remember that doesn\'t even matter if we are picked up!
March 10th, 2019 04:33
Dear Best Friend
JaydeVictoria said:
Wow. I\'m so sorry for your loss. I was also close to my Nana.
You\'ve captured the emotion behind this beautifully.
I\'m sure she would be very proud of this poem :)
March 6th, 2019 14:39
JaydeVictoria said:
Wow. I\'m so sorry for your loss. I was also close to my Nana.
You\'ve captured the emotion behind this beautifully.
I\'m sure she would be very proud of this poem :)
March 6th, 2019 14:39
The Waves of Withdrawal
JaydeVictoria said:
AHHHH it\'s like your in my head!
Your blockade keeps me at arm\'s length no matter how hard I stroke.
This is my fave line.
I\'m so glad I found you\'re poetry!
Faved
X
March 6th, 2019 14:16
JaydeVictoria said:
AHHHH it\'s like your in my head!
Your blockade keeps me at arm\'s length no matter how hard I stroke.
This is my fave line.
I\'m so glad I found you\'re poetry!
Faved
X
March 6th, 2019 14:16
Black, White or Shades of Grey.
JaydeVictoria said:
Yes I thought so I love her and it\'s such a good lyric! I don\'t know if that\'s where you got it from but it goes so well with your poem! X
March 6th, 2019 12:54
JaydeVictoria said:
Yes I thought so I love her and it\'s such a good lyric! I don\'t know if that\'s where you got it from but it goes so well with your poem! X
March 6th, 2019 12:54
Black, White or Shades of Grey.
JaydeVictoria said:
Wow. I resonate with this so much...
It reminds me of arguments I\'ve had with my partner.
Is that line from a florence and the machine song? It\'s the first thing I thought of!
Faved x
March 6th, 2019 12:32
JaydeVictoria said:
Wow. I resonate with this so much...
It reminds me of arguments I\'ve had with my partner.
Is that line from a florence and the machine song? It\'s the first thing I thought of!
Faved x
March 6th, 2019 12:32
Black, White or Shades of Grey.
Amherrera1190 said:
Heartbreaking...🖤🖤🖤
February 27th, 2019 12:42
Amherrera1190 said:
Heartbreaking...🖤🖤🖤
February 27th, 2019 12:42
You will live on beside me.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good tribute. She will always be with you.
October 17th, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good tribute. She will always be with you.
October 17th, 2018 00:27
You will live on beside me.
Fay Slimm. said:
A lament which only those know who have loved much and lost to death - - - your words echo grief yet propose the belief that life and love can never die - - - I can relate to each line and thank you for sharing this emotive write with us.
October 16th, 2018 15:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A lament which only those know who have loved much and lost to death - - - your words echo grief yet propose the belief that life and love can never die - - - I can relate to each line and thank you for sharing this emotive write with us.
October 16th, 2018 15:48
You will live on beside me.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem is so filled with dark sentiment. The loss of a loved one is difficult, but you made the point abundantly clear to the reader.
I enjoyed it and thanks for posting. :)
October 16th, 2018 15:27
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem is so filled with dark sentiment. The loss of a loved one is difficult, but you made the point abundantly clear to the reader.
I enjoyed it and thanks for posting. :)
October 16th, 2018 15:27
Case Number 179,001
dusk arising said:
My short journey to here through your two other pieces has been one of wonder. Arrival is no disappointment.
What an amazing talent you have. All three pieces are captivating. The frailty described here is magnificent. Otherworldliness of courtroom\'s black and white briefly mentioned while nevousness and fear are overriding in every line.
Unputdownable..yes. Clearly i\'m looking forward to more.
Another for my favourites file.
July 29th, 2018 14:12
dusk arising said:
My short journey to here through your two other pieces has been one of wonder. Arrival is no disappointment.
What an amazing talent you have. All three pieces are captivating. The frailty described here is magnificent. Otherworldliness of courtroom\'s black and white briefly mentioned while nevousness and fear are overriding in every line.
Unputdownable..yes. Clearly i\'m looking forward to more.
Another for my favourites file.
July 29th, 2018 14:12
How I Fell
dusk arising said:
Well i wrote that having read your \'that moment, the moment\' i would read you other work and i\'m so glad that let me to here.
These two pieces are just so wonderful.
How i fell, describing that moment you knew you fell in love with your man is equally excellent.
You describe so beautifully how our mind races through so many thoughts in the blink of an eyes timebredth when excitement overtakes.
There is something about your writing which accelerates my appetite for the next line. Were you an author i suspect i would find your books \'unputdownable\'
I\'m going to save both poems as favourites today and move along to read more of you.
July 29th, 2018 14:02
dusk arising said:
Well i wrote that having read your \'that moment, the moment\' i would read you other work and i\'m so glad that let me to here.
These two pieces are just so wonderful.
How i fell, describing that moment you knew you fell in love with your man is equally excellent.
You describe so beautifully how our mind races through so many thoughts in the blink of an eyes timebredth when excitement overtakes.
There is something about your writing which accelerates my appetite for the next line. Were you an author i suspect i would find your books \'unputdownable\'
I\'m going to save both poems as favourites today and move along to read more of you.
July 29th, 2018 14:02
That Moment, The Moment
dusk arising said:
Amazing... this is just so good!
W O W !!!
So strong, captivating. Wonderfully thrilling!
And how you leave us all wanting to know more.... questions upon our lips.
Is this a part of your life recounted or fantasy? My most pressing of questions.
I have to read you other work now.
July 29th, 2018 13:48
dusk arising said:
Amazing... this is just so good!
W O W !!!
So strong, captivating. Wonderfully thrilling!
And how you leave us all wanting to know more.... questions upon our lips.
Is this a part of your life recounted or fantasy? My most pressing of questions.
I have to read you other work now.
July 29th, 2018 13:48
