Comments received on poems by Crystal Hope
She wanders,she wonders
Suresh said:
Don\'t we all, I know I do
Most of the time, that all I do
Simply put, but most true.
Thnx
August 13th, 2018 15:28
Suresh said:
Don\'t we all, I know I do
Most of the time, that all I do
Simply put, but most true.
Thnx
August 13th, 2018 15:28
Reading in my garden
Suresh said:
Nature arouses our very being, and has been the source of my many writings.
Keep them coming.
Thnx
August 13th, 2018 15:25
Suresh said:
Nature arouses our very being, and has been the source of my many writings.
Keep them coming.
Thnx
August 13th, 2018 15:25
Reading in my garden
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a BEAUTIFUL POEM CRYSTAL. We gan get lost in a book ~ just as we can get lost in a Garden. One of my fave places to read and (as you know) we have such beautiful Private and public Gardens ~ in the UK ! Remember you are nearer God\'s Heart in a Garden than anywhere else on Earth ~ Blessings BRIAN Please check ANGELA\'s POEM for today ~ \"Seven more NZ Quirks\" Thanks B ~ We share a site ~ OK !
August 13th, 2018 12:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a BEAUTIFUL POEM CRYSTAL. We gan get lost in a book ~ just as we can get lost in a Garden. One of my fave places to read and (as you know) we have such beautiful Private and public Gardens ~ in the UK ! Remember you are nearer God\'s Heart in a Garden than anywhere else on Earth ~ Blessings BRIAN Please check ANGELA\'s POEM for today ~ \"Seven more NZ Quirks\" Thanks B ~ We share a site ~ OK !
August 13th, 2018 12:58
The Sun is Rising
🚂Poetrydelivery said:
Beautifully penned sparkly sun shine on is all.. 🙏💙
August 13th, 2018 02:21
🚂Poetrydelivery said:
Beautifully penned sparkly sun shine on is all.. 🙏💙
August 13th, 2018 02:21
Lovely lilacs
🚂Poetrydelivery said:
This piece is most lovely i enjoyed reading it.. 💙💙🙏
August 13th, 2018 02:19
🚂Poetrydelivery said:
This piece is most lovely i enjoyed reading it.. 💙💙🙏
August 13th, 2018 02:19
Alone
Clark said:
I absolutely couldn\'t agree with you more! This is a really good write. Always know I\'m here to talk to! :)
August 12th, 2018 20:13
Clark said:
I absolutely couldn\'t agree with you more! This is a really good write. Always know I\'m here to talk to! :)
August 12th, 2018 20:13
The Sun is Rising
Jon Nakapalau said:
Makes you think about how precious each day really is - well done!
August 12th, 2018 19:12
Jon Nakapalau said:
Makes you think about how precious each day really is - well done!
August 12th, 2018 19:12
She wanders,she wonders
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but be assured when you wonder your wandering will always lead into the light and joy will leave you wondering why you were wandering along a lost path.
August 12th, 2018 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but be assured when you wonder your wandering will always lead into the light and joy will leave you wondering why you were wandering along a lost path.
August 12th, 2018 00:37
She wanders,she wonders
serenity-poetry said:
This is beautiful! Such powerful imagery, you are really talented!
August 11th, 2018 18:06
serenity-poetry said:
This is beautiful! Such powerful imagery, you are really talented!
August 11th, 2018 18:06
She eyed the world...
H. Ray Davis said:
Your writing is wide eyed, with all the passion of youth and optimism. So enjoyed it.
August 11th, 2018 09:41
H. Ray Davis said:
Your writing is wide eyed, with all the passion of youth and optimism. So enjoyed it.
August 11th, 2018 09:41
The Sun is Rising
Goldfinch60 said:
The sun will always rise on your days Crystal.
August 11th, 2018 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
The sun will always rise on your days Crystal.
August 11th, 2018 00:33
Life
Saima said:
You literally described everyone’s life within a few words! It’s amazing and meaningful, keep on writing x
August 10th, 2018 22:15
Saima said:
You literally described everyone’s life within a few words! It’s amazing and meaningful, keep on writing x
August 10th, 2018 22:15
The Sun is Rising
The Artist Known As sVn (Se7en) said:
Nicely constructed Poem!
August 10th, 2018 19:02
The Artist Known As sVn (Se7en) said:
Nicely constructed Poem!
August 10th, 2018 19:02
She eyed the world...
Goldfinch60 said:
May your journey in life be as thrilling as your first aeroplane ride.
August 10th, 2018 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
May your journey in life be as thrilling as your first aeroplane ride.
August 10th, 2018 00:53
She eyed the world...
Jon Nakapalau said:
A wonderful poem about becoming an adult - I like the way you use the plane as a way to show movement and travel!
August 9th, 2018 17:52
Jon Nakapalau said:
A wonderful poem about becoming an adult - I like the way you use the plane as a way to show movement and travel!
August 9th, 2018 17:52
She eyed the world...
Fay Slimm. said:
A well- written tale of seeing the world for the first time from a plane and how a new adult female cannot wait for coming adventures . A delightful read Crystal.
August 9th, 2018 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A well- written tale of seeing the world for the first time from a plane and how a new adult female cannot wait for coming adventures . A delightful read Crystal.
August 9th, 2018 16:16
She eyed the world...
MendedFences27 said:
Terrific, escapism at its best. Imagination in flight, expressed in the third person. We\'ve all been there on that first flight, but you\'ve captured it forever. Well done. - Phil A.
August 9th, 2018 16:10
MendedFences27 said:
Terrific, escapism at its best. Imagination in flight, expressed in the third person. We\'ve all been there on that first flight, but you\'ve captured it forever. Well done. - Phil A.
August 9th, 2018 16:10
Life
Suresh said:
At such a young age, such depth
May all your adventures be pleasant
August 9th, 2018 12:33
Suresh said:
At such a young age, such depth
May all your adventures be pleasant
August 9th, 2018 12:33
Lovely lilacs
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with good imagery, I can see her in my mind.
August 9th, 2018 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with good imagery, I can see her in my mind.
August 9th, 2018 00:39
Lovely lilacs
Reyas said:
I really loved the flow of the poem, felt like the breeze flowing through all those flowers. The imagery is just perfect, I could see the scene just play out. Another job well done.
August 8th, 2018 22:07
Reyas said:
I really loved the flow of the poem, felt like the breeze flowing through all those flowers. The imagery is just perfect, I could see the scene just play out. Another job well done.
August 8th, 2018 22:07
Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CRYSTAL ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem . Very elegantly penned ~ four neat quatrains with the same rhyme pattern (abab etc) and rippling with rhythm. That is an excellent structure for a Poem ~ Flowing to recite ! The content reflects the title because that\'s what LIFE is all about ~ AMEN Precious Moments ~ New Changes ~ Breathless sites & Vast Differences. Being a Christian will help you to cope with all things listed ~ AMEN Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check our Poems ~ Thanks B & A ! The way MPS works is we read & comment on each others poems ~ OK
August 8th, 2018 18:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CRYSTAL ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem . Very elegantly penned ~ four neat quatrains with the same rhyme pattern (abab etc) and rippling with rhythm. That is an excellent structure for a Poem ~ Flowing to recite ! The content reflects the title because that\'s what LIFE is all about ~ AMEN Precious Moments ~ New Changes ~ Breathless sites & Vast Differences. Being a Christian will help you to cope with all things listed ~ AMEN Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check our Poems ~ Thanks B & A ! The way MPS works is we read & comment on each others poems ~ OK
August 8th, 2018 18:31
Lovely lilacs
Jon Nakapalau said:
A very vivid poem that reminds us that beauty is all around if we only look for it.
August 8th, 2018 17:04
Jon Nakapalau said:
A very vivid poem that reminds us that beauty is all around if we only look for it.
August 8th, 2018 17:04
Life
Jon Nakapalau said:
This captures powerful feelings of youthful hope - well done!
August 8th, 2018 17:01
Jon Nakapalau said:
This captures powerful feelings of youthful hope - well done!
August 8th, 2018 17:01
Lovely lilacs
serenity-poetry said:
Aw this is so sweet! I love it and your use of imagery is incredible.
August 8th, 2018 16:53
serenity-poetry said:
Aw this is so sweet! I love it and your use of imagery is incredible.
August 8th, 2018 16:53
Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Those differences in our lives give us the experience to move forward into a finer future.
Welcome to MPS.
August 8th, 2018 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Those differences in our lives give us the experience to move forward into a finer future.
Welcome to MPS.
August 8th, 2018 00:39
Life
Fay Slimm. said:
Life as you state in this engaging rhyme is full of \"precious moments\" if only we register them. Welcome to friendly MPS site Crystal.
August 8th, 2018 00:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Life as you state in this engaging rhyme is full of \"precious moments\" if only we register them. Welcome to friendly MPS site Crystal.
August 8th, 2018 00:07
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