Comments received on poems by D. K. Heqet
I Need a Plaster
Michael Edwards said:
Thoughts? This is a real gem. No pompous poets talk - just simple language elegantly constructed. Much enjoyed.
May 29th, 2019 15:40
Michael Edwards said:
Thoughts? This is a real gem. No pompous poets talk - just simple language elegantly constructed. Much enjoyed.
May 29th, 2019 15:40
Painful Painting
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, I d hope the painting in your heart returns and hangs on the wall.
April 11th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, I d hope the painting in your heart returns and hangs on the wall.
April 11th, 2019 00:20
I am a breaking light
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, Dakota, this is indeed a sad write that you\'ve written with deep emotion.
The readers, I\'m certain, will feel your pain.
Don\'t let sadness get you down! :-)
November 21st, 2018 13:55
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, Dakota, this is indeed a sad write that you\'ve written with deep emotion.
The readers, I\'m certain, will feel your pain.
Don\'t let sadness get you down! :-)
November 21st, 2018 13:55
Angel of Death
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Dakota, this is a very powerful poem, whose subject is reincarnation.
You draw the reader in with the histrionics. You may want to edit \"tole.\" Think this was a typo in the first verse and you meant \"told.\"
Nicely done and I enjoyed the read.
Best,
September 24th, 2018 13:41
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Dakota, this is a very powerful poem, whose subject is reincarnation.
You draw the reader in with the histrionics. You may want to edit \"tole.\" Think this was a typo in the first verse and you meant \"told.\"
Nicely done and I enjoyed the read.
Best,
September 24th, 2018 13:41
Ouch
Crystal Hope said:
Really enjoyed this one. :)
Happy birthday by the way!!
September 17th, 2018 13:33
Crystal Hope said:
Really enjoyed this one. :)
Happy birthday by the way!!
September 17th, 2018 13:33
Being a Decision
Crystal Hope said:
Decisions are very difficult especially hard ones in life where you don\'t know what to do. A superb write
September 17th, 2018 13:31
Crystal Hope said:
Decisions are very difficult especially hard ones in life where you don\'t know what to do. A superb write
September 17th, 2018 13:31
The Slut
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS for caring & sharing KANISHA. We Men all know Ladies just like that ~ fun to DATE but in essence PLACEBO and FICKLE When I introduce a PLACBO GIRL to My Mum she sees right through her ! Her advice is \"Learn from Her\" but dont Marry Her. Lots of the Placebo Girls in our Circles are in the 30 ~ 40 Age Group now and are beginning to wonder WHY ~ when they have shared their favours ~ they are still DISENGAGED ! The main reason why I am engaged to ANGELA (even though shes 11,500 miles away in Auckland New Zealand) is because WISIWIG and she will never ever be a PLACEBO GIRL ! Please check my poem today on PERCENTAGES ~ Thanks BRIAN WISIWIG = What I SAW is what I GOT ~ AMEN
September 15th, 2018 08:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS for caring & sharing KANISHA. We Men all know Ladies just like that ~ fun to DATE but in essence PLACEBO and FICKLE When I introduce a PLACBO GIRL to My Mum she sees right through her ! Her advice is \"Learn from Her\" but dont Marry Her. Lots of the Placebo Girls in our Circles are in the 30 ~ 40 Age Group now and are beginning to wonder WHY ~ when they have shared their favours ~ they are still DISENGAGED ! The main reason why I am engaged to ANGELA (even though shes 11,500 miles away in Auckland New Zealand) is because WISIWIG and she will never ever be a PLACEBO GIRL ! Please check my poem today on PERCENTAGES ~ Thanks BRIAN WISIWIG = What I SAW is what I GOT ~ AMEN
September 15th, 2018 08:22
Pot of Gold
Fay Slimm. said:
The yearning is palpable Kanisha - -- love unrequited would feel just like this - a gem of a read.
September 13th, 2018 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
The yearning is palpable Kanisha - -- love unrequited would feel just like this - a gem of a read.
September 13th, 2018 04:49
