Comments received on poems by JaydeVictoria
Cycle\'s End
Nemo said:
It was painful to read, may you have the strength to carry on with your ideology and break the cycle with empathy 🌹
January 9th, 2020 13:26
Nemo said:
It was painful to read, may you have the strength to carry on with your ideology and break the cycle with empathy 🌹
January 9th, 2020 13:26
Do you remember?
Fay Slimm. said:
An excellent list of reasons for thinking before we speak - - you composed this poem with such good metre and rhyme - am saving it Jayde to my faves for more reads.
April 3rd, 2019 12:58
Fay Slimm. said:
An excellent list of reasons for thinking before we speak - - you composed this poem with such good metre and rhyme - am saving it Jayde to my faves for more reads.
April 3rd, 2019 12:58
Breath of life
brooklyn6timesplus said:
Nicely written poem here JaydeVictoria! With every breath, some people come to life !
April 2nd, 2019 22:27
brooklyn6timesplus said:
Nicely written poem here JaydeVictoria! With every breath, some people come to life !
April 2nd, 2019 22:27
Do you remember?
Laura🌻 said:
Jayde,
This is a great write! It is relatable and it resonates louder than a tsunami warning siren! It clearly reminded me when I was excoriated and belittled on this very MPS site without just cause!
Your words to heed by one and all...
“ When you think you know something,
it may not be all it appears.”
Thank you for this exceptional and true write! I hope everyone on this site reads it and reflects upon its message!
~Laura~🌻
April 2nd, 2019 15:03
Laura🌻 said:
Jayde,
This is a great write! It is relatable and it resonates louder than a tsunami warning siren! It clearly reminded me when I was excoriated and belittled on this very MPS site without just cause!
Your words to heed by one and all...
“ When you think you know something,
it may not be all it appears.”
Thank you for this exceptional and true write! I hope everyone on this site reads it and reflects upon its message!
~Laura~🌻
April 2nd, 2019 15:03
My little pocket watch
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dark write, time cannot be stopped but that pocket watch can be secreted away so it does not tick you life away as a reminder.
March 12th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dark write, time cannot be stopped but that pocket watch can be secreted away so it does not tick you life away as a reminder.
March 12th, 2019 01:23
My little pocket watch
Angela1711 said:
I enjoyed this darker side to your writing :) nice read. Sometimes theres things in life we can never truely heal from. No matter how much time goes by. Don\'t jump 😉 lol x
March 11th, 2019 17:54
Angela1711 said:
I enjoyed this darker side to your writing :) nice read. Sometimes theres things in life we can never truely heal from. No matter how much time goes by. Don\'t jump 😉 lol x
March 11th, 2019 17:54
My little pocket watch
dusk arising said:
Yes, you need something much more fun in your pocket than that miserable thing.
Maybe a rich uncles credit card?
March 11th, 2019 14:07
dusk arising said:
Yes, you need something much more fun in your pocket than that miserable thing.
Maybe a rich uncles credit card?
March 11th, 2019 14:07
My little pocket watch
Neville said:
although a great healer, sometimes time itself is just not enough.. sometimes.. maybe something more practical and tangible might be needed as well ... a great little rhyming poem on the dark side ... Neville
March 11th, 2019 08:24
Neville said:
although a great healer, sometimes time itself is just not enough.. sometimes.. maybe something more practical and tangible might be needed as well ... a great little rhyming poem on the dark side ... Neville
March 11th, 2019 08:24
My little pocket watch
Michael Edwards said:
Joe says it just right - a real original write which sustains full interest to the last word - bravo Jayde.
March 11th, 2019 05:52
Michael Edwards said:
Joe says it just right - a real original write which sustains full interest to the last word - bravo Jayde.
March 11th, 2019 05:52
My little pocket watch
orchidee said:
Chuck the pocket watch from the building instead. That\'ll stop it ticking and tocking. And it\'ll save ya a big jump there. Pesky thing. lol. But it might be a valuable one.
March 11th, 2019 03:58
orchidee said:
Chuck the pocket watch from the building instead. That\'ll stop it ticking and tocking. And it\'ll save ya a big jump there. Pesky thing. lol. But it might be a valuable one.
March 11th, 2019 03:58
Breath of life
Angela1711 said:
This is one of my favourite reads so far. Esp love the opening. Saved to re-read again and again. Much love x
March 10th, 2019 16:32
Angela1711 said:
This is one of my favourite reads so far. Esp love the opening. Saved to re-read again and again. Much love x
March 10th, 2019 16:32
Breath of life
FineB said:
Hello Jayde Victoria.
A beautiful poem on the power of Love.
Thank you
Keep writing FineB!
March 10th, 2019 12:21
FineB said:
Hello Jayde Victoria.
A beautiful poem on the power of Love.
Thank you
Keep writing FineB!
March 10th, 2019 12:21
Breath of life
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Many thanks JAYNE for a really heart touching Love Poem. Angela & I have written openly about our Love. Your Lovely Love Poem reflects the same feelings ! True Love does indeed Resusitate - Regenerate - Revitalise ~ It is indeed a Medicine of sweet & tender Kisses and it does warm the whole Body ! True Love is always EXOTHERMIC ! ANGELA has breathed Life into Me and I into Her !
Every blessing with your New found Love !
Yours through Love Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 10th, 2019 10:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Many thanks JAYNE for a really heart touching Love Poem. Angela & I have written openly about our Love. Your Lovely Love Poem reflects the same feelings ! True Love does indeed Resusitate - Regenerate - Revitalise ~ It is indeed a Medicine of sweet & tender Kisses and it does warm the whole Body ! True Love is always EXOTHERMIC ! ANGELA has breathed Life into Me and I into Her !
Every blessing with your New found Love !
Yours through Love Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 10th, 2019 10:36
Breath of life
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, yes and yes again with every word right till the end. I felt my heart drop with your pen, then felt it start right up again. Through all the heat breaks I\'ve had in my life, now to this day to be thankful in alive!
This was such an inspiring write!
March 10th, 2019 08:42
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, yes and yes again with every word right till the end. I felt my heart drop with your pen, then felt it start right up again. Through all the heat breaks I\'ve had in my life, now to this day to be thankful in alive!
This was such an inspiring write!
March 10th, 2019 08:42
Breath of life
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful poem and having such great metre it rolls off the tongue and reads so easily and well - great write Jayde
March 10th, 2019 07:43
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful poem and having such great metre it rolls off the tongue and reads so easily and well - great write Jayde
March 10th, 2019 07:43
Breath of life
Fay Slimm. said:
The power of love - -and so beautifully expressed.
March 10th, 2019 06:12
Fay Slimm. said:
The power of love - -and so beautifully expressed.
March 10th, 2019 06:12
Therapy
EliDagger said:
Never fail to grab me and write a very relatable piece of work! It was fantastic! X
March 10th, 2019 03:07
EliDagger said:
Never fail to grab me and write a very relatable piece of work! It was fantastic! X
March 10th, 2019 03:07
Haiku - I see you
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, the stars will be forever looking down on you with their love.
March 10th, 2019 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, the stars will be forever looking down on you with their love.
March 10th, 2019 01:08
Haiku - I see you
Michael Edwards said:
What a super piece - may the stars ever shine - what more can I say?
March 9th, 2019 13:19
Michael Edwards said:
What a super piece - may the stars ever shine - what more can I say?
March 9th, 2019 13:19
Haiku - I see you
orchidee said:
A fine write JV. It\'s OK for some though - OK for them stars projecting tene-wotsit. I can\'t say long words, ya know! lol. Good word there really.
March 9th, 2019 12:05
orchidee said:
A fine write JV. It\'s OK for some though - OK for them stars projecting tene-wotsit. I can\'t say long words, ya know! lol. Good word there really.
March 9th, 2019 12:05
These Bitches (Miana)
Neville said:
Ya dont need to second guess with this one... filled to overflowing with vitriol and bile.. I so hope ya felt better after spitting this one out... Nice.. N
March 9th, 2019 07:47
Neville said:
Ya dont need to second guess with this one... filled to overflowing with vitriol and bile.. I so hope ya felt better after spitting this one out... Nice.. N
March 9th, 2019 07:47
Haiku - Transfixed
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing JAYDE ~ Love the picture which complements an elegant 5 7 5 haiku ! Blue - Pink - Purple are all very soothing colours ~ Nature has that effect ! The same with GREEN. In our experience \"Looking @ Nature\" is always cathartic. Snow can transform a landscape as can Sunrise ~ Sunset ! Thanks for sharing ~ Short but very sweet !
Blessings through Poetry ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
March 8th, 2019 18:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing JAYDE ~ Love the picture which complements an elegant 5 7 5 haiku ! Blue - Pink - Purple are all very soothing colours ~ Nature has that effect ! The same with GREEN. In our experience \"Looking @ Nature\" is always cathartic. Snow can transform a landscape as can Sunrise ~ Sunset ! Thanks for sharing ~ Short but very sweet !
Blessings through Poetry ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
March 8th, 2019 18:11
Haiku - Transfixed
Neville said:
I can see why you cheered up my friend.. who would not be... a little gem of a haiku too I might add.... N
March 8th, 2019 06:45
Neville said:
I can see why you cheered up my friend.. who would not be... a little gem of a haiku too I might add.... N
March 8th, 2019 06:45
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