Comments received on poems by Tayama
You or Me?
L. B. Mek said:
\'In the wake of the despair that\'s left in the ruins of what we sought so hard to believe...\'
what a brilliant line! a great read with wonderful flow
April 6th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'In the wake of the despair that\'s left in the ruins of what we sought so hard to believe...\'
what a brilliant line! a great read with wonderful flow
April 6th, 2021 04:59
Our Redemption.
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth is always within you Tayama and the beauty and glory will be forever with you.
Andy
April 4th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth is always within you Tayama and the beauty and glory will be forever with you.
Andy
April 4th, 2021 00:26
Refrain of shame.
L. B. Mek said:
I salute the sheer poetic effort that went into this poem, a great read and I especially like your title..
thanks for sharing dear poet
March 23rd, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
I salute the sheer poetic effort that went into this poem, a great read and I especially like your title..
thanks for sharing dear poet
March 23rd, 2021 04:37
Between
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded,
a great dedication and a glimpse at the turmoil of exhausting thought\'s those with loss in their life have to live with, daily
March 16th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded,
a great dedication and a glimpse at the turmoil of exhausting thought\'s those with loss in their life have to live with, daily
March 16th, 2021 04:34
Between
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will never stop Tayama, it will always be there.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will never stop Tayama, it will always be there.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:40
April
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can bring so many emotions to us all.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can bring so many emotions to us all.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:26
Cure
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sadly, we chose wrong...as it was never about anything we were...
Just the sadness of what we imagined love could be...
Submerged in the void to tease...\'..
such a mournful relinquishing of that once - all encompassing and fulfilling, presence in our lives
we all, in someway have experienced and lamented
having to endure its unshakeable stain
in our remnant - conceptualisation of love..
a wonderfully worded write and infused with such realism,
brilliantly executed, in my humble opinion dear poet
March 9th, 2021 06:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sadly, we chose wrong...as it was never about anything we were...
Just the sadness of what we imagined love could be...
Submerged in the void to tease...\'..
such a mournful relinquishing of that once - all encompassing and fulfilling, presence in our lives
we all, in someway have experienced and lamented
having to endure its unshakeable stain
in our remnant - conceptualisation of love..
a wonderfully worded write and infused with such realism,
brilliantly executed, in my humble opinion dear poet
March 9th, 2021 06:56
Let it be as it Should.
Goldfinch60 said:
Words that ask the life long question we have in our heart \"What if I had done that?\"
What if....? the question that is in us all.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Words that ask the life long question we have in our heart \"What if I had done that?\"
What if....? the question that is in us all.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:32
The Truth of Thee
L. B. Mek said:
I applaud your poetic ambition
and brave, unbridled depiction
be it real or simply fiction...
a good read, thanks for sharing
January 26th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
I applaud your poetic ambition
and brave, unbridled depiction
be it real or simply fiction...
a good read, thanks for sharing
January 26th, 2021 05:26
Stone Walls
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pine needles in her hair, as she breathed him in, even more...\'
Brilliant!
happy holidays dear Poet
December 29th, 2020 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pine needles in her hair, as she breathed him in, even more...\'
Brilliant!
happy holidays dear Poet
December 29th, 2020 05:50
Stone Walls
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words. That love will always be there.
Andy
December 29th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words. That love will always be there.
Andy
December 29th, 2020 01:35
Mary
L. B. Mek said:
an emotional write that conveys that stark reality of living, continuing even after the worst has come and taken all, we once were certain - we couldn\'t survive without,
so we survived - kept our promise to keep on fighting and our reward... well, I guess we collect that at the end, together with all the meaning left-out in that barren pamphlet we get - when we unpack life,
a great read, thanks for sharing
December 17th, 2020 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
an emotional write that conveys that stark reality of living, continuing even after the worst has come and taken all, we once were certain - we couldn\'t survive without,
so we survived - kept our promise to keep on fighting and our reward... well, I guess we collect that at the end, together with all the meaning left-out in that barren pamphlet we get - when we unpack life,
a great read, thanks for sharing
December 17th, 2020 06:21
Mary
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words which go deep in me as I lost my wife last year, it is the anniversary of her passing later this month.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words which go deep in me as I lost my wife last year, it is the anniversary of her passing later this month.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:45
Mary
FredPeyer said:
Very well said, Tayama, but sad. There is not much anyone can say that would lift your spirits, except that it is not us who decide when it is time to go. God does have a reason for everything that happens. It is up to us to find it.
I wish you strength and do hope you will be able to look forward again with confidence.
December 16th, 2020 14:21
FredPeyer said:
Very well said, Tayama, but sad. There is not much anyone can say that would lift your spirits, except that it is not us who decide when it is time to go. God does have a reason for everything that happens. It is up to us to find it.
I wish you strength and do hope you will be able to look forward again with confidence.
December 16th, 2020 14:21
Difference
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need to make a difference in life, hopefully for the good.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need to make a difference in life, hopefully for the good.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:43
Sleep to Forget
RDS said:
Thanks that was a good evocation of heartache, anguish and a quirky what will be will be resilience, the way I read it!
J
December 8th, 2020 14:46
RDS said:
Thanks that was a good evocation of heartache, anguish and a quirky what will be will be resilience, the way I read it!
J
December 8th, 2020 14:46
Sleep to Forget
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but it is never time to sleep forever.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but it is never time to sleep forever.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:28
If
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully modern take on Kipling\'s classic:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-15395
December 4th, 2020 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully modern take on Kipling\'s classic:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-15395
December 4th, 2020 07:19
Ava
Fatlass said:
New on here so not sure what to type but I enjoyed your poem. Sad but lovely
December 1st, 2020 10:03
Fatlass said:
New on here so not sure what to type but I enjoyed your poem. Sad but lovely
December 1st, 2020 10:03
Ava
Goldfinch60 said:
You will join her in time but not yet, remember the good times when you were together.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
You will join her in time but not yet, remember the good times when you were together.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:54
Love First
RDS said:
A nice reminder that Love is...unconditional if it truly is the pinnacle, the peak of human experience.
Love, you make me forget myself is another way of saying such vain impressions are not worth remembering.
Being hurt is just the pain of caring, resonating against false expectations
Go gently my friend
J
November 29th, 2020 06:31
RDS said:
A nice reminder that Love is...unconditional if it truly is the pinnacle, the peak of human experience.
Love, you make me forget myself is another way of saying such vain impressions are not worth remembering.
Being hurt is just the pain of caring, resonating against false expectations
Go gently my friend
J
November 29th, 2020 06:31
Love First
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, love should always come first in our lives.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, love should always come first in our lives.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:48
Tell Them
Fay Slimm. said:
Telling those dearest and nearest how much they mean to your life is so wise as the \"start to the finish\" moves so quickly - - much food for thought in this well crafted tale of \"smiles and tears\" just before the goodbyes.......... another moving write and thanks for sharing it John.
November 28th, 2020 12:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Telling those dearest and nearest how much they mean to your life is so wise as the \"start to the finish\" moves so quickly - - much food for thought in this well crafted tale of \"smiles and tears\" just before the goodbyes.......... another moving write and thanks for sharing it John.
November 28th, 2020 12:01
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