Comments received on poems by Tayama
The Truth of Thee
L. B. Mek said:
I applaud your poetic ambition
and brave, unbridled depiction
be it real or simply fiction...
a good read, thanks for sharing
January 26th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
I applaud your poetic ambition
and brave, unbridled depiction
be it real or simply fiction...
a good read, thanks for sharing
January 26th, 2021 05:26
Stone Walls
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pine needles in her hair, as she breathed him in, even more...\'
Brilliant!
happy holidays dear Poet
December 29th, 2020 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pine needles in her hair, as she breathed him in, even more...\'
Brilliant!
happy holidays dear Poet
December 29th, 2020 05:50
Stone Walls
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words. That love will always be there.
Andy
December 29th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words. That love will always be there.
Andy
December 29th, 2020 01:35
Mary
L. B. Mek said:
an emotional write that conveys that stark reality of living, continuing even after the worst has come and taken all, we once were certain - we couldn\'t survive without,
so we survived - kept our promise to keep on fighting and our reward... well, I guess we collect that at the end, together with all the meaning left-out in that barren pamphlet we get - when we unpack life,
a great read, thanks for sharing
December 17th, 2020 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
an emotional write that conveys that stark reality of living, continuing even after the worst has come and taken all, we once were certain - we couldn\'t survive without,
so we survived - kept our promise to keep on fighting and our reward... well, I guess we collect that at the end, together with all the meaning left-out in that barren pamphlet we get - when we unpack life,
a great read, thanks for sharing
December 17th, 2020 06:21
Mary
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words which go deep in me as I lost my wife last year, it is the anniversary of her passing later this month.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words which go deep in me as I lost my wife last year, it is the anniversary of her passing later this month.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:45
Mary
FredPeyer said:
Very well said, Tayama, but sad. There is not much anyone can say that would lift your spirits, except that it is not us who decide when it is time to go. God does have a reason for everything that happens. It is up to us to find it.
I wish you strength and do hope you will be able to look forward again with confidence.
December 16th, 2020 14:21
FredPeyer said:
Very well said, Tayama, but sad. There is not much anyone can say that would lift your spirits, except that it is not us who decide when it is time to go. God does have a reason for everything that happens. It is up to us to find it.
I wish you strength and do hope you will be able to look forward again with confidence.
December 16th, 2020 14:21
Difference
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need to make a difference in life, hopefully for the good.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need to make a difference in life, hopefully for the good.
Andy
December 13th, 2020 02:43
Sleep to Forget
RDS said:
Thanks that was a good evocation of heartache, anguish and a quirky what will be will be resilience, the way I read it!
J
December 8th, 2020 14:46
RDS said:
Thanks that was a good evocation of heartache, anguish and a quirky what will be will be resilience, the way I read it!
J
December 8th, 2020 14:46
Sleep to Forget
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but it is never time to sleep forever.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but it is never time to sleep forever.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:28
If
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully modern take on Kipling\'s classic:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-15395
December 4th, 2020 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully modern take on Kipling\'s classic:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-15395
December 4th, 2020 07:19
Ava
Fatlass said:
New on here so not sure what to type but I enjoyed your poem. Sad but lovely
December 1st, 2020 10:03
Fatlass said:
New on here so not sure what to type but I enjoyed your poem. Sad but lovely
December 1st, 2020 10:03
Ava
Goldfinch60 said:
You will join her in time but not yet, remember the good times when you were together.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
You will join her in time but not yet, remember the good times when you were together.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:54
Love First
RDS said:
A nice reminder that Love is...unconditional if it truly is the pinnacle, the peak of human experience.
Love, you make me forget myself is another way of saying such vain impressions are not worth remembering.
Being hurt is just the pain of caring, resonating against false expectations
Go gently my friend
J
November 29th, 2020 06:31
RDS said:
A nice reminder that Love is...unconditional if it truly is the pinnacle, the peak of human experience.
Love, you make me forget myself is another way of saying such vain impressions are not worth remembering.
Being hurt is just the pain of caring, resonating against false expectations
Go gently my friend
J
November 29th, 2020 06:31
Love First
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, love should always come first in our lives.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, love should always come first in our lives.
Andy
November 29th, 2020 01:48
Tell Them
Fay Slimm. said:
Telling those dearest and nearest how much they mean to your life is so wise as the \"start to the finish\" moves so quickly - - much food for thought in this well crafted tale of \"smiles and tears\" just before the goodbyes.......... another moving write and thanks for sharing it John.
November 28th, 2020 12:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Telling those dearest and nearest how much they mean to your life is so wise as the \"start to the finish\" moves so quickly - - much food for thought in this well crafted tale of \"smiles and tears\" just before the goodbyes.......... another moving write and thanks for sharing it John.
November 28th, 2020 12:01
We are not in control
Fay Slimm. said:
Short and to the point this piece on t the spirit of love - I look forward to reading more of your work John.
November 28th, 2020 11:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Short and to the point this piece on t the spirit of love - I look forward to reading more of your work John.
November 28th, 2020 11:54
Love First
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes showing love instead of the list of alternatives would be a wise way of supporting its power to reform this troubled world Tayama A fine piece of advice and thanks for the needed reminder that love never fails.
November 28th, 2020 11:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes showing love instead of the list of alternatives would be a wise way of supporting its power to reform this troubled world Tayama A fine piece of advice and thanks for the needed reminder that love never fails.
November 28th, 2020 11:51
We are not in control
L. B. Mek said:
good read, direct in delivery yet still has a message that is in-itself warmly thought provoking
November 28th, 2020 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
good read, direct in delivery yet still has a message that is in-itself warmly thought provoking
November 28th, 2020 06:36
We are not in control
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so strong, it can beat everything.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so strong, it can beat everything.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:31
Winter in Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words Tayama, I am sure you will be able to start again.
Andy
November 3rd, 2020 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words Tayama, I am sure you will be able to start again.
Andy
November 3rd, 2020 02:10
See?
L. B. Mek said:
\'The drama is often a mask she says...
Give the people a chance to see their truth and then they become beautiful...
Like you and me...see?
She really makes me believe I have everything I will ever need...\'
wonderfully insightful, natural flow and tempo, great read
October 30th, 2020 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'The drama is often a mask she says...
Give the people a chance to see their truth and then they become beautiful...
Like you and me...see?
She really makes me believe I have everything I will ever need...\'
wonderfully insightful, natural flow and tempo, great read
October 30th, 2020 04:01
Tell Them
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful emotive write John, I was in that room with him as your words drew me there.
A rare thing as I put it into my favourites.
Andy
October 27th, 2020 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful emotive write John, I was in that room with him as your words drew me there.
A rare thing as I put it into my favourites.
Andy
October 27th, 2020 02:04
Waiting to Start
L. B. Mek said:
I like the feel and tone of your write, there is an element of genuine yearning to find meaning in the unmentioned nuances between your lines of introspective insight,
good write
October 19th, 2020 01:54
L. B. Mek said:
I like the feel and tone of your write, there is an element of genuine yearning to find meaning in the unmentioned nuances between your lines of introspective insight,
good write
October 19th, 2020 01:54
Choices in Time.
Goldfinch60 said:
Time comes in many guises and my time always looks to the glory of my future.
Andy
October 10th, 2020 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Time comes in many guises and my time always looks to the glory of my future.
Andy
October 10th, 2020 00:52
Years
jarcher54 said:
So bare-bones, yet so pregnant with hints, inferences, and imagined details. Witty and poignant, unique to you yet universal. Leads so many and cries when alone.. I am 66 and am solidly in that place... haven\'t has a clue in decades, but yes lucky in many ways. I enjoyed your autobiography today.
September 16th, 2020 09:26
jarcher54 said:
So bare-bones, yet so pregnant with hints, inferences, and imagined details. Witty and poignant, unique to you yet universal. Leads so many and cries when alone.. I am 66 and am solidly in that place... haven\'t has a clue in decades, but yes lucky in many ways. I enjoyed your autobiography today.
September 16th, 2020 09:26
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