Comments received on poems by Tayama
Gone
L. B. Mek said:
\'for now
its my nightmares, finding
those sunrays within me
you once, implanted;
and daybreak
brings - naught, but shadows
of unrelenting ache...\'
(I found your poem
to be a powerful write
maybe low in word count
but plentiful
in its meaningful brevity
a great read!
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
Happy New Year! dear poet
January 4th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'for now
its my nightmares, finding
those sunrays within me
you once, implanted;
and daybreak
brings - naught, but shadows
of unrelenting ache...\'
(I found your poem
to be a powerful write
maybe low in word count
but plentiful
in its meaningful brevity
a great read!
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
Happy New Year! dear poet
January 4th, 2022 04:16
Gone
Draven said:
This is heartwrenching in so few words. Thank you for sharing xx
January 3rd, 2022 16:03
Draven said:
This is heartwrenching in so few words. Thank you for sharing xx
January 3rd, 2022 16:03
Do I See.....
Goldfinch60 said:
Releasing yourself into the love of all is the was to go Tayama.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Releasing yourself into the love of all is the was to go Tayama.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:41
Worthy
Caring dove said:
We shouldn’t have to ask others if we are worthy .. because we just are .. even if we may not feel that way
December 18th, 2021 01:44
Caring dove said:
We shouldn’t have to ask others if we are worthy .. because we just are .. even if we may not feel that way
December 18th, 2021 01:44
Worthy
Goldfinch60 said:
That worthiness has always been with you John and I am sure your god knows that.
Andy
December 18th, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That worthiness has always been with you John and I am sure your god knows that.
Andy
December 18th, 2021 01:42
Fathers
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love comes when hearts are open,
As tears are wiped dry,
Suffering is understood,\'
loved this lines (even devoid of theological context)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 31st, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love comes when hearts are open,
As tears are wiped dry,
Suffering is understood,\'
loved this lines (even devoid of theological context)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 31st, 2021 05:00
Fathers
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words, my Father is with me and I often see him in the mirror.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words, my Father is with me and I often see him in the mirror.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:58
Fathers
Thekkinkkattil said:
A touching ode to your father. Reminded me of mine .A good read
August 31st, 2021 00:24
Thekkinkkattil said:
A touching ode to your father. Reminded me of mine .A good read
August 31st, 2021 00:24
You or Me?
L. B. Mek said:
\'In the wake of the despair that\'s left in the ruins of what we sought so hard to believe...\'
what a brilliant line! a great read with wonderful flow
April 6th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'In the wake of the despair that\'s left in the ruins of what we sought so hard to believe...\'
what a brilliant line! a great read with wonderful flow
April 6th, 2021 04:59
Our Redemption.
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth is always within you Tayama and the beauty and glory will be forever with you.
Andy
April 4th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth is always within you Tayama and the beauty and glory will be forever with you.
Andy
April 4th, 2021 00:26
Refrain of shame.
L. B. Mek said:
I salute the sheer poetic effort that went into this poem, a great read and I especially like your title..
thanks for sharing dear poet
March 23rd, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
I salute the sheer poetic effort that went into this poem, a great read and I especially like your title..
thanks for sharing dear poet
March 23rd, 2021 04:37
Between
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded,
a great dedication and a glimpse at the turmoil of exhausting thought\'s those with loss in their life have to live with, daily
March 16th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded,
a great dedication and a glimpse at the turmoil of exhausting thought\'s those with loss in their life have to live with, daily
March 16th, 2021 04:34
Between
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will never stop Tayama, it will always be there.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will never stop Tayama, it will always be there.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:40
April
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can bring so many emotions to us all.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can bring so many emotions to us all.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:26
Cure
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sadly, we chose wrong...as it was never about anything we were...
Just the sadness of what we imagined love could be...
Submerged in the void to tease...\'..
such a mournful relinquishing of that once - all encompassing and fulfilling, presence in our lives
we all, in someway have experienced and lamented
having to endure its unshakeable stain
in our remnant - conceptualisation of love..
a wonderfully worded write and infused with such realism,
brilliantly executed, in my humble opinion dear poet
March 9th, 2021 06:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sadly, we chose wrong...as it was never about anything we were...
Just the sadness of what we imagined love could be...
Submerged in the void to tease...\'..
such a mournful relinquishing of that once - all encompassing and fulfilling, presence in our lives
we all, in someway have experienced and lamented
having to endure its unshakeable stain
in our remnant - conceptualisation of love..
a wonderfully worded write and infused with such realism,
brilliantly executed, in my humble opinion dear poet
March 9th, 2021 06:56
Let it be as it Should.
Goldfinch60 said:
Words that ask the life long question we have in our heart \"What if I had done that?\"
What if....? the question that is in us all.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Words that ask the life long question we have in our heart \"What if I had done that?\"
What if....? the question that is in us all.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:32
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