Comments received on poems by Tayama
Stars Falling
arqios said:
Pulls at the heart strings and ropes in the stars.
October 20th, 2022 22:15
arqios said:
Pulls at the heart strings and ropes in the stars.
October 20th, 2022 22:15
Surrender
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Love is sacrifice and not always in balance when in a relationship.
September 20th, 2022 16:59
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Love is sacrifice and not always in balance when in a relationship.
September 20th, 2022 16:59
What They Took
Raven333 said:
What a great yet sad poem, I could feel your hurt, your anguish and your defeat. keep your head up cause you do deserve love
September 9th, 2022 20:56
Raven333 said:
What a great yet sad poem, I could feel your hurt, your anguish and your defeat. keep your head up cause you do deserve love
September 9th, 2022 20:56
What They Took
Christ said:
Bravo! This is magnificent. It would be even more impressive if rhyming was my cup of tea, but sometimes rhyming just happens by accident, ya know what I mean? But despite that minor dilemma, I love this type of writing; the heart-wretching pain you leave in people\'s stomachs, to whomever reads this. Keep up the good work!
September 9th, 2022 18:28
Christ said:
Bravo! This is magnificent. It would be even more impressive if rhyming was my cup of tea, but sometimes rhyming just happens by accident, ya know what I mean? But despite that minor dilemma, I love this type of writing; the heart-wretching pain you leave in people\'s stomachs, to whomever reads this. Keep up the good work!
September 9th, 2022 18:28
Let love in thats not been denied.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful reflective writing, Tayama.
September 5th, 2022 17:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful reflective writing, Tayama.
September 5th, 2022 17:19
Awaken
arqios said:
That is what we should be awakened to. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 10:41
arqios said:
That is what we should be awakened to. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 10:41
Let me have what we were.
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful melancholy poem here Tayama.
April 24th, 2022 00:29
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful melancholy poem here Tayama.
April 24th, 2022 00:29
Let me have what we were.
Crowns4Christ said:
Such a sad and sweet poem at the same time, very emotional piece
April 23rd, 2022 20:08
Crowns4Christ said:
Such a sad and sweet poem at the same time, very emotional piece
April 23rd, 2022 20:08
Smile
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiling is so important in life as it may give a glimmer of hope to others.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiling is so important in life as it may give a glimmer of hope to others.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:57
Smile
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, SMILE! Allow happiness to guide your life and you will result a happy person. Lovely poem! 💖😉
February 14th, 2022 14:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, SMILE! Allow happiness to guide your life and you will result a happy person. Lovely poem! 💖😉
February 14th, 2022 14:13
Gone
L. B. Mek said:
\'for now
its my nightmares, finding
those sunrays within me
you once, implanted;
and daybreak
brings - naught, but shadows
of unrelenting ache...\'
(I found your poem
to be a powerful write
maybe low in word count
but plentiful
in its meaningful brevity
a great read!
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
Happy New Year! dear poet
January 4th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'for now
its my nightmares, finding
those sunrays within me
you once, implanted;
and daybreak
brings - naught, but shadows
of unrelenting ache...\'
(I found your poem
to be a powerful write
maybe low in word count
but plentiful
in its meaningful brevity
a great read!
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
Happy New Year! dear poet
January 4th, 2022 04:16
Gone
Draven said:
This is heartwrenching in so few words. Thank you for sharing xx
January 3rd, 2022 16:03
Draven said:
This is heartwrenching in so few words. Thank you for sharing xx
January 3rd, 2022 16:03
Do I See.....
Goldfinch60 said:
Releasing yourself into the love of all is the was to go Tayama.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Releasing yourself into the love of all is the was to go Tayama.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:41
Worthy
Caring dove said:
We shouldn’t have to ask others if we are worthy .. because we just are .. even if we may not feel that way
December 18th, 2021 01:44
Caring dove said:
We shouldn’t have to ask others if we are worthy .. because we just are .. even if we may not feel that way
December 18th, 2021 01:44
Worthy
Goldfinch60 said:
That worthiness has always been with you John and I am sure your god knows that.
Andy
December 18th, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That worthiness has always been with you John and I am sure your god knows that.
Andy
December 18th, 2021 01:42
Fathers
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love comes when hearts are open,
As tears are wiped dry,
Suffering is understood,\'
loved this lines (even devoid of theological context)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 31st, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love comes when hearts are open,
As tears are wiped dry,
Suffering is understood,\'
loved this lines (even devoid of theological context)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 31st, 2021 05:00
Fathers
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words, my Father is with me and I often see him in the mirror.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words, my Father is with me and I often see him in the mirror.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:58
Fathers
Thekkinkkattil said:
A touching ode to your father. Reminded me of mine .A good read
August 31st, 2021 00:24
Thekkinkkattil said:
A touching ode to your father. Reminded me of mine .A good read
August 31st, 2021 00:24
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