Comments received on poems by Tayama
Hope of the Day
sorenbarrett said:
Positive, inspiring, bright and hopeful. Very nicely written and well worded
May 5th, 2025 16:34
sorenbarrett said:
Positive, inspiring, bright and hopeful. Very nicely written and well worded
May 5th, 2025 16:34
Even I He Needs
Tony Grannell said:
\'So as I see me in them\', says it all in this declaration of love and repentance. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 13:06
Tony Grannell said:
\'So as I see me in them\', says it all in this declaration of love and repentance. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 13:06
Even I He Needs
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of love and devotion. Very nice.
May 1st, 2025 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of love and devotion. Very nice.
May 1st, 2025 10:31
Walk away in peace...
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that shows its religious belief in the words it speaks. A questioning that ends in a firm decision to follow. Nicely said
April 26th, 2025 16:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that shows its religious belief in the words it speaks. A questioning that ends in a firm decision to follow. Nicely said
April 26th, 2025 16:24
To Begin
sorenbarrett said:
This poem weaves its tale in wonderful wording and form. Well done
April 16th, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem weaves its tale in wonderful wording and form. Well done
April 16th, 2025 17:01
\"Ifs\"
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of honesty direct from the heart, very nicely expressed and written
April 7th, 2025 13:40
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of honesty direct from the heart, very nicely expressed and written
April 7th, 2025 13:40
\"Ifs\"
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of misconnection that could have been if one had wished to sell one\'s soul. Some do in I do that doesn\'t last. A great read that talks from the heart.
April 7th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of misconnection that could have been if one had wished to sell one\'s soul. Some do in I do that doesn\'t last. A great read that talks from the heart.
April 7th, 2025 10:58
Where he stood.
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
It a final critical thought everyone would say to life, after living it and realising a lot of things. The memories of love , sadness and regrets. Of course the poem is a strong message of a father\'s love to his children.
Great poem of time!!!
March 31st, 2025 15:29
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
It a final critical thought everyone would say to life, after living it and realising a lot of things. The memories of love , sadness and regrets. Of course the poem is a strong message of a father\'s love to his children.
Great poem of time!!!
March 31st, 2025 15:29
Where he stood.
Poetic Licence said:
A father\'s reflection on his life and what type of father he was will be remembered on his passing , a touching and sad in places, nicely expressed and written
March 31st, 2025 11:57
Poetic Licence said:
A father\'s reflection on his life and what type of father he was will be remembered on his passing , a touching and sad in places, nicely expressed and written
March 31st, 2025 11:57
Where he stood.
sorenbarrett said:
The thoughts of a father pondering his own passing and the passing on of his memory. There is nostalgia and sadness in this poem well rhymed and set in flowing meter. Well done
March 31st, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
The thoughts of a father pondering his own passing and the passing on of his memory. There is nostalgia and sadness in this poem well rhymed and set in flowing meter. Well done
March 31st, 2025 11:00
Waiting
Rohan Regi said:
For a love so true, the waiting won\'t be long. I have always felt that it is the waiting and the pain we take in for love that makes it special.
July 28th, 2023 17:14
Rohan Regi said:
For a love so true, the waiting won\'t be long. I have always felt that it is the waiting and the pain we take in for love that makes it special.
July 28th, 2023 17:14
Last like Jesus
Parisab said:
He needs no proof to exist and his love is unconditional, even if in solitude-heartfelt write no matter what the belief of the reader and it seems that you are open to all love because of your faith.
June 30th, 2023 21:52
Parisab said:
He needs no proof to exist and his love is unconditional, even if in solitude-heartfelt write no matter what the belief of the reader and it seems that you are open to all love because of your faith.
June 30th, 2023 21:52
Last like Jesus
David Wakeling said:
What a shame Jesus never existed.Still children will believe in fairy tales.
June 30th, 2023 17:23
David Wakeling said:
What a shame Jesus never existed.Still children will believe in fairy tales.
June 30th, 2023 17:23
It Will Never Be
David Wakeling said:
The trouble with asking questions is there can be no answers.It just becomes a tedious read.
April 24th, 2023 16:54
David Wakeling said:
The trouble with asking questions is there can be no answers.It just becomes a tedious read.
April 24th, 2023 16:54
It Will Never Be
Audrey A. said:
To find a brighter day
Use the sun\'s ray
To melt the snow
And then you\'ll know
It couldn\'t be any other way
Your wife loves you very much and misses you the same.
April 24th, 2023 12:55
Audrey A. said:
To find a brighter day
Use the sun\'s ray
To melt the snow
And then you\'ll know
It couldn\'t be any other way
Your wife loves you very much and misses you the same.
April 24th, 2023 12:55
What We Can Do
2781 said:
Reminds me of the scripture: give no thought for tomorrow sufficient for the day is the evil thereof.
April 14th, 2023 18:05
2781 said:
Reminds me of the scripture: give no thought for tomorrow sufficient for the day is the evil thereof.
April 14th, 2023 18:05
The Rain of Love
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful dedication
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
February 24th, 2023 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful dedication
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
February 24th, 2023 05:45
The Rain of Love
Sumit Datta said:
A very beautiful poem with a lot of imagery and reflections. Enjoyed reading it.
February 24th, 2023 01:01
Sumit Datta said:
A very beautiful poem with a lot of imagery and reflections. Enjoyed reading it.
February 24th, 2023 01:01
Snow Covered
Kinsey Peterson said:
This poem seems as though it was painful to write. All I can say is thank you for sharing those emotions with us, with me. You aren\'t struggling alone and I hope you know that there is an entire community here to support you and the amazing work that you do.
November 21st, 2022 14:13
Kinsey Peterson said:
This poem seems as though it was painful to write. All I can say is thank you for sharing those emotions with us, with me. You aren\'t struggling alone and I hope you know that there is an entire community here to support you and the amazing work that you do.
November 21st, 2022 14:13
Blessings
mvvenkataraman said:
A heart-touching poem indeed,
The poet brings not only tears,
But awe too to move the heart,
Philosophy is also mixed in words,
I am moved by its theme greatly!
November 2nd, 2022 01:32
mvvenkataraman said:
A heart-touching poem indeed,
The poet brings not only tears,
But awe too to move the heart,
Philosophy is also mixed in words,
I am moved by its theme greatly!
November 2nd, 2022 01:32
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