Comments received on poems by Tayama



My Impatience
sorenbarrett said:

A most wonderful poem of faith and protection by a higher power. Very nice

May 19th, 2025 15:44

Forever
sorenbarrett said:

Heart warming that melts the snow and ice all around. A most beautiful image given at the beginning of this poem. Simply lovely

May 18th, 2025 15:43

Can she know?
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful write and dedication to there wonderful gift, enjoyed the read

May 10th, 2025 02:25

Can she know?
sorenbarrett said:

Such beautiful words that I feel completely having two daughters and a granddaughter that have captured my heart. Well done

May 9th, 2025 15:38

Hope of the Day
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day we awake is a good day Tayama.

Andy

May 6th, 2025 01:52

Hope of the Day
sorenbarrett said:

Positive, inspiring, bright and hopeful. Very nicely written and well worded

May 5th, 2025 16:34

Even I He Needs
Tony Grannell said:

\'So as I see me in them\', says it all in this declaration of love and repentance. Excellent!

Kind regards,
Tony.

May 1st, 2025 13:06

Even I He Needs
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write of love and devotion. Very nice.

May 1st, 2025 10:31

Walk away in peace...
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that shows its religious belief in the words it speaks. A questioning that ends in a firm decision to follow. Nicely said

April 26th, 2025 16:24

To Begin
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s a nicely crafted and enjoyable read

April 17th, 2025 01:34

To Begin
sorenbarrett said:

This poem weaves its tale in wonderful wording and form. Well done

April 16th, 2025 17:01

\"Ifs\"
Poetic Licence said:

A poem of honesty direct from the heart, very nicely expressed and written

April 7th, 2025 13:40

\"Ifs\"
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of misconnection that could have been if one had wished to sell one\'s soul. Some do in I do that doesn\'t last. A great read that talks from the heart.

April 7th, 2025 10:58

Where he stood.
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

March 31st, 2025 20:26

Where he stood.
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

It a final critical thought everyone would say to life, after living it and realising a lot of things. The memories of love , sadness and regrets. Of course the poem is a strong message of a father\'s love to his children.
Great poem of time!!!

March 31st, 2025 15:29

Where he stood.
Poetic Licence said:

A father\'s reflection on his life and what type of father he was will be remembered on his passing , a touching and sad in places, nicely expressed and written

March 31st, 2025 11:57

Where he stood.
sorenbarrett said:

The thoughts of a father pondering his own passing and the passing on of his memory. There is nostalgia and sadness in this poem well rhymed and set in flowing meter. Well done

March 31st, 2025 11:00

Lake Misty
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 3rd, 2024 15:06

A Girl Named Autumn
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 29th, 2024 18:48

Adore
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words of love Tayama.

Andy

November 30th, 2023 02:27

Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love be forever with you Tayama.

Andy

July 29th, 2023 01:51

Waiting
Rohan Regi said:

For a love so true, the waiting won\'t be long. I have always felt that it is the waiting and the pain we take in for love that makes it special.

July 28th, 2023 17:14

Last like Jesus
Parisab said:

He needs no proof to exist and his love is unconditional, even if in solitude-heartfelt write no matter what the belief of the reader and it seems that you are open to all love because of your faith.

June 30th, 2023 21:52

Last like Jesus
David Wakeling said:

What a shame Jesus never existed.Still children will believe in fairy tales.

June 30th, 2023 17:23

It Will Never Be
David Wakeling said:

The trouble with asking questions is there can be no answers.It just becomes a tedious read.

April 24th, 2023 16:54

It Will Never Be
Audrey A. said:

To find a brighter day
Use the sun\'s ray
To melt the snow
And then you\'ll know
It couldn\'t be any other way

Your wife loves you very much and misses you the same.


April 24th, 2023 12:55

What We Can Do
2781 said:

Reminds me of the scripture: give no thought for tomorrow sufficient for the day is the evil thereof.

April 14th, 2023 18:05

The Rain of Love
L. B. Mek said:

a beautiful dedication
a memorable read, thanks for sharing

February 24th, 2023 05:45

The Rain of Love
Sumit Datta said:

A very beautiful poem with a lot of imagery and reflections. Enjoyed reading it.

February 24th, 2023 01:01

Wasted Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a special love Tayama.

Andy

February 8th, 2023 02:38

Page 1 of 512345»


« Return to the profile of Tayama