Comments received on poems by Tayama
Waiting
Rohan Regi said:
For a love so true, the waiting won\'t be long. I have always felt that it is the waiting and the pain we take in for love that makes it special.
July 28th, 2023 17:14
Rohan Regi said:
For a love so true, the waiting won\'t be long. I have always felt that it is the waiting and the pain we take in for love that makes it special.
July 28th, 2023 17:14
Last like Jesus
Parisab said:
He needs no proof to exist and his love is unconditional, even if in solitude-heartfelt write no matter what the belief of the reader and it seems that you are open to all love because of your faith.
June 30th, 2023 21:52
Parisab said:
He needs no proof to exist and his love is unconditional, even if in solitude-heartfelt write no matter what the belief of the reader and it seems that you are open to all love because of your faith.
June 30th, 2023 21:52
Last like Jesus
David Wakeling said:
What a shame Jesus never existed.Still children will believe in fairy tales.
June 30th, 2023 17:23
David Wakeling said:
What a shame Jesus never existed.Still children will believe in fairy tales.
June 30th, 2023 17:23
It Will Never Be
David Wakeling said:
The trouble with asking questions is there can be no answers.It just becomes a tedious read.
April 24th, 2023 16:54
David Wakeling said:
The trouble with asking questions is there can be no answers.It just becomes a tedious read.
April 24th, 2023 16:54
It Will Never Be
Audrey A. said:
To find a brighter day
Use the sun\'s ray
To melt the snow
And then you\'ll know
It couldn\'t be any other way
Your wife loves you very much and misses you the same.
April 24th, 2023 12:55
Audrey A. said:
To find a brighter day
Use the sun\'s ray
To melt the snow
And then you\'ll know
It couldn\'t be any other way
Your wife loves you very much and misses you the same.
April 24th, 2023 12:55
What We Can Do
2781 said:
Reminds me of the scripture: give no thought for tomorrow sufficient for the day is the evil thereof.
April 14th, 2023 18:05
2781 said:
Reminds me of the scripture: give no thought for tomorrow sufficient for the day is the evil thereof.
April 14th, 2023 18:05
The Rain of Love
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful dedication
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
February 24th, 2023 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful dedication
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
February 24th, 2023 05:45
The Rain of Love
Sumit Datta said:
A very beautiful poem with a lot of imagery and reflections. Enjoyed reading it.
February 24th, 2023 01:01
Sumit Datta said:
A very beautiful poem with a lot of imagery and reflections. Enjoyed reading it.
February 24th, 2023 01:01
Snow Covered
Kinsey Peterson said:
This poem seems as though it was painful to write. All I can say is thank you for sharing those emotions with us, with me. You aren\'t struggling alone and I hope you know that there is an entire community here to support you and the amazing work that you do.
November 21st, 2022 14:13
Kinsey Peterson said:
This poem seems as though it was painful to write. All I can say is thank you for sharing those emotions with us, with me. You aren\'t struggling alone and I hope you know that there is an entire community here to support you and the amazing work that you do.
November 21st, 2022 14:13
Blessings
mvvenkataraman said:
A heart-touching poem indeed,
The poet brings not only tears,
But awe too to move the heart,
Philosophy is also mixed in words,
I am moved by its theme greatly!
November 2nd, 2022 01:32
mvvenkataraman said:
A heart-touching poem indeed,
The poet brings not only tears,
But awe too to move the heart,
Philosophy is also mixed in words,
I am moved by its theme greatly!
November 2nd, 2022 01:32
Stars Falling
arqios said:
Pulls at the heart strings and ropes in the stars.
October 20th, 2022 22:15
arqios said:
Pulls at the heart strings and ropes in the stars.
October 20th, 2022 22:15
Surrender
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Love is sacrifice and not always in balance when in a relationship.
September 20th, 2022 16:59
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Love is sacrifice and not always in balance when in a relationship.
September 20th, 2022 16:59
What They Took
Raven333 said:
What a great yet sad poem, I could feel your hurt, your anguish and your defeat. keep your head up cause you do deserve love
September 9th, 2022 20:56
Raven333 said:
What a great yet sad poem, I could feel your hurt, your anguish and your defeat. keep your head up cause you do deserve love
September 9th, 2022 20:56
What They Took
Christ said:
Bravo! This is magnificent. It would be even more impressive if rhyming was my cup of tea, but sometimes rhyming just happens by accident, ya know what I mean? But despite that minor dilemma, I love this type of writing; the heart-wretching pain you leave in people\'s stomachs, to whomever reads this. Keep up the good work!
September 9th, 2022 18:28
Christ said:
Bravo! This is magnificent. It would be even more impressive if rhyming was my cup of tea, but sometimes rhyming just happens by accident, ya know what I mean? But despite that minor dilemma, I love this type of writing; the heart-wretching pain you leave in people\'s stomachs, to whomever reads this. Keep up the good work!
September 9th, 2022 18:28
Let love in thats not been denied.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful reflective writing, Tayama.
September 5th, 2022 17:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful reflective writing, Tayama.
September 5th, 2022 17:19
Awaken
arqios said:
That is what we should be awakened to. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 10:41
arqios said:
That is what we should be awakened to. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 10:41
Let me have what we were.
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful melancholy poem here Tayama.
April 24th, 2022 00:29
Saxon Crow said:
A beautiful melancholy poem here Tayama.
April 24th, 2022 00:29
Let me have what we were.
Crowns4Christ said:
Such a sad and sweet poem at the same time, very emotional piece
April 23rd, 2022 20:08
Crowns4Christ said:
Such a sad and sweet poem at the same time, very emotional piece
April 23rd, 2022 20:08
Smile
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiling is so important in life as it may give a glimmer of hope to others.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiling is so important in life as it may give a glimmer of hope to others.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:57
Smile
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, SMILE! Allow happiness to guide your life and you will result a happy person. Lovely poem! 💖😉
February 14th, 2022 14:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, SMILE! Allow happiness to guide your life and you will result a happy person. Lovely poem! 💖😉
February 14th, 2022 14:13
Gone
L. B. Mek said:
\'for now
its my nightmares, finding
those sunrays within me
you once, implanted;
and daybreak
brings - naught, but shadows
of unrelenting ache...\'
(I found your poem
to be a powerful write
maybe low in word count
but plentiful
in its meaningful brevity
a great read!
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
Happy New Year! dear poet
January 4th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'for now
its my nightmares, finding
those sunrays within me
you once, implanted;
and daybreak
brings - naught, but shadows
of unrelenting ache...\'
(I found your poem
to be a powerful write
maybe low in word count
but plentiful
in its meaningful brevity
a great read!
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
Happy New Year! dear poet
January 4th, 2022 04:16
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