Comments received on poems by Tayama



Fall
Goldfinch60 said:

With you as his father he will mend into a stronger person.

Andy

July 29th, 2020 00:24

Answered
L. B. Mek said:

\'The(y) day she turned around to see who was speaking...I felt the need to stop seeking...\'
how poetic and concise


July 28th, 2020 03:25

Answered
Goldfinch60 said:

That love will be there for eternity Tayama.

Andy

July 28th, 2020 00:26

Coffee Girl
Goldfinch60 said:

May your smiles never fade.

\"I\'ll have an Americano please.\" LOL

Andy

July 21st, 2020 00:18

For Cindy
Goldfinch60 said:

That special love found on the first date is so wonderful in our long lives.

Andy

July 20th, 2020 00:02

For Cindy
dusk arising said:

Nice one. Any reader of my posts will see how i share the reminiscing habit the years have ordained me with.
As is contained in your words today, like you, I am thankful to be able to look back and know I lived a bit in those days.

July 19th, 2020 12:38

For Cindy
DianeKey6 said:

Beautiful poem. Made me all gooey!

July 19th, 2020 11:06

For Cindy
AwHec8 said:

I hope I am reading this right, as it sounds like reflections on a 1st date of a long lived Love in your life.
Nice write Tayama. Don

July 19th, 2020 07:49

Come Home
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write.

July 18th, 2020 01:42

Come Home
benevolentbluebabe said:

Spectacular! A beautiful, skillfully executed sentiment...

July 17th, 2020 15:01

Merging Colors
Goldfinch60 said:

That last line is so true. Good words Tayama.

Andy

June 3rd, 2020 00:45

All that She is.
Goldfinch60 said:

That looking into each others eyes first thing in the morning is so precious, never let it stop.

Andy

June 2nd, 2020 00:52

Ten Years
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write Tayama, maybe one day you will open the door and find her standing there.

Andy

May 31st, 2020 00:21

Veil
Goldfinch60 said:

That freedom is there for you when you move on into your future times.

Andy

May 19th, 2020 00:04

What we gave.
Goldfinch60 said:

That love is always there no matter what ups and downs there may be.

Andy

February 12th, 2020 01:58

As Time Appears
Goldfinch60 said:

May you journey be filled with joy, wonder and love - always love.

August 23rd, 2019 00:34

The lies of Love.
JaydeVictoria said:

I really enjoyed this write.


July 20th, 2019 17:31

Milton Lake.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

What a moment well captured
BRAVO

July 20th, 2019 04:05

It Never Goes Away.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write.

July 17th, 2019 00:40

She has me.
Neville said:

I like these words & would very much like to see them liked more.......

Neville

July 13th, 2019 05:14

Her Grace.
Poetic Dan said:

Outstanding.

June 10th, 2019 11:48

Its her birthday.
Poetic Dan said:

Wow this is beautiful and well need as I just help a friend go through her first. It was called little light blessing, thank you again and I\'m honoured to wish Amanda a happy birthday.

Your fatherly vibration is well needed, thank you.

Much peace and respect

June 10th, 2019 11:20

Its her birthday.
Tayama said:

My baby turned 30. How becoming a father forever shows one the truth of what love is and can do.

June 10th, 2019 09:41

The Sons of the Father.
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Great write Tayama - through tragedy or triumph the family sustains and defines our innermost purpose as men.

May 14th, 2019 20:14

The Sons of the Father.
Lorna said:

This is a lovely insight into son/father that women don\'t often get to share. Thank you.

May 14th, 2019 17:34

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