Comments received on poems by Tayama
We are not in control
Fay Slimm. said:
Short and to the point this piece on t the spirit of love - I look forward to reading more of your work John.
November 28th, 2020 11:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Short and to the point this piece on t the spirit of love - I look forward to reading more of your work John.
November 28th, 2020 11:54
Love First
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes showing love instead of the list of alternatives would be a wise way of supporting its power to reform this troubled world Tayama A fine piece of advice and thanks for the needed reminder that love never fails.
November 28th, 2020 11:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes showing love instead of the list of alternatives would be a wise way of supporting its power to reform this troubled world Tayama A fine piece of advice and thanks for the needed reminder that love never fails.
November 28th, 2020 11:51
We are not in control
L. B. Mek said:
good read, direct in delivery yet still has a message that is in-itself warmly thought provoking
November 28th, 2020 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
good read, direct in delivery yet still has a message that is in-itself warmly thought provoking
November 28th, 2020 06:36
We are not in control
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so strong, it can beat everything.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so strong, it can beat everything.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:31
Winter in Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words Tayama, I am sure you will be able to start again.
Andy
November 3rd, 2020 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words Tayama, I am sure you will be able to start again.
Andy
November 3rd, 2020 02:10
See?
L. B. Mek said:
\'The drama is often a mask she says...
Give the people a chance to see their truth and then they become beautiful...
Like you and me...see?
She really makes me believe I have everything I will ever need...\'
wonderfully insightful, natural flow and tempo, great read
October 30th, 2020 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'The drama is often a mask she says...
Give the people a chance to see their truth and then they become beautiful...
Like you and me...see?
She really makes me believe I have everything I will ever need...\'
wonderfully insightful, natural flow and tempo, great read
October 30th, 2020 04:01
Tell Them
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful emotive write John, I was in that room with him as your words drew me there.
A rare thing as I put it into my favourites.
Andy
October 27th, 2020 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful emotive write John, I was in that room with him as your words drew me there.
A rare thing as I put it into my favourites.
Andy
October 27th, 2020 02:04
Waiting to Start
L. B. Mek said:
I like the feel and tone of your write, there is an element of genuine yearning to find meaning in the unmentioned nuances between your lines of introspective insight,
good write
October 19th, 2020 01:54
L. B. Mek said:
I like the feel and tone of your write, there is an element of genuine yearning to find meaning in the unmentioned nuances between your lines of introspective insight,
good write
October 19th, 2020 01:54
Choices in Time.
Goldfinch60 said:
Time comes in many guises and my time always looks to the glory of my future.
Andy
October 10th, 2020 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Time comes in many guises and my time always looks to the glory of my future.
Andy
October 10th, 2020 00:52
Years
jarcher54 said:
So bare-bones, yet so pregnant with hints, inferences, and imagined details. Witty and poignant, unique to you yet universal. Leads so many and cries when alone.. I am 66 and am solidly in that place... haven\'t has a clue in decades, but yes lucky in many ways. I enjoyed your autobiography today.
September 16th, 2020 09:26
jarcher54 said:
So bare-bones, yet so pregnant with hints, inferences, and imagined details. Witty and poignant, unique to you yet universal. Leads so many and cries when alone.. I am 66 and am solidly in that place... haven\'t has a clue in decades, but yes lucky in many ways. I enjoyed your autobiography today.
September 16th, 2020 09:26
Songs for Her
Goldfinch60 said:
May your home be full of the sound of singing forever.
Andy
August 22nd, 2020 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
May your home be full of the sound of singing forever.
Andy
August 22nd, 2020 00:19
Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
With you as his father he will mend into a stronger person.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
With you as his father he will mend into a stronger person.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 00:24
Answered
L. B. Mek said:
\'The(y) day she turned around to see who was speaking...I felt the need to stop seeking...\'
how poetic and concise
July 28th, 2020 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'The(y) day she turned around to see who was speaking...I felt the need to stop seeking...\'
how poetic and concise
July 28th, 2020 03:25
Coffee Girl
Goldfinch60 said:
May your smiles never fade.
\"I\'ll have an Americano please.\" LOL
Andy
July 21st, 2020 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
May your smiles never fade.
\"I\'ll have an Americano please.\" LOL
Andy
July 21st, 2020 00:18
For Cindy
Goldfinch60 said:
That special love found on the first date is so wonderful in our long lives.
Andy
July 20th, 2020 00:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That special love found on the first date is so wonderful in our long lives.
Andy
July 20th, 2020 00:02
For Cindy
dusk arising said:
Nice one. Any reader of my posts will see how i share the reminiscing habit the years have ordained me with.
As is contained in your words today, like you, I am thankful to be able to look back and know I lived a bit in those days.
July 19th, 2020 12:38
dusk arising said:
Nice one. Any reader of my posts will see how i share the reminiscing habit the years have ordained me with.
As is contained in your words today, like you, I am thankful to be able to look back and know I lived a bit in those days.
July 19th, 2020 12:38
For Cindy
AwHec8 said:
I hope I am reading this right, as it sounds like reflections on a 1st date of a long lived Love in your life.
Nice write Tayama. Don
July 19th, 2020 07:49
AwHec8 said:
I hope I am reading this right, as it sounds like reflections on a 1st date of a long lived Love in your life.
Nice write Tayama. Don
July 19th, 2020 07:49
Come Home
benevolentbluebabe said:
Spectacular! A beautiful, skillfully executed sentiment...
July 17th, 2020 15:01
benevolentbluebabe said:
Spectacular! A beautiful, skillfully executed sentiment...
July 17th, 2020 15:01
Merging Colors
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so true. Good words Tayama.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so true. Good words Tayama.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:45
All that She is.
Goldfinch60 said:
That looking into each others eyes first thing in the morning is so precious, never let it stop.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That looking into each others eyes first thing in the morning is so precious, never let it stop.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:52
Ten Years
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Tayama, maybe one day you will open the door and find her standing there.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Tayama, maybe one day you will open the door and find her standing there.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:21
Veil
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is there for you when you move on into your future times.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is there for you when you move on into your future times.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 00:04
What we gave.
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is always there no matter what ups and downs there may be.
Andy
February 12th, 2020 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is always there no matter what ups and downs there may be.
Andy
February 12th, 2020 01:58
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