Comments received on poems by markziff
First Kiss
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad you found this document marziff, wonderful words showing the deepness of your love.
Andy
February 5th, 2020 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad you found this document marziff, wonderful words showing the deepness of your love.
Andy
February 5th, 2020 02:00
Thoughts & Dreams
smallest_stars said:
You can really feel the emptiness by the last stanza. Good job evoking such emotion.
- Charlotte
February 4th, 2020 16:24
smallest_stars said:
You can really feel the emptiness by the last stanza. Good job evoking such emotion.
- Charlotte
February 4th, 2020 16:24
Memoir\'s Fade
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write. I do hope that you will not rest for long and we will see your words again soon.
Andy
February 4th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write. I do hope that you will not rest for long and we will see your words again soon.
Andy
February 4th, 2020 01:47
Memoir\'s Fade
markziff said:
Feels like I will rest my writing for a little now. 😔
February 3rd, 2020 14:34
markziff said:
Feels like I will rest my writing for a little now. 😔
February 3rd, 2020 14:34
Thoughts & Dreams
dusk arising said:
Your prowess shines from this piece. A beautifully crafted emotional cry which will readily touch the heartaches of many.
February 2nd, 2020 08:25
dusk arising said:
Your prowess shines from this piece. A beautifully crafted emotional cry which will readily touch the heartaches of many.
February 2nd, 2020 08:25
Knew, Felt, Know.
kevin browne said:
Tears flow from every direction in which love can spread so dangerously quick that the puddle of those tears will fill forever more if you allow them to. Don\'t drown yourself in sorrow filled with an ever lasting sting that never heals. An intriguing, yet a despair to be loved...
February 1st, 2020 01:23
kevin browne said:
Tears flow from every direction in which love can spread so dangerously quick that the puddle of those tears will fill forever more if you allow them to. Don\'t drown yourself in sorrow filled with an ever lasting sting that never heals. An intriguing, yet a despair to be loved...
February 1st, 2020 01:23
Should I?
Delilah said:
this is so beautiful. Lovely words and I loved how you structured each sentence.
January 30th, 2020 22:57
Delilah said:
this is so beautiful. Lovely words and I loved how you structured each sentence.
January 30th, 2020 22:57
Should I?
dusk arising said:
I was confused by the line in which you \"long for our lips again to meet\" which to me speaks of a failed love affair/relationship you cannot let go of. Whereas i see others have interpreted your piece as if written about a soul you have not yet declared your feelings to.
Nonetheless, well written, fluent and enjoyable.
January 30th, 2020 06:38
dusk arising said:
I was confused by the line in which you \"long for our lips again to meet\" which to me speaks of a failed love affair/relationship you cannot let go of. Whereas i see others have interpreted your piece as if written about a soul you have not yet declared your feelings to.
Nonetheless, well written, fluent and enjoyable.
January 30th, 2020 06:38
Should I?
Adam Shirley said:
Beautifully written poem Mark, the second stanza\'s structure is genius. Enjoyed reading your work.
January 30th, 2020 01:14
Adam Shirley said:
Beautifully written poem Mark, the second stanza\'s structure is genius. Enjoyed reading your work.
January 30th, 2020 01:14
Should I?
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
The frustrations of having \" strong \" feelings for someone .... Them on your mind , ... Hard to not want to tell someone how we feel , when we are so wrapped up in thoughts of them ...a lovely poem here ... Nice words
January 30th, 2020 01:02
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
The frustrations of having \" strong \" feelings for someone .... Them on your mind , ... Hard to not want to tell someone how we feel , when we are so wrapped up in thoughts of them ...a lovely poem here ... Nice words
January 30th, 2020 01:02
My Everything
Fay Slimm. said:
A scent of love\'s death with romance sadly lost in these words of past tense - so appealingly written Mark.
January 29th, 2020 17:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A scent of love\'s death with romance sadly lost in these words of past tense - so appealingly written Mark.
January 29th, 2020 17:35
Raining Tears
markziff said:
I do to, but hope more, it why your soulmate kiss, was so perfect.
January 27th, 2020 10:11
markziff said:
I do to, but hope more, it why your soulmate kiss, was so perfect.
January 27th, 2020 10:11
I Cannot Help
Barry Hodges said:
I think \"cannot\" might be better than \"can not\", but it\'s your poem, not mine.
January 26th, 2020 14:13
Barry Hodges said:
I think \"cannot\" might be better than \"can not\", but it\'s your poem, not mine.
January 26th, 2020 14:13
Be As One
PhilPoet said:
such a powerful, emotional regret and wish - in so few words.
Wish you the best.
January 21st, 2020 11:37
PhilPoet said:
such a powerful, emotional regret and wish - in so few words.
Wish you the best.
January 21st, 2020 11:37
I Wish
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write. Time cannot be turned back but what you can do is remember the happy times and maybe move on into a new life.
Welcome to MPS.
January 21st, 2020 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write. Time cannot be turned back but what you can do is remember the happy times and maybe move on into a new life.
Welcome to MPS.
January 21st, 2020 01:20
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