Comments received on poems by markziff
Come See What I Offer
Cassie58 said:
Nothing ventured nothing gained. A journey of discovery awaits. Nicely penned lines here.
January 12th, 2024 06:33
Cassie58 said:
Nothing ventured nothing gained. A journey of discovery awaits. Nicely penned lines here.
January 12th, 2024 06:33
For the One I Loved
Cassie58 said:
Painful to read of a heart filled with regret and also of a departed love. Touching words here markziff.
January 9th, 2024 07:57
Cassie58 said:
Painful to read of a heart filled with regret and also of a departed love. Touching words here markziff.
January 9th, 2024 07:57
How I Hate Myself
Eileen Clark said:
Hello, this is a great poem, strong words filled with passion, I enjoyed reading it and you kept my attencion right to the end.
January 6th, 2024 19:12
Eileen Clark said:
Hello, this is a great poem, strong words filled with passion, I enjoyed reading it and you kept my attencion right to the end.
January 6th, 2024 19:12
A Journey
Cassie58 said:
When a pathway for two becomes a journey for one, it can be both lonely and painful. Faltering steps tell a sad story here.
January 4th, 2024 07:15
Cassie58 said:
When a pathway for two becomes a journey for one, it can be both lonely and painful. Faltering steps tell a sad story here.
January 4th, 2024 07:15
For Stupid Me
Cassie58 said:
A hand held out, isn’t always one that will solve our problems. I think your heart is telling you something here. I do not see stupid anywhere in this poem. I enjoyed the read.
January 1st, 2024 20:55
Cassie58 said:
A hand held out, isn’t always one that will solve our problems. I think your heart is telling you something here. I do not see stupid anywhere in this poem. I enjoyed the read.
January 1st, 2024 20:55
Unwanted
Cassie58 said:
Emotion conveyed well here. Partings are sorrowful, but to part wishing the best for the other is such a loving and considerate thing to do. A fine poem. Thank you.
December 20th, 2023 12:49
Cassie58 said:
Emotion conveyed well here. Partings are sorrowful, but to part wishing the best for the other is such a loving and considerate thing to do. A fine poem. Thank you.
December 20th, 2023 12:49
I Can\'t, I Can
Tiffany_Arnold said:
This is amazing, I feel like that sometimes too!
November 20th, 2023 12:45
Tiffany_Arnold said:
This is amazing, I feel like that sometimes too!
November 20th, 2023 12:45
Would I Be Happy
markziff said:
Your welcome. I just don\'t think the person it\'s written for feels the same way. 🥺
November 19th, 2023 00:19
markziff said:
Your welcome. I just don\'t think the person it\'s written for feels the same way. 🥺
November 19th, 2023 00:19
Would I Be Happy
David A Liebermann said:
Such a beautiful poem. Thank you.
November 19th, 2023 00:08
David A Liebermann said:
Such a beautiful poem. Thank you.
November 19th, 2023 00:08
Still After All This Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I am there.
Andy
April 30th, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I am there.
Andy
April 30th, 2020 00:25
My Ever Growing Line.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that line strengthen as time flows.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 05:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May that line strengthen as time flows.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 05:11
Alas not
markziff said:
I know I think most of us have gone through having a grasping heart sometimes. We live in hope, till you find the one, or throw the towel in.
March 13th, 2020 05:02
markziff said:
I know I think most of us have gone through having a grasping heart sometimes. We live in hope, till you find the one, or throw the towel in.
March 13th, 2020 05:02
Alas not
dusk arising said:
You\'re better off with the inflateable type. At least you can put them in a drawer when they piss you off.
I\'ve lived the sentiment behind your words. When someone is so right but so wrong and you challenge the need within you with the reasoning of your brain........
March 12th, 2020 16:27
dusk arising said:
You\'re better off with the inflateable type. At least you can put them in a drawer when they piss you off.
I\'ve lived the sentiment behind your words. When someone is so right but so wrong and you challenge the need within you with the reasoning of your brain........
March 12th, 2020 16:27
You Stole my breath.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn write markziff.
Andy
February 27th, 2020 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn write markziff.
Andy
February 27th, 2020 01:39
You Stole my breath.
dusk arising said:
And then she buggered off with the milkman?
I wish relationships were the way you describe in your poem. Sadly it all changes.
February 26th, 2020 07:09
dusk arising said:
And then she buggered off with the milkman?
I wish relationships were the way you describe in your poem. Sadly it all changes.
February 26th, 2020 07:09
For my one
dusk arising said:
How many times
must we taste
and try
the fruits of
the love tree
before we find
perfect sweetness
Your words made me think of this thing i published last year
February 18th, 2020 04:00
dusk arising said:
How many times
must we taste
and try
the fruits of
the love tree
before we find
perfect sweetness
Your words made me think of this thing i published last year
February 18th, 2020 04:00
For my one
Goldfinch60 said:
That one is yours to find
She will be there evermore
That one is yours to find
And will love you more and more
Andy
February 18th, 2020 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That one is yours to find
She will be there evermore
That one is yours to find
And will love you more and more
Andy
February 18th, 2020 02:20
Everything I Have
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth be forever with you.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:12
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth be forever with you.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:12
Will, Is, Was
markziff said:
I know, this was much longer than my normal, wanted to explore the change from stage to stage.
February 9th, 2020 07:18
markziff said:
I know, this was much longer than my normal, wanted to explore the change from stage to stage.
February 9th, 2020 07:18
Will, Is, Was
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you Marziff.
Andy
February 9th, 2020 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you Marziff.
Andy
February 9th, 2020 01:46
Lost
markziff said:
I will, I just felt a need to some up how I felt before, the after, where I felt we were good & happy, them never saw it till she was gone.
February 7th, 2020 03:45
markziff said:
I will, I just felt a need to some up how I felt before, the after, where I felt we were good & happy, them never saw it till she was gone.
February 7th, 2020 03:45
Oblivion\'s Passion.
Goldfinch60 said:
May the fulfilment of your words keep on filling us with the glory that they tell.
Andy
February 6th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
May the fulfilment of your words keep on filling us with the glory that they tell.
Andy
February 6th, 2020 01:45
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