Comments received on poems by markziff
For I Am Stupid Me
L. B. Mek said:
not so stupid, in my humble estimation
if you have the capacity to pen
such an insightful work of self-commentary..
(when we can recognize our limitations
we place ourselves
within-reach of opportunity
to realise, those possibility\'s
we\'re usually far - to self-involved: to see...)
thanks for sharing
July 12th, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
not so stupid, in my humble estimation
if you have the capacity to pen
such an insightful work of self-commentary..
(when we can recognize our limitations
we place ourselves
within-reach of opportunity
to realise, those possibility\'s
we\'re usually far - to self-involved: to see...)
thanks for sharing
July 12th, 2021 05:03
A Journey....never
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words markziff, we all reach an end in this life but must keep going on.
Andy
February 26th, 2021 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words markziff, we all reach an end in this life but must keep going on.
Andy
February 26th, 2021 02:04
A Journey....never
dusk arising said:
A tale of life. We strive for contentment. Along the way contentment fails us, or we fail it.
February 26th, 2021 01:42
dusk arising said:
A tale of life. We strive for contentment. Along the way contentment fails us, or we fail it.
February 26th, 2021 01:42
Come Explore
Goldfinch60 said:
That undiscovered land will be filled with wonder.
Andy
October 14th, 2020 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That undiscovered land will be filled with wonder.
Andy
October 14th, 2020 23:57
Would to Change
Goldfinch60 said:
The answer is obviously yes to each stanza.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
The answer is obviously yes to each stanza.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 00:04
Would to Change
myself and me said:
Yes. What else you could ask for in your life that will be better thank this.
Lovely.
May 11th, 2020 21:06
myself and me said:
Yes. What else you could ask for in your life that will be better thank this.
Lovely.
May 11th, 2020 21:06
Still After All This Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I am there.
Andy
April 30th, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I am there.
Andy
April 30th, 2020 00:25
My Ever Growing Line.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that line strengthen as time flows.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 05:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May that line strengthen as time flows.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 05:11
Alas not
markziff said:
I know I think most of us have gone through having a grasping heart sometimes. We live in hope, till you find the one, or throw the towel in.
March 13th, 2020 05:02
markziff said:
I know I think most of us have gone through having a grasping heart sometimes. We live in hope, till you find the one, or throw the towel in.
March 13th, 2020 05:02
Alas not
dusk arising said:
You\'re better off with the inflateable type. At least you can put them in a drawer when they piss you off.
I\'ve lived the sentiment behind your words. When someone is so right but so wrong and you challenge the need within you with the reasoning of your brain........
March 12th, 2020 16:27
dusk arising said:
You\'re better off with the inflateable type. At least you can put them in a drawer when they piss you off.
I\'ve lived the sentiment behind your words. When someone is so right but so wrong and you challenge the need within you with the reasoning of your brain........
March 12th, 2020 16:27
You Stole my breath.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn write markziff.
Andy
February 27th, 2020 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn write markziff.
Andy
February 27th, 2020 01:39
You Stole my breath.
dusk arising said:
And then she buggered off with the milkman?
I wish relationships were the way you describe in your poem. Sadly it all changes.
February 26th, 2020 07:09
dusk arising said:
And then she buggered off with the milkman?
I wish relationships were the way you describe in your poem. Sadly it all changes.
February 26th, 2020 07:09
For my one
dusk arising said:
How many times
must we taste
and try
the fruits of
the love tree
before we find
perfect sweetness
Your words made me think of this thing i published last year
February 18th, 2020 04:00
dusk arising said:
How many times
must we taste
and try
the fruits of
the love tree
before we find
perfect sweetness
Your words made me think of this thing i published last year
February 18th, 2020 04:00
For my one
Goldfinch60 said:
That one is yours to find
She will be there evermore
That one is yours to find
And will love you more and more
Andy
February 18th, 2020 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That one is yours to find
She will be there evermore
That one is yours to find
And will love you more and more
Andy
February 18th, 2020 02:20
Everything I Have
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth be forever with you.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:12
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth be forever with you.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:12
Will, Is, Was
markziff said:
I know, this was much longer than my normal, wanted to explore the change from stage to stage.
February 9th, 2020 07:18
markziff said:
I know, this was much longer than my normal, wanted to explore the change from stage to stage.
February 9th, 2020 07:18
Will, Is, Was
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you Marziff.
Andy
February 9th, 2020 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you Marziff.
Andy
February 9th, 2020 01:46
Lost
markziff said:
I will, I just felt a need to some up how I felt before, the after, where I felt we were good & happy, them never saw it till she was gone.
February 7th, 2020 03:45
markziff said:
I will, I just felt a need to some up how I felt before, the after, where I felt we were good & happy, them never saw it till she was gone.
February 7th, 2020 03:45
Oblivion\'s Passion.
Goldfinch60 said:
May the fulfilment of your words keep on filling us with the glory that they tell.
Andy
February 6th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
May the fulfilment of your words keep on filling us with the glory that they tell.
Andy
February 6th, 2020 01:45
First Kiss
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad you found this document marziff, wonderful words showing the deepness of your love.
Andy
February 5th, 2020 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad you found this document marziff, wonderful words showing the deepness of your love.
Andy
February 5th, 2020 02:00
Thoughts & Dreams
smallest_stars said:
You can really feel the emptiness by the last stanza. Good job evoking such emotion.
- Charlotte
February 4th, 2020 16:24
smallest_stars said:
You can really feel the emptiness by the last stanza. Good job evoking such emotion.
- Charlotte
February 4th, 2020 16:24
Memoir\'s Fade
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write. I do hope that you will not rest for long and we will see your words again soon.
Andy
February 4th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write. I do hope that you will not rest for long and we will see your words again soon.
Andy
February 4th, 2020 01:47
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