Comments received on poems by Brimelow
Fate\'s Sonnet
L. B. Mek said:
a really good write, imagery in that second stanza is so impactful,
well executed in tone as well as flow, thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
a really good write, imagery in that second stanza is so impactful,
well executed in tone as well as flow, thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:27
Fate\'s Sonnet
yellowrose said:
Interesting words . I enjoyed this . Nicely expressed
February 23rd, 2021 03:07
yellowrose said:
Interesting words . I enjoyed this . Nicely expressed
February 23rd, 2021 03:07
Tock. Tick.
Gavin said:
That is a thought provoking poem, Brimelow.
I might be reading into it with my own perspective.
I see it as an individual not fitting into the collective. So symphony is found by breaking free from being orchestrated.
By no longer keeping time were not controlled by the past.
Am I anywhere near to your intention?
July 2nd, 2020 01:35
Gavin said:
That is a thought provoking poem, Brimelow.
I might be reading into it with my own perspective.
I see it as an individual not fitting into the collective. So symphony is found by breaking free from being orchestrated.
By no longer keeping time were not controlled by the past.
Am I anywhere near to your intention?
July 2nd, 2020 01:35
Raft
dusk arising said:
Having read you 2nd poem on MPS and thoroughly enjoyed it i delved deeper..... and wasn\'t disappointed. This piece is even better ... full of positivity.
I\'m going to put it among my favourites of poems posted on MPS.
Keep posting your stuff.
June 28th, 2020 04:32
dusk arising said:
Having read you 2nd poem on MPS and thoroughly enjoyed it i delved deeper..... and wasn\'t disappointed. This piece is even better ... full of positivity.
I\'m going to put it among my favourites of poems posted on MPS.
Keep posting your stuff.
June 28th, 2020 04:32
Bee
dusk arising said:
The liveliness of this piece is enthralling. There is joy of love and life itself in here although the target love may be unrequited. Such is love when there is plenty of time ahead, plenty more apples upon the tree.
Really enjoyed this.
June 28th, 2020 04:28
dusk arising said:
The liveliness of this piece is enthralling. There is joy of love and life itself in here although the target love may be unrequited. Such is love when there is plenty of time ahead, plenty more apples upon the tree.
Really enjoyed this.
June 28th, 2020 04:28
Bee
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sounds like a future regret o the question never asked?
Don\'t have regrets in old age... go for it
Thanks for sharing great emotion
June 28th, 2020 03:47
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sounds like a future regret o the question never asked?
Don\'t have regrets in old age... go for it
Thanks for sharing great emotion
June 28th, 2020 03:47