Comments received on poems by Brimelow
Downstream
L. B. Mek said:
\'in the dreams of our flowing limbs
until our limbs rest
in our pouring death
in the reeds of our saturated rest
I would be glad to flow with you in the river of romance
so let’s take a chance
let’s make a chance and float
let’s join our arms and make a boat\'..
from limbs of dreams to actualised: arms of a boat
what a poetic treat and dedication,
thank you for choosing to share, dear Poet
June 25th, 2021 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'in the dreams of our flowing limbs
until our limbs rest
in our pouring death
in the reeds of our saturated rest
I would be glad to flow with you in the river of romance
so let’s take a chance
let’s make a chance and float
let’s join our arms and make a boat\'..
from limbs of dreams to actualised: arms of a boat
what a poetic treat and dedication,
thank you for choosing to share, dear Poet
June 25th, 2021 05:30
Pool
L. B. Mek said:
\'Queues become scans.
Coins become lockers,
that lead into the pleasing quiverings,
of shivering deliverance.
A kick then three strokes, into a breath,
over and over,
continuously…
until the end of my allotted hour.\'
immersive, truly
and worded wonderfully instinctive
in poetic \'feel\': a masterful skill..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 11th, 2021 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'Queues become scans.
Coins become lockers,
that lead into the pleasing quiverings,
of shivering deliverance.
A kick then three strokes, into a breath,
over and over,
continuously…
until the end of my allotted hour.\'
immersive, truly
and worded wonderfully instinctive
in poetic \'feel\': a masterful skill..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 11th, 2021 04:35
Pool
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem . I like your choice of words 🙂
June 11th, 2021 00:55
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem . I like your choice of words 🙂
June 11th, 2021 00:55
Pool
Goldfinch60 said:
I am just reading a book where the main character uses swimming to achieve that peace within them as you do Brimelow.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
I am just reading a book where the main character uses swimming to achieve that peace within them as you do Brimelow.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:29
Rumi
L. B. Mek said:
a brilliant dedication
reminiscent of the Guru\'s own mastery
where \'In the waters of Purity\'
he too, so eloquently exemplifying
the universality
in our shared lack of belief (at times)
without, that tangible merit of proof
which itself, changes shades of truth
with the clarity of wisdom we\'ve accumulated
or the angle of the Sun, we choose to Feel
on any give day...
(\'in the waters of purity\' by Jalaluddin Rumi
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-24377 )
June 3rd, 2021 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
a brilliant dedication
reminiscent of the Guru\'s own mastery
where \'In the waters of Purity\'
he too, so eloquently exemplifying
the universality
in our shared lack of belief (at times)
without, that tangible merit of proof
which itself, changes shades of truth
with the clarity of wisdom we\'ve accumulated
or the angle of the Sun, we choose to Feel
on any give day...
(\'in the waters of purity\' by Jalaluddin Rumi
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-24377 )
June 3rd, 2021 04:48
Rumi
Goldfinch60 said:
I have read much of Rumi\'s work and to me his words make so much sense.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
I have read much of Rumi\'s work and to me his words make so much sense.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:35
Mental Health
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful acrostic here Brimelow.
You paint strong powerful imagery, that is so apt; for the subject matter.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
May 27th, 2021 07:10
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful acrostic here Brimelow.
You paint strong powerful imagery, that is so apt; for the subject matter.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
May 27th, 2021 07:10
Mental Health
L. B. Mek said:
\'Hark for a moment
to the withering wind
etching today
(*while)
aching away\'..
wonderful imagery
thanks for sharing
May 27th, 2021 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'Hark for a moment
to the withering wind
etching today
(*while)
aching away\'..
wonderful imagery
thanks for sharing
May 27th, 2021 04:32
Rainbow
L. B. Mek said:
\'It is an elegant projection of rain
in anticipation of a sunny day
It is the emphatic rejection
of windows that weigh\'..
I always look forward to the elegantly well-groomed poetry
you choose to share
I adore the time and dedication that\'s so effortlessly evident
in your poetry,
I can only imagine how satisfying it must be
to not only have the talent, but most crucially
the drive, to strive: to perfect your Art!
than you for sharing, dear poet
Brilliant!
May 25th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'It is an elegant projection of rain
in anticipation of a sunny day
It is the emphatic rejection
of windows that weigh\'..
I always look forward to the elegantly well-groomed poetry
you choose to share
I adore the time and dedication that\'s so effortlessly evident
in your poetry,
I can only imagine how satisfying it must be
to not only have the talent, but most crucially
the drive, to strive: to perfect your Art!
than you for sharing, dear poet
Brilliant!
May 25th, 2021 05:00
Rainbow
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting words , I liked reading this 🙂
May 24th, 2021 14:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting words , I liked reading this 🙂
May 24th, 2021 14:15
Sacrifice
L. B. Mek said:
reminiscent of ed sheeran\'s \'small bump\' song, for me
not in content only, but feel and flow
not sure of the context so I\'m sorry if I\'m way off with my interpretation..
a good read, thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
reminiscent of ed sheeran\'s \'small bump\' song, for me
not in content only, but feel and flow
not sure of the context so I\'m sorry if I\'m way off with my interpretation..
a good read, thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2021 06:08
Bee
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really liking this poem ! 🙂 great feel to this . Your words are engaging , and lovely to read
April 12th, 2021 01:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really liking this poem ! 🙂 great feel to this . Your words are engaging , and lovely to read
April 12th, 2021 01:18
Energy
Goldfinch60 said:
WE all have that energy to comprehend your words and in our lives words are so important.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
WE all have that energy to comprehend your words and in our lives words are so important.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:19
Energy
Doggerel Dave said:
Its structure and terminology - I really got into this.
Alas - \'The whole is more than.........\' or something......
April 9th, 2021 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Its structure and terminology - I really got into this.
Alas - \'The whole is more than.........\' or something......
April 9th, 2021 19:09
Lightning
L. B. Mek said:
crazy how quickly relationships can electrify us, one day
and leave us hollow and charred, the next..
a good write, brevity exemplified perfectly in my humble opinion
April 8th, 2021 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
crazy how quickly relationships can electrify us, one day
and leave us hollow and charred, the next..
a good write, brevity exemplified perfectly in my humble opinion
April 8th, 2021 04:33
Lightning
Goldfinch60 said:
That illumination in our lives can be so spectacular.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That illumination in our lives can be so spectacular.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:52
Obligations of Being
L. B. Mek said:
\'We spend all this ink to buy all these feelings
but never find meaning
in the obligations of being\'..
a great read, that first half of your poem before the \'Like\' stanzas began, is just brilliant
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 2nd, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'We spend all this ink to buy all these feelings
but never find meaning
in the obligations of being\'..
a great read, that first half of your poem before the \'Like\' stanzas began, is just brilliant
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 2nd, 2021 05:06
Obligations of Being
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write and so very true Brimelow.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write and so very true Brimelow.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:22
Obligations of Being
Doggerel Dave said:
Surprise!
One of the funniest things I\'ve read here for a while - Should be more of it. Many thanks.
I would be remiss if I didn\'t mention that I enjoyed the structure also.
April 1st, 2021 19:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Surprise!
One of the funniest things I\'ve read here for a while - Should be more of it. Many thanks.
I would be remiss if I didn\'t mention that I enjoyed the structure also.
April 1st, 2021 19:54
Obligations of Being
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very engaging poem 🙂 really liking this . The dull can be made beautiful ... with words .
April 1st, 2021 15:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very engaging poem 🙂 really liking this . The dull can be made beautiful ... with words .
April 1st, 2021 15:49
Free
Fay Slimm. said:
Your positive words at the end of this enjoyable read show the right way to look at life all around us Brim - keep loving your inner self and so finding freedom .
April 1st, 2021 02:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Your positive words at the end of this enjoyable read show the right way to look at life all around us Brim - keep loving your inner self and so finding freedom .
April 1st, 2021 02:04
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