Comments received on poems by Brimelow
Fat Gus
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
\'grabbed me by the eyeballs\' (so to speak), lol
more importantly, a write that delivers on such a promising start is such an impressive demonstration of your poetic talent, in my humble opinion
March 30th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
\'grabbed me by the eyeballs\' (so to speak), lol
more importantly, a write that delivers on such a promising start is such an impressive demonstration of your poetic talent, in my humble opinion
March 30th, 2021 05:49
Plant
Goldfinch60 said:
It is surprising how these little acts of kindness can improve our lives.
Andy
March 27th, 2021 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
It is surprising how these little acts of kindness can improve our lives.
Andy
March 27th, 2021 01:33
Control
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting engaging read
March 25th, 2021 15:52
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting engaging read
March 25th, 2021 15:52
Mind\'s Ablaze
L. B. Mek said:
if anyone in the teaching profession ever needs a mantra to recover any loss of meaning
or find themselves questioning the value in their costly endeavours
during those moonless nights where our life choices, come out to test
then these words you\'ve penned
should be read and meditated upon
and soon, that dying amber of ambition:
will find itself flamed by those winds of hope
once again...
Brilliant!
March 25th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
if anyone in the teaching profession ever needs a mantra to recover any loss of meaning
or find themselves questioning the value in their costly endeavours
during those moonless nights where our life choices, come out to test
then these words you\'ve penned
should be read and meditated upon
and soon, that dying amber of ambition:
will find itself flamed by those winds of hope
once again...
Brilliant!
March 25th, 2021 04:17
Tide
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Such a fun and lovely poem !🙂🙂 I love your choice of words !
March 21st, 2021 03:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Such a fun and lovely poem !🙂🙂 I love your choice of words !
March 21st, 2021 03:15
The Invisible Mask
Goldfinch60 said:
As Fred has said we all wear masks in differing situations but only to those we truly love is the mask removed.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
As Fred has said we all wear masks in differing situations but only to those we truly love is the mask removed.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:37
The Invisible Mask
FredPeyer said:
Brimelow, we all wear masks all the time in order to seem to be the person the other people expect.
March 20th, 2021 21:39
FredPeyer said:
Brimelow, we all wear masks all the time in order to seem to be the person the other people expect.
March 20th, 2021 21:39
Drawer of Socks
L. B. Mek said:
a war cry to that unbreaking spirit of self preservation,
in our washing machine turmoil of life, we may be forced to bend for stretches at-a-time,
but: for us to never surrender, need only take a few colourful displays of wilful socks choices..
a great write dear poet!
March 19th, 2021 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
a war cry to that unbreaking spirit of self preservation,
in our washing machine turmoil of life, we may be forced to bend for stretches at-a-time,
but: for us to never surrender, need only take a few colourful displays of wilful socks choices..
a great write dear poet!
March 19th, 2021 05:02
Drawer of Socks
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Brimelow. Since retiring I always wear odd socks the more garish the better.
Andy
March 19th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Brimelow. Since retiring I always wear odd socks the more garish the better.
Andy
March 19th, 2021 01:38
Drawer of Socks
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes I’ll pay that one – it is gently witty with an ironical view of a younger self, bought up to date with a slightly absurd twist – socks…really? What about the rest of your attire?
Since we are all products of our past experience, a strange employment relationship reported in the comments thread would seem to have had a rather significant influence on you.
Good fun.
March 18th, 2021 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes I’ll pay that one – it is gently witty with an ironical view of a younger self, bought up to date with a slightly absurd twist – socks…really? What about the rest of your attire?
Since we are all products of our past experience, a strange employment relationship reported in the comments thread would seem to have had a rather significant influence on you.
Good fun.
March 18th, 2021 19:49
Drawer of Socks
mrbleasdale said:
Love this poem and the trip it takes you on and the thiught it provokes
March 18th, 2021 18:01
mrbleasdale said:
Love this poem and the trip it takes you on and the thiught it provokes
March 18th, 2021 18:01
Bird on my roof
Olivia. said:
Sitting in the garden recently is so beautiful spring is coming and the birds song is magical x
March 18th, 2021 17:58
Olivia. said:
Sitting in the garden recently is so beautiful spring is coming and the birds song is magical x
March 18th, 2021 17:58
Drawer of Socks
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging poem 🙂 I especially like the last verse . Good poem , I liked reading . I’m assuming the colour of socks has changed to something colourful ? Hence the term rainbow ?
March 18th, 2021 17:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging poem 🙂 I especially like the last verse . Good poem , I liked reading . I’m assuming the colour of socks has changed to something colourful ? Hence the term rainbow ?
March 18th, 2021 17:05
Bird on my roof
Goldfinch60 said:
It is good to be with the birds, may your flight be full of joy as are your words Brimelow.
Andy
March 17th, 2021 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
It is good to be with the birds, may your flight be full of joy as are your words Brimelow.
Andy
March 17th, 2021 01:29
Tock. Tick.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your style of writing ! Very engaging read 🙂 I liked your words and flow
March 16th, 2021 15:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your style of writing ! Very engaging read 🙂 I liked your words and flow
March 16th, 2021 15:05
Bird on my roof
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words 🙂 enjoyed reading this
March 16th, 2021 15:02
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words 🙂 enjoyed reading this
March 16th, 2021 15:02
Harvest
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded,
such a buoyant write, makes me look out of my window anticipating Spring and simply, take a minute
to think
a rare and wonderful: gift
March 12th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded,
such a buoyant write, makes me look out of my window anticipating Spring and simply, take a minute
to think
a rare and wonderful: gift
March 12th, 2021 05:57
Harvest
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem . I especially like these the third verse . I like your choice of words ...
March 11th, 2021 17:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem . I especially like these the third verse . I like your choice of words ...
March 11th, 2021 17:25
Lady of the Fates
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your ambition to write in epic form, you exemplify some Tennyson traits as well I think, quite an achievement..
what a great read you\'ve shared, thank you!
March 8th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your ambition to write in epic form, you exemplify some Tennyson traits as well I think, quite an achievement..
what a great read you\'ve shared, thank you!
March 8th, 2021 04:55
Lady of the Fates
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very expressive , and an engaging read . I like your Choice of words . It’s hard to walk through days feeling like it’s a struggle , not nice at all
March 7th, 2021 07:31
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very expressive , and an engaging read . I like your Choice of words . It’s hard to walk through days feeling like it’s a struggle , not nice at all
March 7th, 2021 07:31
Volcano
dusk arising said:
Super imagery! Love the idea of giving a volcano a personality.
The greenery always recovers and takes over. The greenery taking over when man refrains from cutting it back was my main theme in photography and to see it recounted here is refreshing. You\'re inspiring me. LOL
I enjoyed reading this piece.
March 5th, 2021 22:05
dusk arising said:
Super imagery! Love the idea of giving a volcano a personality.
The greenery always recovers and takes over. The greenery taking over when man refrains from cutting it back was my main theme in photography and to see it recounted here is refreshing. You\'re inspiring me. LOL
I enjoyed reading this piece.
March 5th, 2021 22:05
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