Comments received on poems by Brimelow
Lady of the Fates
Caring dove said:
Very expressive , and an engaging read . I like your Choice of words . It’s hard to walk through days feeling like it’s a struggle , not nice at all
March 7th, 2021 07:31
Caring dove said:
Very expressive , and an engaging read . I like your Choice of words . It’s hard to walk through days feeling like it’s a struggle , not nice at all
March 7th, 2021 07:31
Volcano
dusk arising said:
Super imagery! Love the idea of giving a volcano a personality.
The greenery always recovers and takes over. The greenery taking over when man refrains from cutting it back was my main theme in photography and to see it recounted here is refreshing. You\'re inspiring me. LOL
I enjoyed reading this piece.
March 5th, 2021 22:05
dusk arising said:
Super imagery! Love the idea of giving a volcano a personality.
The greenery always recovers and takes over. The greenery taking over when man refrains from cutting it back was my main theme in photography and to see it recounted here is refreshing. You\'re inspiring me. LOL
I enjoyed reading this piece.
March 5th, 2021 22:05
Bungalow
Brimelow said:
Thank you for the lovely comments everybody! Sometimes it takes me literal days to write something, but this was a rare occasion where it just burst out in 5 minutes - probably because the subject matter has been in my head for years and just needed the right time to spill out.
March 5th, 2021 21:06
Brimelow said:
Thank you for the lovely comments everybody! Sometimes it takes me literal days to write something, but this was a rare occasion where it just burst out in 5 minutes - probably because the subject matter has been in my head for years and just needed the right time to spill out.
March 5th, 2021 21:06
Bungalow
Eugene S. said:
I\'m smiling right now. One of the most awesome poems I\'ve read!
March 5th, 2021 19:24
Eugene S. said:
I\'m smiling right now. One of the most awesome poems I\'ve read!
March 5th, 2021 19:24
Bungalow
Olivia. said:
“I lived in a bungalow when I was 23.
I loved that house,
five strides to the bathroom from bed,
nine strides to the kettle.
I wanted to live there forever”
I connect to this so much! I myself can similarly vision running up the stairs of my childhood home. It’s Ingrained in my mind forever.
March 5th, 2021 09:22
Olivia. said:
“I lived in a bungalow when I was 23.
I loved that house,
five strides to the bathroom from bed,
nine strides to the kettle.
I wanted to live there forever”
I connect to this so much! I myself can similarly vision running up the stairs of my childhood home. It’s Ingrained in my mind forever.
March 5th, 2021 09:22
Bungalow
dusk arising said:
Classic. Excellent imagery. Contains well the frustration of loss and contemplation of reminiscence.
That opening verse resounded within me. Brought forth the realisation of my own motivation. Therefore it belongs in my favourites.
March 5th, 2021 08:43
dusk arising said:
Classic. Excellent imagery. Contains well the frustration of loss and contemplation of reminiscence.
That opening verse resounded within me. Brought forth the realisation of my own motivation. Therefore it belongs in my favourites.
March 5th, 2021 08:43
Bungalow
L. B. Mek said:
\'Why do I invest so much of my time representing you with imagery?
What does that tell myself about me?\'..
Brilliant!
March 5th, 2021 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'Why do I invest so much of my time representing you with imagery?
What does that tell myself about me?\'..
Brilliant!
March 5th, 2021 04:32
Tide
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that person may be back forever and you will be \"surfing and dashing and leaping and splashing\" together all the time.
Andy
March 3rd, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that person may be back forever and you will be \"surfing and dashing and leaping and splashing\" together all the time.
Andy
March 3rd, 2021 01:38
Fate\'s Sonnet
L. B. Mek said:
a really good write, imagery in that second stanza is so impactful,
well executed in tone as well as flow, thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
a really good write, imagery in that second stanza is so impactful,
well executed in tone as well as flow, thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:27
Fate\'s Sonnet
Caring dove said:
Interesting words . I enjoyed this . Nicely expressed
February 23rd, 2021 03:07
Caring dove said:
Interesting words . I enjoyed this . Nicely expressed
February 23rd, 2021 03:07
Tock. Tick.
Gavin said:
That is a thought provoking poem, Brimelow.
I might be reading into it with my own perspective.
I see it as an individual not fitting into the collective. So symphony is found by breaking free from being orchestrated.
By no longer keeping time were not controlled by the past.
Am I anywhere near to your intention?
July 2nd, 2020 01:35
Gavin said:
That is a thought provoking poem, Brimelow.
I might be reading into it with my own perspective.
I see it as an individual not fitting into the collective. So symphony is found by breaking free from being orchestrated.
By no longer keeping time were not controlled by the past.
Am I anywhere near to your intention?
July 2nd, 2020 01:35
Raft
dusk arising said:
Having read you 2nd poem on MPS and thoroughly enjoyed it i delved deeper..... and wasn\'t disappointed. This piece is even better ... full of positivity.
I\'m going to put it among my favourites of poems posted on MPS.
Keep posting your stuff.
June 28th, 2020 04:32
dusk arising said:
Having read you 2nd poem on MPS and thoroughly enjoyed it i delved deeper..... and wasn\'t disappointed. This piece is even better ... full of positivity.
I\'m going to put it among my favourites of poems posted on MPS.
Keep posting your stuff.
June 28th, 2020 04:32
Bee
dusk arising said:
The liveliness of this piece is enthralling. There is joy of love and life itself in here although the target love may be unrequited. Such is love when there is plenty of time ahead, plenty more apples upon the tree.
Really enjoyed this.
June 28th, 2020 04:28
dusk arising said:
The liveliness of this piece is enthralling. There is joy of love and life itself in here although the target love may be unrequited. Such is love when there is plenty of time ahead, plenty more apples upon the tree.
Really enjoyed this.
June 28th, 2020 04:28
Bee
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sounds like a future regret o the question never asked?
Don\'t have regrets in old age... go for it
Thanks for sharing great emotion
June 28th, 2020 03:47
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sounds like a future regret o the question never asked?
Don\'t have regrets in old age... go for it
Thanks for sharing great emotion
June 28th, 2020 03:47
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