Comments received on poems by sokibgb
SOMEONE, SOMEWHERE
bigwolf said:
I hope you get all you are hoping for, nicely written soki.
April 4th, 2013 22:01
bigwolf said:
I hope you get all you are hoping for, nicely written soki.
April 4th, 2013 22:01
SOMEONE, SOMEWHERE
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and richly poignant, so beautifully rendered with delightful flow and end-rhyming, yet sweetly brief as if succinct, how this deliciously renders the plea so many hearts seem likewise echo, each lost in our own little worlds, reaching, crying, wistfully longing empty-armed. Paired with that heart-wrenching piece, which again, so many echo painfully, la this packs a punch, to say the least. Thanks for sharing. In a sense I'd say I keep thinking its answer is in flesh and blood, and in another more true sense, the Word of God says it best: "..He satisfies the longing soul, and fills the hungry soul with goodness." Ps 107:9b?, if only we'd see that. I enjoyed this very much, maybe because I am too fond of bittersweet pieces. Thanks again.
ttfn,
Jenny
April 4th, 2013 19:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and richly poignant, so beautifully rendered with delightful flow and end-rhyming, yet sweetly brief as if succinct, how this deliciously renders the plea so many hearts seem likewise echo, each lost in our own little worlds, reaching, crying, wistfully longing empty-armed. Paired with that heart-wrenching piece, which again, so many echo painfully, la this packs a punch, to say the least. Thanks for sharing. In a sense I'd say I keep thinking its answer is in flesh and blood, and in another more true sense, the Word of God says it best: "..He satisfies the longing soul, and fills the hungry soul with goodness." Ps 107:9b?, if only we'd see that. I enjoyed this very much, maybe because I am too fond of bittersweet pieces. Thanks again.
ttfn,
Jenny
April 4th, 2013 19:40
REMIND ME PLEASE
baj-a said:
Sometimes we all need a reminder of who we are. In this crazy sad world we live in today it's easy to lose ourselves in all the hate and ugliness. If we all held onto our beliefs and not get confused in all the rubbish the world would be a better place. good write here!
April 3rd, 2013 07:32
baj-a said:
Sometimes we all need a reminder of who we are. In this crazy sad world we live in today it's easy to lose ourselves in all the hate and ugliness. If we all held onto our beliefs and not get confused in all the rubbish the world would be a better place. good write here!
April 3rd, 2013 07:32
REMIND ME PLEASE
diamonddagger said:
Hello Soki! I had a workman over while I was listening to the song and low and behold, he started to sing along and knew all of the words to the beautiful song. It was amazing. I played it again just so he would sing again. Terrific poem to go along with it! you are a gem.
April 2nd, 2013 21:42
diamonddagger said:
Hello Soki! I had a workman over while I was listening to the song and low and behold, he started to sing along and knew all of the words to the beautiful song. It was amazing. I played it again just so he would sing again. Terrific poem to go along with it! you are a gem.
April 2nd, 2013 21:42
UNTOUCHED
baj-a said:
you expressed the feelings of being away from the one you love very well. beautifully written.
April 2nd, 2013 07:26
baj-a said:
you expressed the feelings of being away from the one you love very well. beautifully written.
April 2nd, 2013 07:26
UNTOUCHED
sokibgb said:
thanks Diamond for reading and understanding . Torture is the fight word not to mention loneliness and an emptiness too difficult to explain. Have a loving night, soki
April 1st, 2013 19:29
sokibgb said:
thanks Diamond for reading and understanding . Torture is the fight word not to mention loneliness and an emptiness too difficult to explain. Have a loving night, soki
April 1st, 2013 19:29
THE WRITER
sokibgb said:
I am glad you found the poem intriguing and interesting. The friend I based the poem on in even more so. Have a good night, soki
April 1st, 2013 19:22
sokibgb said:
I am glad you found the poem intriguing and interesting. The friend I based the poem on in even more so. Have a good night, soki
April 1st, 2013 19:22
UNTOUCHED
diamonddagger said:
HI Soki, I loved this poem.....yet your touch is still so very far away...I understand that feeling. My love was gone from me for a year and a half and it was pure torture. Beautiful piece of work. have a happy day. diamond.
April 1st, 2013 19:02
diamonddagger said:
HI Soki, I loved this poem.....yet your touch is still so very far away...I understand that feeling. My love was gone from me for a year and a half and it was pure torture. Beautiful piece of work. have a happy day. diamond.
April 1st, 2013 19:02
THE WRITER
baj-a said:
an intriguing and interesting write about the human psyche.
April 1st, 2013 07:52
baj-a said:
an intriguing and interesting write about the human psyche.
April 1st, 2013 07:52
DAY OF SUNSHINE
baj-a said:
don't you just love those perfect days that make you feel so glad to be alive. we had one yesterday and i actually got outside and cleaned up fallen branches around the yard.
March 31st, 2013 08:14
baj-a said:
don't you just love those perfect days that make you feel so glad to be alive. we had one yesterday and i actually got outside and cleaned up fallen branches around the yard.
March 31st, 2013 08:14
DAY OF SUNSHINE
diamonddagger said:
The sun is shining here too! We're actually going to have sun for Easter! Maybe Spring has sprung...sweet poem, nicely written. Happy Easter to you too, Soki! Hugs!!!!!
March 30th, 2013 20:31
diamonddagger said:
The sun is shining here too! We're actually going to have sun for Easter! Maybe Spring has sprung...sweet poem, nicely written. Happy Easter to you too, Soki! Hugs!!!!!
March 30th, 2013 20:31
THINKING - haiku
sokibgb said:
The same with me baj-a. I tend to associate friends, places and moments with music then a certain song takes me back and I get to re live and remember it all over again, soki
March 30th, 2013 10:05
sokibgb said:
The same with me baj-a. I tend to associate friends, places and moments with music then a certain song takes me back and I get to re live and remember it all over again, soki
March 30th, 2013 10:05
THINKING - haiku
baj-a said:
wow! so true and so beautiful. an old friend of mine, who passed away, shared music with me and there are so many songs that bring him into my thoughts. lovely haiku!
March 30th, 2013 08:57
baj-a said:
wow! so true and so beautiful. an old friend of mine, who passed away, shared music with me and there are so many songs that bring him into my thoughts. lovely haiku!
March 30th, 2013 08:57
THINKING - haiku
diamonddagger said:
great little senryu! The pic and the song complimented it very well. I enjoyed it very much. diamond
March 29th, 2013 21:01
diamonddagger said:
great little senryu! The pic and the song complimented it very well. I enjoyed it very much. diamond
March 29th, 2013 21:01
RAGING STORM
baj-a said:
Your poem took me back to nights when as a young person I would lie in my bed at night and listen to the storm - the thunder, lightning, rain on the roof and I felt safe within the womb of the storm. The end was a beautiful transition from a storm outside to the actual storm inside you and your tears the rain. Beautifully done.
March 29th, 2013 07:59
baj-a said:
Your poem took me back to nights when as a young person I would lie in my bed at night and listen to the storm - the thunder, lightning, rain on the roof and I felt safe within the womb of the storm. The end was a beautiful transition from a storm outside to the actual storm inside you and your tears the rain. Beautifully done.
March 29th, 2013 07:59
RAGING STORM
diamonddagger said:
Soki, I love your little twists at the end of your poems. I was all set for a raging storm and it was your poor breaking heart. I hope it is just a poem and not a real broken heart. I sometimes put myself into terrible situations just to get a poem. LOL. Have a happy day. You are a great writer. I'm glad you enjoy my writing too. diamond
March 28th, 2013 14:48
diamonddagger said:
Soki, I love your little twists at the end of your poems. I was all set for a raging storm and it was your poor breaking heart. I hope it is just a poem and not a real broken heart. I sometimes put myself into terrible situations just to get a poem. LOL. Have a happy day. You are a great writer. I'm glad you enjoy my writing too. diamond
March 28th, 2013 14:48
THE SINGER
baj-a said:
the last lines took my breath away... music stole my lovers soul... truly and inspired line!
March 27th, 2013 07:56
baj-a said:
the last lines took my breath away... music stole my lovers soul... truly and inspired line!
March 27th, 2013 07:56
THE SINGER
diamonddagger said:
This had such a sad twist in the end. I loved it. I could picture the whole scene as if I were right there.
March 26th, 2013 17:23
diamonddagger said:
This had such a sad twist in the end. I loved it. I could picture the whole scene as if I were right there.
March 26th, 2013 17:23
GENTLE MAN
diamonddagger said:
Soki, I love the way you write. I know men like you have described. Peaceful and gentle. You have to look far and wide to find them and actually they usually find you. Have a happy day. diamond
March 25th, 2013 18:38
diamonddagger said:
Soki, I love the way you write. I know men like you have described. Peaceful and gentle. You have to look far and wide to find them and actually they usually find you. Have a happy day. diamond
March 25th, 2013 18:38
GENTLE MAN
sokibgb said:
They are really hard to find but if you look hard, you can easily spot them. They are the ones quietly smiling and excuding self confidence.
March 25th, 2013 18:00
sokibgb said:
They are really hard to find but if you look hard, you can easily spot them. They are the ones quietly smiling and excuding self confidence.
March 25th, 2013 18:00
GENTLE MAN
baj-a said:
you left me with a gentle sigh and a wish that I should know such a man :-)
March 25th, 2013 16:49
baj-a said:
you left me with a gentle sigh and a wish that I should know such a man :-)
March 25th, 2013 16:49
GENTLE MAN
sokibgb said:
Thank you, bigwolf I appreciate your comment. Have a happy day.
March 25th, 2013 08:45
sokibgb said:
Thank you, bigwolf I appreciate your comment. Have a happy day.
March 25th, 2013 08:45
SOMETIMES
baj-a said:
Right there with you! I understand this poem! well done!
March 25th, 2013 07:11
baj-a said:
Right there with you! I understand this poem! well done!
March 25th, 2013 07:11
MOONLIGHT DREAM
diamonddagger said:
very beautiful little poem. I enjoyed it very much.
March 24th, 2013 00:12
diamonddagger said:
very beautiful little poem. I enjoyed it very much.
March 24th, 2013 00:12
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