Comments received on poems by sokibgb
MOONLIGHT DREAM
bigwolf said:
Very well written Soki. What happens when dreams come true.
March 23rd, 2013 10:36
bigwolf said:
Very well written Soki. What happens when dreams come true.
March 23rd, 2013 10:36
FOREVER TOGETHER
baj-a said:
beautiful in a mystical sort of way... I love that last verse! well done!
March 22nd, 2013 07:11
baj-a said:
beautiful in a mystical sort of way... I love that last verse! well done!
March 22nd, 2013 07:11
FOREVER TOGETHER
diamonddagger said:
Yes, I know that feeling...very well written poem. I enjoyed every word.
March 21st, 2013 21:45
diamonddagger said:
Yes, I know that feeling...very well written poem. I enjoyed every word.
March 21st, 2013 21:45
MEMORIES - thinking of you
colin said:
Beautifull Soki though very sad the love we all have lost in life though memmories stay strong
March 21st, 2013 15:27
colin said:
Beautifull Soki though very sad the love we all have lost in life though memmories stay strong
March 21st, 2013 15:27
FOREVER TOGETHER
colin said:
Beautifull Soki yes Ive had that feeling numorouse times even sometimes on the internet
March 21st, 2013 15:24
colin said:
Beautifull Soki yes Ive had that feeling numorouse times even sometimes on the internet
March 21st, 2013 15:24
FOREVER TOGETHER
bigwolf said:
Traveling the world together, jumping from star to star, what a sight that must be.
March 21st, 2013 13:14
bigwolf said:
Traveling the world together, jumping from star to star, what a sight that must be.
March 21st, 2013 13:14
MEMORIES - thinking of you
baj-a said:
you captured the pain of lost love so perfectly and the sadness of wondering what if...
March 20th, 2013 17:36
baj-a said:
you captured the pain of lost love so perfectly and the sadness of wondering what if...
March 20th, 2013 17:36
MEMORIES - thinking of you
☼ G U E R R E R O ☼ said:
Is impossible forget a real love.
March 20th, 2013 12:23
☼ G U E R R E R O ☼ said:
Is impossible forget a real love.
March 20th, 2013 12:23
Chocolate and Cinnamon Buns
bigwolf said:
You have my sweet tooth and tummy looking forward to something with this poem. And here I am trying to lose a few pounds.
March 20th, 2013 11:26
bigwolf said:
You have my sweet tooth and tummy looking forward to something with this poem. And here I am trying to lose a few pounds.
March 20th, 2013 11:26
MEMORIES - thinking of you
bigwolf said:
Great write sokibgb, keep making those memories
March 20th, 2013 09:51
bigwolf said:
Great write sokibgb, keep making those memories
March 20th, 2013 09:51
MEMORIES - thinking of you
diamonddagger said:
Beautiful!!! What more can I say to a beautiful poem like this....very well written.
March 20th, 2013 09:42
diamonddagger said:
Beautiful!!! What more can I say to a beautiful poem like this....very well written.
March 20th, 2013 09:42
MY DESIRE
diamonddagger said:
beautiful love poetry! great rhyme and rhythm! sensational effect.
March 19th, 2013 18:22
diamonddagger said:
beautiful love poetry! great rhyme and rhythm! sensational effect.
March 19th, 2013 18:22
BESIDE ME
colin said:
The old poems are the best Soki raw & real emotions the reality of love
March 18th, 2013 14:52
colin said:
The old poems are the best Soki raw & real emotions the reality of love
March 18th, 2013 14:52
MY UMBRELLA
sokibgb said:
Helo colin, I'm like you but couln't resist buying it for $2.00 and now since it folds I carry it everywhere, soki
March 16th, 2013 10:35
sokibgb said:
Helo colin, I'm like you but couln't resist buying it for $2.00 and now since it folds I carry it everywhere, soki
March 16th, 2013 10:35
MY DESIRE
BrokenWordsPoet said:
I like this poem so much I want to rewrite it. Does this site have a poetry workshop? I would like to workshop this poem with you; pointing out what I like and what I would like to change. One of the things I don't like in a poem more often is the over use of words like I, my and and. As you may see most of my poems I have posted are of my older works, poetry is evolution; I wrote poems 10, 12 and more years ago that I am changing today. Do you look at your poetry the same way? If not forget everything I just said. Though everything I said is, "I like the poem."
Your friend... BWP... James...
March 15th, 2013 19:09
BrokenWordsPoet said:
I like this poem so much I want to rewrite it. Does this site have a poetry workshop? I would like to workshop this poem with you; pointing out what I like and what I would like to change. One of the things I don't like in a poem more often is the over use of words like I, my and and. As you may see most of my poems I have posted are of my older works, poetry is evolution; I wrote poems 10, 12 and more years ago that I am changing today. Do you look at your poetry the same way? If not forget everything I just said. Though everything I said is, "I like the poem."
Your friend... BWP... James...
March 15th, 2013 19:09
MY UMBRELLA
colin said:
Excellent poem Soki I love a bargin though I wouldn't spend money on umbrella I rather get wet or I'm really cheap LOL
March 15th, 2013 15:11
colin said:
Excellent poem Soki I love a bargin though I wouldn't spend money on umbrella I rather get wet or I'm really cheap LOL
March 15th, 2013 15:11
AT A DISTANCE - Part 2 Fused by Soki and BrokenWordsPoet
sokibgb said:
Thanks colin for reading and comenting on my poem. I really appreciate you reading and leaving your opinion, soki
March 13th, 2013 17:58
sokibgb said:
Thanks colin for reading and comenting on my poem. I really appreciate you reading and leaving your opinion, soki
March 13th, 2013 17:58
AT A DISTANCE - Part 2 Fused by Soki and BrokenWordsPoet
colin said:
Beautifull Soki this poem though I do have to say I love the original more Sorry
March 13th, 2013 15:20
colin said:
Beautifull Soki this poem though I do have to say I love the original more Sorry
March 13th, 2013 15:20
MY UMBRELLA
baj-a said:
nicely done and a story well told! i had expected to find you had left the umbrella behind, but was pleasantly surprised with your lovely ending.
March 11th, 2013 07:06
baj-a said:
nicely done and a story well told! i had expected to find you had left the umbrella behind, but was pleasantly surprised with your lovely ending.
March 11th, 2013 07:06
MY UMBRELLA
bigwolf said:
I applaud your poem and your desire to be ready for the changing weather
March 10th, 2013 16:05
bigwolf said:
I applaud your poem and your desire to be ready for the changing weather
March 10th, 2013 16:05
Chocolate and Cinnamon Buns
colin said:
Beautifull memories Soki & new memories for your children
March 10th, 2013 15:12
colin said:
Beautifull memories Soki & new memories for your children
March 10th, 2013 15:12
MY UMBRELLA
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Soki... Like your new umbrella; I am more of a canvas hat man myself. Well done... In the first stanza, missed the letter N in the word lunch; that will be three laps around the park and carry the umbrella with you. BWP... James...
March 10th, 2013 10:33
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Soki... Like your new umbrella; I am more of a canvas hat man myself. Well done... In the first stanza, missed the letter N in the word lunch; that will be three laps around the park and carry the umbrella with you. BWP... James...
March 10th, 2013 10:33
AT A DISTANCE - Part 2 Fused by Soki and BrokenWordsPoet
sokibgb said:
BWP, Don't feel bad, the first time I was invited to participate in one I did not know what it was either. I enjoyed our poem very much and I'm happy you picked one of mine to do it with, regardless or whether or not you knew what they are. We will do it again anytime you want. For me it will be an honor, soki
March 10th, 2013 07:19
sokibgb said:
BWP, Don't feel bad, the first time I was invited to participate in one I did not know what it was either. I enjoyed our poem very much and I'm happy you picked one of mine to do it with, regardless or whether or not you knew what they are. We will do it again anytime you want. For me it will be an honor, soki
March 10th, 2013 07:19
AT A DISTANCE - Part 2 Fused by Soki and BrokenWordsPoet
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Soki... Sorry but I didn't even know what a fusion poem is; now that I do I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed working with your beautiful lines. And I hope we have a chance to do it again sometime.
BWP... James...
March 9th, 2013 19:08
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Soki... Sorry but I didn't even know what a fusion poem is; now that I do I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed working with your beautiful lines. And I hope we have a chance to do it again sometime.
BWP... James...
March 9th, 2013 19:08
AT A DISTANCE - Part 2 Fused by Soki and BrokenWordsPoet
baj-a said:
wow! what a great fusion poem! beautifully and artistically done.
March 9th, 2013 13:45
baj-a said:
wow! what a great fusion poem! beautifully and artistically done.
March 9th, 2013 13:45
Chocolate and Cinnamon Buns
BrokenWordsPoet said:
You make my sweet tooth wake up and I had all them pulled out; I saw this poem this morning and did not see the picture. You really like to temp people. Great tribute to the loving things remembered about your mother and how she liked to spoil you.
BWP... James...
March 7th, 2013 18:58
BrokenWordsPoet said:
You make my sweet tooth wake up and I had all them pulled out; I saw this poem this morning and did not see the picture. You really like to temp people. Great tribute to the loving things remembered about your mother and how she liked to spoil you.
BWP... James...
March 7th, 2013 18:58
Chocolate and Cinnamon Buns
baj-a said:
brought back memories of cold winter Sunday mornings, when after church, my dad would back homemade cinnamon buns! to me the scent of baking cinnamon buns will always be the scent of love and comfort. thanks for sharing this one!
March 7th, 2013 15:21
baj-a said:
brought back memories of cold winter Sunday mornings, when after church, my dad would back homemade cinnamon buns! to me the scent of baking cinnamon buns will always be the scent of love and comfort. thanks for sharing this one!
March 7th, 2013 15:21
A WALK ON THE BEACH
sokibgb said:
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on my poem I sure appreciate it.
March 6th, 2013 10:55
sokibgb said:
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on my poem I sure appreciate it.
March 6th, 2013 10:55
A WALK ON THE BEACH
baj-a said:
oh what a peaceful place to be inside your poem! wonderful images created with your words.
March 6th, 2013 08:48
baj-a said:
oh what a peaceful place to be inside your poem! wonderful images created with your words.
March 6th, 2013 08:48
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