Comments received on poems by Trenz Pruca
Be Proud of Being Called Old.
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed your poem very much. I wrote a poem, which I will share now, titled Let\'s Grow Old Together.
January 5th, 2021 12:36
rrodriguez said:
I enjoyed your poem very much. I wrote a poem, which I will share now, titled Let\'s Grow Old Together.
January 5th, 2021 12:36
Self-quarantine
L. B. Mek said:
so vividly relatable,
a good write
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 5th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
so vividly relatable,
a good write
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 5th, 2021 05:21
Self-quarantine
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be boring but things of the passed can be resurrected and relearned.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be boring but things of the passed can be resurrected and relearned.
Andy
January 5th, 2021 02:20
Some say.
L. B. Mek said:
of past\'s roots are planted future\'s shoots,
from accepted truth\'s are woven denial\'s suit\'s,
by our chosen shoes we traverse life\'s destined paths
and out of it all, if we\'re lucky - we are gifted those treasure troves of memory\'s vaults - to dine upon, till we\'ve sucked every last ounce: of life\'s ephemeral fruit\'s...
a wonderful message you\'ve chosen to share in this wonderful read,
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 29th, 2020 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
of past\'s roots are planted future\'s shoots,
from accepted truth\'s are woven denial\'s suit\'s,
by our chosen shoes we traverse life\'s destined paths
and out of it all, if we\'re lucky - we are gifted those treasure troves of memory\'s vaults - to dine upon, till we\'ve sucked every last ounce: of life\'s ephemeral fruit\'s...
a wonderful message you\'ve chosen to share in this wonderful read,
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 29th, 2020 05:02
Some say.
dusk arising said:
Awoke to the first fal of snow this morning and immediately began to think of my grandchildrens responses. Yes thoughts of my childhood were there.... such memories as joys are made.
December 28th, 2020 08:33
dusk arising said:
Awoke to the first fal of snow this morning and immediately began to think of my grandchildrens responses. Yes thoughts of my childhood were there.... such memories as joys are made.
December 28th, 2020 08:33
Some say.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Trenz, but the memories we must remember are the good ones in our lives.
Andy
December 28th, 2020 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Trenz, but the memories we must remember are the good ones in our lives.
Andy
December 28th, 2020 01:48
I get to choose only the best.
L. B. Mek said:
oh, that\'s one \'mule kick\' of wisdom you\'ve planted on me with that last stanza...
Brilliant!
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 22nd, 2020 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
oh, that\'s one \'mule kick\' of wisdom you\'ve planted on me with that last stanza...
Brilliant!
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 22nd, 2020 06:14
I get to choose only the best.
Goldfinch60 said:
A happy man indeed as your words have shown us Trenz.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
A happy man indeed as your words have shown us Trenz.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:38
I get to choose only the best.
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
He\'s getting a good deal for that copper. The current price for scrap copper is USD 5.61 a kilogram. The record is USD 10.1/kg, set about nine year ago.
December 21st, 2020 20:38
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
He\'s getting a good deal for that copper. The current price for scrap copper is USD 5.61 a kilogram. The record is USD 10.1/kg, set about nine year ago.
December 21st, 2020 20:38
I get to choose only the best.
dusk arising said:
In a world where plenty draws the attention of jealous eyes, seldom is heard the word \"enough\".
December 21st, 2020 19:10
dusk arising said:
In a world where plenty draws the attention of jealous eyes, seldom is heard the word \"enough\".
December 21st, 2020 19:10
Be Proud of Being Called Old.
RDS said:
At fifty I\'m still actively old, which means doing my level best to stay a few steps ahead of the kids at work 😂
December 19th, 2020 19:12
RDS said:
At fifty I\'m still actively old, which means doing my level best to stay a few steps ahead of the kids at work 😂
December 19th, 2020 19:12
Be Proud of Being Called Old.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but we are still here and intend to be for many more years to come.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but we are still here and intend to be for many more years to come.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:40
Be Proud of Being Called Old.
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem, Trenz, but you forgot when...
- sex is only a futile mental exercise
- opening a jar involves some very major tools
- remembering names is a guessing game
- driving a car is like Russian roulette
- half of the day is taken up with counting pills
- being grouchy is the new normal
when.....
December 18th, 2020 22:08
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem, Trenz, but you forgot when...
- sex is only a futile mental exercise
- opening a jar involves some very major tools
- remembering names is a guessing game
- driving a car is like Russian roulette
- half of the day is taken up with counting pills
- being grouchy is the new normal
when.....
December 18th, 2020 22:08
Be Proud of Being Called Old.
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
At 81, I know what you mean!
December 18th, 2020 19:19
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
At 81, I know what you mean!
December 18th, 2020 19:19
Everyone needs someone to look down upon.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Helping the destitute poor
is a collective necessity,
an individual mandate.
We are family.\'
Amen!
A hard hitting write, that needs to be: to reflect the horrendous atrocities - we collectively, are guilty of feigning ignorance - about, while they take place before our very eyes,
a conscientious and timely write, thanks for sharing!
December 15th, 2020 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'Helping the destitute poor
is a collective necessity,
an individual mandate.
We are family.\'
Amen!
A hard hitting write, that needs to be: to reflect the horrendous atrocities - we collectively, are guilty of feigning ignorance - about, while they take place before our very eyes,
a conscientious and timely write, thanks for sharing!
December 15th, 2020 05:12
Everyone needs someone to look down upon.
Doggerel Dave said:
Emphasis on political system, which is rubbish and getting worse - everywhere.
Dave
December 15th, 2020 01:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Emphasis on political system, which is rubbish and getting worse - everywhere.
Dave
December 15th, 2020 01:38
I pluck the sun from my pocket
Michael Edwards said:
This is a great observation of conentment - super write.
December 7th, 2020 13:01
Michael Edwards said:
This is a great observation of conentment - super write.
December 7th, 2020 13:01
I pluck the sun from my pocket
dusk arising said:
What a little beauty you pen today.
December 7th, 2020 05:31
dusk arising said:
What a little beauty you pen today.
December 7th, 2020 05:31
I pluck the sun from my pocket
Fay Slimm. said:
What a truly positive and well crafted piece as a first read of my morning -- a big thank you for sharing your outlook on life dear Trenz.
December 7th, 2020 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
What a truly positive and well crafted piece as a first read of my morning -- a big thank you for sharing your outlook on life dear Trenz.
December 7th, 2020 03:35
I pluck the sun from my pocket
Goldfinch60 said:
May your heart be forever full of love Trenz.
Andy
December 7th, 2020 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May your heart be forever full of love Trenz.
Andy
December 7th, 2020 02:57
Homage to Yin, Yang, and Qui. (The moon, sun and all else)
RDS said:
Nicely evocative. I feel lost against the winter blanket. Half nose clocked to the wind and just my coal black eyes surveying the snow drifting, rendering me formless and unseperate.
Lovely read thanks
J
November 29th, 2020 06:37
RDS said:
Nicely evocative. I feel lost against the winter blanket. Half nose clocked to the wind and just my coal black eyes surveying the snow drifting, rendering me formless and unseperate.
Lovely read thanks
J
November 29th, 2020 06:37
We sang the same songs
L. B. Mek said:
simple in delivery but penetrates with insightful precession at that raw truth we all share beneath our veils,
November 27th, 2020 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
simple in delivery but penetrates with insightful precession at that raw truth we all share beneath our veils,
November 27th, 2020 03:20
We sang the same songs
Goldfinch60 said:
Those that love you will always sin those songs.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those that love you will always sin those songs.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:42
It is Autumn now
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m hot blooded by nature and so tend to favour cooler climates but somehow I still relate to the \'unease\' you mention, thought provoking,
good read
November 21st, 2020 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m hot blooded by nature and so tend to favour cooler climates but somehow I still relate to the \'unease\' you mention, thought provoking,
good read
November 21st, 2020 05:37
It is Autumn now
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn is my favourite time of the year. That slight chill in the air is revitalising to us all.
Andy
November 21st, 2020 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn is my favourite time of the year. That slight chill in the air is revitalising to us all.
Andy
November 21st, 2020 01:55
Short stories light our lives
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you, but for some, there are fewer remaining then for others.
November 18th, 2020 15:55
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you, but for some, there are fewer remaining then for others.
November 18th, 2020 15:55
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