Comments received on poems by Trenz Pruca
Life’s a river of memory and yearning.
dusk arising said:
Such an amazing title. It could stand alone with no other word.
However, what followed added the colour of your experience of this life.
May 10th, 2021 15:11
dusk arising said:
Such an amazing title. It could stand alone with no other word.
However, what followed added the colour of your experience of this life.
May 10th, 2021 15:11
Couplets
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A sublime intrigue in brevity wow. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 7th, 2021 02:52
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A sublime intrigue in brevity wow. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 7th, 2021 02:52
Couplets
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, much more than mere couplets I feel
a write worth reading a few times to contemplate its interpretation\'s: varying connotations..
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 16th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, much more than mere couplets I feel
a write worth reading a few times to contemplate its interpretation\'s: varying connotations..
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 16th, 2021 04:30
For Kira and Charles.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
what a wonderful way to view this experience titled life, for as long - or as short, as we get to
April 15th, 2021 03:37
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
what a wonderful way to view this experience titled life, for as long - or as short, as we get to
April 15th, 2021 03:37
For Kira and Charles.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Trenz, I have been playing that game for a very long time and I know I will win.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Trenz, I have been playing that game for a very long time and I know I will win.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:57
Boredom and Depression Are Not the Same.
L. B. Mek said:
running from fires is a job, its rewards: that next inhaled breath..
a good read, distinctions are necessary for everything
we must first find the fault, before looking for a cure
and by dissecting and categorising appropriately
we make it easier to administer, the helping hand
tailored to match: those quivering outstretched fingers
April 8th, 2021 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
running from fires is a job, its rewards: that next inhaled breath..
a good read, distinctions are necessary for everything
we must first find the fault, before looking for a cure
and by dissecting and categorising appropriately
we make it easier to administer, the helping hand
tailored to match: those quivering outstretched fingers
April 8th, 2021 04:05
Boredom and Depression Are Not the Same.
Doggerel Dave said:
A good open ended look at.......life, really.
Very clearly stated from my perspective, Trenz - thanks.
April 8th, 2021 00:42
Doggerel Dave said:
A good open ended look at.......life, really.
Very clearly stated from my perspective, Trenz - thanks.
April 8th, 2021 00:42
Boredom and Depression Are Not the Same.
Goldfinch60 said:
In these \'Strange Times\' boredom can be there occasionally but there outlets that can be persued and writing your words is one of them.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
In these \'Strange Times\' boredom can be there occasionally but there outlets that can be persued and writing your words is one of them.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:22
You Probably Wonder.
L. B. Mek said:
good read and so true, far too often we forget
we were all happiest playing in oblivious muds and crawling
with pure delight towards our incremental goals of progression,
yes some of us will conquer markets and skip on the moon
but some of us, will simply help manufacture other\'s feats of greatness
that\'s ok, this game of life was a lottery to begin with
though we can still have one hell of a time
climbing our mountainous dreams
by simply being true to ourselves
and enjoying those gifts
so many other\'s never take time, to appreciate
April 6th, 2021 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
good read and so true, far too often we forget
we were all happiest playing in oblivious muds and crawling
with pure delight towards our incremental goals of progression,
yes some of us will conquer markets and skip on the moon
but some of us, will simply help manufacture other\'s feats of greatness
that\'s ok, this game of life was a lottery to begin with
though we can still have one hell of a time
climbing our mountainous dreams
by simply being true to ourselves
and enjoying those gifts
so many other\'s never take time, to appreciate
April 6th, 2021 05:45
You Probably Wonder.
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Trenz, it can be the smallest thing to be removed so that paradise is back.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Trenz, it can be the smallest thing to be removed so that paradise is back.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:51
SADLY
L. B. Mek said:
lol, the endless scope for poetic self expression, exemplified with unflinching wit..
a fun read
March 4th, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
lol, the endless scope for poetic self expression, exemplified with unflinching wit..
a fun read
March 4th, 2021 05:52
SADLY
Doggerel Dave said:
Suggest you stake your claim, Trenz then go to it; I\'m sure I would be vastly entertained. Be sad no more: I\'m feeling better already.
March 4th, 2021 00:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Suggest you stake your claim, Trenz then go to it; I\'m sure I would be vastly entertained. Be sad no more: I\'m feeling better already.
March 4th, 2021 00:05
one day while walking on the beach
Goldfinch60 said:
I too would walk on by, never argue about a squid.
Andy
February 26th, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
I too would walk on by, never argue about a squid.
Andy
February 26th, 2021 01:45
one day while walking on the beach
dusk arising said:
I met a man passing a small damaged octopus to another saying \"Here\'s that sick squid I owe you\" (six quid being Brit slang for six pounds).
I would definitely walk on by too. A beach has it\'s ambiance we should all respect LOL.
February 26th, 2021 01:32
dusk arising said:
I met a man passing a small damaged octopus to another saying \"Here\'s that sick squid I owe you\" (six quid being Brit slang for six pounds).
I would definitely walk on by too. A beach has it\'s ambiance we should all respect LOL.
February 26th, 2021 01:32
one day while walking on the beach
Jerry Reynolds said:
Goo choice. Good write, Trenz.
February 25th, 2021 16:37
Jerry Reynolds said:
Goo choice. Good write, Trenz.
February 25th, 2021 16:37
one day while walking on the beach
Doggerel Dave said:
Very humorous; a few other comedians have done this at MPS - typically they don\'t last very long.....
February 25th, 2021 16:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Very humorous; a few other comedians have done this at MPS - typically they don\'t last very long.....
February 25th, 2021 16:35
one day while walking on the beach
orchidee said:
Oops, this has appeared all in Greek to me. Some blip in uploading it, or something?
It\'s strange - it won\'t translate, yet I can identify some words straight away, without cross-referencing the characters!
February 25th, 2021 16:05
orchidee said:
Oops, this has appeared all in Greek to me. Some blip in uploading it, or something?
It\'s strange - it won\'t translate, yet I can identify some words straight away, without cross-referencing the characters!
February 25th, 2021 16:05
On worried wings
WriteRaw said:
It read tragic. It was emotional. I felt the sadness of the verses.
February 25th, 2021 16:01
WriteRaw said:
It read tragic. It was emotional. I felt the sadness of the verses.
February 25th, 2021 16:01
Mid-February 2021
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful poetry, utilising some unique metaphors
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful poetry, utilising some unique metaphors
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 23rd, 2021 04:30
Mid-February 2021
orchidee said:
Good write Trenz. You enjoying that February, while it lasts? Only few days left of it!
I particularly enjoy Feb 30 and 31. Work it out... lol.
February 23rd, 2021 03:02
orchidee said:
Good write Trenz. You enjoying that February, while it lasts? Only few days left of it!
I particularly enjoy Feb 30 and 31. Work it out... lol.
February 23rd, 2021 03:02
On worried wings
Neville said:
a to die for title and all that followed .. followed well ...
February 22nd, 2021 14:54
Neville said:
a to die for title and all that followed .. followed well ...
February 22nd, 2021 14:54
Questions
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great fair lament questions that some in society need to be asked, well said poetically. Kudos for a though provoking poem.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 11:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great fair lament questions that some in society need to be asked, well said poetically. Kudos for a though provoking poem.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 11:16
Questions
L. B. Mek said:
\'freedom\'
is that \'choice\' you made when writing this very words knowing you have the \'right\' to do so,
it\'s that education that fuelled your ability to articulate such profound thought\'s into searching - Questioning, of \'freedom\'s\' meaning...
freedom
is the blood shed to allow you, to question this very freedom that didn\'t exist a century ago...
freedom
is in our Accountability for how we Choose to perceive this broken world we\'ve inherited...
cheer up though, Spring will be with us soon and so will that better tomorrow, that we all play a part in shaping...
an important thought provoking read you\'ve shared with us dear Poet,
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
February 5th, 2021 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'freedom\'
is that \'choice\' you made when writing this very words knowing you have the \'right\' to do so,
it\'s that education that fuelled your ability to articulate such profound thought\'s into searching - Questioning, of \'freedom\'s\' meaning...
freedom
is the blood shed to allow you, to question this very freedom that didn\'t exist a century ago...
freedom
is in our Accountability for how we Choose to perceive this broken world we\'ve inherited...
cheer up though, Spring will be with us soon and so will that better tomorrow, that we all play a part in shaping...
an important thought provoking read you\'ve shared with us dear Poet,
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
February 5th, 2021 05:56
Questions
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Trenz, those in power do not ever look out of their ivory towers.
Andy
February 5th, 2021 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Trenz, those in power do not ever look out of their ivory towers.
Andy
February 5th, 2021 01:39
Questions
Doggerel Dave said:
As many thumbs up as I can find, Trenz. Cleanly and simply put together. Should be on a revered banner taken on serious demonstrations. Your argument in second stanza is irrefutable
February 5th, 2021 00:01
Doggerel Dave said:
As many thumbs up as I can find, Trenz. Cleanly and simply put together. Should be on a revered banner taken on serious demonstrations. Your argument in second stanza is irrefutable
February 5th, 2021 00:01
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